WiP: AJ's Anti Air

[akita-ken 581]

This week I decided to rush out a work in progress since it so happened to coincide with the badass Applejack tank drawing I posted last week There's supposed to be a little story behind it and I intend to use this in a comic I have in mind, but that'll probably take some time since I'm being deployed to Australia next week for a training exercise. Having only two days a week to work on stuff sucks. Boo

 

My OC's taking a break from helping AJ out with her weapon systems, but Berry Punch and Cherry Berry came to help insetad

 

So yeah, it's a little rough quite rough on the edges but I tried to spruce it up as quickly as possible to be presentable. The backdrop is from matty4z's dA.

 

[Motion Spark 7,807]

All of my yes!!!

this drawing has a lot of flaws that I could critique on, but I'm going to ingnore them, because I loved, loved this so much! omg! I almost want to see an animated version of this XD

[akita-ken 581]

All of my yes!!!

this drawing has a lot of flaws that I could critique on, but I'm going to ingnore them, because I loved, loved this so much! omg! I almost want to see an animated version of this XD

 

haha yes! this piece had a lot of "firsts" for me, it's the first time I've attempted to draw ponies *attempting* to sit on a chair of some sort and I don't think I pulled it off very well.

 

It's also the first time I've attempted to draw an object without actually seeing it before IRL. I have no idea how the rear of the AA gun is supposed to look like since the photo reference I had didn't show it so I was hoping Cherry Berry and AJ would cover it up enough such that I wouldn't need to draw the details in. But it's still rather obvious though :x Also I'm aware there's some layering issues with Berry Punch's mane overlapping the sight for the AA gun.

 

But oh well, having you post on my art thread is a great honour for me! Your work and Honey Puff's among a few others have been an inspiration for me

[Dusty Soul 2,613]

Yes... This is very very nice. (And quite funny) As Motion said, this picture has some flaws, but they are rather minor, so I must say you did a great job.

[Motion Spark 7,807]

It's also the first time I've attempted to draw an object without actually seeing it before IRL. I have no idea how the rear of the AA gun is supposed to look like since the photo reference I had didn't show it so I was hoping Cherry Berry and AJ would cover it up enough such that I wouldn't need to draw the details in. But it's still rather obvious though :x Also I'm aware there's some layering issues with Berry Punch's mane overlapping the sight for the AA gun.

first time you "attempted" you said?

for an attempt it looks damn right pal! both the ponies, and the anti-air looked really good as well, it was just the lack of details on the anti-air and some minor stuff on the ponies bodies and faces what got my attention a little bit, but hey! for your confort, I am super lazy, and I don't want to put too much details into my drawings! XD so it's all good.

The expression on the ponies faces marvelous!!

 

But oh well, having you post on my art thread is a great honour for me! Your work and Honey Puff's among a few others have been an inspiration for me

OMG! you have no idea how flattered I feel I'm gonna do my best to post HQ drawings for everypony to see in the forums!