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"Wait, who's there?" Thunder reached for his pistol, which was still lying next to him. With the pistol in his hoof he turned around. Still on his front he now faced the door, hoping to see the pony Charcoal was taking care of. "Char, are you alright in there?" 1

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@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"Wait, who's there?" Thunder reached for his pistol, which was still lying next to him. With the pistol in his hoof he turned around. Still on his front he now faced the door, hoping to see the pony Charcoal was taking care of. "Char, are you alright in there?" 1

"Yeah I'm fine. And I'm not sure who it is but whoever it is he chose the wrong apartment to break into. Question is are you alright in there, you still doing ok? I don't want you to hurt yourself again." Charcoal calls from the other room back to Thunder." 1234

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"Okay honey, be careful." Thunder got out of bed anyway and looked at the ponies. "Char... That's Arrow." He then said, still holsing his gun in his hoof. He put his shotgun back in the table where it used to sit. "Would you let him go so he can explain himself?" 12345

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@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"Okay honey, be careful." Thunder got out of bed anyway and looked at the ponies. "Char... That's Arrow." He then said, still holsing his gun in his hoof. He put his shotgun back in the table where it used to sit. "Would you let him go so he can explain himself?" 12345

"Wait Arrow?" After getting a better look at him she confirms that is it definitely Arrow. "Oh hey look at that it is." Charcoal gets off Arrow and helps him up off the ground. "Well... deja-vu much? So what are you doing here Arrow, you do know we have a door you know?"

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Thunder then goes to the couch, lies down and turns the television on. "You know, Arrow, you should try to knock on the door next time, you're lucky Charcoal's so forgiving and just tackeled you down. I would have killed you on the spot." Thunder says, smiling.

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Thunder then goes to the couch, lies down and turns the television on. "You know, Arrow, you should try to knock on the door next time, you're lucky Charcoal's so forgiving and just tackeled you down. I would have killed you on the spot." Thunder says, smiling.

"No, you would be laying down so I could clean out your wounds and bandage them up. You know like you should be doing right now." Charcoal turns back to Arrow. "But he is right Arrow you really should have knocked. I've got a foal in the other room and random ponies breaking in isn't exactly a comforting sight."

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Thunder turned around and lied on his back on the couch. "I'm ready... I think." 

 

Then there was a knock on the door and a pony in a suit with sunglasses came in. "Ah, the bodyguard Thunder said. It'good you're here."

 

Thunder looked at the pony, he was a lt bigger than him, this was a comforting sight.

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@@Charcoal Embers,

 

Thunder turned around and lied on his back on the couch. "I'm ready... I think."

 

Then there was a knock on the door and a pony in a suit with sunglasses came in. "Ah, the bodyguard Thunder said. It'good you're here."

 

Thunder looked at the pony, he was a lt bigger than him, this was a comforting sight.

"He is quite... big. Does he have a name? I won't be comfortable just calling him bodyguard." Charcoal gets the medical supply back and sits down beside Thunder again. "Alright now hold still again, this is going to sting a little. Why am I saying that again? You know this is going to hurt."

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"His name *argh* is John." Thunder bit a pillow as Charcoal proceeded to clean his back and bandage it up. "Does he seem qualified enough for our bodyguard?" Thunder said, with his back on fire. And a few screams came out.

 

((OOC I think we can god-mod John together,)) 

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@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"His name *argh* is John." Thunder bit a pillow as Charcoal proceeded to clean his back and bandage it up. "Does he seem qualified enough for our bodyguard?" Thunder said, with his back on fire. And a few screams came out.

 

((OOC I think we can god-mod John together,))

"As long as he knows who not to attack he is fine with me." As Charcoal finishes up with bandaging up Thunder she goes into the other room to wake Lightening from his nap so she can feed him. "Don't worry about the cuts by the way, as long as you met them heal they should be gone in no time. And you know, it is kind of a good thing that Arrow decided to break in before John came."

 

((OOC: We probably can.))

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Francis was walking down the road. The mist and the fog has doubled since Francis started to do his master's bidding. The air was getting colder and the rain fell heavier. Francis kept walking down the road. He wore his dark Bavik Cloak. Francis would see Guard patrols constant. Always on time every 6 minutes. They've gained thousands of Guards in the last few months.

 

Francis walked for about 3 miles after sometime. Before he was in the city ruins of Scipio. He stopped by a Tavern. He walked in to see 2 Bavik Guards talking in one corner. The rest of the Tavern was storming with random ponies. Francis looked at them with his blue eyes. He walked over and sat down at the counter. Lightning and thunder hit the outside air.

Longest time since a thunder storm. Francis thought.

 

"What can I get for you?" The Bartender said.

"I want a Krich's Delight." Francis said.

"You like Dragon ale? Eh?" The Bartender asked.

"That's some pretty strong ale. Might kill you stranger." The Bartender said.

Francis lifted his cloak off his head.

"Ohh my god... It's... You.....Francis.." The Bartender pleaded.

The whole Tavern folk looked at Francis and got quiet. Some pony's left instantly with fear.

"I don't care about what it might do." Francis said demandingly.

"I-...I..ok!" The Bartender said cowardly. He grabbed the Krich's Delight and threw it towards Francis.

Francis grabbed the Ale and started to drink the whole thing. Ponies watched scared. Most ponies would be coughing. Krich's Delight is a type of acid. Francis finished his ale and then threw his Glass against the wall. The Bavik Guards closed their eyes and knodded at Francis when he looked at them before he left to show respect.

Francis walked out of the Tavern and got outside to deep thunder and rain. He grabbed ahold of his satchel and kept walking. Francis saw really nothing while going down the path. There wasn't much too see anyway. Francis saw a Rose next to the road. He saw it and for some reason it touched him. But the thought instantly left his mind. Francis continued on. The more he walked the more the music from the Tavern ceased to hear. And rain and thunder progressed in the air.

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@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder went up to the kitchen and poured himself a glass of whiskey. He drank it and poured another one. "Charcoal, would you like a glass of whiskey?" He already poured one before she could answer. "Here you go." And he hoofed over the glass of whiskey to Charcoal.

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Thunder went up to the kitchen and poured himself a glass of whiskey. He drank it and poured another one. "Charcoal, would you like a glass of whiskey?" He already poured one before she could answer. "Here you go." And he hoofed over the glass of whiskey to Charcoal.

After Thunder placed Charcoal glass on the table Charcoal pushes it away. "I'm not going to be drinking whiskey while feeding Lightning Thunder. Wait till later on tonight after he is asleep but not right now ok. You can give it to Arrow, I don't mind." 1

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 "Alright, we'll wait till tonight then." Thunder gave the glass to Arrow. "Here you go instead." 

 

Thunder sat down on the couch, thinking about his work. Then he took a sip of his drink and asked: "Char, is Lightning asleep yet? " THen he took another sip, and felt a sting in his back.

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Francis looked down the Road. And finally came to a stop. There was a pole that had these arrows pointing in directions. They read the following.

 

- Scipio

- ManeHatten

- Ponyville

- Valkerly

- Dragons Hill

- Krionik Festio

 

Francis started to walk down the path that would lead him to Scipio. Soon enough he would be able to kill Sarah and Rock for good this time. And his master's bidding would be released. His eye's got a yellowish glow around them. And his eye's glow would leave fog clouds that would stay behind for seconds then vaporate.

 

Francis finally reached the ruins of Scipio. Since it was destroyed by the Bavik Knights. There wasn't much. But since then a Inn, a Tavern, and a few houses have been built since and a little community has been formed. The great walls of Scipio weren't much to look at. The huge gaping hole they made in the wall the day of taking it over remained. Other parts of the wall were gone or were bits of rubble everywhere. Bits laid on the ground. Here and there. It was darker then it usually would or could be in other places. Something in the air showed that Francis was not welcome. He wasn't really welcomed anywhere for the dark deeds he's done.

 

He came up to the small town and saw lights on the buildings. There were some Guards that walked around with metal swords and a torch. Nothing too fancy. This town had mild protection.

Francis looked towards the inn and through one of the windows. He saw Apple Bloom, Fluttershy, Rock, and Sarah holding a child. A smirk fell upon his face. And lightning struck a ways away. The storm is getting worse.


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@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"Alright, we'll wait till tonight then." Thunder gave the glass to Arrow. "Here you go instead."

 

Thunder sat down on the couch, thinking about his work. Then he took a sip of his drink and asked: "Char, is Lightning asleep yet? " THen he took another sip, and felt a sting in his back.

"Hehe, no I'm feeding him Thunder be patent, these things take time." After finishing the bottle Charcoal takes it into the kitchen and sets it in the sink to be cleaned for later. Afterwords she takes Lightning and watches him play for a few hours until she puts him in for bed. Walking back into the living room she finds Thunder still on the couch Arrow slightly tipsy and John just standing there. "Alright Thunder he is asleep, now I will have a little whiskey. Just not much, I'm not going to completely waste myself."

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Thunder smiled and gave her a glass of whiskey and took one himself "Finally, about time you put him asleep. Cheers" He held the glass up towards Charcoal and waited for her to tap the glass with hers.

 

((OOC, i'm busy so i might take longer to reply 1234567))

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Thunder smiled and gave her a glass of whiskey and took one himself "Finally, about time you put him asleep. Cheers" He held the glass up towards Charcoal and waited for her to tap the glass with hers.

 

((OOC, i'm busy so i might take longer to reply 1234567))

"Well of coarse I put him to sleep, he is my son and I want to take good care of him." Charcoal taps her glass against Thunders and takes a small drink. "You know, I feel like this new job of yours might be to dangerous, I don't want you getting hurt out there." 12

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"I don't think it's much more dangerous than strolling around the wilds with Francis after us. Remember how nearly you died when we ran all night? I don't think you haven't nearly died since then." Thunder takes another drink from his glass. Then he puts it down.

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"I don't think it's much more dangerous than strolling around the wilds with Francis after us. Remember how nearly you died when we ran all night? I don't think you haven't nearly died since then." Thunder takes another drink from his glass. Then he puts it down.

"No actually,I don't. Or well I sort of remember it, but it is really scetchy. And I don't remember a lot from the day after that since I was drunk so... yeah." Taking a drink Charcoal continues. "But that doesn't make me like this job of yours any more. Just, please be careful while you are out there."

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"I will, i promise." Thunder finished his drink and went towards the bedroom "Aroow, you can stay on the couch if you want. Baby, do you want to follow me to bed perhaps?" Thunder said with a smile. "It gets kinda lonely in there without you. Thunder winked at Charcoal.

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"I will, i promise." Thunder finished his drink and went towards the bedroom "Aroow, you can stay on the couch if you want. Baby, do you want to follow me to bed perhaps?" Thunder said with a smile. "It gets kinda lonely in there without you. Thunder winked at Charcoal.

Finishing up her drink Charcoal begins to walk towards the bedroom but stops for a moment. "What about John, doesn't he need somewhere to sleep? I know he is supposed to protect us but he can't always be awake all the time can he? And it just doesn't feel right to me."

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"Of course he does, but  Arrow's taken the couch, we're sleeping in the bed...  Where did you want to put him?" Thunder said while crawling into bed, he felt the sensation on lying down after a long, exhausting day.

 

((OOC i'm sure we can all relate to that feeling 12))

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Francis walked over to the front door of the Inn. He opened the door slowly. Francis went up to the front desk with his cloak on.

He got to the counter and there was a little filly running the front desk.

"Welcome to the New Scipio Inn! How can you help you today sir!" The filly said with a smile.

"I'm looking for a couple that might of came in and stayed here. Does the name Thatcher, mean anything to you?" Francis asked.

The filly's smile started to vanish. she looked under the counter for a second and then looked back at a Francis.

"Can I get a name first stranger?" She asked without a smile.

Francis most likely guessed that Sarah and Rock asked to look out if he was to show up.

Francis pulled out his gun and pointed it at the Filly.

"bye!" Francis said as he pulled the trigger.

The gun shot echoed throughout the Inn. The parents of the Filly came out of their room

"Oh! MY GOSH!!!" The mare screamed!

Francis pulled out his gun and shot the parents.

 

3 Guards came bursting into the Inn from hearing the gun shots.

They surrounded Francis with their swords drawn.

Francis pulled out two dagger's similar to the ones that Samantha had previously owned.

Francis stabbed one of the Guards in the chest and through one of the daggers into the head of another Guard. And Francis just walked up to the last standing Guard. and blood shot out of his mouth. and he hit the ground.

"Such a pitty" Francis said.

 

Sarah heard the sound of the Gun shot. "Rock!" She cried. "He found us!" Sarah started to hold her baby tight and started to cry.

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@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"Of course he does, but Arrow's taken the couch, we're sleeping in the bed... Where did you want to put him?" Thunder said while crawling into bed, he felt the sensation on lying down after a long, exhausting day.

 

((OOC i'm sure we can all relate to that feeling 12))

"I'm not sure. I guess it would all depend on how long he will be helping us. Because if he is going to be with us for a while I'm sure I could start working at the shop again to earn some extra bits. But then I have to find someone to watch Lightning but I still don't think I'm ready to leave him alone with somepony else yet if John is going to be helping us for a while we are going to need an extra bed and..." Charcoal just continues on her rant and just circles around her points over and over.

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