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"No!" Solar Flare growled, stalking towards her, turning away from Discord.  "I plan to just burn all those ponies who doubted my rightful role in Equestria.  The ones who thought so poorly of me when I had to deal with ruling over the whole of Equestria!  Do you think it's easy?!" she growled.  She looked at Yavolin.  "Do you?!"

Discord raised an eyebrow.  "She shouldn't have suppressed all this anger."

Solar Flare threw a ball of fire at Discord's head.  Discord ducked and it flew over his head.  He glared at her. 


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Yavolin looked at Discord."Then what would mom say Discord? you must of loved her enough to want to have a foal with her". He hoped to cause discord to save him then again this was the god of chaos that he was dealing with hopefully Discord didn't know anything of his plan.


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Discord didn't reply.  He growled at him.  "Fine.  Want me to help you, hmm?  I'll turn you to stone right here then.  Better then facing the flames isn't it?" Discord smirked, waving a paw and starting to turn Yavolin to stone.  "But no, not really.  It would be better just dying right here.  Better then that stone world."

Solar Flare growled and raced towards Yavolin.  "No!  You'll burn!"

 

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Shade screamed.." I can't take it any more!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

And she teleported away...

 

She teleported away to the crystal empire... Where all the ponies were slaving away...

 

She absorbs the last of the love that was around and she looked at her element.

She looked at it for quite some time

 

* I can't believe that discord has yavolin as a son... I wish I knew who my mom and dad were...* a tear rolled down her eye.


 

 

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Yavolin was now cased in stone like his father, he didn't know what was happening but he knew he would be safe while Princess Clestia was turning to roast him alive. But for some reason he slept for what seemed like forever is what Discord feels inside the prison.


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Solar Flare turned to Discord furiously.  "I'll burn you too!  I'll...I'll---"

"Oh shut up, Tia.  I liked you better when you were trying to teach every pony lessons in...'friendship'," Discord said.  He got surrounded by a shield and went into the room.  He went through the flames, his shield protecting him.  He slapped Solar Flare across the face.

"Hey!"

"You've been a bad girl!" he said, waving a talon at her as she eyes flashed dangerously.

Discord touched his talon to her forehead.  "Go to sleep."

Solar Flare fell to the ground unconscious.  Discord's shield wavered and disappeared.  He got surrounded by flames and quickly teleported to his cave.  He stumbled over.  He was slightly burnt, but more tired then anything.  "The elements can wait...I...but Shade can't-" but he had already passed out.

 


 

Princess Luna slowly made her way to the Canterlot castle.  She knew she was in danger.  But she didn't really care.


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Yavolin began to worry about Luna what if she got hurt becasue of him his soul tried to call out to discord."Father if you care for your future grandson you'll save Luna and me, please". He knew it was hopeless  but he was trying to keep Luna form all of this.

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Discord heard a voice in his dream.  He tried to ignore it.  Leave me alone, he replied back.

 


 

Princess Luna looked up at the smoke.  "No!" she gasped, running at top speed to the castle.  She burst in and threw open the doors to the room.  The flames were gone but smoke covered the ceiling.  She looked around.

"Tia!  Yavolin!" she cried out in horror.


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Yavolins soul was hurting he desperately tried to get his father to help Luna."Please father help her, she'll die if you don't help her".  he hoped Discord would take pity on her because he had to knew love at some point in his life. Yavolin soon went into a dark turns formation.

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Luna stumbled back as she heard Yavolin.  She heard him laugh.  She turned and ran out of the room, tears flying down her cheeks.  She raced out of the castle.

"Some pony help me!  I need to get to Trottingham!  Hurry!" she called.

A unicorn immediately helped teleport Luna to Trottingham.  Luna appeared in Trottingham.  She trotted to an area with a large patch of trees near Trottingham and hid.  She covered her face with her hooves and sobbed. 


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Yavolins darker side called out to Discord."As soon i as i am unstoned Discord I am going to kill shade and as for Luna". he laughed like Discord  he didn't care what had to be done but he was getting his revenge on Discord one way or another , but some where deep inside was the true yavolin asleep.


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Well then I'll wake Tia up and let her burn you to ashes.  Discord replied.  And if so as touch Shade...well...you can say goodbye to darling Princess Luna and your precious foal.

It's so funny too.  I didn't even have to raise you for you to become like me, he sent to him, thinking it would break him.  I'm so proud.


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Yavolins statue started to crack just by pure well, he had  no idea  what has happen to him while he was inside there but the first thing he wanted to scent he was free was find Luna and turn her into nightmare moon , Yavolin let out a wicked laugh and started for the door.

 

 

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Luna rocked as she looked around at the trees, tears going down her face.  "Turn back time.  Make it right again.  Some pony please..." she whispered, covering her face again. 

 


 

Discord yawned and opened his eyes.  He blinked.  "Oh wait...what happened to the elements again?  Are they still in the maze!?" he quickly got up.  "And...Shade!" he glanced around the cave.  "Shade?!  You here?"


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Yavolin made his way were Luna was but he could tell that something was different about himself he just couldn't put a hoof on it.Yavolin walks looking for any signs of Luna he displayed a wicked smile on his face that would send shivers down another ponies spine.


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Shade was still thinking... She thought about the elements, the pony elements, Celestia, Luna, and chaos it's self. Was it the right thing? She didn't know, she looks at her black element of harmony. She looks at it trying to think about why chaos is harmony. She looked at it and thought. * what if chaos can be a good thing, not many ponies can have the magic that me and discord have... Maybe it can be used for good. Maybe all of this can be fixed... But how would discord react to this?* as she thought that her element turned golden.

 

She made a bubble suround her and it started to expand, soon it covered the crystal empire and freed the crystal ponies and..... Long story short... The crystal empire was fixed...

 

She teleported away to canterlot... She landed beside Luna.


 

 

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Yavolin saw shade near his pray."Move it I have something that needs to be done". Yavolins eyes wasn't his own eyes anymore they looked a lot like discords eyes. He smiled evilly and took out a dagger and looked at shade expecting her to take a hint and leave.


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Luna jumped.  She burst up and stumbled back.  "Don't touch me!  Just please!  Leave me alone!" she said, backing away.  Then she noticed Yavolin.  But...why wasn't he trying to hurt Shade.  Why did he seem so...different.

Luna began to back away from both of them, her head turning from side to side as if watching a tennis match.

 


 

Discord paused.  Wondering whether to find her with magic or just go looking?  Which would use up less magic?

 


 

Solar Flare opened her eyes dazedly.  She sat up and looked around the room, her flaming hair flickered. 


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Yavolin looked at Luna then he saw the time to Discord Luna he pointed a hoof at shade."This little monster destroyed your sister,i am sorry Luna but celestia is dead thanks to Shade". he waited for Nightmare moon to show his plan was perfect in his mind.


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Luna started to breathe raggedly.  Yavolin...he wouldn't lie.  So...so Tia...she...she's...  "No!" Princess Luna screamed, tears running down her face.  "No!" she repeated.  She turned away and began to run at top speed away from them.  Both of them.  She wanted to be alone.  Please, don't let this be true.  Some pony turn back time, make it right.

Not Tia.  Not my sister.  Not the pony I truly believed loved me either then Yavolin.

Not the only pony I could trust.  Not her.  Please.  Any pony but her.  Any.  Pony.

Luna shook and dropped to the ground as she felt a lurch in her stomach.  She gave a sharp gasp.

 

(Has Luna's prayers been answered?!

Find out next week on My Little Pony: Chaos is Magic!)


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Shade tackled yavolin, she pined him to the ground

 

"Yavolin... This isn't you... You may be the son of discord, but you are the element of loyalty... You shouldn't be acting this way, don't let the discord side of you get the best of you. You love Luna, and look what you've just done..."

 

Shade charged her horn and casted a calm mind spell along with a memory spell and a harmony spell... With the help of her chaos crown, she hoped that yavolin would be harmonic again.


 

 

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The true Yavolin awoke deep inside himself he felt horrorble about what he just done."Luna"! he ran after her he didn't know what she was going to do but he did't want her to end up turning into Nightmare moon or worse leave him and end up having a foal by herself.


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Luna sobbed and clutched at her stomach.  She didn't notice what was happening around her.  It...hurts!

Luna pushed herself to her hooves and took a few steps forward.  She stumbled and fell to the ground again.  She barely noticed the sudden pool of blood that began to surround her.  But she did.

"N-no...no!" Luna cried out.


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Yavolin went to her side and held her , he looked at shade."Do something anything". he didn't know how to deliver a foal that's if it was coming. Yavolin knew that this was all on him he had placed her under to much stress  and now the foal could be in danger of dieing.


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Luna breathed heavily, her eyes twitching.  She suddenly spoke in her Canterlot tone without the odd words.  "For Celestia's sake, some pony help me!" she screamed.  She felt another stab in her stomach.  She closed her eyes, now her whole body twitched strangely. 


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