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Shade waves at discord then teleports both nightmare moon and herself to cloudsdale... Shade looked around and begins to turn tge cloud makes into cotton candy makers...

 

She turns all the snow flakes into fire sparks, she turns the rainbows into green and black colors...

 

Then goes to nightmare moon... "well... What are you going to do?"


 

 

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Nightmare Moon looks around.  "I don't know..." she says, sounding depressed.  "Just...tell me what to do or something.  I'm not good at chaos like you and Discord," she says, making her voice annoyed.  She looks over and sees hail.  She makes the hail into stars which float up into the sky.  She makes a face.  "That's not even close is it?"


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"ee.... Close enough"

Shade shruggs

 

"How about you go into other ponies dreams and give them nightmares! That would be funny!"

 

Shade dips her hoof into the black and green rainbow pool... And tastes it...

 

"yuck... Black lickerish and lime..."

 

She looks back at her tail... " oh I know what I forgot!"

 

Shade puts a lightning cloud in the rainbow pool... And electrified the rainbow pool.


 

 

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Nightmare Moon pauses, and then smirks.  "I don't think I have to do that.  They heard about us.  Their already having nightmares," but she still closed her eyes and fell into the dream scape.

Nightmare Moon looked around at the dreams.  She went in the closet one.

A few moments later, Nightmare Moon opened her eyes.  She heard a screaming in the distance, coming from the residential area.  It died down quickly.  Nightmare Moon tilted her head and smirked.


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Shade looked up as there was a pony screaming... She turned back to nightmare moon and smiled.

 

"well... I'm done with the chaos factory... Let's go to wonder bolt academy... Maybe the wonderbolts will try and stop up... Hahaha... I wonder who took over after rainbowdash?"

 

(some pony named scootaloo?? XD)


 

 

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Nightmare Moon snickered.  "Too bad they can't try and kill me.  I'm too precious," she said, she flipping her mane and struck a posh pose.  "Whatever then, let's go," she said.  "Rainbow Dash?" she thought for a moment.  Then she shrugged.

 

(I think its some pony that's orange with a dark pink mane.  Hmm...?)


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"then let's go!"

 

Shade teleported both of them to wonderbolt accademy, shade landed right in the middle of the run way... She could see lots of wonder bolt students training... She started by turning the clouds into cotton candy and making it rain chocolat milk...

 

( I think the mane was more purpleish... XD)


 

 

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Nightmare Moon followed her and appeared beside her.  She stepped forward, her mane growing outward and surrounding the whole area with almost a barrier of stars that made it seem like they were in an empty space with only the stars surrounding them. 

 

(And purple eyes as well!)


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Shade looked around to see that most of the students were running into the barracks... Some tried charging into shade... She just threw poison joke balls at them and turned there wings upside down...

 

" now were are the wonderbolts? They should be heading to attack me right about... Now"

 

Shade looked and saw some ponies flying around the academy...

 

(so how are we going to do this? Whos going to play as, the orange coated pony with a purple mane... Was her name chicken? Idk I cant remember... XD)


 

 

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A pony came charging towards Nightmare Moon.  Nightmare Moon gave the pony a saddened look.
"Oh, but my faithful subject, I am still Princess Luna," she frowned.

The pony looked at her and slumped to the clouds.  Nightmare Moon smiled.  "That's what I thought."

 

(I don't know.  If you want to play her you can go ahead.  If you don't want to, I can.  Either way I'm good.

Hmm...yeah I think it was Chicken...)


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Shade kept looking as the ponies kept circling around the academy... Then they charged right towards shade, shade didn't move... She wanted to see what they would do if they captured her...

 

The Three ponies landed around shade... She just smiled at them...

 

"where is discord?" they started...

 

"why? Am I not good enough for you?"

 

" what? No... Just tell us where discord is"

 

 

Shade just glared at them... Then she changed herself to look like rainbow dash

 

" but you do know I am the capten of the

Wonderbolts"

 

 

Scootaloo looked kind of shocked

"what!? Rainbow dash? How are you???"

 

Shade broke into laughter as she changed into her changeling forum...

 

"wow... You are stupid...."

 

 

Scootaloo raised an eyebrow

 

 

Then shade changed back to her pony forum

" if I'm not mistaken... It was you who freed discord last time"

 

"what? No! It wasn't me... It was sweetiebelle..."

 

"the singer?"

 

"yah... That's her... Or it might have been applebloom"

 

"the pony who took over raritys shop in canterlot?"

 

"if that's what she's doling now... I guess"

 

"well, still you 3 did free discord the first time.."

 

 

Scootaloo stopped...

 

"why are we talking about this?... Let's just bring her to celestia to put her in jail"

 

"that won't work if you can't fly."

 

"what?"

 

 

Shade made a poison joke ball appear and struck scootaloo with it...

 

Scootaloos wings went small...

 

 

Shade laughed... "Well, looks like I caused enough chaos around here! Later!"

 

Shade teleported back to the cave.

 

 

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Yavolin heard that Nightmare moon was in clouds dell so he went to her, Yavolin had to hide his face behind a mask because of the posion oak that caused his face to blister, Yavolin called out to Nightmare moon in hopes of her coming to see him after all he was the father of her foal."Nightmare moon, come here".


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Nightmare Moon laughed as Shade questioned Scootaloo about freeing Discord the first time.  She remembered how annoyed Princess Celestia was about it after they defeated Discord.

Nightmare Moon was about to teleport back to the cave when she heard a familiar voice.  She turned to the sound of the voice.  What can they do to hurt me? she thought, walking towards the voice with a sly smile on her face.


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Yavolin came towards Nightmare moon while keeping the mask over his face."You know this isn't you Luna". Yavolin was prepared to tag her with a tracking device if she try's   anything , Yavolin sighed and removed the mask he knew Luna was still in there.


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Nightmare Moon just smiled at him.  "I'm not Luna anymore, silly little foal," she laughed.  Then he took off his mask.  Nightmare Moon immediately took a step back, her hooves far apart.  "W-what do you want?!" she growled, although it sounded more like a whimper.


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Back at the cave... Shade was laughing her head off... She pulled herself together and..

 

"Oh was that fun of what! What do you think nightmare?... Nightmare???"

 

Shade looked around, but nightmare moon wasn't there...

 

* she's probably giving nightmares to other ponies*

 

"DISCORD!!! Where are you!!!!"


 

 

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Discord was sitting at the cave entrance, just staring straight at the ground.  Listening to the voice in his mind.  When he hears Shade, he blinks.  He looks up and touches his head in annoyance.  What happened?  he wonders.  Then the voice wavers.  He listens to it for a moment.  Princess Celestia.

"What the heck?!  Get out of my head!  How are you doing that?!" Discord growls, addressing the voice in his mind.


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Yavolin threw the tracking device on her skin which was small enough to blind in with her skin."What i want is you , I am the father of your foal and I love you". Yavolin opened his wings he was going to have Nightmare moon back as Luna if it was the first thing that he did.


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Nightmare Moon looked down as something was thrown at her.  She tilted her head in confusion when she saw nothing.  She looked back up at him.  She covered her ears with her hooves as he spoke.  "You're hurting my brain," she whimpered, fighting against the Luna inside her.  But Luna was strong as well.  Discord's magic was stronger then last time he changed Luna.


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Shade went to discord... She saw discord talking to himself.

 

She stood there, * what is he doing???*

 

"Um... Well... I finished the chaos factory! Changed every single cloud into cotton candy and made rainbows look like me!! What are you doing???"

 

Shade sat beside discord and looked at the ground with him


 

 

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Yavolin looked at Nightmare Moon finally in burst of speed he went to kiss her , if Nightmare moon wanted to stop him then she'll have to kill him but he figured that Luna wouldn't let that happen , he figured that if he got her back then she'll use her to kill shade.


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Discord listened to the voice in his head for a moment, completely ignoring Shade.

"What?  I know it's you!" Discord said angrily to it.  "Just tell me how you're doing that!"

Discord growled as he listened further.  "You don't have a horn.  It was the sun wasn't it?"

Discord listened.  "Well stop it.  You're lucky I even bothered to raise it!" Discord says.

The voice sighs and disappears.  Discord looks at Shade, seeming irritated at something.



At first, Nightmare Moon pushed at him.  Then Luna pushed at her and her hind legs slowly began to turn back to a dusty blue color.  It began to inch up her body.  Nightmare Moon relaxed slightly as Luna took back over her own body and fought Nightmare Moon back into the depths of her heart.


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Shade backed away from discord slowly...

 

"Um... Was Celestia talking to you in your mind? Or..."

 

__________

 

Scootaloo was looking at her small wings...

"Uhg... This reminds me when I was being tough by rainbow dash how to fly..."

 

She looks over at nightmare moon and yavolin...

 

* what's going on there? *


 

 

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Yavolin kept her in the kiss , he didn't dare let go of his Luna he would take her back and make her look like some pony else but he didn't know where to hide or were to go, he didn't hear shade nor did he cared he wanted his Luna back. He didn't stop till she was strong enough to fight nightmare moon off.


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Discord raised an eyebrow at her.  "I hate her.  She used the sun or something.  I don't even understand..."

 


 

Princess Celestia opened her eyes and turned away from the sun.  He listened for a while.  I think I actually put him in some sort of trance there.

 


 

Princess Luna hugged Yavolin tightly, pulling away from his kiss.  Tears were escaping her eyes.  She spoke as Luna.  "Oh, Yavolin!  It's horrible with Discord and Shade.  Discord treats me like absolute dirt!" she cries.


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