Blazin 49 April 5, 2013 Share April 5, 2013 Hey guys, so earlier this morning I uploaded my first piece of pony art that I did and asked for some constructive criticism! So i took it on board, went into the vector file and edited a bits and pieces (including the jelly leg, matchstick neck and horrendously dark colour scheme) to make a sorta.. version 1.1 of the artwork. I'll put both pieces below. The piece with the name on it was first piece, and the second one with no name is the one with modifications. Again, any constructive criticism would be great! 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lovia 14 April 5, 2013 Share April 5, 2013 Give more curve touches for the legs to make it more alive. You need to give mane on the neck and larger tail size. It's my two cents for your art work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayruthepegasister 118 April 5, 2013 Share April 5, 2013 Give more curve touches for the legs to make it more alive. You need to give mane on the neck and larger tail size. It's my two cents for your art work. Agreed... I also think that the wings are a little small and the tail is a bit too wavy... I think you just need to curve things out to make it more natural, but then you'll be good! 1 ~Nayru "Time passes, people move.... Like a river's flow, it never ends... A childish mind will turn to noble ambition... Young love will become deep affection... The clear water's surface reflects growth... Now listen to the Serenade of Water to reflect upon yourself..." -Sheik, The Legend of Zelda Ocarina of Time Self proclaimed theme song: Thanks to vinyl_scratch13 for making this!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Descant 1,898 April 5, 2013 Share April 5, 2013 The front right leg shouldn't be able to bend more than twice, once at the elbow and once at the wrist. It's much like how humans work. You can't bend your arm at the middle of the humerus. The joints should be rounded, and if it were straightened, it would be longer than all of the other legs. 1 Find the Heart of the Jungle! Still searching for players! Join today! OOC RP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazin 49 April 5, 2013 Author Share April 5, 2013 Give more curve touches for the legs to make it more alive. You need to give mane on the neck and larger tail size. It's my two cents for your art work. Agreed... I also think that the wings are a little small and the tail is a bit too wavy... I think you just need to curve things out to make it more natural, but then you'll be good! The front right leg shouldn't be able to bend more than twice, once at the elbow and once at the wrist. It's much like how humans work. You can't bend your arm at the middle of the humerus. The joints should be rounded, and if it were straightened, it would be longer than all of the other legs. Thankyou all 3 of you! I would really appreciate it if any of you would add me on skype to give me a hand! It would be much quicker to have someone there to be looking at the work as it is happening rather than having to upload each time to get feedback Thanks, if you want to add me my skype name is ikyatt. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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