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Paladin Butters

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Thunder goes into a nearby public facility. After he had payed the entry fee and entered the building, he had noticed he'd been going into a strip club. He goes to sit down at the far end of the club with a good sight of the entrance to see in his follower was coming in.

The stallion began looking around for some yellow. Boy was he glad ponies were all different combinations of colors. It would be a nightmare following someone in a crowd if they were all the same color coat. He found a strip club and began looking around there.

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Thunder saw the pony entering and held his hoof under his wing, holding his gun. Then a mare in a sexy outfit, like Charcoal and Caprisha wore for him, came up to him, asking if he'd like a lapdance. Thunder did like it, and maybe the other pony didn't see him if somepony was dancing in front of him.

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Thunder saw the pony entering and held his hoof under his wing, holding his gun. Then a mare in a sexy outfit, like Charcoal and Caprisha wore for him, came up to him, asking if he'd like a lapdance. Thunder did like it, and maybe the other pony didn't see him if somepony was dancing in front of him.

He has had enough of this. The stallion takes out his gun and shoots it three times in the air, silencing everything. "Alright listen up! I am looking for a yellow Pegasus stallion that may have come in here. He was the only one found in the room where civilians heard a gunshot! We want to know why!"

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TThunder looked at the pony that just fired and said to the stripper pony. "Stay in front of me, nothing will happen to you if you do as i say, understoood?" He kept a close look at the earth pony to see what he was doing, hoping not to be found in the process.

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TThunder looked at the pony that just fired and said to the stripper pony. "Stay in front of me, nothing will happen to you if you do as i say, understoood?" He kept a close look at the earth pony to see what he was doing, hoping not to be found in the process.

Most ponies had flattened themselves on the ground. A few got up and walked but they weren't who he was looking for. But there was just one who seemed her job during this. He thought it was strange so he decided to take a look. He began walking towards the stripped to take a look.

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Thunder saw the pony heading towards him. He pushed the stripper away to the side and aimed his gun at the pony who was chasing him. "What the fuck do you want from me?" He asked, aiming his gun at the pony, looking like he's about to use the gun to shoot the pony.

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Thunder saw the pony heading towards him. He pushed the stripper away to the side and aimed his gun at the pony who was chasing him. "What the fuck do you want from me?" He asked, aiming his gun at the pony, looking like he's about to use the gun to shoot the pony.

The stallion just stared at Thunder. "What I want is to know why you were in the apartment that ponies heard gunshots coming from. That's all, I'm not here to hurt you, and I'm not here to arrest you." He said in a slow calm voice to try and keep Thunder from overreacting.

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"Alrighty then." Thunder said, as he went to sit back in the chair he sat in before. He tugged his gun back under his wing "If i recall correctly, i have the right to remain silent?" Thunder said, teasingly, smiling, to piss the pony off, which now was clearly a cop.

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"Alrighty then." Thunder said, as he went to sit back in the chair he sat in before. He tugged his gun back under his wing "If i recall correctly, i have the right to remain silent?" Thunder said, teasingly, smiling, to piss the pony off, which now was clearly a cop.

The stallion chuckled. "Very funny. Thing is, there is about six police forces waiting outside right now. You are the only pony who was in the apartment where a gunshot was heard. All we want to know is why you were there. Now can you please just cooperate?"

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"I could, or i could not." Thunder said with a cool voice. "The question is, what will happen to me if i agree to help you?" Thunder asked the pony, searching his eyes for a weak spot. A spot where he could piss off the pony as much as possible using only some words.

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"I could, or i could not." Thunder said with a cool voice. "The question is, what will happen to me if i agree to help you?" Thunder asked the pony, searching his eyes for a weak spot. A spot where he could piss off the pony as much as possible using only some words.

"Well if you were, say, murdering somepony we would have to jail you. But if you were just playing around or purposefully shot your gun to signal for help then... nothing really. If you were doing that I guess you could just go on with your business as you were."

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"Alright then, you just explained exactly what happened in the hotel room so, would you now please leave? Or are you going to try and solve this shit? Perhaps i know a witness that overlooked all of the scene what happened before i took the shot there."

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"Alright then, you just explained exactly what happened in the hotel room so, would you now please leave? Or are you going to try and solve this shit? Perhaps i know a witness that overlooked all of the scene what happened before i took the shot there."

"Well if I was right about that then why did you signal for help? You don't exactly look like a damsel in distress, so what were you signaling for?" He questioned. "What happened before you shot you gun in there, can you answer me that at least?" He asks Thunder.

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"I will answer all your questions, just not here, not now okay?" Thunder said. "Just bring me to the station, but make me look like a criminal, like you just arrested me. I've got a reputation to take care of so that'll come in handy for me too." Thunder stood up and stuck his hooves forwards.

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"I will answer all your questions, just not here, not now okay?" Thunder said. "Just bring me to the station, but make me look like a criminal, like you just arrested me. I've got a reputation to take care of so that'll come in handy for me too." Thunder stood up and stuck his hooves forwards.

"Well ok then. Guess now I can tell the Mrs that a pony came willingly today." He says as he places the hoofcufs around Thunders arms. Then he shoves Thunder on his hooves and places his gun up to Thunders head. "Alright now get walking you little fucker." Edited by Charcoal Embers
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Thunder smiled as he was being hoofcuffed. "Let's" they walked off to the police car outside and Thunder was forced to sit down inthe back of it. Still being hoofcuffed he looked at the officer and smiled. "You should be a fucking actor, that's what you should be."

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Thunder smiled as he was being hoofcuffed. "Let's" they walked off to the police car outside and Thunder was forced to sit down inthe back of it. Still being hoofcuffed he looked at the officer and smiled. "You should be a fucking actor, that's what you should be."

"Whatever." He mumbled as he started driving to the station. Once there he took Thunder out of the back and brought him to one of the questioning rooms. He shut the door and made sure the speakers were off so no one outside could hear them. "Alright, explain to me what happened."

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"Alright, so i was flirting a bit with a mare and stuff, you know howit goes, and the three fucking unicorns, armed to the teeth, come in and point guns at everypony. A fourth one comes in and takes everyone away, poof, just like that. I shot at the floor, but you guys were too late."

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"Alright, so i was flirting a bit with a mare and stuff, you know howit goes, and the three fucking unicorns, armed to the teeth, come in and point guns at everypony. A fourth one comes in and takes everyone away, poof, just like that. I shot at the floor, but you guys were too late."

"Sorry to say but I haven't really flirted much in years. I'm married." He says with a stern look. "Anyway, do you know who they were, why they took whoever they took, where they went, why they came in the first place?" He asked Thunder one after another trying to get information.

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"No, sir. All i know is that that fourth pony was talking about Mount Embers just before they all teleported their way out of there." Thunder said to the police officer. "Fucking unicorns are cowards, just dissapearing into fucking nowhere." Thunder said.

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"No, sir. All i know is that that fourth pony was talking about Mount Embers just before they all teleported their way out of there." Thunder said to the police officer. "Fucking unicorns are cowards, just dissapearing into fucking nowhere." Thunder said.

"Well, it's something I guess." The stallion said. He was hoping to get a bit more information out of him, but a location is the one thing that helps the most on its own. "Alright, you just sit tight. Let the police take care of this and you can get back to what you were doing before."

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"Alright mister police, go solve this shit so i can get my girl back." Thunder said as he layed his hindlegs onto the table, giving his chaid an angle backwards, and putting his still cuffed front hooves behind his head. Enjoying a moment of calmnesss.

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"Alright mister police, go solve this shit so i can get my girl back." Thunder said as he layed his hindlegs onto the table, giving his chaid an angle backwards, and putting his still cuffed front hooves behind his head. Enjoying a moment of calmnesss.

"Actually, I have one last question. What did the unicorns look like. You saying they were armed up to the teeth caused me to have an idea of who they were. Bug I can't be entirely sure unless I know what they were wearing. Were they in any kind of armour or barding of any kind?"

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"They were all dressed in black, wearing black balaclavas. And black body armour by the looks of it." Thunder said to the officer. "Sorry sir, that's all i remember." He added to what he had previously said. He closed his eyes for a second, trying to get some sleep.

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"They were all dressed in black, wearing black balaclavas. And black body armour by the looks of it." Thunder said to the officer. "Sorry sir, that's all i remember." He added to what he had previously said. He closed his eyes for a second, trying to get some sleep.

"Celestia damit, not these guys again." He complained. He knew exactly who these unicorns were. "We may have a problem then. That was the Black Ripper gang. A small group of very powerful unicorns. They are strictly male members, so not only are they good at magic but they also are stronger than average unicorns as well. This could be a problem. I'm sorry to say but unless a miracle happens then I don't think you are going to see your friend again."

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