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"I'm sorry Caprisha. I couldn't stop them. If i would've been fucking sooner i could." Thunder said, getting up from the bed, kicking a chair to the side. "But i wasn't and. now you lost your horn. It's my fucking fault, i should've been quicker." Thunder said, sobbing.

Caprisha begins to sob into Thunders chest. She doesn't say anything, she just cries. She cries for the longest time until she calms down enough to say actual words. "How... could... this... have... happened? What... have... I... done... to... deserve this?" Caprisha says between sobs

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"I don't know Prish, but you do. You are aware of why they took you." Thunder said getting off the bed again. "Those dreams were real. It's what they would've done to you if i weren't there. I'm sorry i was too late." Thunder said, looking Caprisha in her big, round eyes.

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"I don't know Prish, but you do. You are aware of why they took you." Thunder said getting off the bed again. "Those dreams were real. It's what they would've done to you if i weren't there. I'm sorry i was too late." Thunder said, looking Caprisha in her big, round eyes.

Caprisha continued to cry herself out until she finally was out of tears and slept. This rime she had no nightmares, but rather a completely blank space. She began to hear something then see something. After a few seconds a flash of light revealed ponies, hundreds of them all pointing at her. They were laughing at her, and at her lack of a horn.

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Thunder looked at Caprisha sleep. She's beautiful when she sleeps like this. It's just sad that it has to be under these circumstances. Thunder thought as he looked at Caprisha sleeping. "Why wasn't i there for her? Why wasn't i sooner?" He starts mumbling in himself, too falling asleep in the process.

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Thunder looked at Caprisha sleep. She's beautiful when she sleeps like this. It's just sad that it has to be under these circumstances. Thunder thought as he looked at Caprisha sleeping. "Why wasn't i there for her? Why wasn't i sooner?" He starts mumbling in himself, too falling asleep in the process.

Caprisha woke with a start. She was cold, sweaty, and felt like shit. So of course she had to get out of bed. She walked over to the window, ignoring the different things she had just taken out of her leg that were probably keeping her alive. She stared up at the moon, it was a full moon tonight. She opened up the window and let in the cool night air.

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Thunder woke up from the cold that suddenly entered the room. He opened his eyes and saw Caprisha standing in front of a window. He walked up to her and kissed her neck. "It might be better if you stay in bed while i ask the doctors to reattach the tubes to you." Thunder said.

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Thunder woke up from the cold that suddenly entered the room. He opened his eyes and saw Caprisha standing in front of a window. He walked up to her and kissed her neck. "It might be better if you stay in bed while i ask the doctors to reattach the tubes to you." Thunder said.

Caprisha just stared out the window, she didn't respond for several seconds. "Have you ever had something that pretty much made you, you?" Caprisha asked Thunder in a low, sad voice. She didn't know how she could live without her horn, she was just a few seconds away from being ready to just jump out this window.

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Thunder grabbed Caprisha's shoulder. "No Caprisha, i haven't." Thunder replied in a calm voice. "But your horn will grow back. Remember i told you about the condition of my wings when i met Charcoal? They were restored. Wounds will heal, but if you decide to jump, my heart won't."

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Thunder grabbed Caprisha's shoulder. "No Caprisha, i haven't." Thunder replied in a calm voice. "But your horn will grow back. Remember i told you about the condition of my wings when i met Charcoal? They were restored. Wounds will heal, but if you decide to jump, my heart won't."

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Thunder grabbed Caprisha's shoulder. "No Caprisha, i haven't." Thunder replied in a calm voice. "But your horn will grow back. Remember i told you about the condition of my wings when i met Charcoal? They were restored. Wounds will heal, but if you decide to jump, my heart won't."

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Thunder grabbed Caprisha's shoulder. "No Caprisha, i haven't." Thunder replied in a calm voice. "But your horn will grow back. Remember i told you about the condition of my wings when i met Charcoal? They were restored. Wounds will heal, but if you decide to jump, my heart won't."

Caprisha thought for a moment. Yes, I remember that Thunders wings were hurt when he met Charcoal but... they were only broken or sprained. Caprisha was about to say something when she had another thought. "Wait, where is Lightning?" Caprisha asked. She didn't see him anywhere and that caused her to start panicing.

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"Lightning's safe. Don't worry about him." Thunder said pulling Caprisha back from the window. "If you decide to jump now who will take care of Lightning next year, when Charcoal's having her heat?" He added with a smile, hoping to cheer up Caprisha a bit. Hk

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"Lightning's safe. Don't worry about him." Thunder said pulling Caprisha back from the window. "If you decide to jump now who will take care of Lightning next year, when Charcoal's having her heat?" He added with a smile, hoping to cheer up Caprisha a bit. Hk

Caprisha didn't even have to think about her answer. "Well there is you." Caprisha said, matter of factly. "You are the one who is going to marry her and he is your foal." Her voice was starting to raise. "And even now you are caring for me more than you are caring for your own flesh... and... blood." Caprisha began panting and sitting down, that really seemed to take a lot out of her.

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"Yes, but do you really think i can take care of a foal?" Thunder sat down besides Caprisha. "I'd probably just turn him into a psycho killer or something. He needs a mare and if Charcoal has her heat she can't take care of him, or any other foal for that matter."

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"Yes, but do you really think i can take care of a foal?" Thunder sat down besides Caprisha. "I'd probably just turn him into a psycho killer or something. He needs a mare and if Charcoal has her heat she can't take care of him, or any other foal for that matter."

Caprsha took a few breaths before responding. "She is actually in much more control than most mares, even me. If I were in heat I would have chained you to a rock and not let you go till I'm satisfied." Caprisha said. "And I guess your right about you raising Lightning. No offence, but you aren't exactly the best role-model."

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Thunder smiled. "I'll chain you to a rock so you can't do it to me." Thunder looked at the ceiling, resting his head at the wall behind him. "I'll fucking lock you up if you get your heat. But what did you do the years before you met me, when you had your heat i mean.

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Thunder smiled. "I'll chain you to a rock so you can't do it to me." Thunder looked at the ceiling, resting his head at the wall behind him. "I'll fucking lock you up if you get your heat. But what did you do the years before you met me, when you had your heat i mean.

Caprisha stared into the night sky before answering. "I would usually get locked up by whoever was close, unless it was a Friday, then I could convince them to let me out and I would ride them until either they locked me up again or I just couldn't move my body."

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"It seems logical to lock a mare up. Especially if she behaves like you just described." Thunder looked at Caprisha. "But what did you do when you were alone? I mean when you didn't have a stallion to get statisfied on your fridays." Thunder looked a bit uncomfortable.

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"It seems logical to lock a mare up. Especially if she behaves like you just described." Thunder looked at Caprisha. "But what did you do when you were alone? I mean when you didn't have a stallion to get statisfied on your fridays." Thunder looked a bit uncomfortable.

Caprisha blushed a bit, but still answered. "I would usually satisfy myself as best I could but... for a mare in heat it is never enough. We have to have a stallion to help us otherwise we are just trying to light a wet match." Caprisha said. She leaned to the side and rested herself on Thunder.

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Thunder was about to get up when Caprisha layed her head on Thunder. "I'll just lock you up next year, when you have your heat, so you don't have to worry about anything." Thunder siad, smiling at Caprisha and he kissed her on her mane. He looked at the bandage.

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Thunder was about to get up when Caprisha layed her head on Thunder. "I'll just lock you up next year, when you have your heat, so you don't have to worry about anything." Thunder siad, smiling at Caprisha and he kissed her on her mane. He looked at the bandage.

Caprisha smiled a bit at that. "That would make things easier, and you should do the same thing for Charcoal next time. Though she might be a little harder considering how much stronger she is." Caprisha turned her head to look at Thunder. He looked so amazing in the moonlight. Caprisha leans toward him and gives him a kiss.

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Thunder blushed a bit after Caprisha's kiss. "I can take her. If we're talking about strength i think i can take Charcoal. Or i could just lock her the day before." Thunder stopped for a bit. "We should go see her in the morning, i think her heat might be over by now.

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Thunder blushed a bit after Caprisha's kiss. "I can take her. If we're talking about strength i think i can take Charcoal. Or i could just lock her the day before." Thunder stopped for a bit. "We should go see her in the morning, i think her heat might be over by now.

Caprisha heard something coming from the doorway. It sounded like something being dropped. She turns around and sees... Charcoal. Shit She tried to say something but Charcoal ran off before she had a chance to. She stood up and was about to run after her but she felt very dizzy and fell back down.

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"Don't worry Prish, get some rest i'll chase after Charcoal." He stood up and ran after Charcoal. "Charcoal! Wait!" He yelled, running after Charcoal through the hallways. "Please Char, wait, let me explain." Thunder said, now flying through the hospital hallways.

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"Don't worry Prish, get some rest i'll chase after Charcoal." He stood up and ran after Charcoal. "Charcoal! Wait!" He yelled, running after Charcoal through the hallways. "Please Char, wait, let me explain." Thunder said, now flying through the hospital hallways.

Charcoal felt betrayed. She woke up this morning feeling crusty and dirty. She didn't see Caprisha or Thunder anywhere so she figured that they left to keep away from her while she was in heat. After her first shower in a while she asked around to see if she could find them. After hours of searching she heard about some ponies seeing a yellow Pegasus carrying a very bloody orange unicorn. She had gotten a gift for the unicorn who she figured was Caprisha. But when she found the room she didn't like what she saw. She ran out of the hospital with tears streaming down her face. She just ran and ran until she smashed herself into a building. She decided to rest and hide in there.

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Thunder flew out of the hospital, but had lost track of Charcoal. His eyes started watering and before he knew it tears were streaming down his face. He flew to the ground with great scream and an evem greater force. As he hit the ground the earth shook and a crater formed. Thunder lied in that crater.

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Thunder flew out of the hospital, but had lost track of Charcoal. His eyes started watering and before he knew it tears were streaming down his face. He flew to the ground with great scream and an evem greater force. As he hit the ground the earth shook and a crater formed. Thunder lied in that crater.

Caprisha was watching the whole thing from the window in her room. She saw Charcoal running and Thunder flying towards the ground. He was flying really fast and when he hit the ground it shook everything, even her. She stumbled and tried to get back on four hooves, but she found herself falling out the window. At the last second she caught the ledge with a hoof but with how much blood she lost and her being a unicorn she wouldn't have the strength to hold herself for long.

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