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Yavolins step dad walked over to shade the sword burned with a choatic engergy."Leave Yavolin and Luna or i will exile you to Tartarus here and now , make a chocie and don't dare to try and take this sword only Discord himself can touch this sword or any living member of my family can have this sword this means Yavolin can have it". He smiles widely at shade believing he had won.

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shade hesitated, she didnt know what to do. * since when dose discord make swords? how is that sword?...??? *

 

"fine, but when i unlock the true power of this element, il be back."

 

shade said annoyed as she teleported back to discord, discord was right beside her when she appeared, " you have no idea what i just went threw... now what is with the sword that they said you made err something? it took away my chaos magic"


 

 

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Princess Luna was in a dark place.  Surrounded by blackness.  Surrounded by nothing.  She wasn't floating, but there was no ground beneath her either.

It was horrifying.

 


 

Sweetie Belle gave Scootaloo a reassuring smile and quickly followed them.  Apple Bloom blinked, confused and followed Sweetie Belle.

Princess Celestia lead them to Princess Luna's study.  Discord was lounging on a sofa inside the room.  Princess Celestia gestured to them to enter.


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Yavolin called out to Luna from the blackness he couldn't see nothing all he could see was eternal darkness which didn't bother him much then something come up in his mind that made him suffer. Luna Could be alone and he told her that they would be together , he had acted foolishly.


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Babs was shivering when she set eyes on discord, she looks at him terrified. "I don't think this is such a good idea" she said quietly and nervous.

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Shade was right by discord, "I'm telling you, yavolin and his family are dangerous... They shot a knife at me, luckly I was turned into a shadow. But still, he and Luna turned themselves to stone. We should..."

Shade stoped in her tracks... She felt pain all over her body. She watches celestia walk in the room along with applebloom, switiebelle, and babs. She coudent speak from the pain, but she knew she had to watch this.


 

 

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Princess Luna shuddered in the darkness.

Only a while.  A few hours.  Maybe a day.

...

Not years.  Not like Discord had to go through.

...

Oh dear Celestia, GET ME OUT OF HERE!

 


 

Discord looked over at Shade.  "Yavolin?  Him again?  I'm getting tired of him.  We should just---" he blinked.  "He turned...himself...into...stone?  He has no idea!" Discord said.  Then he looked towards the door.  "Oh, hey."

Princess Celestia stared at Discord.  She gave a reassuring nod at Babs.  Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle stepped beside Babs.


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Babs looks at discord as she get chills, she clears her throat and walks up to him, she was heavily sweating.

 

"Um... Hi, discord, can you just answer one question?... Why are you doing this? And don't say , just for fun, why are you really doing this?"

Babs ask...

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Shade fell to the ground as the pain grew

* why am I?...* then she knew what happened * oh no... The poison from the knife stuck to the shadows of me...*

 

Shade was on the ground, poisoned, she tried to speak but coudent.


 

 

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Discord pondered this for a moment.  "Hmm...I...don't know..." he said slowly.  "Oh, oh, wait.  Maybe...because...maybe because I was turned to stone for so long..." he said, not sarcastically, but actually wondering.  "Or maybe...hmm...dun know," he shrugged.

Sweetie Belle exchanged a look with Apple Bloom.  Princess Celestia shook her head.

Discord blinked at the sudden thud beside him.  He looked over and immediately was beside Shade.  "Shade?!" he gasped. 


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Shade was shaking, she curled up in a ball from the pain. She tries to speak but coudent... She lets out a loud changeling sheik... 5 of her minions appeared at the window looking at shade...

 

Both cadence and shining's horns pop out of shade... Her ears twitch, and the changelings start mumbling " yavolin "


 

 

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Yavolins step fahter rolled his eyes and freeded his son and  Luna by taping the sword againits the stone.  Yavolin fell to the ground like a rag dall , he was unable to protect Luna or himself at this time. Yavolins step father piicked up Yavolin and placed him out of sight while he hid Luna.


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Discord picked up Shade quickly.  He hurried over to Celestia and leaned towards her.  Celestia quickly leaned back defensively.

"Don't just stand there!  Help her!" he said angrily.

Celestia blinked.  "Uh..."

Discord turned to Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom and Babs.  "Where's the nurse?!  Oh wait, I know where!" he said, hurrying out of the room and going to the nurses office.  He threw the door open.  The nurse's head shot up.

 


 

Princess Luna looked around in confusion as the blackness rippled and started to crumble around her.

"Wha...what?!" she gasped.


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Yavolins step father looked at her and spoke."Do you wanna know who Yavolins real father is? but be warned you might not look at him the same again but seeing how you really love him i might as will tell you".  meanwhile Yavolin was recovering in his room.


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Princess rubbed her face hard and blinked in the sudden bright light.  She looked up at Yavolin's step father and then glanced around for Yavolin.  He wasn't there.  Luna felt a rush of disappointment but looked up at Yavolin's step father again.  She nodded. 
Al-alright..."


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Shade was paralyzed

 

(Shade is paralyzed and might be unable to move. XD)

 

All she could do was look at discord carry her...

 

The changeling minions followed discord

 

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Babs was confused... " why is discord...? And what happened to that changeling?"

 

She looks at Celestia for an answer


 

 

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Yavolins  step father handed Luna the birth thing , he wasn't happy that he had to tell her this but he kept it in his hoofs , he wasn't sure if Luna would handle this surprise will most mares who found out ended up leaving Yavolin because they saw him as a monster.

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Princess Celestia looked at Babs.  "I...I'm not sure.  Maybe Shade was...poisoned.  Or cursed," she said, walking towards the door.  "As for Discord's reaction...I had really thought after he broke out his heart stayed stone.  But perhaps I was wrong."

Sweetie Belle blinks.  Apple Bloom looks at Babs.

 


 

Discord pushed Scootaloo away and put Shade on the bed.  He looked over at the nurse.  They stared at each other.

"Well?!" Discord growled.  The nurse rushed over to Shade.

 


 

Princess Luna scanned the birth certificate.  She looked at Yavolin's step father and then read the birth certificate.


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scootaloo was pushed off the bed, "hey! what gives?" she gets off the ground and limps away

 

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shade's ears twitch

 

the minons mumble " help me"

 

the minions look at eachother as they look at shade on the bed, they seem to be worried about her... but nopony can understand the changeling language, but shade.


 

 

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He looked at her and waited for her to react he didn't want to say anything because it could upset her but the name of the father was in the birth certificate, he rather not say anything because his hole family was an enemy to equestria and to the throne of celestia.

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The nurse glances around, seeming panicked about what to do.  "I...I...wha-whats the problem?!" she asks.

Discord looks like he's about to smack the nurse in the head.  "Some idiot poisoned her or something!"

The nurse was shaking.  She looked like she was about to faint.  Discord quickly lowered himself to below her height to seem less threatening.  He looked at the nurse with blank eyes instead of angry eyes.  The nurse hastily calmed herself down and checked Shade's heart beat and temperature.  She then got out a needle.

"Wait!" Discord said.  The nurse jumped.  "What's that for?!"

"It's...it's...I need to check her blood..." the nurse whimpered.

"Oh."

The nurse positioned the needle over Shade's hoof.

 


 

Luna looked down at the name of Yavolin's father.

 

(OOC: Now...whose his father? xD)


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(apparently it's discord, I was about to post some epic post about how minions saw what the paper said... But then MR bob edited his post, so I held back)

 

Shade looks at the needle that was about to go in her hoof.

 

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Shades minions were all over equestria keeping chaos I order, when some of them saw yavolins step father handing Luna a paper and talking about who yavolins father was... The minions listened in and looked to see what the paper said.


 

 

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(OOC: Oh dear, Celestia, really?)

 

The nurse pushed the needle into Shade's hoof and pulled it back a moment later, placing a piece of cotton over where she had injected the needle.  She held it there for a moment, and looked up at Discord until he held it down for her.  The nurse turned away and pushed the blood out into a container.


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Shades eyes started to twitch after the needle came out

 

Shade started to cough, when she did, cadences and shinings horns poped out infront of shade. Shade started to struggle as the poison started to get worse.

 

(if discord was the father of yavolin, woudnt he know? And if not, I think it's clear that he prefers shade XD)


 

 

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Discord was staring at Shade intently.  The nurse placed the container down and her horn began to glow and the glow surrounded the container of blood.  After a moment, the glow went away.  The nurse quickly went into another room and came back in a moment later with two small boxes. 

The nurse cleaned a small area on Shade's hoof.  She opened both boxes and pulled a fresh new needle from one and a container of liquid from another.  She opened the container, put the needle into it, pulled the liquid in and turned to Shade.  She pressed on the needle a bit to check for air bubbles and then positioned the needle over Shade's hoof.  She glanced up at Discord.

"Did...did Princess Celestia say that I could do this...?" she asked slowly.

"Does it matter."

With that, the nurse pressed the needle into Shade's hoof, pushed the liquid into her blood stream, and pulled the needle out.  She placed another piece of cotton over the place she had punctured and gestured for Discord to hold it down.  He did so.

 

(OOC: Maybe.  I'm certain Discord would know if he knocked some chick up too xD

But whatever.  We'll see what happens.

And yes.  Shade didn't turn him to stone after all xD)


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Shade moned from being pocked again.

 

Shades ears twitched as she sent a message to the minions watching

 

They mumbled "yavolins father had a sword, saying that he got it from you... Know anything about that?" the changelings asked for shade.

 

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Babs looks at celestia. "should we go see what he's up to?"

 

Scootaloo walked up to babs and leaned on her

" I was kicked off the bed!"


 

 

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Discord made a face and looked at the changelings.  "A sword?  Why would I give some pony a...oh," he paused.  "Oops..."

He looked back at the nurse.  "Is she going to be okay?!"

 


 

Princess Celestia nodded at Babs.  "We should be careful though.  I still have the bruises from the last time Shade was poisoned," she said calmly, starting up the stairs.

Sweetie Belle looked at Scootaloo sympathetically.  Apple Bloom made an upset noise.  "That Discord sure does have to comin' ta him!"

 

(OOC: I don't know why I made Sweetie Belle so quiet...)


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