RoseBlush Vector's

[PonyEcho 1,610]

ok made these as a gift for Flaret 

 

Vector of RoseBlush with a smoothie

and

her Ponysona with Roseblush

 

plz let me know what you think.

[Hazardus_Havard. 480]

Well, it's obvious you used pre-made vectored bodies, from how easily recognizable the bottom one is (Trixie on top of Twilight)

 

You should at some point try and create your own bodies, to truly make it your own work.  Do some simple sketches, then vectorize over where you want the work.

 

As for the coloring you've done here, the white under the dark red is way too striking for a pony with black hair.  You should think of a light pink instead of the white, and lighten up on the darkness in the red.

 

It looks like you tried to make her namesake, Roseblush, obvious with the coloring.  If you want to do that, just add in a blush tone under her eyes.  It won't have you forced making those gradients all over her body, and it'll give a nice, cute appearance on her as well.

 

Her hair.  It's way too black, too striking from her red body.  Looking at that cutie mark, it's blue color makes it a focal point to look at, as in with that one thing out of all the dark colors, it's what people first see.  So try and make her hair a lighter, blue color, it'll help make her look softer to look at, not personality wise but image wise.

Oh, and one last thing.  I JUST noticed the top one has wings, but the bottom one does not.  Try and fix that.  In the very least, the bottom one should have the wings folded alongside the body, if even shown a little to give the appearance of a Pegasus.  Or, just subtract the wings from the top image altogether.  Your choice.

[PonyEcho 1,610]

Well, it's obvious you used pre-made vectored bodies, from how easily recognizable the bottom one is (Trixie on top of Twilight)

 

You should at some point try and create your own bodies, to truly make it your own work.  Do some simple sketches, then vectorize over where you want the work.

 

As for the coloring you've done here, the white under the dark red is way too striking for a pony with black hair.  You should think of a light pink instead of the white, and lighten up on the darkness in the red.

 

It looks like you tried to make her namesake, Roseblush, obvious with the coloring.  If you want to do that, just add in a blush tone under her eyes.  It won't have you forced making those gradients all over her body, and it'll give a nice, cute appearance on her as well.

 

Her hair.  It's way too black, too striking from her red body.  Looking at that cutie mark, it's blue color makes it a focal point to look at, as in with that one thing out of all the dark colors, it's what people first see.  So try and make her hair a lighter, blue color, it'll help make her look softer to look at, not personality wise but image wise.

 

Oh, and one last thing.  I JUST noticed the top one has wings, but the bottom one does not.  Try and fix that.  In the very least, the bottom one should have the wings folded alongside the body, if even shown a little to give the appearance of a Pegasus.  Or, just subtract the wings from the top image altogether.  Your choice.

easier said then done, I no longer have function of my drawing hand which is why iv'e turned to vector art.

also these are vector traces i can post the vector file to prove that, and just because i'm using a reference ... you know what i'm gona stop you're just giving criticism. i'm new to vectoring and i'm doing it with one arm.

 

also RoseBlush is not my creation its Flarets 

Edited December 5, 2012 by PonyEcho

[Hazardus_Havard. 480]

easier said then done, I no longer have function of my drawing hand which is why iv'e turned to vector art.

also these are vector traces i can post the vector file to prove that, and just because i'm using a reference ... you know what i'm gona stop you're just giving criticism. i'm new to vectoring and i'm doing it with one arm.

 

also RoseBlush is not my creation its Flarets 

 

Just a simple bit of criticism, and I'm glad you saw just that.  It wasn't to invoke any type of anger to you, though I'm saddened to admit so many others have made way to anger much more easily.

 

One arm, eh?  I know that is a difficult thing to get over, what with how I've seen people in those binds as well.  Maybe for the time being, you could be a clean up artist?  Like, people already have the sketches up and ready, but want vectored illustrations.  You could do that for the time being, just put up something stating you need practice and would vector 'simple' images at first, cleaning them up with vector and providing color schemes as the sketch artist and you seem fit for it.

 

Just an idea for the time being, until your hand is either fixed or you can manage drawing with your other hand.

[PonyEcho 1,610]

Just a simple bit of criticism, and I'm glad you saw just that.  It wasn't to invoke any type of anger to you, though I'm saddened to admit so many others have made way to anger much more easily.

 

One arm, eh?  I know that is a difficult thing to get over, what with how I've seen people in those binds as well.  Maybe for the time being, you could be a clean up artist?  Like, people already have the sketches up and ready, but want vectored illustrations.  You could do that for the time being, just put up something stating you need practice and would vector 'simple' images at first, cleaning them up with vector and providing color schemes as the sketch artist and you seem fit for it.

 

Just an idea for the time being, until your hand is either fixed or you can manage drawing with your other hand.

i would mind doing that in the future but atm I'm just doing vector traces an reworking them to other characters, i don't get some people find that as a problem to be criticized.

i'm still getting used to using IncScape to i'm gonna continue what i'm doing. 

[Hazardus_Havard. 480]

i would mind doing that in the future but atm I'm just doing vector traces an reworking them to other characters, i don't get some people find that as a problem to be criticized.

i'm still getting used to using IncScape to i'm gonna continue what i'm doing. 

Well, if you ever want, just give me a holler and I can try and point some things out if you would like some help.  I do Vector Illustrations myself, though I'm trying to branch off to a painterly type of art.  Not working, gonna try combining the two when my tablet stops being stupid and wants to work with me (I'm putting it in a time out.)

 

If you want some examples, my DA Account in my Sig is there, and all but the last thing I've posted on my account is Vector art.  Just to give you an idea on what some simple vectoring can do.

 

Guess I should also point out I may not be on this too much, so don't think I'm ignoring you if I don't reply quickly.

Edited December 5, 2012 by Hazardus_Havard