Jump to content

open The Finale Expense(Romance/Action/Drama)


Paladin Butters

Recommended Posts

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"Whoa whoa whoa, you can't just murder ponies. Are you crazy? I figured becoming a stallion might have brought a few things with it, but you became fucking nuts." Thunder looked at Charcoal with a worried face. "I think it's best you keep your head down untill the princesses have responded."

 

((OOC: I think the name Charcoal Embers fits a mare better.))

"Oh so it is ok for you to do it?" Charcoal said, his voice starting to raise a little. "I am no less of a pony than you are Thunder and I don't like the way you are just saying no to that. And why not then? I saved your flank out there in that battle when you got distracted by waving at me."

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"That's different, you wouldn't understand. If you really want to do something go do the groceries or something, at leat leave me fucking alone." 

 

 

((Yeah... those characters suck, don't you think? Sometimes short posts should remain short without this stuff.))

Edited by GameBeaver
Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

"That's different, you wouldn't understand. If you really want to do something go do the groceries or something, at leat leave me fucking alone."

 

 

((Yeah... those characters suck, don't you think? Sometimes short posts should remain short without this stuff.))

"Oh I think I understand perfectly." Said Charcoal in a low voice. Charcoal then storms out of the apartment, slamming the door as he left. "Fucking Thunder."

 

((OOC: Yeah they do suck and I'm just rambling fir right now to get rid of them so that I can post this.))

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"FINE, GO, I DON'T NEED YOU." i don't need no fucking pony to keep me company "At least you're still here John."

 

((Those god damn characters... Did you know taht on phone it looks like you need to write more to achieve 200 characters? I certainly do motherfuckrrs1))

Edited by GameBeaver
Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"FINE, GO, I DON'T NEED YOU." i don't need no fucking pony to keep me company "At least you're still here John."

 

((Those god damn characters... Did you know taht on phone it looks like you need to write more to achieve 200 characters? I certainly do motherfuckrrs1))

((OOC:Two things. One, I think an exclamation mark would work better than a period at the end of your first sentence. B time to god-mod like I have never done before.))

John just looks at Thunder with his blank expression. "Was that really the best thing to do?" John asks in his deep deep voice. "He is new to being a stallion, it might not be a good idea to let him be out there on his own."

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"If he wants to run off he should fucking do that. This is not the pony i fell in love with, and untill he becomes her again i don't fucking care what she, he does or goes." Thunder said looking out of the window. "I miss you Charcoal" A tear appeared from his eye.

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"If he wants to run off he should fucking do that. This is not the pony i fell in love with, and untill he becomes her again i don't fucking care what she, he does or goes." Thunder said looking out of the window. "I miss you Charcoal" A tear appeared from his eye.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"If he wants to run off he should fucking do that. This is not the pony i fell in love with, and untill he becomes her again i don't fucking care what she, he does or goes." Thunder said looking out of the window. "I miss you Charcoal" A tear appeared from his eye.

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"If he wants to run off he should fucking do that. This is not the pony i fell in love with, and untill he becomes her again i don't fucking care what she, he does or goes." Thunder said looking out of the window. "I miss you Charcoal" A tear appeared from his eye.

"Then why are you just sitting here? Go fix the problem. If you really want her back then do something about it. And from the looks of it the only thing Charcoal is right now is confused. How would you feel right now if you were suddenly turned into a mare with different hormones and slightly different body structures." John says to Thunder.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"You're right." Thunder ran out of the door and went looking everywhere. Then he found Charcoal, drunk as fuck in a bar. He grabbed him by his neck and dragged him outside. "What the fuck were you thinking? You don't know your body as it is normally, why would you take the risk of getting fuck drunk?"

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"You're right." Thunder ran out of the door and went looking everywhere. Then he found Charcoal, drunk as fuck in a bar. He grabbed him by his neck and dragged him outside. "What the fuck were you thinking? You don't know your body as it is normally, why would you take the risk of getting fuck drunk?"

Charcoal, getting dragged out of the bar, doesn't notice that he had been taken out of his seat until Thunder had started talking to him. Slowly turning his head Charcoal looks at Thunder. "Oh hey look, it is Mr. Farts over here. I don't know why you would care about me, just have a drink and have a good dime." Charcoal grabs a random vase off of a table and hoofs it to Thunder.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

((Drags him outside...))

 

"No, i do care about you. You have responsebilities. You're coming home right fucking now." Thunder says angrily at Charcoal. "Just listen to me, you can't control this body."

 

(( let me sing the song of characters: fuckfuckfuckfuckfuckfuck))

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

((Drags him outside...))

 

"No, i do care about you. You have responsebilities. You're coming home right fucking now." Thunder says angrily at Charcoal. "Just listen to me, you can't control this body."

 

(( let me sing the song of characters: fuckfuckfuckfuckfuckfuck))

((Yes I know he took Charcoal outside.))

"You don't fucking care about me Thunder. And I am a free pony, I can do what I want when I want to and right now I am having the time of my life." Charcoal takes the vase he just took and tips it up to get a drink of nothing. Seeing that there is nothing left Charcoal walks back inside to the bartender, throws the vase at the bartender and then demands another drink.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"Fine. If you want this life, i can't do anything about it. But, i still love you and if you remember where i live, come back home." Everypony in the bar is quiet now. Thunder looks around him. "I'm not gay, okay! Dammit!" He walks home from the bar.

 

((Chara fucking ters))

  • Brohoof 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"Fine. If you want this life, i can't do anything about it. But, i still love you and if you remember where i live, come back home." Everypony in the bar is quiet now. Thunder looks around him. "I'm not gay, okay! Dammit!" He walks home from the bar.

 

((Chara fucking ters))

After a few hours and many drinks later Charcoal stumbles his way to where he thinks is his home. After randomly choosing a door he walks in and sits on the couch, continuing to drink from the bottle he brought with him. After a few seconds Charcoal notices the weird looks he is getting from the ponies eating at the table. "What, you've never seen a drunk pony before?" Getting up Charcoal walks out the door and looks around for a bit till he is sure he found the right door. Walking in he does the same thing he did in the last apartment.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder had still not eard from Charcoal as he was lying on the couch. "He'll probably never return" Thunder thought. His eyes were filled with tears. "I had found the love of my life and now she's gone forever"

 

((Still at the wrong apartment bitch. fuck u dud))

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder had still not eard from Charcoal as he was lying on the couch. "He'll probably never return" Thunder thought. His eyes were filled with tears. "I had found the love of my life and now she's gone forever"

 

((Still at the wrong apartment bitch. fuck u dud))

Charcoal continued to drink on the couch. That is until a stallion three times his size walks up to him. "What are you doing in here?" The stallion had asked Charcoal.

"What, this isn't my house?" Charcoal had asked. Not completely happy with Charcoal the stallion picked him up and threw him outside, promptly locking the door. Stumbling around a little more Charcoal eventual made it to the front desk. "Hey, I need help finding my apartment. I can't seem to find it." The front desk pony in a not so genuine smile leans under the desk to call the police. A few minutes later the bright light of police chariots come into view and they come in to see Charcoal.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder gets a call. It's the police, the officer says. "We have a stallion called Charcoal Embers here who says you'll get him out of this.".

"Charcoal Embers? Never heard of." Thunder hangs up the phone, emotionless he grabs a drink from the fridge.

 

((Also i don't feel to well atm so i'll get some sleep.))

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder gets a call. It's the police, the officer says. "We have a stallion called Charcoal Embers here who says you'll get him out of this.".

"Charcoal Embers? Never heard of." Thunder hangs up the phone, emotionless he grabs a drink from the fridge.

 

((Also i don't feel to well atm so i'll get some sleep.))

After spending a few days in prison Charcoal was met out. Walking back home, sober this time, Charcoal tries to remember what had happened between when he left and when he woke up in prison. The police had told him that he had been really drunk but... making it back to his apartment he tries to open the door but it wouldn't open. He looks for the spare key the keep but it was gone as well. So he decides to knock.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder opens the door and sees Charcoal. "Oh, helloCharcoal, are you sure you're at the right house?"

 

((I'm starting school next week so i'll be posting less from then on, mainly going to be up less long.))

 

((Also i'm still waiting for @ get your shit over here dude))

Link to comment
Share on other sites

I have to close down the role-play. My work has taken all my time from me. And school starts in 4 days. There is no way ill be able to keep up the role-play. I got work most of the day and when I'm not working I'm asleep. I woke up by my phone alerting me that GameBeaver made a post. Sorry but there's nothing I can do. I only fear that ill be able to post less and less. I don't get time to post. I'm burned out. I am sorry. Finale Expense is hear by closed. Unless another member wishes to take control. Just shoot me a PM. And I'll respond when I can.

 

@GingerJoy

@Charcoal Embers


Untitled_zps17e4902a.png


Find Me @ YouTube: Here

Link to comment
Share on other sites

You motherfucking shitcunt...

 

Excuse my language, but can't you give the OP state to another person? This roleplay is going very well and we have just hit over 1000 posts. Also the story is at a point where nobody really knows what's going to happen and i'd like to finish.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

((OOC: Ok so I guess this RP is mine now. I'll go ahead and say now I will be here unlike Gibbs was (no offense Gibbs.). So I will try and keep things in line and not let things get too out of control and keep the story going. We can continue what is going on at the moment for a little bit but after that we will go on with the original story. Even though there is no way I will be able to do it as well as Gibbs would.))

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

((So we continue? I don't care who the OP is as long as the RP remains in existance. However in m honest opinion an OP should be online more often than Gibbs was, i understand that with work, school, sleep and a fraction of social life it limits your time to be online, but it's good to have an OP now that is online.))

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

((So we continue? I don't care who the OP is as long as the RP remains in existance. However in m honest opinion an OP should be online more often than Gibbs was, i understand that with work, school, sleep and a fraction of social life it limits your time to be online, but it's good to have an OP now that is online.))

((OOC: Yes it will continue but I will try and steer us in a direction where we are going to be going to the ending that Gibbs had in mind. But for now I guess the two of us can continue from where we left off. Just give ma a little bit, I need to finish up first. And I might not be on much tomorrow since I have a lot of homework I need to finish up.))

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers

 

((After my school starts, next monday i'll be on the entire noon usually, but untill about now is the maximum time untill i go offline. And since you're the OP you can control the princesses, but i'm not happy with that since you're a massive dick to me with power.))

Link to comment
Share on other sites

@@Charcoal Embers,

 

((After my school starts, next monday i'll be on the entire noon usually, but untill about now is the maximum time untill i go offline. And since you're the OP you can control the princesses, but i'm not happy with that since you're a massive dick to me with power.))

((OOC: I'll try and not be such a massive dick with power useing the princesses. Everything else can be debated but... anyway I think I am ready to continue.))

Charcoal just looked at Thunder for a moment. "Hey Thunder, look I'm sorry about how I acted before. I was just confused and I wasn't sure how to deal with it so I guess I tuned to alcohol for help when you said no." Charcoal guiltily looks down to the ground. "Look the point is, I'm sorry and I would understand if you didn't want to see me anymore. I just had to get that off my chest."

Link to comment
Share on other sites

×
×
  • Create New...