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My First OC! :D 'Scarlet Scribes'


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I know she isn't quite scarlet in color but close enough right?

 

This is my first OC! Scarlet Scribes is a fantastic writer!! (Something I'm not... I can only do math haha) Anyway, tell me what you think :D

 

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Nice job on the eyes! Loving that!

 

I also LOVE :wub: the mane and tail, both in how well you have drawn it and also IT'S SO POOFY-FLOWY-WAVEY-Y!!

 

Full 'Cute' marks here! :D

 

Thank you Ballistic456!! The 'poofy' factor was one which I especially focused on so I'm glad you felt it was sufficient XD Who knew that drawing OCs could be so much fun!


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I know that feel... I've become slightly addicted to drawing OCs, though I prefer the pencil-paper approach and later colour it with GIMP.

What program did you use here?

 

((And on a second look... She looks kinda like a Dr.Zeuss character, but a little more cleaner and refined... bah! Probably just me XD))

 

I use Gimp only for my photography now as well as color correction with my 3D scenes and such XD All of my drawing is done in the excellent program Krita.


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Oooo, very nice job on this! Really simply done, but at the same time it is also really well done! Keep up the good job on your drawings!

 

Thank you very much!! I still have a lot to learn and I know I'm not too good at it, but I find drawing a lot of fun and I hope to get much better at it. <- That sentence exists to fill the 100 character mark :P


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Wow, she is very beautiful, her mane really strikes me, so wavy and poofy, so pretty! And those eyes, an amazing shade of red, great job on this!

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what I like the most is her color palette, it's very accurate and the colors blend beautifully. Also the OC concept is very fun, I would like to see how she evolves and develops from time to time.

 

Thanks! I can't wait to work on more drawings of her, though the future ones will be in vastly varying styles I'm sure :P

 

Wow, she is very beautiful, her mane really strikes me, so wavy and poofy, so pretty! And those eyes, an amazing shade of red, great job on this!

 

Thank you so very much, ApocalyptiCchaos! Wavy and poofy was exactly what I was hoping to achieve. I think though, I should work on 'poofing' the tail a bit :P Thanks for the comments about the eyes too!


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unique. Unique is always good. very wavy frazzled hair and it acctually does remind me of this crazy fanfic writer i know...

Anyway. I like to critique and be critiqued in return if you're into that sweet! if not ignore me.

 

alright so first off the arc on the hind legs is a bit inconsistant it looks like you were drawing downward and decided her hind legs went to far and moved the last bit forward... kinda like shes gonna fall over backwards. i'dve continue on the orignal curve rather than pulling back toward the body so much. perhaps curve the dip on her upper hind leg a bit more.

 

other than that this is really good. could be awesome with some lights and shadow on the body and hair.

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unique. Unique is always good. very wavy frazzled hair and it acctually does remind me of this crazy fanfic writer i know...

Anyway. I like to critique and be critiqued in return if you're into that sweet! if not ignore me.

 

alright so first off the arc on the hind legs is a bit inconsistant it looks like you were drawing downward and decided her hind legs went to far and moved the last bit forward... kinda like shes gonna fall over backwards. i'dve continue on the orignal curve rather than pulling back toward the body so much. perhaps curve the dip on her upper hind leg a bit more.

 

other than that this is really good. could be awesome with some lights and shadow on the body and hair.

 

Oooh, thanks for the constructive criticism!! I always love this sort of thing. Sure, I'll look at some of your work! ;) I agree with the thing about the legs, I'll keep that in mind the next time I draw a pony. I have a lot of trouble with the legs of ponies overall (I've drawn ponies a number of times that can be counted on one hand) so I will keep the legs in mind next time I do get a chance to draw.

 

As for the lighting and shadows, I intend to do a drastically different style drawing next time that focuses a lot more on lighting and shading. :)

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