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Paladin Butters

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Yes, it's beautiful." Thunder said, standing next to Charcoal. "The darkness of the night gives everything a sense of mystery and romance, that's why i like it too." Thunder sat down next to Charcoal. He stared out of the window. "I wish this all never happened, that we could lead a normal life."

((OOC: Sorry I've been gone all day, was with my dad at a carnival. Then we had to put everything away.))

"What exactly do you mean *ow* by, 'all of this'? A lot of things have *ow* happened to the both of *ow* us. Was it when I got struck by *ow* lightning, or the time where I was *ow* blown up?" Charcoal said, staring into the night sky. "And I kind of enjoy *ow* everything that happens *ow*. It just makes our lives so much more *ow* interesting and fun."

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"Enjoyed it? Did you enjoy the doctor? But yes, i do mean all those things. I hoped we could just settle down, let Lightning grow ip and lead a normal life. How will Lightning react if he finds out all these things?" Thunder stared at the moon. It was a full one.

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"Enjoyed it? Did you enjoy the doctor? But yes, i do mean all those things. I hoped we could just settle down, let Lightning grow ip and lead a normal life. How will Lightning react if he finds out all these things?" Thunder stared at the moon. It was a full one.

"Oh yeah, I forgot about the doctor. But I'm not too worried about Lightning, minus the part where I am a stallion. But if Lightning is truly my son he will either laugh or be completely fine with it. I know I would have. But don't worry about it so much, we will cross that bridge together."

 

((OOC: Just imagine the *ow*s are in there, I didn't feel like going back and putting them in.))

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"How about we send another letter to the princesses? I'd rather see you back mare than having to see you as a stallion." At that moment there was a knock on the door. *knock knock knock*

 

((Please leave those *ow*s out, they're annoying as fuck and i can imagine them in.))

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"How about we send another letter to the princesses? I'd rather see you back mare than having to see you as a stallion." At that moment there was a knock on the door. *knock knock knock*

 

((Please leave those *ow*s out, they're annoying as fuck and i can imagine them in.))

((OOC: Is this another thing to be the princesses? It is kind of hard to guess off of just knocks you know and I hate assuming. If you are wanting to do something I need to know what it is exactly. Like when Thunder got his first pay in a briefcase and you told me what to expect, that help. But here it couldn't be anything and do you really want me deciding what it is?))

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((I did leave it to you but since it's my turn now...))

 

Thunder opens the door. "Howly dooley, it's the princesses. Can i get you something to drink? Coffee? Tea? Something else?" Thunder lets the princesses inside the house, making an elegant bow as he does so.

 

((You can decide what they say))

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((I did leave it to you but since it's my turn now...))

 

Thunder opens the door. "Howly dooley, it's the princesses. Can i get you something to drink? Coffee? Tea? Something else?" Thunder lets the princesses inside the house, making an elegant bow as he does so.

 

((You can decide what they say))

Both of the princesses look down at Thunder, then look at eachother kind of awkwardly. Celestia was the first to speak. "Please, stand up my little pony. And no thank you we will only be able to be here for a moment." Walking in both Celestia and Luna take notice of Charcoal. "So what Thunder sent in his letter was true." Said Luna. "And he is hurt to, come on Tia we always miss the good stuff."

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"Our injuries come from the battle we fought against the forces of Fort Bavik. Though not defeated, we have reduced their numbers by thousands. But i hope that's not why you're here." Thunder looks at Charcoal, the at the princesses. "Will you be able to help us resolve this?"

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"Our injuries come from the battle we fought against the forces of Fort Bavik. Though not defeated, we have reduced their numbers by thousands. But i hope that's not why you're here." Thunder looks at Charcoal, the at the princesses. "Will you be able to help us resolve this?"

"No, that is not why we are here." Celestia said. "We have come because we may have found a way to change Charcoal back without having to use a spell that could end her life."

Charcoal looks at Celestia with surprise in his eyes. "Um, yeah I would prefer to use a method where I could die."

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"Using that spell would be highly unfortunate. We can't use a dead Charcoal, now can we? But if you would like to proceed casting the spethat would much be appreciated." Thunder says, he tooka step back to allow the princesses to cast their magic on Charcoal.

 

((Last post, school tomorrow.))

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"Using that spell would be highly unfortunate. We can't use a dead Charcoal, now can we? But if you would like to proceed casting the spethat would much be appreciated." Thunder says, he tooka step back to allow the princesses to cast their magic on Charcoal.

 

((Last post, school tomorrow.))

"Oh, no no no. The way to change Charcoal back isn't a spell, the way to change him back is a well." Said Luna. ((Completely intentional rhyming)) Celestia look at her sister than back at Thunder. "Yes, the way to change Charcoal back is a special well located not far from here. There is a catch though. The well is surrounded by a few nests of various creatures that can cause great harm to you if you're not careful." Celestia said in a worried tone.

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"Dammit." Thunder said. "There's always a fucking catch." Thunder grabbed his pistol and shotgun and threw a rifle at Charcoal. "Well, princesses, lead the way, i think we're both ready... Wait... Can't we fly there? We're both pegasi." Thunder said with a questioning face.

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"Dammit." Thunder said. "There's always a fucking catch." Thunder grabbed his pistol and shotgun and threw a rifle at Charcoal. "Well, princesses, lead the way, i think we're both ready... Wait... Can't we fly there? We're both pegasi." Thunder said with a questioning face.

"I'm sorry but we won't be able to come with you." Celestia said in a authoritative voice. "We have already used up too much time as it is helping you but we must go now." And just like that the two of them teleported away leaving behind only a map marked with the location of the well.

Charcoal picks it up and looks it over. "It doesn't seem to far but we also have to take into account my wing condition, remember?"

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"You still got that? I thought being a stallion took it away. Well, better start walking then." *chik chik* *epic music playing* *zooming in on Thunders face* *putting sunglasses on* *epic one-liner* Thunder walked off towards the direction of the well. "We might see you mare in the morning."

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"You still got that? I thought being a stallion took it away. Well, better start walking then." *chik chik* *epic music playing* *zooming in on Thunders face* *putting sunglasses on* *epic one-liner* Thunder walked off towards the direction of the well. "We might see you mare in the morning."

*facehoof* "That was a terrible one-liner. I don't even understand it." Charcoal said as he began following Thunder. "And all that changed was my sex, and I don't think that could take away a disorder I have had since birth. But you coukd fly on ahead if you want, I will catch up eventually and it would help us spot anything that might be trouble along the way."

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"No, i'd rather stay with you. Celestia spoke of dangerous creatures and together we'll have more chance to get there in one piece." They kept moving and entered a forest. "Now, aren't you afraid of the deep dark forest? If you are we could do this at daytime."

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"No, i'd rather stay with you. Celestia spoke of dangerous creatures and together we'll have more chance to get there in one piece." They kept moving and entered a forest. "Now, aren't you afraid of the deep dark forest? If you are we could do this at daytime."

Truthfully Charcoal was terrified of going in that forest. But he had to do it, Thunder was risking getting hurt to help him. "I-I'll be fine, let's get going." Charcoal continued walking along as the path got darker and darker. As they continued on Charcoal started to notice a few less noises and a few more blood stains. Charcoal picked up his pace a bit after that.

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Thunder didn't like the silence and darkness of the forest. He felt as if something was watching them.

 

Suddenly a big blue fuck jumped out of nowhere on top of Thunder and he like screamed like hell as he saw giant teeth snapping towards his face. 12

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Thunder didn't like the silence and darkness of the forest. He felt as if something was watching them.

 

Suddenly a big blue fuck jumped out of nowhere on top of Thunder and he like screamed like hell as he saw giant teeth snapping towards his face. 12

Acting quickly Charcoal aimed the rifle right at the creature and opened fire on it till it stopped moving. He ran over to Thunder to check on him. "Thunder are you alright are you hurt?" This really wasn't good, two minutes in and we are already getting attacked.

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Thunder was breathing heavily. "I'm... I.. I... I'm fine." Thunder picked up his shotgun and looked around if he could see more things lurking in the darkness. Then he saw hundreds of red eyes looking at them. Thunder was terrified.

 

((This was truly the last post of today.))

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Thunder was breathing heavily. "I'm... I.. I... I'm fine." Thunder picked up his shotgun and looked around if he could see more things lurking in the darkness. Then he saw hundreds of red eyes looking at them. Thunder was terrified.

 

((This was truly the last post of today.))

"We should get moving before we get caught again." Charcoal said, also seeing the many many eyes around them. "I mean, a moving target is harder to catch than a target that sits still... right?" Charcoal helped Thunder off the ground. He then hears a menacing growl coming from behind him. He turned tail and ran in the direction of the well.

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"Let's run." Thunder started running and noticed that the eyes weren't following him. They were just getting more and more. "We gotta run, Char. We can't lose any time." Thunder looked at the eyes whilst there were getting more of them every second. 1234567

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"Let's run." Thunder started running and noticed that the eyes weren't following him. They were just getting more and more. "We gotta run, Char. We can't lose any time." Thunder looked at the eyes whilst there were getting more of them every second. 1234567

Charcoal was running along with Thunder, not really thinking just running. Then he thought for a moment, and then stopped. "Hang on a second Thunder." Charcoal had noticed something. How is it there are so many creatures piled together like that and not moving? Charcoal began to walk towards the red eyes staring at the both of them.

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"Are you sure Char? The last one seemed pretty dangerous, i'm not sure this is a good idea." Thunder said, but he followed Charcoal anyway. ((I mean YOLO right)) Then he notices something strange about the eyes, they were flickering while they were looking. 

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"Are you sure Char? The last one seemed pretty dangerous, i'm not sure this is a good idea." Thunder said, but he followed Charcoal anyway. ((I mean YOLO right)) Then he notices something strange about the eyes, they were flickering while they were looking.

"Yeah and think about it, why would so many preditors, which are usually larger that what they are trying to catch, be piled up so close to eachother and just sit there? I think there is something fishy about this." Charcoal walks up to the glowing eyes and reaches to touch them. As soon as his hoof made contact with them they disappeared revealing a bright orange unicorn making growling sounds. The unicorn looks over and notices we can see her, she draws back a curtain and says:

"Pay no attention to the pony behind the curtain."

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