Hooray, my pony drawing isn't god-awful!

[ReGen 1,466]

Hey look, it's a lot better.

 

(Sorry if I couldn't get a clearer image!)

 

Really, this is my absolute first time drawing a full-fledged pony.

 

Ready for criticism!

 

Special thanks to DJ PINK-3 for providing me with the tutorial link!

Edited December 10, 2012 by Supernova

[Wubsie 1,123]

This is a really beautiful drawing of your pony you have here. I really like her simplicity. 

Get ready for criticism lawlz

Hmm...she looks a little fat. Maybe you should find a bigger canvas to work on or draw smoother lines.

Lastly her eyes look a bit weird. .-. Might want to put an iris and pupil on there so she looks balanced.

Other than those two this picture is perfect IMO. Good work.

[RaptorART 258]

Hey look, it's a lot better.

 

 

(Sorry if I couldn't get a clearer image!)

 

Really, this is my absolute first time drawing a full-fledged pony.

 

Ready for criticism!

 

Special thanks to DJ PINK-3 for providing me with the tutorial link!

whelp...I saw your picture like 10 min ago

but now its not working, I'll check back later I suppose

I was gonna do a draw over too, lol

I think your pose was similar to this one, from what i saw, i only took a glance

 

It didn't seem like you didn't even use a skeleton at all from what i could tell

(YES i prefer a longated neck line with mine, I just like it more)

but the quality wasn't really that great, so maybe i just missed it

but it seemed like you just started your piece with Outlines, and no real base

I'm here, and willing to help you improve if you got the patients to learn

Edited December 10, 2012 by RaptorART

[ReGen 1,466]

whelp...I saw your picture like 10 min ago

but now its not working, I'll check back later I suppose

I was gonna do a draw over too, lol

I think your pose was similar to this one, from what i saw, i only took a glance

reverse head turn.jpg

 

It didn't seem like you didn't even use a skeleton at all from what i could tell

(YES i prefer a longated neck line with mine, I just like it more)

but the quality wasn't really that great, so maybe i just missed it

but it seemed like you just started your piece with Outlines, and no real base

I'm here, and willing to help you improve if you got the patients to learn

 

It should be working now. I just based her off some circles.

 

And I would be honored if you teach me!

 

This is a really beautiful drawing of your pony you have here. I really like her simplicity. 

Get ready for criticism lawlz

Hmm...she looks a little fat. Maybe you should find a bigger canvas to work on or draw smoother lines.

Lastly her eyes look a bit weird. .-. Might want to put an iris and pupil on there so she looks balanced.

Other than those two this picture is perfect IMO. Good work.

Thanks. I was never a really good artist (I failed Art in 6th grade!), so that means a lot!  

[Concord 1,982]

I drew my first pony in that same pose as you did. It looks not to bad actually.

I myself would also love to learn how to use those skeletons that RaptorArt was talking about :/

[marlyly 187]

Lets compare it to MY very first pony.

   

 

Ok yours is better.

 

Now for some real criticism:

The head (and the position of the eyes) is kinda good but the hears are realy too smalls.

The size of the legs nead to be equalized.

And the space between the head and the forelegs (dont know how you call it) is not big enough.

 

And for the tutorial stuffs dont follow them too much, it's allways good to have his own style, and you get it by practicing again and again.