Fanglore 140 January 10, 2013 Share January 10, 2013 this is my first mlp fan art so please tell me how i did this is my oc. his name is Fallen Star and he has just arrived in ponville to try and find his place in the world. he lived a very sheltered life but now he wants to see the world with his own eyes 5 Join me in Art Rivals http://mlpforums.com/topic/70707-art-rivals-home-thread/#entry1764166 Visit my deviantart http://fanglore17.deviantart.com/ Fallen Star http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/fallen-star-r5043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kain17 88 February 27, 2013 Share February 27, 2013 its a good pic. like the background and hope to see more from you. .....one hundred letters are sometimes hard to make so i have to say something like this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendship_Cannon 1,676 February 27, 2013 Share February 27, 2013 Cool drawing, bro. Nice story as well, interesting theme, looking at the stars (the moon?), quite cool. The hooves could maybe usre a tiny bit of work, but it´s greta so far! Keep it up, hope to see more of this. Signature made by the amazing ~Harmonic Dreams~ I always pictured you as a cross between Demoman and Pinkie Pie for some reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zygen 6,066 February 27, 2013 Share February 27, 2013 (edited) It looks really good, considering your just starting. The background has alot of nice detail into it, and yet its all got a cartoony look to . I can't really see anything major problems, except I think that one of your hoofs is either bent in a way thats impossible for a pony to bend I think, or hes trying to turn it into a hand(Which is also impossible) so thats something to think about, when you do draw pony art you wanna try and make sure the pose you draw it in is a rational pose for a pony, might even help to study real pony anatomy a bit just to learn that type of thing. Its kinda interesting to . Great job for starting off though! Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll be wonderful! Edited February 27, 2013 by Zygen Thanks to Gone Airbourne for the awesome sig! My Oc's, Ponysona, Bella Vocal Covers Blog, MLP Covers Thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Rat 4,772 February 27, 2013 Share February 27, 2013 that is honestly not bad for a first stab at doing artwork for the pony world however, there is a small detail that i say, should be looked into... your pony looks somewhat similar to a dog... and that's about it other than that, it looks really good keep it up Thank you Nas for the sig :3 #HugWoona Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanglore 140 February 27, 2013 Author Share February 27, 2013 Cool drawing, bro. Nice story as well, interesting theme, looking at the stars (the moon?), quite cool. The hooves could maybe usre a tiny bit of work, but it´s greta so far! Keep it up, hope to see more of this. ya this was my first try and hopefully i have improved a little but im sure ill keep posting as i get more done It looks really good, considering your just starting. The background has alot of nice detail into it, and yet its all got a cartoony look to . I can't really see anything major problems, except I think that one of your hoofs is either bent in a way thats impossible for a pony to bend I think, or hes trying to turn it into a hand(Which is also impossible) so thats something to think about, when you do draw pony art you wanna try and make sure the pose you draw it in is a rational pose for a pony, might even help to study real pony anatomy a bit just to learn that type of thing. Its kinda interesting to . Great job for starting off though! Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll be wonderful! ya i couldn't get the hoof to look right so i just went and moved on that is honestly not bad for a first stab at doing artwork for the pony world however, there is a small detail that i say, should be looked into... your pony looks somewhat similar to a dog... and that's about it other than that, it looks really good keep it up i can understand why it would look like one. i drew a lot of wolves before i started drawing ponies so maybe a little wolf slipped through For a first attempt... I liked the background, I'd work more on learning how the pony's body works. The hoof shouldn't be bent up like that wow i didnt expect everyone to hit the hoof <_< im gonna have to be sure to watch that a lot closer thx for all the help. as you can see i need it 1 Join me in Art Rivals http://mlpforums.com/topic/70707-art-rivals-home-thread/#entry1764166 Visit my deviantart http://fanglore17.deviantart.com/ Fallen Star http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/fallen-star-r5043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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