open The Finale Expense(Romance/Action/Drama)

[RainbowDashie 767]

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Thunder looked like he was lying down lifelessly. He was silently crying inside of his crater. Charcoal, please, come back. I promise i'll explain everything. I promise. he silently whispered to himself as he was laying in the crater he just made. And stuff

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Thunder looked like he was lying down lifelessly. He was silently crying inside of his crater. Charcoal, please, come back. I promise i'll explain everything. I promise. he silently whispered to himself as he was laying in the crater he just made. And stuff

She couldn't see much but she saw that Thunder was sitting in the crater he just made. "Hey Thunder, I need help!" Caprisha screams at the top of her lungs. She had to get Thunders attention, she knew she couldn't hold on for very much longer, she was about to fall.

[RainbowDashie 767]

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Thunder heard Caprisha's scream. Though he didn't pay much attention to it. He turned around and got up from his crater. He saw Caprisha hanging from her window. How did she even fucking get there? He thought as he looked at Caprisha hanging around there.

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Thunder heard Caprisha's scream. Though he didn't pay much attention to it. He turned around and got up from his crater. He saw Caprisha hanging from her window. How did she even fucking get there? He thought as he looked at Caprisha hanging around there.

Caprisha couldn't hold on any longer. She felt her hoof slip and she began falling. Thunder hadn't come to help her when she needed it, but hopefully he comes to help her now that she might not even make it after falling from this high up in the air. This was going to hurt.

[RainbowDashie 767]

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Now that Caprisha fell Thunder realised she needed him. He quickly flew up and cought Caprisha in his arms. He set her safely on the ground in front of the enterance to the hospital and walked away. He walked down a street, there was the house Charcoal was hiding in, but he didn't know.

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Now that Caprisha fell Thunder realised she needed him. He quickly flew up and cought Caprisha in his arms. He set her safely on the ground in front of the enterance to the hospital and walked away. He walked down a street, there was the house Charcoal was hiding in, but he didn't know.

Charcoal ran out of the building. She didn't want to hid, she just wanted to release her anger on something.

 

Caprisha just sat there for a while before getting up. When she did she didn't see Thunder anywhere so she went back into the hospital. She walked back to the room and layed down on the bed.

[RainbowDashie 767]

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Thunder saw Charcoal running out of a building and he started chasing her again. "Charcoal!" He said, flying right behind her this time. "I'm sorry Char, but please, let me explain what happened. Please give me a chance." Thunder sped up a little more and tackled Charcoal down.

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Thunder saw Charcoal running out of a building and he started chasing her again. "Charcoal!" He said, flying right behind her this time. "I'm sorry Char, but please, let me explain what happened. Please give me a chance." Thunder sped up a little more and tackled Charcoal down.

Charcoal felt herself get knocked down. When she saw who it was she tried her best to get up. When she couldn't she just relented and didn't resist. "How could you Thunder? I...I trusted you and the day I get out of heat and come find you I see you kissing Caprisha." She had tears streaming down her face.

[RainbowDashie 767]

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"I... I... I don't know Charcoal." Thunders tears fell onto Charcoal's face. "I'm so sorry you had to see that." He took a deep breath. "But Caprisha and i grew very close together the last days and... You know. It happened. I'm so sorry Charcoal. I really am." Thunder dropped his head.

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"I... I... I don't know Charcoal." Thunders tears fell onto Charcoal's face. "I'm so sorry you had to see that." He took a deep breath. "But Caprisha and i grew very close together the last days and... You know. It happened. I'm so sorry Charcoal. I really am." Thunder dropped his head.

"How close did you get exactly?" Charcoal asked, anger starting to be present in her voice. "I want to trust you Thunder, but after what I just saw I'm not sure if I will be able to do that. So why don't you tell me what happened while I was gone Thunder." Charcoal said

[RainbowDashie 767]

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Thunder suddenly became nervous. I'd better be honest, even though she won't like it, she'll appreciate it later. Thunder thought. "Very close." He said. "Remember that night, well, this time i drank too much and didn't have much control over my actions." Thunder got up from Charcoal and expected a hit from Charcoal.

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Thunder suddenly became nervous. I'd better be honest, even though she won't like it, she'll appreciate it later. Thunder thought. "Very close." He said. "Remember that night, well, this time i drank too much and didn't have much control over my actions." Thunder got up from Charcoal and expected a hit from Charcoal.

Charcoal was... she didn't even know what she was, discusted, horrified? She wasn't going to be held responsible for what she was about to do. She just ran up and began letting out all of her anger and frustration out on Thunder. She cried the entire time. After a minute of this she finally stopped and began sobbing on the ground.

[RainbowDashie 767]

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Thunder picked up Charcoal and brought her back to their apartment. Upon entering thunder smelled the foul smell in the apartment, but he didn't care. He layed Charcoal on the couch. "I'm sorry Charcoal. I hope you can accept what has happened and what will happen in the future."

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Thunder picked up Charcoal and brought her back to their apartment. Upon entering thunder smelled the foul smell in the apartment, but he didn't care. He layed Charcoal on the couch. "I'm sorry Charcoal. I hope you can accept what has happened and what will happen in the future."

Charcoal didn't do anything as Thunder brought her back to the apartment. When she was placed on the couch she got up as soon as she was put down. She didn't look at Thunder as she walked to the bedroom and locked the door behind her. She got on the bed and began crying.

[RainbowDashie 767]

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Thunder leaned his forehead to the door. "If you decide you want to give me a chance, i'll be at the hospital again." Thunder said. He walked back to the hospital. He opened the door to Caprisha's door and saw her lying in the bed. "She... She knows, i chose to be honest."

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Thunder leaned his forehead to the door. "If you decide you want to give me a chance, i'll be at the hospital again." Thunder said. He walked back to the hospital. He opened the door to Caprisha's door and saw her lying in the bed. "She... She knows, i chose to be honest."

Caprisha looked at Thunder, she had a sad face after what he said. "So, how did she take it?" Caprisha asked. She was worried that Charcoal didn't take it very well. Then she saw a few bruised. "I take it she didn't take it very well?" She said as she saw the bruises.

[RainbowDashie 767]

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"Yeah. I brought her home and layed her down on the couch. She seemed mad and upset as she walked to her room and locked herself in it. But i have an idea; i'll take Lightning here so if she does come maybe he'll convince her otherwise. Otherwise she can take him."

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"Yeah. I brought her home and layed her down on the couch. She seemed mad and upset as she walked to her room and locked herself in it. But i have an idea; i'll take Lightning here so if she does come maybe he'll convince her otherwise. Otherwise she can take him."

Caprisha thought it might just work. "I guess if you want to convince her that you still care about her is to get her child. She must want desperately to trust you but she also thinks that you have crushed her trusts as well. Showing her Lightning isn't a bad idea, I just hope it works."

[RainbowDashie 767]

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"It did last time." Thunder walked of and got Lightning back from the foalsitter. "There, if that doesn't convince her." Thunder layed Lightning on a rug on the floor with a couple of toys. "But if she still hates me i still got you, right?" Thunder tried to force a smile.

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"It did last time." Thunder walked of and got Lightning back from the foalsitter. "There, if that doesn't convince her." Thunder layed Lightning on a rug on the floor with a couple of toys. "But if she still hates me i still got you, right?" Thunder tried to force a smile.

"But what does that say about your relationship with Charcoal? If you really love her than you will do whatever you can to gain her trust back." Caprisha said, then she smiled a little. "Plus, wouldn't you like to have the love from two mares that you love?"

[RainbowDashie 767]

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"I would, but if she hates me now i don't think i can change her mind, unless i do something drastically, but that can go two ways." Thunder said, sitting on the bed with Caprisha. "Do you think Charcoal will come look for me, i told her i'd be here so she knows where to look."

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"I would, but if she hates me now i don't think i can change her mind, unless i do something drastically, but that can go two ways." Thunder said, sitting on the bed with Caprisha. "Do you think Charcoal will come look for me, i told her i'd be here so she knows where to look."

"I say give her a little time to cool down. She is probably very upset at everything that is going on right now." Caprisha said. "So what's are we going to do until she gets here? I can't really do anything right now and most thing done in a bed would make Charcoal even more upset if she caught us."

[RainbowDashie 767]

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"Wasn't planning on doing such things right now anyway." Thunder looked at the clock. 6 AM. "I think we should be going to sleep. We've been awake the entire night and if Charcoal comes i'd like to be awake." Thunder said, getting of the bed and into a chair. "Good night."

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"Wasn't planning on doing such things right now anyway." Thunder looked at the clock. 6 AM. "I think we should be going to sleep. We've been awake the entire night and if Charcoal comes i'd like to be awake." Thunder said, getting of the bed and into a chair. "Good night."

Caprisha rested her head on the pillow. "Good night." Caprisha said as she began to fall asleep. She had a dreamless night that time, Luna must have been watching her. She awoke the next morning feeling much better than she had yesterday. She looked up and saw that she had left the window open. She instinctively tried closing it with her magic for several seconds before remembering. She cried a little but got up and went to shut the window. But before she did she saw Charcoal walking toward the hospital. She was a mess, her mane wasn't combed and she looked like she had been crying for hours. She forgot the window and walked over to Thunder, she began shaking him awake. "Thunder, she's coming."

[RainbowDashie 767]

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"Huh wha who? Who's coming Prish? Oh, you mean Charcoal." He walked to the window to see if he could find Charcoal, but he couldn't. "She must've gone inside already. Go back to the bed and let me do the talking okay? She won't be happy if she sees you with Lightning." He said, picking Lightning up.