open The Finale Expense(Romance/Action/Drama)

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"Yeah, i do... But it's complicated. I was alone with her and... One thing became the other... But it's none of your concerns. Don't worry about me." Thunder said. "Worries only weaken you, and we can't use weakness here right now." Thunder added as he looked at the ponies on the sidewalk.

"Alright, I can respect that." Choke completely focused on the road. After a while they got off of a road and hit gravel, then dirt. Choke stops the car a ways away from the mountain. "Alright, we will have to go on foot until we are high enough for you to carry me." He begins walking in the direction of the mountain.

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Thunder follows Choke up the mountain, streching his wings every now and again. "Let's just hope she's fucking alright." Thunder said, not to Choke, but to nopony. Looking at the dirt under the hooves he thought of Caprisha once again. How would she be doing?

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Thunder follows Choke up the mountain, streching his wings every now and again. "Let's just hope she's fucking alright." Thunder said, not to Choke, but to nopony. Looking at the dirt under the hooves he thought of Caprisha once again. How would she be doing?

Caprisha woke up slowly. Her arms felt cramped, but when she tried to move them she couldn't seem to be able to. She tries her hind legs but they receive the same results. "Well, looks who's awake." She is suddenly blinded by a flash of white light. When her eyes adjust she sees that she is surrounded. "You have failed us Caprisha, something we don't take likely. And since you are the first female to be able to join us the punishment shall be sever. Bring the tools."

 

Choke kept looking up to see how much further they had to go. After about an hour of climbing he could see the top, it was about 100 or so feet above them. "Alright, you think you could carry me from here?"

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"Sure, hop under." He said. He grabbed Choke and flew off. "It shouldn't be long flying, just a minute or so." And not much later they arrived at the building on the mountain. "So what do you want to do now? Decide quickly, because you're very fucking heavy dude." Rg

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"Sure, hop under." He said. He grabbed Choke and flew off. "It shouldn't be long flying, just a minute or so." And not much later they arrived at the building on the mountain. "So what do you want to do now? Decide quickly, because you're very fucking heavy dude." Rg

Choke began looking around quickly for a safe spot to land. He saw a small area towards the edge of the cliff with no activity going on. "Down there." He said as he pointed at the spot. If all went well they wouldn't be spotted and the plan could actually go well.

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"Alright then. Let'sdo it your way." Thunder landed Choke and himself on the ledge. He saw a bright light from one of the windows and decided to take a peek inside. He saw Caprisha held down by metal rings and a pony standing in front of her. "Caprisha!" He yelled.

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"Alright then. Let'sdo it your way." Thunder landed Choke and himself on the ledge. He saw a bright light from one of the windows and decided to take a peek inside. He saw Caprisha held down by metal rings and a pony standing in front of her. "Caprisha!" He yelled.

Choke quickly grabs Thunder by the mouth pulls him down. "Shut the fuck up man, do you want to get us caught. You won't be able to help your marefriend if you are in a cell." He whispers in his ear.

 

A cart had been brought to the unicorn in charge. On the cart were an assortment of torture implements. He had been talking st the time so none of them heard Thunder. "You have discraced us with your failure." He levitated a large hammer and a chisel. "So lets start with this." He takes the chisel and puts the end up to her horn, then he brings the hammer down herd on the end cracking the horn and eliciting a scream from Caprisha. He continued this process only twice before her horn was completely taken off. Caprisha watched in horror as she watched her horn lay on the ground. "I'll let you rest for a bit." The unicorn buck said. He began walking out with the rest of the unicorns, leaving Caprisha alone.

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"Get the fuck off me." Thunder said to Choke. "They're hurting Caprisha and i don't care about taking down the gang." Thunder loaded his shotgun and ran trough the front door. Once inside he quickly hidbehind a couple of boxes to avoid being seen by one of the unicorns.

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"Get the fuck off me." Thunder said to Choke. "They're hurting Caprisha and i don't care about taking down the gang." Thunder loaded his shotgun and ran trough the front door. Once inside he quickly hidbehind a couple of boxes to avoid being seen by one of the unicorns.

Choke ran after him, also hiding behind the boxes. "Look, I get you don't care about taking down the gang. But how in equestria could you save her while being inside a jail cell waiting to be executed?" Choke asked, hoping to reason with the lovestruck buck.

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As Thunder was ignoring Choke he saw a couple of unicorns leaving a room. "Cover my six." He said to Choke as he sneaked into the room. There he saw Caprisha, blood was coming from her forehead and covered her face and parts of her chest. He kneeled down in frong of her, holding her tight. "Shh Prish, it's going to be alright. Everything is going to be fine. I promise." He whispered to her.

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As Thunder was ignoring Choke he saw a couple of unicorns leaving a room. "Cover my six." He said to Choke as he sneaked into the room. There he saw Caprisha, blood was coming from her forehead and covered her face and parts of her chest. He kneeled down in frong of her, holding her tight. "Shh Prish, it's going to be alright. Everything is going to be fine. I promise." He whispered to her.

Caprisha was still in shock of losing her horn that she didn't notice when Thunder came to rescue her.

 

Choke was watching out for Thunder when something caught his attention. There was a small piece of something laying on the floor. He tries to get Thunders attention by waving and pointing to whatever was on the floor.

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"It's a piece of her horn. Those assholes broke it off." He tried to get Caprisha to notice him between spurting blood on his face. Thunder, now covered in Caprisha's blood, hugged her even more tightly as he told her she was going to be fine, like he did before.

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"It's a piece of her horn. Those assholes broke it off." He tried to get Caprisha to notice him between spurting blood on his face. Thunder, now covered in Caprisha's blood, hugged her even more tightly as he told her she was going to be fine, like he did before.

Caprisha felt something warm against her. She thought it was her own blood but she slowly tuns her head to see. She sees that it is a pony, a Pegasus at that that was yellow with a reddish mane. She thought that it was so familiar then it clicked. T-thunder?" She whispered.

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"Yes Caprisha, it's me, Thunder. Please, hang in there, we're gonna get you out of here and it's all going to be fine. We'll get you to an hospital and i'll explain everything once you're good again. Just hang in there with me Caprisha." Thunder said, nearly crying of joy that Caprisha was still kicking.

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"Yes Caprisha, it's me, Thunder. Please, hang in there, we're gonna get you out of here and it's all going to be fine. We'll get you to an hospital and i'll explain everything once you're good again. Just hang in there with me Caprisha." Thunder said, nearly crying of joy that Caprisha was still kicking.

Caprisha smiled a little bit. Thunder had come to save her, she was happy.

 

Choke waked up behind them. "If you were just planning on coming up here to get her than why did you bring me up here in the first place?" Choke asked, wondering why Thunder had agreed to any of this.

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"I didn't fucking need you." Thunder said, picking up Caprisha. "You needed me, but i've reached my goal, so, so long." Thunder silently walked ou of the door with Caprisha andwalked outside again. He picked up Caprisha like did Choke before and flew to a near rooftop of the city.

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"I didn't fucking need you." Thunder said, picking up Caprisha. "You needed me, but i've reached my goal, so, so long." Thunder silently walked ou of the door with Caprisha andwalked outside again. He picked up Caprisha like did Choke before and flew to a near rooftop of the city.

Choke just watched as Thunder flew off, leaving him in the clutches of the unicorns. Choke ran to where they had landed when they came, he had grabbed Caprisha's horn and ran to the edge of the cliff. Taking a deep breath he jumps.

 

Caprisha had felt herself be picked up. She was starting to feel a little wonky. And she felt very tired, maybe she should take a nap. She began closing her eyes.

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"Prish? Prish! Stay with me Prish. Don't go to sleep, please Prish, i need you. I fucking need you Prish." Thunder said as he landed on a tall building in hthe city. "Please, Prish, baby, don't do this to me." Thunder said, holding Caprishain his arms. "Please baby, don't do this baby. Please."

 

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"Prish? Prish! Stay with me Prish. Don't go to sleep, please Prish, i need you. I fucking need you Prish." Thunder said as he landed on a tall building in hthe city. "Please, Prish, baby, don't do this to me." Thunder said, holding Caprishain his arms. "Please baby, don't do this baby. Please."

 

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Caprisha heard Thunder talking to her. He sounded so far away, and very echoy as well. He was saying don't sleep for some reason. She didn't know why but she tried not to. Yet no matter how hard she tried she couldn't keep her eyes open until they finally closed and she falls asleep. Edited September 17, 2013 by Charcoal Embers

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Caprisha fell asleep in Thunders arms. He picked her up and flew to another hotel. He rented another room. Ponies looked at him with an odd expression as he was carrying an dead weight with a bloody face. He hauled her off to the hotel room and layed her on the bed. Then he started washing Caprisha's blood off his face.

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Caprisha fell asleep in Thunders arms. He picked her up and flew to another hotel. He rented another room. Ponies looked at him with an odd expression as he was carrying an dead weight with a bloody face. He hauled her off to the hotel room and layed her on the bed. Then he started washing Caprisha's blood off his face.

Caprisha felt something wet on her face, she wanted to shoo it away but she couldn't move her arms more that just lift it a bit. She tried opening her eyes as well but she couldn't seem to do that either, she was still really tired but she couldn't seem to get her mind to sleep.

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Thunder looked at Caprisha trying to move around. "You'll be alright Prish." He whispered to himself, turning off the faucet and drying his face off. His face was now no longer covered in Caprisha's blood. He sat down in a chair, waiting for Caprisha to wake up.

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Thunder looked at Caprisha trying to move around. "You'll be alright Prish." He whispered to himself, turning off the faucet and drying his face off. His face was now no longer covered in Caprisha's blood. He sat down in a chair, waiting for Caprisha to wake up.

Caprisha had been able to work her eyes to be able to open up a little bit. She saw the ceiling of a room, it was different than their room. She let her head lool to the side and she saw Thunder. She smiled at the sight of him, at least she hoped she smiled. "Hey there." She said in a very small voice.

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Thunder looked up and saw Caprisha looking at him. He smiled, though it was quite an odd sight, seeing a mare you know as a unicorn suddenly without her horn. "Hey there." He replied. "Did you... Sleep well?" He asked, quite nervously, not sure what to expect as answer.

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Thunder looked up and saw Caprisha looking at him. He smiled, though it was quite an odd sight, seeing a mare you know as a unicorn suddenly without her horn. "Hey there." He replied. "Did you... Sleep well?" He asked, quite nervously, not sure what to expect as answer.

Caprisha didn't notice Thunders nervousness, she was too tired. "Slept alright, still tired though." She got winded by just speaking so she tried shortening her sentences as much as possible. Thunder looked different though, she thought she noticed a little bit of red on him that wasn't there before.