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"I don't know..." Luna whispers sadly.  "But...Discord didn't try to hurt him," she says, looking up at him.  "Discord threatened to hurt him, but I don't think he won't unless we make him really made.  I think he's actually nice...somewhere...in there..." Luna blushes because she know she just sound gullible.  "Because of Shade.  He...really cares about Shade..." she trails off.


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Yavolin looks at her."Um i returned him to stone but some pony freed him so I only have seconds to hide you from him,but also to make you look like some other pony and also I need to change the way I look because Discord is going to come after me next so yea spray paint is in the bathroom".


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Princess Luna puts her face in her hooves.  "We're doomed!" then she quickly takes it back.  "If Discord finds us..." she says.  "We let him take me," she says softly.  She gets up and, without looking at Yavolin's family out of embarrassment, stumbles to the bathroom where she proceeds to throw up.

 

(I'm sorry, I think I've suddenly had the need to be funny.  I'll try to keep being serious)


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Yavolin looks at her "Um Luna he's going to kill our foal then me".  Yavolin gets the spray and starts to change his coat to his brothers color then he gets a can of yellow spray and waits for Luna to get out of the bathroom but he isn't to sure how she will handle such a spray.


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Luna comes out of the bathroom, her head low.  "I can't save you both..." she says sadly.  "Maybe if we're lucky he'll just wait until our foal is born and then kill me..." she says even though she knows it isn't true.  Discord isn't the patient type.  Luna looks up at Yavolin. 


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Yavolin lets out a sigh."Look we both know that isn't true so we got two choices change the way we look or we can set here and wait for Discord to find us and kill us unless we Romeo and Juliet I got one stone dart left  so our options are few but at least Discord won't harm us".

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"I know nothing about plant magic... But I do know how to discord... But I'm going to wait on that one"

 

Shade claps her hooves and teleports them away

 

Then she thinks...

* if I'm correct, scootaloo would have landed around here... Let's go have some fun! *

 

Shade changes into a royal guard and walks around... She walks into the medic room where scootaloo, applebloom, sweetiebelle, celestia and some other pony shade didn't know...

 

She walks into the room

"your highness, discord has been spotted, we don't know what he's up to, but the element ponies have gone missing"

 

 

Babs looked at the guard pony speechless

 

Scootaloo looked over and tried to get up

"we... Must... Stop... Him"


 

 

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Luna looks upset.  She lowers her head and nods.  "Okay, Yavolin," she says softly.

 


 

Discord flies into a bedroom.  Angel Feather looks up from her notebook and drops it to the floor.  She gasps.

"Hi!" Discord smiles.

Angel Feather stares at him, speechless. 

"Boring," Discord says, teleporting her away easily.

He flies around until he finds Mystical Flow, who is staring at the window at the time, so she notices him.  She doesn't move to run away, she just watches him until he reaches her.  She just stares at him.

"Hi."

"Hi," Mystical Flow says back.

Discord shrugs and teleports her away.

 


 

The nurse looks up and gasps.

Sweetie Belle looks up, silent.

Apple Bloom gasps in horror.

Princess Celestia looks at the guard suspiciously.


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Scootaloo looks at celestia,

 

"what are we going to do? We can't let him just take the ponies and... Get away with it.. Not to mention that there the elements of harmony"

 

Babs steps forward

"I tell you what we do. We give him a beating!"

 

 

Shade looks at babs... * she looks familiar... Well she's definitely from manehatten... But, really? Give discord a beating? Hahaha *

 

"what are our orders your highness?"

Asked the 'guard' pony


 

 

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Princess Celestia ponders this for a moment.  She looks up at Babs.  "Babs...you've had experience with 'bullies' correct?  Just think of Discord as a bully.  I need you to go talk to him.  Carefully," she then turns to Apple Bloom.  "Apple Bloom, you know how to buck apples right?"

"Sure?"

"Right.  If Babs approach doesn't work, you quickly step in and buck his face off."

"Uhm...okay?"

"Carefully," Princess Celestia adds.  She looks at Sweetie Belle.  "And if he tries to hurt Apple Bloom, save her with your magic.  You'll be their protectors sort of.  And if you can, use your magic against him as well."

Sweetie Belle talks for the second time.  "I'll try."

Princess Celestia looks at Scootaloo.  "And you...you stay here.  You are in no condition to fight," she then looks at the guard.  "And you wait outside.  Discord seems to have a thing for throwing ponies out windows."

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Yavolin got out his stone dart and made another one for himself and Luna, he looked at her and didn't say nothing. He embraced her and then gave her the stone dart so that they can both turn themselves to stone temporary  he hoped that Discord couldn't tack them like this. 


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Princess Luna looked at the dart in her hoof and then up at Yavolin.  "Is this safe?" she whispered, afraid.  Be strong, Luna.  Trust him.  He trust's you.  And its better a plan then running away, pretending to be another pony. 

Besides...maybe I'll get a taste of what I did to Discord.


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"talk to discord?" babs asked...

 

Scootaloo just moans...

 

Shade is laughing her head off inside...

* hahahaha oh celestia! This is celestias best plan ever! Hahahaha*

 

"yes your hiness"

She said running off... Once she was far enough away, she changed back to her normal pony self and went to discord.

"hey discord! It's celestias stupidest plan ever! She's getting 3 ponies to talk to you! Hahaha... Il be waiting outside as a guard"

 

She walks away and changes herself back to a royal guard


 

 

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Yavolin nodded his head."I love you Luna and I'll always be with you". He put the stone dart into his skin and waited for Luna to do the same , the first thing he felt was pain going throughout his body but that didn't seem to bother him that much because  he knew Luna would join him.


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Shade was outside around a window, she was following celestias orders by waiting to catch applebloom, swittiebelle, and babs.

 

She was discussed as a royal Pegasus guard.

 

As she waited, she thinks about what her element ment, * so I am the element of chaos... Chaos is such a beautiful thing! Watching and playing around with ponies! Having almost unlimited power, and the best friend in all of equestria!* shade couldn't be anymore happy with all she has.

 

In her spear time, she decided to get some info on the whereabouts of yavolin and Luna. She contacted her changeling minions. * find the location of yavolin and princess Luna * she said to her minions. After some time they responded back. * oh there back there?* she asked, tge changelings continued to talk to shade. "there doing WHAT?!?!?" she yelled... "oh this is just too good to miss!" she said joyfully. She ran and found some other royal guards, "princess celestias orders are to wait outside the castle by a window incase discord throws the ponies out tge window" she said to the guards... Then flying away from the castle.

 

Once she was far enough, she changed into her pony self and teleported all the way to yavolin.

 

She appeared not too far but out of there sight, she looks at the two ponies... * wow, do they honestly think that spray paint can change the way they look? * she approaches them from out of sight and speaks, "well well well, yavolin... Your trying to act like a changeling? Spray painting your coat? Did you honestly think that would fool me and my minions? But look at you, helplessy being turned into stone, how unfortunate. I thought you were the element of loyalty, but it looks like your all the way out here protecting Luna."

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Babs was shaking " talk to discord? Um... I guess it's worth a try" she said hesitantly

 

Scootaloo turns to babs "come on babs! You can do it!"

 

 

( this is what happens when I get board.... I do posts like this... This post is about 1600 characters... Now do you want to see it when I'm really board? Idk what I do because iv never been really board XD)


 

 

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Discord laughs.  "Talk to me?  Well, gosh, okay then.  I'll see what they have to say," Discord grins, flying into a random, empty room to wait.  He tilts his head at the door and smirks.

 

Luna looked up at Shade and quickly pushed the dart into her hoof.  She flinched and quickly grabbed at Yavolin.  She watched her hoof slowly turning to stone.  She looked at Shade again.

"Who should you trust?" she whispers.  "The elements?  Including the element of honesty?  Or Discord?"

 

Princess Celestia nods.  "You can do it!"

A guard rushes in.  "Princess!  He's in Princess Luna's study!" he says hastily, then he turns and rushes off. 

Princess Celestia looks around at them.  "You only have to try," she says.  "I'll be waiting outside the door to the room," she says softly, walking out the door, expecting them to follow her.

 

(OOC: Sorry.  Internet went off.

For days.

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Shade looks at Luna turning into stone, "big mistake princess, I can take you back to the cave when your stone, I could throw yavolin into a volcano, oh the possibilities are endless!" she said cheerfully "who do I trust? I trust myself, the element of chaos! And he hasn't sayed it directly to me, but he thinks of me as a daughter :)"

 

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Babs follows princess celestia


 

 

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"Wrong you can't have her shade". Yavolins grand dad came out of the shade, he pointed an bolistic knife at her it was darted with fast acting poisoin so encase it didn't kill you the poisoin would very quickly but there was no antidote for it, He didn't wait for her to turn it to ruber he fired it at her hoping she didn't have time to change it. Yavolin turned to stone in Lunas embraced.


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Shade looks at the blade flying towards her, she just smiles at it.

 

The blade went right threw her

 

"I knew it would be dangerous of me to be around you... That's why I use shadow and dark magic..."

 

She looks at yavolin who is completely stoned...

"What to do with you two?"


 

 

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Yavolins step fahter picked up the two conjoined statues and takes them away from shade."Your not taking Yavolin or Luna , now began our do we have to show you what happens if you mess with the Yavolins"?  He got out a ancent sword that his great great great Grand father gave him.


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shade looks at the father, and shrugs. " oh... i wont be the one taking them, il leave that to discord. since there turned to stone, what harm can they do?" shade changes back to her changeling forum and her horn starts to glow. "how ever, i could teleport something" she said as a thin green fire surrounds yavolins step father.  


 

 

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Yavolins step fahter puts the sword to the fire and it instantly goes out. "Don't try that again"! the sword glowed  out of somekind of energy, Fred looked at the sword he knew what it was becasue like shade his sons great  great great Grand father worked with Discord and as a reword for his loyalty discord gave him that sword.


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"dont try what again? how about you try to find me? the real me?"

shade flies up past the cotton candy clouds, then called her minions to disguise as her pony self, then changed into her pony forum.

 

then they all fly down and line up in front of yavolins step father, they all say at the same time "which one is the real one of us?"

 

the real shade wasn't in the line, she was hiding waiting for her chance to take the two stone ponies


 

 

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He closed his eyes and sent out a choatic serg of enegy to take away shades powers given by Discord. "Don't test me shade this sword was crafted by Dsicord himself  and if you don't give up i'll destory you"! The sword seemed to be laughing as he sent out shock wave.


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shade looked at herself as she lost power and her shadow forum... " how did you...?" 

 

she makes the element of chaos appear and puts it on her head, " get out of here minion!" the changeling minions change back to there normal forum and fly away.

 

"how would you have something like that? no matter, i still have my changeling magic, along with the magic of the element"

 

* why isnt this thing working? i dont feel different *


 

 

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