Twilight Sparkle - Updated

[Tdroid 234]

Finished a fairly quick drawing of Twilight Sparkle. It didn't turn out quite as I wanted, but that is neither here nor there.

 

DeviantART for the drawing(in case the "scr=" shows up).

 

 

So, I don't really like the first drawing I came up with, so I made a new one as a sort of apology ;P Enjoy

 

DeviantART for the drawing.

 

 

Edit: 2nd Picture didn't show up, so you'll have to clivk the link to see it. Sorry about that.

Edited October 16, 2012 by Tdroid

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She looks like she is pregnant. Her chest is far too wide and it bulges out.

You should redraw her neck and belly. Again, pregnant Twilight is pregnant.

 

And the horn looks like she taped a paper mache horn to her head

[Friendship_Cannon 1,677]

I like it. Some things are a bit to improve (like a tiny bit less buffy body) but it´s not bad (though your other works on deviantart are quite better, somehow).

[Tdroid 234]

She looks like she is pregnant. Her chest is far too wide and it bulges out.

You should redraw her neck and belly. Again, pregnant Twilight is pregnant.

 

And the horn looks like she taped a paper mache horn to her head

 

Yes, there are plenty of flaws in this drawing. Most of which I probably should have used some time to fix, but I'll just let it go and try to remember it when I make a new one.

I like it. Some things are a bit to improve (like a tiny bit less buffy body) but it´s not bad (though your other works on deviantart are quite better, somehow).

 

Well, I am glad you like it. I also agree that a lot of my drawings on DeviantART are a lot better, but that is probably because I was more motivated to draw those than this one Oh well, it is practise if nothing else

 

Since the picture didn't show up in the OP, I'll put it here in hope that it will be available to you without having to leave this site.

 

Edit: Sorry, it didn't work Link

Edited October 16, 2012 by Tdroid