some of my random crap (i'm looking for some advice about it)

[Blitz 127]

Well I've been doing some practicing with drawing poses and shadowing and stuff with mlp stuff, and i think it's decent enough that it would be cool to post, and I'm trying to improve so if I could get some advice that'd be great. here's some of it (i might end up posting more later)

 

this one's probably the best of them, it's for a fan fiction I'm writing.

this one's sorta just... y'know... my boredom... so yeah i'll work on posting more when I can get my internet and stuff working better.

 

And now, for the large barrage of pictures that I spend way too much time on!

 

 

 

and here's another random alicorn

 

and another

 

and there will be more 

Edited April 23, 2013 by Blitz

[Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953]

I like your art style!

 

My favoirte, is the second one. I have never seen a water alicorn! Should make a great fanfiction! I cannot wait to read it.

 

This art is not crap, and it's alot better than anything I can do. Keep up the great work.

 

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[Blitz 127]

I like your art style!

 

My favoirte, is the second one. I have never seen a water alicorn! Should make a great fanfiction! I cannot wait to read it.

 

This art is not crap, and it's alot better than anything I can do. Keep up the great work.

 

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Well the fanfiction is gonna take me a while since it's my first, but I'm trying to work on it. And I usually call pretty much anything I don't know what to call crap (i'm weird) But thanks, I'm glad to hear that my drawings don't stink like they used to XD

 

 

[nooneimportantwashere 705]

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Edited February 10, 2022 by nooneimportantwashere

[Urkelbot 63]

I really like the look of the Eye, and the interesting pose in the first Drawing. As Kenniks said, could be lightened up a bit, or maybe add a light source, and some hi's and lo's. I also really like the Aqua princess. I can imagine the mane and tail constantly flowing, yet having weight to it. very creative

[Vinyl Scratch (Filly)™ 936]

Ooh I like those ponies! Keep up the practice, your art is looking great! Oh, you like to write fanfiction? :3 So do I! You should check out my stories! (Shameless self promotions FTW) http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Berry%20Punch

[Page Turner 607]

Okay, serious critique time.   .\_/. (serious face)

First of all your legs are a tad on the thin side, you might do well to beef them up a little.

Second. Your character's heads seem a tad tall, and thier muzzles stuck out a little too much, I would suggest pulling the muzzle in a bit, and going for a more spherical shape to the main part of the head.

Another issue is the odd gap between the top of number 1's mane, and the back. It looks to me like the back is not attached to the pony's head.

And lastly, #1's coat is a tad too dark. I would suggest brigtening it up a bit. as it is now there isn't enough contrast between the pony and the armor.

 

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But enough about what I didn't like, Let's talk about the good parts!

The way you draw wings is superb, That's always the hardest part for me. (and a part of why my OC is a Unicorn)

The armor is also excellent, you clearly have a good design sense.

and then there's that pose. I HATE drawing poses, but you did it remarkably well. Clean up those anatomy issues I listed above, and you'll have something really great here!

Edited April 23, 2013 by ~Neutral Page~

[Blitz 127]

Okay, serious critique time.   .\_/. (serious face)

 

First of all your legs are a tad on the thin side, you might do well to beef them up a little.

 

Second. Your character's heads seem a tad tall, and thier muzzles stuck out a little too much, I would suggest pulling the muzzle in a bit, and going for a more spherical shape to the main part of the head.

 

Another issue is the odd gap between the top of number 1's mane, and the back. It looks to me like the back is not attached to the pony's head.

 

And lastly, #1's coat is a tad too dark. I would suggest brigtening it up a bit. as it is now there isn't enough contrast between the pony and the armor.

 

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But enough about what I didn't like, Let's talk about the good parts!

 

The way you draw wings is superb, That's always the hardest part for me. (and a part of why my OC is a Unicorn)

 

The armor is also excellent, you clearly have a good design sense.

 

and then there's that pose. I HATE drawing poses, but you did it remarkably well. Clean up those anatomy issues I listed above, and you'll have something really great here!

 

The head and legs are always the hardest for me... my first drawings ended up looking partially mutated I will work on that in the future