The Guardians

[Harmony Spark 265]

Here is a new fanfic idea based on my own creations mixing in with MLP:FIM. It's about the ponies meet a empire's population of friendly colourful wolves called the Guardians, who have lost their home to migrating dragons and searched for a new home but since they are predators, many animals are too afraid to help them, even though the Guardians are kind, caring and never harm anyone innocent. They are also the rivals to the Timberwolves. So the ponies allow the Guardians to stay in Equestria until the mane 6 find a place for them. The Guardians and the Ponies both get along rather well and form a strong friendship. However, their carnivorous appetite forms a wedge between them. The wolves explain that they are omnivores (thought that this will be a twist) so they do eat other things but when a Guardian wolf doesn't have meat for too long, they become ravenous and has an eating frenzy. This extremely worries the ponies that the wolves are already eating the livestock of Sweet Apple Acres and all the other farms of Equestria. But fortunately, Princess Harmony Star (thats me lol) finds a way to settle this.

 

She magically replants a large mountainous desert on the east side of Equestria into a natural realm as the Guardians new home, called Caniselia, along with the help of Twilight and the others. The ponies and Guardians both sign a proclamation that they both live together in harmony and both have to help each other survive by the ponies giving meat to the Guardians while the Guardians promise never eat or harm the ponies. (They can't eat the animals in Caniselia cos most Guardians dont want to hurt innocent creatures) The Guardians and ponies also have the right to meet each other as many times they want.

 

The friendship lesson for this fanfic is that Sometimes, we all have to make sacrifices in life by giving our most precious possession to someone else because they need it more than you do.

 

That's it! Just to let u all know, this is a work in progress, if anyone has any suggestions on how to make this fanfic better, go right ahead

[~Silver Essence~ 2,625]

Wow, sounds promising!

Very enticing and very unique fan fic idea if I may say so!

This does sound long, but very pleasing!

I'm interested.

[The Swedish Brony 153]

Hmm sounds very interesting indeed. I would read this

All I wonder is if there's going to be conflict? Like one of the guardians turning savage or if there's something in the desert that stands in the mane six way of turning the land fertile. Or maybe both? 

 

It's just a tip but do as you please I would read this anyway 

[Harmony Spark 265]

Hmm sounds very interesting indeed. I would read this

All I wonder is if there's going to be conflict? Like one of the guardians turning savage or if there's something in the desert that stands in the mane six way of turning the land fertile. Or maybe both? 

 

It's just a tip but do as you please I would read this anyway 

Oh yeah, there will be a part where one of the Guardians, named Skybolt, tries to eat Rainbow Dash because she didn't have enough meat to eat. The rest of the Guardians also get this reaction and they relectuantly eat the livestock and this causes the ponies to worry and you get the idea.

 

Btw, this is a brief of the fanfic. What I'm saying is... Good tip!

[The Swedish Brony 153]

Oh yeah, there will be a part where one of the Guardians, named Skybolt, tries to eat Rainbow Dash because she didn't have enough meat to eat. The rest of the Guardians also get this reaction and they relectuantly eat the livestock and this causes the ponies to worry and you get the idea.

 

Btw, this is a brief of the fanfic. What I'm saying is... Good tip!

Thank YOU for listening to my advice, I am glad to be of service I will patiently wait for when you upload this since it seems this is going to be EPIC