open The Finale Expense(Romance/Action/Drama)

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"And Lightning, can he fight for himself? No. And then again, you did get struck by lightning, and then thinking you worked at Fort Bavik, and then you were hypnotised... Wait a second, could there be a connection? Was it the work of Jason? Wasn't it lighning that struck you , but a spell, and was it a Bavik co-worker that was hypnotizing you?"

"I'm not sure, when I was struck by lightning all I remember seeing is white. And obviously I don't remember a thing about being hypnotised. But you do make a good point, maybe I actually should go back to that psychiatrist I have an idea to see if he is. Oh and also before you meet me at that camp I did work as a blacksmith in Bavik Fort."

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

Thunder was silent. He didn't look at Charcoal, nor did he look at anypony else. He just stood up and went to bed. Hoping, this was all a bad dream and when he woke up, this would be over. He lied under his blanket and on his pillow. Staring at the ceiling. 1234

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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Thunder was silent. He didn't look at Charcoal, nor did he look at anypony else. He just stood up and went to bed. Hoping, this was all a bad dream and when he woke up, this would be over. He lied under his blanket and on his pillow. Staring at the ceiling. 1234

Still struggling Charcoal slowly makes her way to the bedroom with Thunder. Once there she gets in bed beside him and faces him. "Hey sweetie, are you alright? Did I do something wrong again? Look I'm sorry for all the crazy stuff that has been happening lately but... I'm sorry." Charcoal gets up and walks off to sit on the couch crying a little as she does.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

"No Char, you didn't do anything wrong... I don't even know anymore. Just... I don't know." Then Thunder watched as Charcoal walks off towards the living room. "Charcoal? Please come back here, please?" He said, then he turned towards the side of the bed where Charcoal would normally be lying.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"No Char, you didn't do anything wrong... I don't even know anymore. Just... I don't know." Then Thunder watched as Charcoal walks off towards the living room. "Charcoal? Please come back here, please?" He said, then he turned towards the side of the bed where Charcoal would normally be lying.

((OOC: Aw, things are quite. ))

As Charcoal just sits there on the couch she begins to feel a little funny. Unsure why she gets up off the couch to see if she can find out why. As she gets up she feels the need to go somewhere. Where she is not sure but she just feels like she needs to go. Only thing she doesn't notice is her eyes going blank again.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

At this point John held her down "You're not going anywhere Charcoal. Thunder! She's having this thing again." John said

Thunder immediately gets up and walks towards Charcoal. "Forgot about John? Charcoal. Charcoal! CHAROAL! WAKE UP!"
The anger in Thunder's voice was to be heard.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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At this point John held her down "You're not going anywhere Charcoal. Thunder! She's having this thing again." John said

Thunder immediately gets up and walks towards Charcoal. "Forgot about John? Charcoal. Charcoal! CHAROAL! WAKE UP!"

The anger in Thunder's voice was to be heard.

"Hmm, oh what?" Waking up again she is not comforted that she was being held down by John. She looks up and sees Thunder. "Um what happened? Why is John on top of me like this? It is sort of uncomfortable being in this position. And why do you sound so angry Thunder?"

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers, 

 

"You're going again. Tomorrow we'll go back to that psychic colt and ask him what the fuck is wrong." But first, let's get some sleep, and you're going with me." Thunder walked to the bedroom and went back to bed, this time looking if Charcoal was actually following him.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"You're going again. Tomorrow we'll go back to that psychic colt and ask him what the fuck is wrong." But first, let's get some sleep, and you're going with me." Thunder walked to the bedroom and went back to bed, this time looking if Charcoal was actually following him.

Following Thunder to their room she gets in her side of the bed and lays down. "If this colt really is some sort of spy or something do you thing we should do something as a precaution? It might not be a great idea to charge in there without a plan, especially is he has already hypnotised me."

[RainbowDashie 767]

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"I'm not sure, but at least i'm going in there too, i'm not going to let you go in there alone. I'll take weapons, and John. Arrow will be here looking after Lightning. He is going to put an end to this, the easy way, or the hard way." Thunder was furious at the pony. 12

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"I'm not sure, but at least i'm going in there too, i'm not going to let you go in there alone. I'll take weapons, and John. Arrow will be here looking after Lightning. He is going to put an end to this, the easy way, or the hard way." Thunder was furious at the pony. 12

Charcoal looks at Thunder with a worried expression. "But I don't want you to get sucked into the hypnosis as well. Maybe if you give me some time I could try and make an enchantment for temporary invisibility on a cloak or your jacket or something like that. It would take me a while though, I haven't enchanted anything since before I left the fort."

[RainbowDashie 767]

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"I don't think that would work, even though he couldn't see me, i could see him. Therefor i would be exposed. No, i'm just going to ask him politely, or he'll feel it." Thunder said with a sadistic grim on his face. "He'll feel it..."

 

((OOC just filling characters and not ruining this...))

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"I don't think that would work, even though he couldn't see me, i could see him. Therefor i would be exposed. No, i'm just going to ask him politely, or he'll feel it." Thunder said with a sadistic grim on his face. "He'll feel it..."

 

((OOC just filling characters and not ruining this...))

"Oh yeah,that's true. I had forgotten about that part. I guess that, that would be the best course of action. Just promise me one thing Thunder. Promise me you won't go out of control. Please just promise me this one thing. I don't know why but I just have a bad feeling about you just letting loose on him."

[RainbowDashie 767]

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"You have not seen what he has done to you. I can't promise you that. If you want me to go easy on him, you'll have to physically hold me back, but please don't." Thunder turned and now looked at the ceiling. "We should get some rest now. Tomorrow is going to be a hard day."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"You have not seen what he has done to you. I can't promise you that. If you want me to go easy on him, you'll have to physically hold me back, but please don't." Thunder turned and now looked at the ceiling. "We should get some rest now. Tomorrow is going to be a hard day."

*sigh* "Alright Thunder." Laying down in bed Charcoal faces away from Thunders spot. "Useing violence might temporarily make you feel better, but how will you feel later with his blood on your hoofs knowing I don't hold grudges. If anything, just don't kill him. Do it for me." At that Charcoal closes her eyes and falls asleep.

[RainbowDashie 767]

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"I will." He kissed Charcoal goodnight and then went asleep himself.

 

The next morning Thunder woke up first. He put on his suit and greeted John. He holstered his pistol in his inner pocket and threw an automatic rifle at John. He also slit a knife in his sleeve. "You never know."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"I will." He kissed Charcoal goodnight and then went asleep himself.

 

The next morning Thunder woke up first. He put on his suit and greeted John. He holstered his pistol in his inner pocket and threw an automatic rifle at John. He also slit a knife in his sleeve. "You never know."

As Charcoal woke up she first noticed Thunder was out of bed. Getting up and putting her glasses on she walks out and sees... John with an automatic rifle? "Ok... a normal pony would be freaking out right now. But I just have two questions. One, where do you keep getting these guns without me knowing about them? Two why does John have a gun in the first place?"

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"Goodmorning sunshine. Well, one, just look in the drawer under the table every now and then. And two, you never know what's going to happen." Thunder looked at Charcoal, "Do you think you're ready to go?" Thunder said before opening the door and getting Charcoals wheelchair.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"Goodmorning sunshine. Well, one, just look in the drawer under the table every now and then. And two, you never know what's going to happen." Thunder looked at Charcoal, "Do you think you're ready to go?" Thunder said before opening the door and getting Charcoals wheelchair.

"Anytime you are, but I don't think the wheelchair is necessary anymore. I can walk now with very little resistance at all. But I guess we do need to return it soon to... wherever John got it from. But I guess it would have to be him since I have no idea where he got it from."

[RainbowDashie 767]

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"Let's go then."

 

As Thunder and Charcoal arrived at the pony, John was hidden outside the office. "Hello sir, we're back." Thunder said as he opened the door. "Unfortunately we're not statisfied with your services, could you please undo them?" Thunder asked in a calm voice.

 

((OOC: i let the doctor's talking to you.))

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"Let's go then."

 

As Thunder and Charcoal arrived at the pony, John was hidden outside the office. "Hello sir, we're back." Thunder said as he opened the door. "Unfortunately we're not statisfied with your services, could you please undo them?" Thunder asked in a calm voice.

 

((OOC: i let the doctor's talking to you.))

"Yeah, I came here to help get cured of my strange nightmares not get hypnotised to do who knows what. I want to get fixed by the doctor who did this to me and I want it fixed now." As she says the last part she slams her hoofs down on the desk.

 

((OOC: I don't understand what you are saying. Are you saying that you want me to god-mod the doctor?))

[RainbowDashie 767]

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((OOC: that was exactly what i ment.))

 

"Easy Char, easy. Maybe you should have me do the talking." Thunder turned towards the doctor, "As just said, could you remove the hypnosis from her mind?" Thunder asked, still using a calm voice. He looked out of the window and saw John sitting ready.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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((OOC: that was exactly what i ment.))

 

"Easy Char, easy. Maybe you should have me do the talking." Thunder turned towards the doctor, "As just said, could you remove the hypnosis from her mind?" Thunder asked, still using a calm voice. He looked out of the window and saw John sitting ready.

The doctor finally decides to address Thunder. "I do have the ability to remove the suggestion from her mind but unfortunately I'm not going to. I was just wanting to borrow her for a night, that's all. We are both stallions here, surly you know what it is like to be alone and without anything to help your frustrations." The doctor said with a sly look on his face. "Plus she is quite pretty." Edited August 14, 2013 by Charcoal Embers

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"You mean you wanted to have sex with her? You sick motherfucker. I know i'm a stallion, but using a mentally instable mare at your will is just sick, not stallionlike. Now, return her to normal." Thunder said on an angry, demanding tone.

 

((Still not enough characters...))

[Charcoal Embers 169]

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"You mean you wanted to have sex with her? You sick motherfucker. I know i'm a stallion, but using a mentally instable mare at your will is just sick, not stallionlike. Now, return her to normal." Thunder said on an angry, demanding tone.

 

((Still not enough characters...))

"Yeah return me to normal. You can't just go around plucking off every mare that can't defend herself!" Charcoal shouts at him.

 

"Oh please keep your voices down." The doctor said in a slightly annoying tone. "But sorry buddy I'm not removing the suggestion until I am done with this mare. Now if you don't mind I would like you to leave this building this instant." The doctor looks at Charcoal. "But you, you stay here." As soon as he said that Charcoal eyes begin to look empty and she begins to walk towards the doctor. "See, she wants this."