oops on the oc posting

[kain17 88]

ya i made a mistake when posting my oc. if anyone want to see the mistake plz look here http://mlpforums.com/topic/46795-finally-got-an-oc-for-myself/?p=1106249

 

 

if not well thank you   i am new to the community but i have been a brony for a wile now. well i decided to make me an oc and well its giving me more trouble then i expected. it took me forever to decide what to make him look like. so here he is. i like to call him Blitz. don't know why.  i just like the sound of it. well here is another post of him. laugh at your pleasure.   i know i have laughed a lot well doing this.

[Sensuna 138]

you should think about the cutie mark also acutie mark resembles their names

 

like my oc is called shooting star andthus got 3 stars on her flank

[Heart's Desire 181]

The pose is perfect for the mood of your post, haha. He's very cute. Perhaps now he needs a personality or a back story?

 

Nice job though, do you draw a lot?

[kain17 88]

The pose is perfect for the mood of your post, haha. He's very cute. Perhaps now he needs a personality or a back story?

 

Nice job though, do you draw a lot?

i almost never draw. this has been my first drawing in well over 3 years.  i have been thinking about a cutie mark or back story but have been coming up short.  i also thought the pose was perfect too and it made it even better when i messed up posting. ill probably do another one when i can figure out a back story and a cutie mark for him

Edited January 25, 2013 by kain17

[Zygen 6,066]

i almost never draw. this has been my first drawing in well over 3 years.  i have been thinking about a cutie mark or back story but have been coming up short.  i also thought the pose was perfect too and it made it even better when i messed up posting. ill probably do another one when i can figure out a back story and a cutie mark for him

You drew this after not drawing for 3 years?

Well darn if thats the case its a good job . better then I can draw.

 

I obviously am not going to critique you or anything for your OC, its your OC afterall, besides it looks pretty good I think. Only thing is that I think you need to give him a cutie mark .

[kain17 88]

 

I obviously am not going to critique you or anything for your OC, its your OC afterall, besides it looks pretty good I think. Only thing is that I think you need to give him a cutie mark .

 

 

plz go ahead and critique. i enjoy hearing the opinions of others and seeing how i can do better and on this one i know there is a lot i could do better on   

[Wubsie 1,123]

If you derped and messed up on an old thread than edit the post you made and do whatever you need to do.

Anyways this is a nice OC IMO. I really like the color scheme.

[Zygen 6,066]

plz go ahead and critique. i enjoy hearing the opinions of others and seeing how i can do better and on this one i know there is a lot i could do better on   

Well the thing is its alot of opinion that goes into OC's. So its hard to give much critique.

 

If you really really want a critique i suppose I can try..

 

I personally find the brownish color in the mane doesn't really match very well with the purple, so I'd suggest trying to make it a different color, or atleast a different shade that matches better, maybe even change the shade of the purple, I just don't feel like it matches that well personally.

It doesn't really match the body color that well either to be honest, so I'd recommend doing some changes to it.

 

But again thats just my opinion, it is your OC afterall.

[kain17 88]

 

personally find the brownish color in the mane doesn't really match very well with the purple, so I'd suggest trying to make it a different color, or atleast a different shade that matches better, maybe even change the shade of the purple, I just don't feel like it matches that well personally. It doesn't really match the body color that well either to be honest, so I'd recommend doing some changes to it.

 

 

 

thx for that and i do realy mean thanks. i never noticed it look brownish. i was going for a dark red but it kinda does look a little brownish   ill lighting up the red on my next one so it looks better.

 

 

If you derped and messed up on an old thread than edit the post you made and do whatever you need to do. Anyways this is a nice OC IMO. I really like the color scheme.

 

i didnt just derp up the posting. i live with my brother fanglore and he was the last one one mlp forums. so i messed up and posted under his account and both of us couldnt figure out how to get rid of the post. so i posted another one as me with a laugh and a lot learned.