writing Allow me to open my heart

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

Often, I write.

I will write about things which I cannot even comprehend.

But still I write.

 

Often, I will find myself in a state of fear, or sadness.

Slowly wasting away without consent of joy.

So I take the time to read what I wrote.

 

Things that I once did not understand, now unfolding and making sense.

Words, which often are just vessels for emotion.

Yes, these words have no meaning, I see it now.

 

Only by our own torture can we see the true light and beauty in what we do.

In our minds or our bodies, it matters not.

Words only convey the message of great emotion, emotion which we now need.

 

 

 

so often I am without someone to tell me my value.

So often I am alone in this world with nothing but the words I write.

This is my sadness, my true sadness, forsake me.

Words hurt more than any blade, and so I suffer.

I just want the pain to stop, but I keep writing,

writing so that I can reflect upon what it is I wish to express.

 

I only wish for someone to tell me to stop, to give me a reason to continue living a life.

I only wish I knew what to do with words of conveyence.

You see I do not know these words, but with time perhaps.

Still, I often find myself lonesome, wanting to end all writing pain.

 

 

 

-David Favret

[MelancholicMemory 2,025]

I normally don't like this particular kind of poetry, but this is beautiful. As a poet myself, I can relate to this feeling so much

You are a very talented writer!

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

I normally don't like this particular kind of poetry, but this is beautiful. As a poet myself, I can relate to this feeling so much

You are a very talented writer!

 

I am very glad you were able to relate with it, honestly, hearing that is a much better thing than you are a good writer.

If people are able to grasp a feeling out of my poems, then I know I did it right.

 

 

AS for it, yes, a little depressing, but I think I have been kind of depressed lately, not sure why though...

 

And, you are a writer? you should definitely PM me some of your work.

[MuniMoose 489]

No real amount of works can describe the way this poem made us feel, but as for the poem it self with out feels clouding our judgment you have made a great work and we enjoyed reading it.