Page.Turner 940 June 6, 2013 Share June 6, 2013 (edited) Soooooooo... I'm making this gif for a good friend of mine C: and so far, considering I know nothing about animation, I think it's looking pretty good XD;; I would just like some opinions on it so far. If you don't mind C: EDIT: Darn... it didn't seem to work D:!!! Hold on.... Edit: Edit 2: I finished the basics! Edited June 7, 2013 by Sky Song 5 ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chigens and Kay 3,833 June 6, 2013 Share June 6, 2013 Soooooooo... I'm making this gif for a good friend of mine C: and so far, considering I know nothing about animation, I think it's looking pretty good XD;; I would just like some opinions on it so far. If you don't mind C: EDIT: Darn... it didn't seem to work D:!!! Hold on.... Actually the .gif works if you click on the image. I don't know what it is supposed to be about from what I can tell...but the animation on it is great so far! 1 My signature broke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Page.Turner 940 June 6, 2013 Author Share June 6, 2013 Actually the .gif works if you click on the image. I don't know what it is supposed to be about from what I can tell...but the animation on it is great so far! Oh, sorry, what I meant was some of the frames cut to white and don't exactly look good D: I'm going to try to upload it elsewhere then link it here if that's okay EDIT: I FIXED IT :DDD I just... forgot to draw in some of the parts XD so it was messing up something fierce. But it's good now. A little awkward and amateurish but good! ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chigens and Kay 3,833 June 6, 2013 Share June 6, 2013 Oh, sorry, what I meant was some of the frames cut to white and don't exactly look good D: I'm going to try to upload it elsewhere then link it here if that's okay EDIT: I FIXED IT :DDD I just... forgot to draw in some of the parts XD so it was messing up something fierce. But it's good now. A little awkward and amateurish but good! Ohhhh! Now I see what was supposed to be going on! You are going to finish this I hope? I cant wait to see it all nice and polished up! My signature broke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
repsol rave 2,963 June 6, 2013 Share June 6, 2013 the animation is remarkably good considering it is your first gif. keep up the good work sir! i dont really see what it's meant to be, but it's awesome nontheless XD My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Page.Turner 940 June 6, 2013 Author Share June 6, 2013 Ohhhh! Now I see what was supposed to be going on! You are going to finish this I hope? I cant wait to see it all nice and polished up! There is still some animation left to go (a glomping is in order! X3) but other than that, it's definitely going to be line-arted and coloured in! 1 ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkyBound 829 June 6, 2013 Share June 6, 2013 I think this is looking good so far and I cannot wait to see the finished version. The only thing I would suggest is to space a little time between when the character in the background transitions from the top of the screen to the middle; it just seems like an unusually fast movement. However, that is just me nitpicking and I apologize. Anyway, good luck with the rest of this! Deviantart Tumblr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Page.Turner 940 June 6, 2013 Author Share June 6, 2013 the animation is remarkably good considering it is your first gif. keep up the good work sir! i dont really see what it's meant to be, but it's awesome nontheless XD Thank you very much! However, I am a madam, not a sir C: Tee hee! XDD But thank you kindly for the words of encouragement! It means a lot to me C: And it's supposed to be like... Jaws pony in the background going "duuun dun.... duuuun dun... duun dun duun dun dun dun dundundundundundun and then GLOMP! But I haven't animated the glomp yet XD I think this is looking good so far and I cannot wait to see the finished version. The only thing I would suggest is to space a little time between when the character in the background transitions from the top of the screen to the middle; it just seems like an unusually fast movement. However, that is just me nitpicking and I apologize. Anyway, good luck with the rest of this! Thank you! And hmmmm... I think I can throw in a couple of extra panels to make the spacing a bit more even between the transition C: Thanks for the advice! <3 ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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