open The Finale Expense(Romance/Action/Drama)

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"No she doesn't." Thunder held her back with one hoof the other held his gun which now was pointed at the doctor. "I'm the kind of guy that can fuck up your day big time, do you want that? Do you want me to fuck you up? I'd do it with fucking pleasure." He looked at the window. "John, come in." At this moment John busted in the window and pointed his gun at the doctor too.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"No she doesn't." Thunder held her back with one hoof the other held his gun which now was pointed at the doctor. "I'm the kind of guy that can fuck up your day big time, do you want that? Do you want me to fuck you up? I'd do it with fucking pleasure." He looked at the window. "John, come in." At this moment John busted in the window and pointed his gun at the doctor too.

"Oh come now, we are all civilized ponies here. I'm sure we can put the guns away and just stop all of this violence. And not only that," He walks ho to Charcoal and strokes her cheek. "you shoot me, you may just lose your way to take the suggestion off of her. And if I die, she will just go to some other random stallion who needs it until the suggestion is taken away."

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"Don't worry, i won't kill you until we got what we want, but i'll make sure you'll suffer great pains as i bust your kneecaps off. John, bind him to the chair." John binds the doctor to the chair and Thunder wakes up Charcoal.

Then he takes the knife and points it at the doctor. "Are you sure you don't want to cancel it?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"Don't worry, i won't kill you until we got what we want, but i'll make sure you'll suffer great pains as i bust your kneecaps off. John, bind him to the chair." John binds the doctor to the chair and Thunder wakes up Charcoal.

Then he takes the knife and points it at the doctor. "Are you sure you don't want to cancel it?"

"Well technically you don't cancel a suggestion, you remove it. And I still don't think I am convinced I should remove the suggestion from her head until I've had a good round or two with her." The doctor says with his still sly grin.

 

"You sick bastard." Charcoal turns to Thunder. "Thunder, make it hurt."

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder hit the doctor a couple of times in the face, untill it was bloody. "Well, this is rather entertaining, don't you think honey?" He said, giving another punch in the face. There was a crack sound, and a broken nose. "Ooooooh, that was a hard one. That'll teach ya"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder hit the doctor a couple of times in the face, untill it was bloody. "Well, this is rather entertaining, don't you think honey?" He said, giving another punch in the face. There was a crack sound, and a broken nose. "Ooooooh, that was a hard one. That'll teach ya"

As the doctor is being punched over and over again he starts thinking how this could possibly turn to his favor. This is not looking good for me, I've got to think of a way out of this. Hmm, maybe if I could just get them into my office I could plant a suggestion in all of them. "Ok, ok stop. I'll remove the suggestion on Charcoal. She just needs to step into my office with me."

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"I don't trust you" Thunder and John put on sunglasses. " Do it right here, right now. Unless you want a taste of my knife that is." Thunder played with his knife in front of the doctor, to make him feel uncomfortable. "Now, go on, remove the suggestion." 12345678

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"I don't trust you" Thunder and John put on sunglasses. " Do it right here, right now. Unless you want a taste of my knife that is." Thunder played with his knife in front of the doctor, to make him feel uncomfortable. "Now, go on, remove the suggestion." 12345678

"Yeah and I'm sure I don't need to use the machinery I used to place the suggestion in the first place. You clearly don't know about modern hypnotism, I use a machine to place the suggestion in the vic- I mean volunteers head. Those silly watches are just too keep them distracted."

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"Hurry up already, or i might decide where i'm going to stich this knife. John, do you think his knees would hurt?" Thunder asked in a joking way, sitting on the doctors desk. "Sure, he won't be able to walk for a while." John answered. "Oh, now that doesn't sound good, or does it, doctor?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"Hurry up already, or i might decide where i'm going to stich this knife. John, do you think his knees would hurt?" Thunder asked in a joking way, sitting on the doctors desk. "Sure, he won't be able to walk for a while." John answered. "Oh, now that doesn't sound good, or does it, doctor?"

"Alright alright. Charcoal if you want to get that suggestion removed follow me." Turning around he starts walking towards his work room where he deals with his patients.

 

"Buck yeah I want this luna damn suggestion taken out." She starts walking to follow the doctor. Right as she goes through the door her eyes begin to become empty again.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"Charcoal, wait." Thunder ran after Charcoal and the doctor, but he couldn't find them anywhere in the complex, which was surprisingly enough empty. "CHARCOAL" Thunder yelled a couple of times. Then thunder came to a room which noises came out of. Thunder opened the door...

 

((HOLY SHIT IT'S ACTUALLY GETTING LIGHT..... I think i leave it a cliffhanger and go to sleep... Or not, i can sleep when i'm dead.))

Edited August 14, 2013 by GameBeaver

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"Charcoal, wait." Thunder ran after Charcoal and the doctor, but he couldn't find them anywhere in the complex, which was surprisingly enough empty. "CHARCOAL" Thunder yelled a couple of times. Then thunder came to a room which noises came out of. Thunder opened the door...

The doctor was too distracted with his intament time he was having with Charcoal that he didn't even notice Thunder opening the door to his room. "Oh yeah *groan* that's good." All the while Charcoal was just sitting there unable to do anything with the suggestion planted in her head."

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder kicked the doctor in the face. "YOU SICK FUCK. YOU FUCKING ANIMAL." He said, still kicking the doctor. When he was done kicking he said. "Well, you won, you got what you wanted. Would you please remove this suggestion now?"

 

((It's actually pretty awesome to hear the world waking up around you.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder kicked the doctor in the face. "YOU SICK FUCK. YOU FUCKING ANIMAL." He said, still kicking the doctor. When he was done kicking he said. "Well, you won, you got what you wanted. Would you please remove this suggestion now?"

 

((It's actually pretty awesome to hear the world waking up around you.

"It was pretty good sex. Alright I'll remove it, for real this time." At that the doctor gets up and walks over to Charcoal and leans over to whisper in her ear the secret word to remove the suggestion. "Cunt" At that Charcoal wakes up and blinks, confused by the new surroundings and strange feelings.

 

"Hey, what happened? Did the doctor remove the suggestion?" She asked while getting up off the floor.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"I'll explain when we get home."

The doctor did as he said and he removed the suggestion.

Thunder whispered something in Johns ear and then Thunder took charcoal back home, back to the safe haven.

Once they arrived there thunder told Charcoal to sit down while he explained what happened.

 

((I think i might go sleep for real now, i can literally see the sun coming up.))

Edited August 14, 2013 by GameBeaver

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"I'll explain when we get home."

The doctor did as he said and he removed the suggestion.

Thunder whispered something in Johns ear and then Thunder took charcoal back home, back to the safe haven.

Once they arrived there thunder told Charcoal to sit down while he explained what happened.

 

((I think i might go sleep for real now, i can literally see the sun coming up.))

"So he really did have se... he really did hav... he reall..." At that point Charcoal had broken down and started crying. "I-I'm sorry Thunder. I wasn't able to stop him. I was aware of everything and now that I remember what happened I..." Charcoal was broken at this point, unable to do much else except cry.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"It's my fault, i wasn't there 1 quick enough. But i have a surprise for you, maybe it'll make you feel better. Follow me"

Thunder walled out of the door and onto the street untill they reached an abandoned building.

"Tadaa! Look who's here, our old buddy the doctor." He was bound to a chair both his legs were stuck to it. "Here, let me show you how it's done." He said to Charcoal as he takes a knife. He walks towards the doctor and cuts his ear off. "Your turn Char" he said with a sadistic smile.

 

((Fuck sleep))

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"It's my fault, i wasn't there 1 quick enough. But i have a surprise for you, maybe it'll make you feel better. Follow me"

Thunder walled out of the door and onto the street untill they reached an abandoned building.

"Tadaa! Look who's here, our old buddy the doctor." He was bound to a chair both his legs were stuck to it. "Here, let me show you how it's done." He said to Charcoal as he takes a knife. He walks towards the doctor and cuts his ear off. "Your turn Char" he said with a sadistic smile.

 

((Fuck sleep))

As soon as Charcoal saw the doctor she immediately got a terrified look on her face and ran into the closest corner and hid there, still crying her eyes out. "N-no, k-keep him away from me Thunder. Just keep him away." Shaking and shivering it was clear Charcoal was horrified."

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"You see what you've done to her? You fucking see?" Thunder lunged the knife towards the doctors face, he stabbed an eye out. The doctor was screaming and begging for Thunder to stop, but he wouldn't. He didn't have his revenge yet. "Now, i'll let you recover for a bit, see you later" Thunder said to the doctor and walked out with Charcoal.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"You see what you've done to her? You fucking see?" Thunder lunged the knife towards the doctors face, he stabbed an eye out. The doctor was screaming and begging for Thunder to stop, but he wouldn't. He didn't have his revenge yet. "Now, i'll let you recover for a bit, see you later" Thunder said to the doctor and walked out with Charcoal.

Charcoal was still shaking as they walked back home but at least she had stopped crying as badly as before. Though she was still terrified of the doctor and probably his office as well she would to back to normal... eventually. But for now she was a nervous wreck. Just as a pony walked next to her she was accidentally nudged by the pony. She was scared shitless and jumped into his arms while embracing him tightly and shutting her eyes tight.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"You're safe Charcoal." Thunder said with a calm voice. "Nopony will ever do you harm as long as i live. I promise." They continued walking home. When they arrived they saw Arrow taking good care of Lightning. This was a comforting sight o see for the ponies.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"You're safe Charcoal." Thunder said with a calm voice. "Nopony will ever do you harm as long as i live. I promise." They continued walking home. When they arrived they saw Arrow taking good care of Lightning. This was a comforting sight o see for the ponies.

"As soon as they had made it back home Charcoal had gone straight to her bedroom and gotten in bed. Once in there she proceeded to cry some more, the crying made her feel a little better. She was violated, and that was something she was going to carry for the rest of her life.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder followed her, in case she needed help, advice or just a hug. He remained silent, what he wanted to say was: "You could've taught him a lesson." But he didn't, that would only imply to Charcoal making a mistake, and that would get her even more upset.

 

((I fell asleep))

Edited August 14, 2013 by GameBeaver

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder followed her, in case she needed help, advice or just a hug. He remained silent, what he wanted to say was: "You could've taught him a lesson." But he didn't, that would only imply to Charcoal making a mistake, and that would get her even more upset.

 

((I fell asleep))

((OOC: So did I))

Charcoal heard Thunder walk in but before she knew it was Thunder her imagination did the thinking for her ans she hid under the covers. Once relizing it was Thunder she relaxed a bit. "I'm sorry Thunder, I wasn't strong enough. And now I have been tainted by that doctor. I have become unworthy to be your marefriend. I'm sorry."

[Paladin Butters 163]

@@GingerJoy,

@@Charcoal Embers,

@,

 

A dark crystal appeared in the room where Charcoal and Thunder were. The crystal was making a small humimg sound as if it used energy. The crystal started to vanish. Princess Luna appeared when the crystal was gone.

"Francis is dead Charcoal, and Thunder." She said calmly.