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Thunder aims his shotgun at the unicorn's head after he pulled away the curtain. "What the fuck are you doing? Why do you make all these noises amd set up these eyes?" Thunder was suspicious of the orange pony. He looked at what Charcoal had to say about this.

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Thunder aims his shotgun at the unicorn's head after he pulled away the curtain. "What the fuck are you doing? Why do you make all these noises amd set up these eyes?" Thunder was suspicious of the orange pony. He looked at what Charcoal had to say about this.

"Yeah that's right, why are you trying to scare us? We aren't going to-" Charcoal, now getting a better look at the pony, thinks that she looks very familiar. "Wait, have we meet before? You seem so familiar. What is your name?" Charcoal asks.

 

"M-my name? My name is Caprisha. Who's asking?" Caprisha said with a bit of curiosity in her voice.

 

Both shocked and happy Charcoal and just glomps her. "Caprisha I can't believe it's really you, I thought you dies at that camp with the others." Getting up Charcoal helps Caprisha up. "It's me, Charcoal. Don't you remember me?"

 

"Charcoal?! Is it really you? Your looks are the same but you seem to have... changed. What happened?" Caprisha asked the two of them forgetting about Thunder.

 

"Well you see I was kind of, turned into a stallion not to long ago." Charcoal said with a little bit of embarrassment. "That is why we are here actually, we were told that we could find a well here that can change me back."

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"And if you two don't mind i'd like to get you back to being a mare. You can talk on the way to the well." Thunder started walking towards the well again. They wandered depper into the dark forest, which now seemed to be lighter and less scary than before. 12

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"And if you two don't mind i'd like to get you back to being a mare. You can talk on the way to the well." Thunder started walking towards the well again. They wandered depper into the dark forest, which now seemed to be lighter and less scary than before. 12

Charcoal and Caprisha were both walking along behind Thunder just talking to eachother.

"You know your friend there seems kind of stick in the mud." Caprisha said to Charcoal.

 

Charcoal looker at her and smiled a bit. "Actually he is my coltfriend. He even proposed to me but things keep coming up."

 

"Oh, well excuse me, I didn't know. But I'm surprised, I didn't know you liked the gay ones." Caprisha said with a smile.

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"He was actually a mare when i met him. And had a foal with him. And proposed to him." Thunder looks in the distance, he sees a well. It was a grey-brick well with red posts and a green roof on it. A bucket hung from the roof, it was a golden bucket on a golden chain.

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"He was actually a mare when i met him. And had a foal with him. And proposed to him." Thunder looks in the distance, he sees a well. It was a grey-brick well with red posts and a green roof on it. A bucket hung from the roof, it was a golden bucket on a golden chain.

Caprisha after chuckling for a minute till they got to the well bursts out laughing. "Ok ok. That sentence has two things wrong with it. One, it really doesn't help with your gay case. And two if I remember Charcoal she.. or he I guess would never have a foal." Caprisha finishes and continues laughing.

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"Sure, believe what you want, but we have a foal. And about the gay case, we met when she was a mare. I'm mot a homosexual, and he isn't either." Thunder, Charcoal and Caprisha now arrived at the well, it was filled with i glowing, cyan bright liquid. It looked magical.

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"Sure, believe what you want, but we have a foal. And about the gay case, we met when she was a mare. I'm mot a homosexual, and he isn't either." Thunder, Charcoal and Caprisha now arrived at the well, it was filled with i glowing, cyan bright liquid. It looked magical.

Caprisha slowly stops laughing and gets up off the ground. "Aw come on your no fun." She said, giving Thunder a friendly punch in the shoulder. "And I will believe you had this foal when I see it with my own eyes." Caprisha walks up the the well and fills the bucket with the water. She then walks over to Charcoal and hoofs him the bucket. "Here, drink it. Oh and put the bucket under your head after you drink it all... just trust me." Caprisha said while backing off.

 

Charcoal just looked at the bucket for a few second then takes his first drink. Charcoal regrets it immediately, it tasted like liquid diapers that have been sitting in the sun for a week. After drinking the whole thing Charcoal sets the bucket down, he didn't feel so good after that. He then proceeds to puke his guts out one by one.

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((And he pukes out a penis... Also, you're.))

 

"Awww, nasty mam." Thunder saw Charcoal turning into a mare again. He quickly flew into her hooves and hugged her. "I'm so glad you're finally back into being a mare." Thunder said. Then he shook hooves with Caprisha. "I guess we could make up another space in our apartment..."

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((And he pukes out a penis... Also, you're.))

 

"Awww, nasty mam." Thunder saw Charcoal turning into a mare again. He quickly flew into her hooves and hugged her. "I'm so glad you're finally back into being a mare." Thunder said. Then he shook hooves with Caprisha. "I guess we could make up another space in our apartment..."

((OOC: Come on man I was going to do a whole thing that would have been flashy and cool but not anymore.))

Charcoal looks at Thunder. "Hey could you please not do that, I feel like shit right now." Charcoal said putting her head back in the bucket.

 

Caprisha looked at Thunder with a bit of confusion. "Wait, weren't you the one who was pointing a gun at my head not that long ago, and now you are offering me a place to stay." She looked back at Charcoal. "Is he normally like this, oh and yeah you will feel like that for a little while."

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"Yeah," Thunder smiled at Caprisha. "I didn't know you were friends with Charcoal. And for the foal, you'll be able to see our little colt when we get home, if you accept the offer to stay with us that is of course." Thunder left Caprisha the choice to stay, or leave.

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"Yeah," Thunder smiled at Caprisha. "I didn't know you were friends with Charcoal. And for the foal, you'll be able to see our little colt when we get home, if you accept the offer to stay with us that is of course." Thunder left Caprisha the choice to stay, or leave.

"Hmmm" Caprisha thought about it for a bit before making her decision. "Why not, it starts to get boring in this musky old forest when nopony comes in to scare." She walks over to where. Charcoal is laying down. "You hear that Char I get to stay with you. It will be just like old times."

 

Charcoal just lays there occasionally groaning.

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Thunder took Charcoal on his back while she was still holding the bucket. "C'mon honey, we're going home. And please, try to stay out of trouble this time." The trio walked through the forest and into the coty, towards the apartment Thunder and Charcoal live in.

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Thunder took Charcoal on his back while she was still holding the bucket. "C'mon honey, we're going home. And please, try to stay out of trouble this time." The trio walked through the forest and into the coty, towards the apartment Thunder and Charcoal live in.

Upon arriving Charcoal felt significantly better. Or at least she didn't keep puking so she took that as a good sign. But she felt comforted by being on Thunder back so she didn't say anything. Once they had reached the apartment Charcoal had walked off and went to the bathroom to dump out the bucket. Once done she looked at herself in the mirror, she looked awful. Wow, Thunder carried me all the way back looking like this. Charcoal started making herself look pretty again. Wash her face, comb her mane and tail into place, and washing off her hooves. She got as clean and pretty as she could without a shower which would take too long.

 

Back in the living room Caprisha was looking around. "So, Charcoal's friend, where is this foal you keep telling me about? I've still yet to see it."

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Thunder was lying on the couch, completely exhausted from carrying Charcoal on his back with the wounds he had. He raised his leg and pointed in the general direction of Lightnings room. "There, in that room." He closed his eyes to rest from the trip home.

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Thunder was lying on the couch, completely exhausted from carrying Charcoal on his back with the wounds he had. He raised his leg and pointed in the general direction of Lightnings room. "There, in that room." He closed his eyes to rest from the trip home.

Caprisha starts to walk towards the room Thunder had pointed to. But stops when she hears Charcoal come out of her bedroom looking like she had spent some time making herself look pretty. "Well now look at this, never thought I would see the day that Charcoal Embers would willingly make herself look pretty. Caprisha said with a smile.

 

Charcoal just looked at ber and blushed a little. "Come on Caprisha I have a guest in my home. I don't want to look like a zombie even if it is you." Charcoal just smiled but then she remembered something. "Oh shit, Thunder did we leave anypony to take care of Lightning while we were gone? I don't think Arrow was here."

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"John was here all the time, Arrow can stay fucking away." Thunder gives a few grunts and moans of pain while walking towards Lightnings room. "Look, he's still here, only he has a full diaper. I think you deserved to change it this time." Thunder stumbles back to the couch.

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"John was here all the time, Arrow can stay fucking away." Thunder gives a few grunts and moans of pain while walking towards Lightnings room. "Look, he's still here, only he has a full diaper. I think you deserved to change it this time." Thunder stumbles back to the couch.

Charcoal looks at Thunder with a look of concern. "Thunder, are you alright? Did you pull a muscle or something while carrying me?" Charcoal asked as she went to get Lightning from his room. "Oh and Caprisha, here is Lightning my son." She said while changing his diaper and throwing it away then replacing it.

 

Caprisha looks at Lightning with a surprised look. "Well I'll be, you were telling the truth about him. And isn't he just a little cutie."

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"No, but i think carrying a heavy weight with bullet holes in your chest might not be the best idea i've ever had." Thunder said with a smile. He turned around, facing the back of the couch. He lifted up the bandages only to see that there was still a big hole in his chest.

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"No, but i think carrying a heavy weight with bullet holes in your chest might not be the best idea i've ever had." Thunder said with a smile. He turned around, facing the back of the couch. He lifted up the bandages only to see that there was still a big hole in his chest.

Caprisha turns around to face Thunder. "I know a but of magic that should temporarily ease the pain until you can see a real doctor. I can use it if you like."

 

"Oh yeah I remember that spell." Charcoal said while holding Lightning. "Didn't you learn that because I had dropped metal beam on my leg that one time? Was it that or the time I broke my wing?"

 

Caprisha turn her head to Charcoal. "It was the metal beam. But anyway," Caprisha said turning her head back around to Thunder "would you like me to use the spell or not?"

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"No. No, i don't trust all that facy magic, it has caused me more pain than it caused happiness to me." Thunder moaned another more wen turning around facing Charcoal and Caprisha. "I can take the pain." He said whilst looking at the still open, bloody wound.

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"No. No, i don't trust all that facy magic, it has caused me more pain than it caused happiness to me." Thunder moaned another more wen turning around facing Charcoal and Caprisha. "I can take the pain." He said whilst looking at the still open, bloody wound.

Charcoal looks at him with concern. "Well if you won't use the magic then we are taking you to a doctor, no if ans or buts about it." Charcoal turns to Caprisha. "Caprisha if you don't mind picking him up with magic we can get going."

 

"Why not." Said Caprisha as she picked up Thunder with her magic whether he wanted her to or not.

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((Hihihihihihihihi... Buts))

 

"No! You put me down right now missy." Thunder says while floating in the air. "Well, guess who's not staying? You! I'll tell John to shoot you on sight. You damn unicorns, never up to anything good." Thunder now realised there was no way he would break free, so he beared with it.

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((Hihihihihihihihi... Buts))

 

"No! You put me down right now missy." Thunder says while floating in the air. "Well, guess who's not staying? You! I'll tell John to shoot you on sight. You damn unicorns, never up to anything good." Thunder now realised there was no way he would break free, so he beared with it.

Charcoal gave Thunder an angery look. "Hey, you will do no such thing Thunder. She is my friend and we are just trying to help you. And she is just doing what I asked her to do, so kick her out and you kick me out as well. Come on Caprisha I'll show you where to take him." Charcoal said while walking out the door.

 

"Lead the way." Said Caprisha following Charcoal.

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"Fine, but she stays in the washing room!" Thunder was still mad at Caprisha for levitating him, but he did see they were just trying to help him so he allowed it. Once. "After this, never do this again, kapish? Caprisha, i'm talking to you." Thunder didn't like it.

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