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@Budding Night

 

Sterling tried to hide his disbelief and anger at the officer as he told them the bad news. Sterling began to walk away with a weak, but fake smile as he tried to soak in the news... 'How... how is this possible?! We were on a first class flight! This is unbelievable!' thought a deeply angered Sterling deep inside as he motioned Evening to walk with him out to Mareis. As he walked out of the hub with Evening, he began to rant about the terrible fortune they had. However, he ended with resignation and a sigh as the moon began to illuminate the skies. "Well Evie. Let's just hope that the hotel provides some better service. I even checked on reviews to make sure it had the best service they could give to us." spoke a resigned Sterling as the young couple walked out into the city of lovers...

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Evening had nodded and was now walking beside her husband, the city of lovers looked beautiful, ponies of all ages were smiling and laughing, nature was lush and fresh, it all just took her breath away. She gazed around at all the graceful buildings and structures "Sterling?" she whispered to him lovingly "Which is our hotel?" she looked to her right to see if she could see a sign for a hotel that looked familiar, but in the process found a.. familiar looking pony trotting around..

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Sterling had heard Evening's question to him. Sterling then replied excitedly and lovingly, "Evie! We're in this one! Look at it! It's so beautiful!" When Sterling and Evening reached the glamorous Mont-Royal hotel of Prance, the hotel he pointed at, they noticed the glamorous exterior. The floors were marble, the columns were white limestone, and the entire reception room shone a bright yellow throughout the room. A whole assortment of tourists were around to check in to the glamorous hotel, leaving Sterling excited to see their glamorous hotel room for the first time. He pecked Evening on the cheek to alleviate the fact they got some of the baggage stolen, hoping that they would be able to retrieve them over the next few days. 

 

However, just as Sterling was about to meet up with the receptionist for check, he noticed a red pony to his right... Sterling couldn't believe his eyes... it was Ace Spark, the same pony he met who worked for Raven long ago... She was wearing the typical tourist clothes, although she wore a sky blue skirt that flew around by the breezes from every passing pony. It left Sterling confused to say the least. As Ace began to notice Sterling's confused look, she used it as an opportunity... 'My coltfriend never wants to do anything with me... Well he's gone to do something right now... Maybe I could get Sterling, the stallion who crushed on me so much to... hehehehehe... have some fun?' thought Ace as she began to walk up slyly to Sterling...

 

She gave Sterling a flirtatious look to start. She gave him a wink and a cute smile that left Sterling shaking his head. 'Wait what is Ace doing? Why is she... looking at me like that... oh no... not again...' Ace walked closer and closer to Sterling, giving him a sly but intending look... she then spoke innocently, "Hey cutie pie... I'm sorry I worked for Raven a while back. It's just that he was so enticing with his offer and his magic. I was wondering... if... you could forgive me... by... letting me... entertain you for a bit?" 

 

Before Sterling could object, Ace began to flick her long red tail such that it swerved on Sterling's hooves. He could feel her tail tickling his hooves very gently, reacting with a giggle and a sigh. She then positioned herself so that her sky blue skirt faced Sterling. As she approached him slowly, Sterling noticed her sky blue skirt flying by the wind and reflecting the light that shone on it. It left him sweating and sighing even more. 'Why does Ace have to be so... attractive? She's doing this right in front of Evie! This is NOT GOOD!' thought an increasingly nervous Sterling as Ace trotted ever so closely to Sterling's side... 

 

She then began to lick him on his ears, hoping for Sterling to provide some sort of response... When she got none, she gave a slight frown to Sterling before whispering, "Please Sterling... could you just... give me one small peck on the lips... please? My boyfriend's been so... boring...Sterling replied with stutters and sweats as he tried ever so hard to refuse her offer, especially with Evening around. It left him increasingly worried...

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Evening stood there silently with her lips pursed. She couldn't believe this was happening, on their honeymoon. Who did this son of a Sombra think she was? Could she not see the rings? She approached her slowly and shyly, she tapped her on the shoulder "Um, excuse me?" she asked her, voice quiet with her shy mode on "S-Sorry if I'm interuping or anything.." she turned her shy mode off as an angry look rised on her face "But what are you doing exactly?" as she finished her sentence, she noticed a buff stallion watching from the side..

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Sterling tried his best to inch away from Ace as she continued to give multiple attempts to kiss Sterling at the lips. Sterling continued to push her away to signal the fact he was married to Evening, but she didn't give in. A buff stallion was now beginning to arrive at the scene with a very angry look... the first thing he did unfortunately was trot up to Sterling and give him a punch he'd never forget... It whacked Sterling over to the side, leaving him with what would be a very large bruise on his left eye... The buff stallion, navy blue in colour, approached Sterling with anger and gave him a shout, "WHO ARE YOU TO TRY AND PLAY WITH MY MAREFRIEND?!! THAT'LL TEACH YOU A LESSON!" Sterling gave a hand wave in response and spoke meekly before fainting, "But... but I wasn't playing with her... You... you see this?"  

 

As Sterling waved his wedding ring to the buff stallion, he turned to Evening, who also had the ring. Noticing her meek, but angry confrontation with Ace, he turned to Ace with a very, VERY cross look... As Ace giggled cheekily, the buff stallion stormed out of the hotel angrily, with Ace following close by...

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Evening watched the two walked off in silence, her mouth still left open, gaping for answers of what just happened. She turned back to Sterling and raised her eyebrows, as though to ask him if he knew what had just happened then either, she on the thought of mind she broke off from the gaze of Sterling to look around their hotel.

 

The Marble, the limestone, the brightness was all brilliant, the building had a relaxing 'aura' that every hotel, motel and inn needed. She couldn't wait to see their room, with luck it could be as glorious as the lobby, but so far, luck hadn't exactly been on their side; but with perhaps the bad luck could subside.

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Sterling was still in a dazed state as he tried hard to compose himself after the punch. It was a huge punch for sure as Sterling's face showed a black bruise around his eye. He tried to look steadily at Evening's eyes and apologize for what happened, but he continued to wobble around the marble floors of the Mont-Royal hotel. The receptionist, as she saw Sterling wobbling around, walked over to him after his punch to show him to his hotel room. She took him and Evening to their hotel room for their stay and also helped carry the baggage for them. When they reached the hotel room, the receptionist gave the hotel key to Evening through which she could open the door for Sterling to recover in bed...

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Evening thanked the receptionist greatly, and fiddled with the key inside her aura to get it in the door as quickly as possible so Sterling could recover, and so they could see their room. She, at last, got the key in the door as turned it heavily - she perked her ears up as she heard a click and opened the door. She walked Sterling into it slowly with big smiles, but her smile soon dropped and ears lowered as she looked around at the room.

 

It was, really.. untidy, not really ready for hospitality. The bed wasn't made, one cupboard was open and presented dirty towels that had been thrown in there, and was that dirt on the carpet? She didn't even want to see what the bathroom may be like. Evening let her mouth give out a small unhappy sigh into the air and walked Sterling to a chair that was in the middle of the room, she motioned for him to sit down while she made the bed probably.

 

When she had walked over to the bed, she noticed lots of lumps underneath some of the blankets, she didn't want to touch it with her mouth so she let her magic do the work, pulling off all the blankets expect the bottom sheet. None of the other blankets had anything on or under them, but she could see something poking out from underneath the sheet.. She moved towards it with caution and slowly lifted up the blanket, but only to find a small, half-circle bowl there, she rolled her eyes and set it down on the bench and progressed in the making the bed.

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As Sterling walked into their hotel room for their honeymoon, he couldn't see anything, from the dirty and unprepared room to the broken dishes that lay around his bedroom. He noticed two different ponies guiding him along the hotel and into his room. He couldn't tell who they were, but once he entered the hotel room, he knew he was under good care... 'E-E-Evie? Is... that... you... holding me and not... Ace?' thought a still confused and dazed Sterling as he was placed in his bed by Evening.

 

Trying to maintain his composure, he tried to ask Evening with lots of stuttering, "E-E-E-E-Evie... where... where... am I?" 

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As Evening finished making the bed for the bruised stallion, he heard him talking and rushed over to his side, helping him off of his chair and walking him over to the newly made bed "It's alright Sterling, don't worry.." she whispering lovlying with hints of care in her voice "We're at our hotel room" she helped him sit on the bed and gave him a kiss on the cheek "Is there anything I can help you with or get you?"

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Sterling could hear Evening's lovely whisper and soft peck, which left him comforted knowing that it was Evening who was comforting him. He responded with a sheepish grin and replied weakly, "Evie... Maybe... I'll need some ice... this pain on my eye is terrible... and I also wanted to say... I'm sorry... About Ace... that... that was my former crush... I don't know what's gotten into her... I thought she shunned me... But that's not important anymore. The most important thing's that I... love you Evie... and thanks..."

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Evening smiled and lovingly stroked her husbands face, she loved the type of relationship that they had, no fighting, lots of love, everything she had dreamed when she first met him on that island..

She kissed him on the forehead softly, she giggled and told him to go to sleep, walking into the direction of the kitchen..

 

(Short post or I'll get caaauugghhtt!)

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Sterling was recovering decently at this point. A good night sleep and Sterling would be fine again. The ice packs were helpful too as Sterling gave Evening a kissing gesture. Deep down though, Sterling was very disappointed that their first day in Mareis had to end like this. Still... just being Evening felt so comforting... a feeling Sterling had never felt even during the time they were engaged soon after Sterling recovered from his bullet wound.

 

Sterling's eyes began to rest as he began to sleep into a dark, clear moon...

 

Sterling's eyes opened once he closed them. Instead of seeing his hotel room though, he saw the sky! And... and... he was on the blimp! Sterling shrieked at such a sight! 'Why am I on the blimp?!' thought a flabbergasted Sterling as he walked aimlessly around the blimp's wooden planks. Before he could orientate himself to his surroundings, he heard a voice calling for him! It sounded like a cry for help! "Sterling!!! Help me!!!" Sterling heard the voice. It was Evie! Sterling gasped and then replied with a shout, "EVIE!!! I'll save you!" 

 

Sterling rushed to the side of the blimp where he heard the voice. He looked down from the blimp and saw Evening hanging ever so tightly on the rope. Sterling saw that she was losing her grip. He noticed the rope extending to the railing of the blimp and pulled it up with all his might. Sterling struggled mightily as he continued to pull the distressed mare up to safety. 'Wow... she sure is HEAVY!' thought a increasingly tired Sterling as he continued to pull as hard as he could on the rope.

 

When Sterling got Evening back up to safety, he turned around with sweat. What he saw left him scared... It wasn't Evening... It was ACE! 'Wait... what's she doing here?! I heard Evie! And I saw a purple mare!' Ace approached Sterling with a wanting look and spoke while Sterling continued to push away in fright, "Sterling... thanks for saving me. You're a real knight in shining armour. Please don't go away. All I want is just somepony who loves me is all..." Sterling continued to push back until he was cornered into the blimp's railing. It was then that the railing cracked, and Sterling fell to his doom as he screamed...

 

Sterling opened his eyes once again as he screamed in fright and sweated profusely. He looked out into the sky. He... he was back in his bedroom... and it was the middle of the night... and Evening was fast asleep... The room was very clean and white as Sterling looked around in awe. The hotel room really was very clean... It was amazing to say the least. 'Shoot... I hope I didn't scream too loudly...' thought a Sterling worried that Evening would wake up to his loud scream...

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(Good to see that your posts will be speeding up, but Unfortunately mine ail be slowing down. PRoduction, Science Fair, Cousins Baby shower.. It hopefully wont be too long though.)

 

Evenings eyes shot open, she made a short, high-pitched squeal at the large sound in the room. She had jumped slightly too, forcing her body to sit upright. She looked at Sterling, who she presumed the noise came from, she noticed him sweating and gave him a sleepy smile. She leaned over to him and gaving him a calming, slow kiss on the cheek "Are you alright Sterling?" she asked lovingly, but her eyes still cautious "What happened?"

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Sterling was reeling from the dream he just had. One side of him wanted to tell Evening about the dream, but another side of him said that it was just too scary to tell. Still, Evening was his wife, and he didn't want to hid anything from her. He told her of his dream... "Evie... It was a terrible dream... You... you were hanging on a rope from the blimp. I saved you, and... and... Ace... she was there... She tried to say sorry to me and' all, but she still looked lustful... I continued to push away, but then I fell from the blimp to my death... and then I woke up screaming... It was a terrible dream! I don't know why Ace keeps popping up! I'm... I'm sorry Evie... I love you with all my heart, but this dream... scared me..."  

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(I love how Ace is weaving into this >xD)

 

Evening looked at her trembling husband with care, as he explained it he seemed to quiver slightly more and more, he must really have scared him alot. She gave him another caring smile and kiss, she tried to calm him down with her kind and soft words, but it didn't seem to be getting anywhere. She glanced at a bedside clock, it read 12:59AM(PM?), she watched it flick over to 01:00AM with a sigh. She got out of bed and excused herself, she slowly walked out to the lounge and sat on the couch, looking out the window at the moon and stars as her hoon started to glow.

 

(Sorry if this if Confusing, I have to go to school now. Bye!)

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Sterling sat still on the clean, serene, white bed. He continued to look in a cold, forward direction towards the cream walls as he continued to ponder... Questions and fears about Ace tormenting his mind continued to swell around him, failing to notice even Evening's kind words and loving kisses. Now, his head sunk low, his hooves extended to his hind legs, and his black hair drooping down to his eyes. He just couldn't understand it. He loved Evening with his whole heart. Why was Ace still tormenting his soul? 

 

As he looked to his left, he saw Evening sitting on the lounge as she looked out into the lovely stars of Mareis. Sterling trotted ever so carefully to the cream coloured lounge and sat close to Evening. He saw her horn glowing which brightened the lounge slightly, and then hugged her. "I'm sorry Evie... I... just don't know what's gotten into me. I love you Evie. With all of my soul, body, and mind. You're the most precious mare I've ever been with. Remember how we first met? You were hurt and I cared for you. And we started to laugh nervously and blush. Ohh Evie..." spoke a remorseful Sterling as he continued to hug her ever so tightly...

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Evening turned her head softly towards her husband and smiled as she let her horns aura get dimmer. She closed her eyes momentarily as he hugged to and moved her body in a way so she could snuggle up to his hug sleepily. As he talked, she had opened her eyes and continued to smiled, as the last two words left his mouth she giggled. "Yes, I remember. How could I ever forget?" she whispered, brighting her aura again.

 

The star's brilliant soft light shone in her dull green eyes and made them sparkle as her horn lit up the room with its light, warm blue glow. Her Magic had progressed over time, she no longer needed to close her eyes, or even been in the moonlight — just near it for her illusioning magic to do its work. Her Magic automatically picked up some light from the rays of the moon and pulled it gracefully in front of her and Sterling's heads. She conjured up different colours, ones of from her and her husbands colour palette and a leaf green and dim-bright yellow. She made the couple from the colours and a scene with a garden and yellow daisies everywhere, the two ponies danced and swirled around the clutter of flowers.

 

She continued to look at them with a smile, she extended the garden so part of it was in the moonlight and not completely in the shadows. She focused on the wisps for 10 seconds until closing her eyes and letting her aura slowly fade to nothing, letting the wisps fill the room with their colours and the ponies play and dance on their own. "Tell them to do something" she whispered to her husband next to her "They'll command to anything you say" Well, at least she hoped so. She had let wisps play on their own before, but they hadn't be commanded to do things by somepony they weren't connected to yet. This new faze in her illusion could easily fail, but she still needed to progress on it..

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Sterling was feeling slightly better after Evening decided to play with the wisps and after Evening bobbed her head to Sterling's side. Sterling loved the wisps; they were cute and playful, their gliding movements shining across the lounge into the moonlight. Their first moments together were recalled gracefully as the dancing wisps began to collect herbs and leaves for their journey from the abandoned island. Sterling looked at the wisps with a gleeful smile as he began to cheer up after his nightmare.

 

Sterling then listened as Evening encouraged Sterling to say something to the wisps. He was slightly nervous at commanding the wisps; after all, they were Evening's wisps. Nonetheless, he wanted to try... Sterling asked the wisps very carefully and politely, "Umm... wisp of Sterling... could... could you... kiss wisp Evening?"

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Evening caught a blush to add to her smile, it was so sweet of him to do so. She stole a glace at him, she could see he was happier than he was when he woke up, a bit calmer. She knew Sterling loved her wisps, they seemed to make him calmer from any other state of emotions he was in but he didn't seem very confident in talking to her wisps; like he was keeping the wisps to Evening for herself. She didn't want to think about that though, she pushed the thoughts of that away and watched the wisps.

 

Wisp Sterling had looked towards real-Sterling and nodded with a big smile and wide eyes. He had turned back to wisp Evening and put one of his front hooves up like he was trying to press it up to a mirror, wisp Evening had put her front hoof up against her wisp husband, looking into his eyes with a small blush and smile. The two wisp ponies slowly lowered their still-touching hooves and leaned in towards eachother. Soon, they embraced in soft, cute wispy kiss that made real-Evening blush and smile even more.

 

When the wisp couple had finished their kiss, their mouths made a silent giggle and they started playing in the clutter of daisies again. Evening softly chuckled at her wisps and turned her head to Sterling, lifting her hoof up slowing and cautiously, like she was about to press her hoof up to a mirror. Whilst doing this, she looked into Sterlings eyes and gave him a soft, caring look, as to say 'Once we are, we never aren't', an thing her older sister used to tell her before she went to bed every night.

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Sterling saw wisp Sterling glare his eyes open in excitement. Real Sterling saw everything in motion as wisp Sterling held onto wisp Evening's hoof and kissed happily. Sterling giggled with excitement at the wisps kissing each other so happily. It reminded him of his undying love for Evening, and that nopony... nopony... would get in the way, not even Ace. Sterling began to smile in happiness as the two wisps released their kisses. Real Sterling then told wisp Sterling happily and with a chuckle, "Hey wisp Sterling... Do you want to see if wisp Evening is ticklish? Try tickling her." 

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Wisp Sterling looked at real-Sterling with a small smile, then turned to wisp Evening with a cheeky grin. Wisp Evening was smiled but mouthing something along the lines of 'No, No, No..', it was all slow until wisp Sterlings grin grew huge and pounced at her, his wisp wifes smile broke into a huge sudden one, she ran away from him in circles and let her husband chase her while her mouth made the action as though she was having a giggle fit.

 

Evening smiled at her wisps, she had put her hoof down from before, Sterling had obivously had his attention focused on the wisps infront of them. The dark purple mare gave a small giggle as wisp-Sterling finally caught up to wisp-Evening and pinned her on the ground, tickling her stomach and making the dark purple wisp laugh harder than her real-self actually ever had before.

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Sterling was really having fun now. He was smiling and laughing at wisp Sterling's eagerness to tickle wisp Evening. He had only one thought on his mind now as wisp Sterling had fun with wisp Evening, and that was to have a happy and memorable honeymoon with Evening. Sterling was having so much fun with the wisps, but he knew he and Evening needed to get some shut eye before their first in-city tour tomorrow. With that, Sterling then told wisp Sterling his last command: "Hey wisp Sterling. Evie and I have to sleep now for a tour of Mareis. Why don't you collect some flowers and herbs with wisp Evening and have some fun with her too while you're at it?" After that, Sterling bobbed his head down towards Evening's lap and began to sleep with a snore...

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Evening smiled softly as Sterling gave his last command to the wisps and fell quickly asleep on her lap. Both wisp ponies looked towards Evening, seeming to look for an answer to a question the couldn't ask. Evening nodded and lay her head down on the side of the couch, slowly closing her eyes sleepily as the rest of her open eye watched the wisps pick herbs and flowers..

 

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The night was thundery and raining hard, the trees swayed roughly with the way of the wind. She didn't care about getting herself wet anymore, she just had to get way from this storm. She dodged the rain by dodging under trees, getting closer and closer to a tall square shadow with a dim light coming from it.

 

Her long, sparkling ruby dress moved gracefully as she did, the diamond necklace and earrings weren't even a bother. Her wedding ring had disappeared long ago, she had absolutely no chance of retrieving it. Her cautious, yet elegant eyes shifted from place to place, the gigantic courtyard that she was on was oddly peculiar, with all the mysterious cracks and tiles sloped upwards, but she couldn't really put her hoof on it. She pushes the thought aside, she had to get there. The ruby dress, still somehow tracing her body curves perfectly, continued to move in the wind as the mare trudged on..

 

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It was a very comforting night of rest for Sterling after that terrible dream. He felt comforted by Evening's presence and was sleeping on her fluffy, pink mane.

 

It was now morning. The sun shone brightly and Sterling could see the sun's rays shine down on his face. As he awoke, he looked away from the light, startled by it. Nonetheless, he gave a deep yawn afterwards and poked on Evening, telling her to awaken. He could see the Neighffel Tower from the hotel room. It really was a good recovery from the initial mishaps of the honeymoon, especially since Sterling had a lot of fun with the wisps the previous night.

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