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Thunder quickly aims his gun at Caprisha's head and whispers "Trust me" to her. "What the fuck is this." He yelled at Caprisha, trying to fool the guards. "Listen, i'm no part of this, nor do i want to be." He said calmly to one of the guards. "Please, believe me." He added.

Caprisha saw what he was trying to do and got a scared expression. "Please don't hurt me." Caprisha said in a bit whisper. The guards seemed to have bought the cop-out and got back to what they were doing before. Caprisha gave a sighlent sigh and hot up with Thunders gun still pointed at her.

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"Alright, just move on." Thunder silently said to Caprisha while still pointing the gun at her. "Alright, move on, you despocable street scum." He then said in a much louder voice, alerting the guards that he had a prisoner to bring to Kanife as a job and stuff.

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"Alright, just move on." Thunder silently said to Caprisha while still pointing the gun at her. "Alright, move on, you despocable street scum." He then said in a much louder voice, alerting the guards that he had a prisoner to bring to Kanife as a job and stuff.

Kanife herd a bit of commotion coming from the entrance. Grabbing his shotgun with his magic he goes to see what's up. "Alright what's going on here?" He asks as he comes through the door to the entrance. As he came he passed by a Pegasus he didn't remember. He normally wouldn't have given a second though, but he knew the unicorn that was with him. "Hey you stop. Well well well, who do we have here? Hello Caprisha, nice to see you again."

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"This here 'mare', if it's worth calling it that, tried to plan an attack on your gang here. So i figured, we're both criminals, we might be able to help eachother out. Not that i really need your help, but it can't hurt right." Thunder said with a smile, looking at Caprisha.

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"This here 'mare', if it's worth calling it that, tried to plan an attack on your gang here. So i figured, we're both criminals, we might be able to help eachother out. Not that i really need your help, but it can't hurt right." Thunder said with a smile, looking at Caprisha.

"Oh, tsk tsk tsk. You naughty naughty mare, I think you need a little discipline." He Turns to Thunder. "I don't know who you are but I thank you for bring her to me. You can let her go, I have something planned for her." He said putting his gun to the back of Caprisha's head.

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"Hmmmmmmm... No." Thunder said with a big grin on his face. "You don't think i'd let her get away so easily? I cought her, brought her all the way to here, and you expect me to leave it to this? Think again." Thunder looked at Caprisha and winked to make her feel comfortable.

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"Hmmmmmmm... No." Thunder said with a big grin on his face. "You don't think i'd let her get away so easily? I cought her, brought her all the way to here, and you expect me to leave it to this? Think again." Thunder looked at Caprisha and winked to make her feel comfortable.

Caprisha was slightly comforted by the fact that Thunder was watching out for her. But she knew that Kanife wouldn't give up easily.

 

Kanife's smile faded. "What do you mean no? This is my base and what I say goes. And this bitch needs to be disaplined. Though if you still chose not to listen..." He smiles as he motions for everyone to point their guns at him. "Maybe I'll just kill you."

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Thunder started laughing, then he stopped and looked at Kanife. "Oh you're serious? Let me laugh even harder then. But seriously, i think killing me wouldn't be so good for your health, given that everything you have here will be gone if my comrads don't hear from me within 30 minutes from now."

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Thunder started laughing, then he stopped and looked at Kanife. "Oh you're serious? Let me laugh even harder then. But seriously, i think killing me wouldn't be so good for your health, given that everything you have here will be gone if my comrads don't hear from me within 30 minutes from now."

"Well I'd like to see them find us." Kanife said with a smile. "I'm sure you wouldn't have even found us if it wasn't for this little slut right here." He said getting right in Caprishas face. "Why do you even want her anyway? She isn't much to look at, and she has already been used a few times."

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"Don't worry about the finding, i'm here, and they know. And why i want her? Well... Let's say i have a score to settle, and so do you. How does the deal sound? I help you, and you help me?" Thunder stuck his hoof forwward to shake it with Kanife's if he decided to accept.

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"Don't worry about the finding, i'm here, and they know. And why i want her? Well... Let's say i have a score to settle, and so do you. How does the deal sound? I help you, and you help me?" Thunder stuck his hoof forwward to shake it with Kanife's if he decided to accept.

"A deal, well now deals are something I'm used to." Kanife said, lowering his gun from Caprishas head but still keeping it ready. "So what kind of deal are we talking about here? You said you needed help, what kind of help would tracking us down be?" He asked, Thunder interesting him.

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"Now we're talking. I'd like you to meet me at this adress." Thunder gave Kanife a note. "You can get your cargo, this here, when you arrive, but only if you have the antidote. You know what i'm talking about." Thunder grabbed Caprisha by her neck. "See you there." He said, and he walked away.

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"Now we're talking. I'd like you to meet me at this adress." Thunder gave Kanife a note. "You can get your cargo, this here, when you arrive, but only if you have the antidote. You know what i'm talking about." Thunder grabbed Caprisha by her neck. "See you there." He said, and he walked away.

"Oh so it's you." Kanife whispered to himself. Walking to the back of the base he grabs the antidote, the real one along with a few fakes in his bag. He looks at the note and heads to the location on the note. Seeing him there he grabs the real antidote in his magic, just in case.

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Thunder was giving Caprisha a tour of his base. "And these are the chairs i use for torturing ponies that i need something from. You see, more ponies enter this building, than ever exit it. Let's just hope you can exit it. Now, are there any more questions?"

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Thunder was giving Caprisha a tour of his base. "And these are the chairs i use for torturing ponies that i need something from. You see, more ponies enter this building, than ever exit it. Let's just hope you can exit it. Now, are there any more questions?"

"Yeah, just one. Does Charcoal know about this place? I don't think that she would approve of any of this." Caprisha said. Out of the corner of her eye she sees another pony coming. "He's here."

 

Coming up behind them Kanife brings out his shotgun again. "Alright I'm here. And I do have you antidote."

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Thunder quickly and swiftly grabbed his own gun and picked up the antidote. He nodded at John, standing behind Kanife. John gave Kanife a massive whack on his head to make him unconcious, to drag him towards a cage instead of just the regular chair.

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Thunder quickly and swiftly grabbed his own gun and picked up the antidote. He nodded at John, standing behind Kanife. John gave Kanife a massive whack on his head to make him unconcious, to drag him towards a cage instead of just the regular chair.

Caprisha watched as Thunder got the antidote. "Great so you got the antidote to help Charcoal. Now what?" Caprisha asked, wanting to know what he was going to do to her old coltfriend.

((OOC: You are god-modding again gamerbeaver you know that it is against the rules.))

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"What? You want to go all sentymental on him? I thought you thought he was an complete asshole. Anyway, i'd greatly appreciate it if you'd be so kind to get Charcoal out of the hospital and ship her here." Thunder said, looking at Kanife, then back at Caprisha.

 

((OOC, i just told the plan, for you to cooperate is for you to decide))

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"What? You want to go all sentymental on him? I thought you thought he was an complete asshole. Anyway, i'd greatly appreciate it if you'd be so kind to get Charcoal out of the hospital and ship her here." Thunder said, looking at Kanife, then back at Caprisha.

 

((OOC, i just told the plan, for you to cooperate is for you to decide))

"Um, sure. And he is an asshole." Charcoal takes the bottle and goes to the hospital. Once there she walks into Charcoals room and gives her the antidote. Charcoal slowly wakes and Caprisha tells her what Thunder had told her to tell Charcoal. Charcoal then left and walked to Thunders... torture house.

 

((OOC: I didn't know what else to call it and I'm going to be off for about 6 hours.))

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"Ah, i see you're good Char." He walks up to her and gives her a big hug. "Look, look at what i've done to our guest." Thunder pointed at the cage, which was half under water, with Kanife in it. "Awwwww, is our little Kanifie all wet? Does he need a change? WELL TOO FUCKING BAD!" Thunder laughed in Kanife's face.

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"Ah, i see you're good Char." He walks up to her and gives her a big hug. "Look, look at what i've done to our guest." Thunder pointed at the cage, which was half under water, with Kanife in it. "Awwwww, is our little Kanifie all wet? Does he need a change? WELL TOO FUCKING BAD!" Thunder laughed in Kanife's face.

Charcoal accepts the hug but she is very confused. So many question she had so she turned to Thunder for answers. "Who is the pony in the cage? Why are you drowning him? What happened? Why did I wake up in the hospital? When did Caprisha get back?" She kept asking questions and she didn't seem to be able to stop herself.

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"This fucker here drugged you. You were dying and stuff, and he had the antidote. But not anymore. Now, i want my revenge, because this was the drop. HE CALLED ME FUCKING INSANE!" Thunder panted in Charcoal's face. "I'm not insane Char, i'm not fucking insane right?"

 

((Sorry for the ridiculously late post, but i was busy with stuff))

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"This fucker here drugged you. You were dying and stuff, and he had the antidote. But not anymore. Now, i want my revenge, because this was the drop. HE CALLED ME FUCKING INSANE!" Thunder panted in Charcoal's face. "I'm not insane Char, i'm not fucking insane right?"

 

((Sorry for the ridiculously late post, but i was busy with stuff))

"Well I believe everypony has a certain level of insanity. Some are worse than others but I don't think you are one of the worse ones." Charcoal said with a smile as she patted Thunders face back. "But how about we just leave, I don't really like it when you do this."

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Thunder starts lauging. "Sure honey, let me just make our guest ready for the night." Thunder lowered the cage even more so that Kanife had only little space to breathe. "See you tomorrow Nifie, bye bye. Hope you live tomorrow." Then he walked out of the door with Charcoal and Caprisha.

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Thunder starts lauging. "Sure honey, let me just make our guest ready for the night." Thunder lowered the cage even more so that Kanife had only little space to breathe. "See you tomorrow Nifie, bye bye. Hope you live tomorrow." Then he walked out of the door with Charcoal and Caprisha.

Charcoal was quiet for a lot of the trip. She had questions about different things since she had woken up confused and not many answers. "So why was I poisoned? I don't remember doing anything to that stallion. So why did he poison me?" Charcoal asked, if she was going to start anywhere now was the time.

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