Help Me Choose A Fanfiction To Write Cx

[Feather Gem 967]

Hi.  So yes.  Title says it all.

Here are my ideas:

 

Who Am I?:

My name is Sandhya Akiko.  I suppose I could be consider myself special...but I could be considered pretty normal as well.

But the thing is...I am special.  Apparently.

Because my name isn't Sandhya Akiko.  My name is Twilight Sparkle.

 

After a cruel alicorn named Wicked Sin sends Twilight into a dark coma where she finds herself in the human world as a human, she lives in this world, believing it to be real.  And she, Sandhya Akiko, lives in this world for sixteen years.

But when she dies in the human world, she awakes in Equestria, as Twilight Sparkle.

But how can she be Twilight Sparkle?  How can she be a pony?  How can those sixteen years all have just been sixteen weeks?  A lie?  A complete lie.

What would you do...what would you do if your whole life was a lie?

 

I started this one already.  Quite interesting I guess.

I even thought of a sequel for it.  The sequel can be the story told by Wicked Sin's point of view.

 

All You Could Do:

"You were my best friend.  My only friend.  You abandoned me."

"I didn't want to abandon you.  You know that.  But you left me no choice.  i had to do it."

"Ah, Celestia.  The cruelest leader of them all."

"Not as cruel as you."

"Banished your own sister to the moon for a thousand years, turned me to stone..."

 

What happens behind the scenes while Twilight gives up?  Where does Discord go?  Does he go and make more chaos?  No. 

He pays a visit to his old friend.

And slowly, they remember the old times.  The better times.  Before Celestia took over Equestria, and before Discord turned to stone.  When they were best friends.  But Discord always though of Celestia as something more...

And why in Equestria would Celestia ever dare to ask Twilight and her friends to reform Discord?

 

I know, something like this has been done a million times.

And its a shipping.  But still.

 

The Princess Of The Night:

My name is Luna.  Most ponies call me Princess Luna.  Because that’s what I am.  A princess.  I rule over Equestria with my sister, Princess Celestia.

My story...it begins a few thousand years ago...

 

The story of Princess Luna.  From before she turned to Nightmare Moon and of when she got an apprentice.

But Luna has been hearing these whispers.  Their taunting her.  Taunting her.

Her apprentice notices.  But is helpless to stop it.  And she can only watch as her teacher becomes Nightmare Moon.

But this evil entity leaves her as soon as Luna is banished to the moon, only to come back in a thousand years.  So now, Luna is left completely alone.

When it comes back, takes her over, and Twilight defeats it, Luna must now face this modern world.  She must face the looks she gets.  And she must face the loneliness still there. 

Why doesn't Celestia love her?  Why?

 

No.  Celestia does.  You'd have to read it.

So...yes.  Luna.

 

Constellations:

"She banished you!  For one thousand years!  You were all I had!"

"But, Stella..."

"No!  Of course you'd try to talk me out of it!  You'd love her no matter what, wouldn't you?  But I won't stand for this...it's time for Celestia to get what she deserves.  I'll banish her to the sun!  Forever!"

"No...no Constellation you won't...I...I'll get the elements of harmony..."

"But...Luna...I...Luna?"

"I'm sorry..."

 

After being banished to the moon for a thousand years, Constellation, Luna's apprentice found herself completely alone.  Luna had taken her in when she had no parents, no family.  Nothing.

Why would Celestia do this?

Broken, Constellation goes on a search to find a spell to make her sleep for a thousand years.  When she wakes up, she'll banish Celestia to the sun.  She'll kill her for this.  So taking away her teacher, her friend, her mother...

 

Constellation is such a sweet little name.

I love Constellation.

 

 

 

Edited March 6, 2013 by Feather Gem

[Night Shine 767]

These all seem like pretty good ideas. Normally I'd only like one of them because most seem generic and/or overdone, but actually, every single one of these ideas is unique. That's impressive in itself. Now anyway...

 

#1--I actually have never read a fic like that before, although it seems almost like it could potentially fall into the rut of 'generic' based on the fact that it's Earth-Equestria character swapping, which is very easy to fall into 'generic HiE fic' territory. Still, I bet you could pull it off and make a very interesting story.

 

#2--Cool idea, and although it's probably been done quite a few times, I bet you could make a great entertaining story out of it

 

#3 and #4--I couldn't decide between choosing these two. It seems like you have a really, really good idea here, and these are two sides of the story. You should either a. combine them or b. have one be a sequel to another.

 

 

...but that's just my opinion. :3 They all sound great

Edited March 6, 2013 by Night Shine

[Sky Warden 2,243]

You're kidding or what? How am I supposed to choose one of them?

 

The first story sounds very interesting. Personally I don't really like human-pony cross-over, but your sentences take my attention.

 

"What if your life is a lie?"

 

As for that Discord-Celestia shipping, not the most interesting menu. I mean, following a God-like character is kinda...boring.

 

LUNA! Write the third, or the fourth. I suppose the fourth (the one with Constellation) will attract people more. We love an ordinary character to follow in a story. We love learning about a complete stranger. We've already known some things about Luna, Discord, Celestia, or Sparkling Twilight, but we haven't known your Constellation. This is what attracts me most. Plus, it has Luna in it!

 

[IceBeerG 55]

If you dont mind i will give my own opinion...

 

1) This fiction seems really good (since i quite enjoy by human/pony fanfictions), but persanaly i found it's quite hard to develop story and idea well... level of Background pony or so =)

2) No... just ... no. I cannot say that idea is generaly bad, but from such a pool is defenetly my number 4

3) Cannot choose between this one and first one. Can become really good dark/sad/adventure?/add_yours(Choose one or more) fanfiction.

4) Eeem... I dont get it. I mean what is difference between this and 3rd?

 

So well... what choice to made mmmm 5...4...3...2...1... mmm .... odd/even.... hmmm.... eeem... i think random will do it for me. Lets say first one =)

[Feather Gem 967]

I don't know why but these comments made me go d'awwh.

 

Well, I can see so far, Who Am I is winning.  Which is probably a big favorite of mine.

And All You Could Do isn't.  xD And to be honest, I wasn't so excited about that one either.

And The Princess Of The Night got a vote too.  xD

And Constellations got a vote as well.  And what Sky Warden said, got me.  xD

 

So now, I'll probably be watching to see how Who Am I and Constellations go.

[Sky Warden 2,243]

I don't know why but these comments made me go d'awwh.

 

Well, I can see so far, Who Am I is winning.  Which is probably a big favorite of mine.

And All You Could Do isn't.  xD And to be honest, I wasn't so excited about that one either.

And The Princess Of The Night got a vote too.  xD

And Constellations got a vote as well.  And what Sky Warden said, got me.  xD

 

So now, I'll probably be watching to see how Who Am I and Constellations go.

Write, IT!

 

And here's a classic reminder,

*slap you and sit heavily*

"And that will make you remember."

 

If you want so more reasons, I can give a lot of them. Trust me. I put a ridiculously high standard for arts.

Edited March 6, 2013 by Sky Warden