Nobody Special 210 June 9, 2013 Share June 9, 2013 hello again, i drew big mac this time. i showed it to a friend of mine who said it looked a bit "hard" or to "digitalised" i'm not really sure what that means or how i prevent that. or should i support that? i donno. i think it looked quite good. also did some minor background this time. tell me what you think please. big mac.jpg He looks a little weird because it looks like you cut off the back of his head. And who says nopony cares? Obliviously we do because we are responding. 1 I am not creative so... Battlefield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunatic 1,186 June 9, 2013 Author Share June 9, 2013 i’m starting a bigger series of illustrations together with a friend of mine, he writes the story and i draw the pictures. this is for the first chapter. anyone who wants to check out the story that goes with this picture go to http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9370/1/a-fresh-start/11-introduction and read chapter one no one had a chance to react to the last picture yet but here's the second one. hope you like it dont be afraid of giving any tips or critisism if you're following these. Inspired by myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobody Special 210 June 9, 2013 Share June 9, 2013 First one is very nicely done and I'm sure if I looked close enough I could find something to criticize, but I don't want to spent 10 minutes looking for one flaw so... the second one is nice as well it is a little "rough around the edges" but it is also and art style so if that is what you are going for good job. Also are you going for FiM art? Because then the pegasi would only have four feathers, but, again, it is an art style. I am not creative so... Battlefield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunatic 1,186 June 9, 2013 Author Share June 9, 2013 First one is very nicely done and I'm sure if I looked close enough I could find something to criticize, but I don't want to spent 10 minutes looking for one flaw so... the second one is nice as well it is a little "rough around the edges" but it is also and art style so if that is what you are going for good job. Also are you going for FiM art? Because then the pegasi would only have four feathers, but, again, it is an art style. i'm not going for the mlp style but i do agree that the wings is the biggest flaw in the second one. i try to keep my own style with the black lines although i might get rid of the sketchy style that comes with it, who knows. it all depends on what i think looks good and not. also, here's another one! this one isnt specificly for a chapter but just something i drew. Inspired by myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobody Special 210 June 10, 2013 Share June 10, 2013 Okay, thanks for clearing that up for me I was a little confused but with the one you just drew what's going on with his hair? It's a hairicane *laughs histerically* come it's kind of funny. I am not creative so... Battlefield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunatic 1,186 June 10, 2013 Author Share June 10, 2013 Okay, thanks for clearing that up for me I was a little confused but with the one you just drew what's going on with his hair? It's a hairicane *laughs histerically* come it's kind of funny. well it was suposed to be spitfire again.. i'm practising spitfire a lot because the story that the pictures fit with is with a lot of spitfire. soarin will also be in there later. so yea. chapter three is done. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9370/3/a-fresh-start/13-status Inspired by myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobody Special 210 June 10, 2013 Share June 10, 2013 I knew It was suppose to be Spitfire just the hair was a little crazy and needed to be fixed. That's all I was trying to get at. Just trying to give constructive critism. I am not creative so... Battlefield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunatic 1,186 June 10, 2013 Author Share June 10, 2013 I knew It was suppose to be Spitfire just the hair was a little crazy and needed to be fixed. That's all I was trying to get at. Just trying to give constructive critism. well you said it was a "he" so i thought you had a bit of a wrong idea of what the picture was. (more characters becouse 100 is way to much.) Inspired by myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobody Special 210 June 10, 2013 Share June 10, 2013 Well I guess I did derp. Yeah I'm in the wrong here, let's face it... I suck 100100100100100100100100100 10010010010010010010 I am not creative so... Battlefield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunatic 1,186 June 12, 2013 Author Share June 12, 2013 soarin is being super fabulous and i thought i'd share it on here again! i know the lighting doesnt fit the background but its close enough. i tried a picture of ramera. its not the best, but drawing fire is hard. ramera literally has fire instead of a mane. i also tried sai. tell me whats better. Inspired by myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunatic 1,186 June 15, 2013 Author Share June 15, 2013 just finished soarin. i think he looks really nice. he will be part of a bigger picture later on. next up, fleedfoot! then some background, and i have chapter 4 picture done. Inspired by myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobody Special 210 June 15, 2013 Share June 15, 2013 All your pictures are getting better and better! I do agree fire is hard to draw and I think the first fire mane was better. I can't wait till you are done with your fanfic! I will read it once it's done because I really don't want to end on a cliffhanger and have to wait for a new chapter Tell me when it is all done pllease! I am not creative so... Battlefield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunatic 1,186 June 17, 2013 Author Share June 17, 2013 All your pictures are getting better and better! I do agree fire is hard to draw and I think the first fire mane was better. I can't wait till you are done with your fanfic! I will read it once it's done because I really don't want to end on a cliffhanger and have to wait for a new chapter Tell me when it is all done pllease! well i'm not the one writing the fanfic, my friend is. he's living with me currently but he doesnt want to continue writing untill i cought up till chapter 7. i'm currently almost done with chapter 4 now. Inspired by myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobody Special 210 June 17, 2013 Share June 17, 2013 Okay then! Thanks for letting me know. I will be looking forward to the day when It is fully completed! BTW how many chapters are in your fic? I am not creative so... Battlefield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunatic 1,186 June 18, 2013 Author Share June 18, 2013 Okay then! Thanks for letting me know. I will be looking forward to the day when It is fully completed! BTW how many chapters are in your fic? again, its not MY fic, its my friend's fic. and so far we dont have any ending planned yet. but there are 15 currently. here's another piece of the chapter 4 picture, fleedfoot! Inspired by myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunatic 1,186 July 14, 2013 Author Share July 14, 2013 hello again. i made a picture by putting soarin and fleet in there together. this is now the picture of chapter 4 of the story, i also eddited fleets eyelashes. i hope you like it. Inspired by myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunatic 1,186 September 5, 2013 Author Share September 5, 2013 allright! i got three new pictures to share! i drew all these pictures for friends of mine because i love them all! i hope you guys can give me some critique though. Inspired by myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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