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Jack scanned Charcoal How is she healthy? "You haven't taken care of your body. How are you still in tip top shape? At least physically. I've always had tried to be careful with my body and I feel good. But how are you still good? Do you have a secret of infinite health?"

Charcoal thought for a moment but thought of nothing. "Honestly I have no idea. Maybe it is a lack of stress, I don't know. Actually, now that I think about it there are actually a lot of things that I do that would be considered bad for my health. No drugs or alcohol or anything like that but other stuff."

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Spades wanted to go out and do something, though she was still a little tired, she was too excited to even care about how much she wanted to curl up in bed, she looks at the still full suit cases. "I'll unpack later" she shrugs. Spades trots down the stairs and into the lobby, she sees a cafe to her right,(unless you have never been in a hotel you should know they usually have one lol) "maybe a quick coffee to vake me up" (heh yea I emphasize my OCs accents, just for realistic feeling you know) she trots on in to purchase her drink.

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Charcoal thought for a moment but thought of nothing. "Honestly I have no idea. Maybe it is a lack of stress, I don't know. Actually, now that I think about it there are actually a lot of things that I do that would be considered bad for my health. No drugs or alcohol or anything like that but other stuff."

"Yeah. No alcohol." Jack was a bit embarrassed. "Let's find a hotel. I'm feeling like a drink." Jack  said heading to the exit ((OOC: Gate? Door? Where do we exit? I'm gonna say gate, because I don't know.)) gate. "Let's find a nice hotel. I hope Paris has good service and that there's a mini-fridge." I can live without that.


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"Yeah. No alcohol." Jack was a bit embarrassed. "Let's find a hotel. I'm feeling like a drink." Jack said heading to the exit ((OOC: Gate? Door? Where do we exit? I'm gonna say gate, because I don't know.)) gate. "Let's find a nice hotel. I hope Paris has good service and that there's a mini-fridge." I can live without that.

"That goes back to my point before, lots of ponies probably visit Paris. And the ponies that actually live here never seem to be very short on money. So I don't think you need to worry about not having something in your hotel room." Charcoal explains to Jack.

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"That goes back to my point before, lots of ponies probably visit Paris. And the ponies that actually live here never seem to be very short on money. So I don't think you need to worry about not having something in your hotel room." Charcoal explains to Jack.

"Good point." Jack complimented. "But lets get to the city. I can't wait to do all there is to do. Experience experiences I've never experienced before." Jack looked out of the gate. Outside, Jack saw a giant city with buildings, ponies, and cars. "This place is beautiful!"


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Dog Ears chuckled. "Onward and forward it is!" He began following Blazing. Looking around at the other ponies, it seemed they were all preoccupied. Maybe he would get to meet some of them later. BUt right now he was with Blazing so he would wait until later to meet other ponies. 

He didn't think that was weird did he? Blazing wondered. He ignored it for the time being and just got off the plane. Once he was off, he didn't know what to do next. "So... What should we do now?" He asked. He had completely forgotten that he was going to get away from everyone once he was off.


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"Good point." Jack complimented. "But lets get to the city. I can't wait to do all there is to do. Experience experiences I've never experienced before." Jack looked out of the gate. Outside, Jack saw a giant city with buildings, ponies, and cars. "This place is beautiful!"

"I know, look at how well those carvings are. Or the Eiffel tower and how incredibly constructed it is. Just so much great architecture in just one city." Charcoal said, her eyes sparkling at the sight of all the different kinds of stuff she could make if she had the patience to do so.

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"I know, look at how well those carvings are. Or the Eiffel tower and how incredibly constructed it is. Just so much great architecture in just one city." Charcoal said, her eyes sparkling at the sight of all the different kinds of stuff she could make if she had the patience to do so.

Jack's mouth was wide open in awe. The way the sun touched everything left Paris glowing. "Let's get going! Let's have an adventure! Let's have fun! Let's... do some... Let's find a hotel!" Jack was getting excited. Jack was starting to walk down the sidewalk. "YAAAAY!"


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Jack's mouth was wide open in awe. The way the sun touched everything left Paris glowing. "Let's get going! Let's have an adventure! Let's have fun! Let's... do some... Let's find a hotel!" Jack was getting excited. Jack was starting to walk down the sidewalk. "YAAAAY!"

Charcoal walked along beside Jack but started to slow down a little because ponies were starting to stare at Jacks little scene. "Um, Jack." Charcoal calls forward, trying to get his attention. "Do you think you could possibly calm down, other ponies are beginning to stare."

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"-AAAY! Hm, what?" Jack stopped in his tracks. He slowly looked around and noticed the other ponies staring at him. Jack slowly put on an awkward smile. "Um... Happy... Yay day?" Jack giggled nervously and continued walking. This time his head was lower and he was staring at the ground."


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"-AAAY! Hm, what?" Jack stopped in his tracks. He slowly looked around and noticed the other ponies staring at him. Jack slowly put on an awkward smile. "Um... Happy... Yay day?" Jack giggled nervously and continued walking. This time his head was lower and he was staring at the ground."

Charcoal ruffles his mane and smiles. "Hey, it's alright. You were just really excited that's all. Now let's find a good hotel." Walking further along the sidewalk Charcoal was trying her best to look for a hotel, look at the architecture, and not run into anything. Unfortunately she didn't do so well at the last one as she runs into a large building.

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Charcoal ruffles his mane and smiles. "Hey, it's alright. You were just really excited that's all. Now let's find a good hotel." Walking further along the sidewalk Charcoal was trying her best to look for a hotel, look at the architecture, and not run into anything. Unfortunately she didn't do so well at the last one as she runs into a large building.

Jack witnessed Charcoal's mistake "How did... But it's so... It was right in front... How can anyone..." Jack was trying to gather his thoughts. Some ponies just make mistakes. Jack walked to Charcoal. This time he was out of words. "Let's just find that hotel before I make another scene, or you walk into something else." Jack grabbed Charcoal's hoof and slowly guided her down the street until he saw a nice building that had a sign that said "Hotel" Perfect!


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Jack witnessed Charcoal's mistake "How did... But it's so... It was right in front... How can anyone..." Jack was trying to gather his thoughts. Some ponies just make mistakes. Jack walked to Charcoal. This time he was out of words. "Let's just find that hotel before I make another scene, or you walk into something else." Jack grabbed Charcoal's hoof and slowly guided her down the street until he saw a nice building that had a sign that said "Hotel" Perfect!

"Hey." Charcoal takes her hoof out of Jacks grip. "I'm not a foal, I don't need you to hold my hoof along the way." Charcoal said, still a little disoriented from her collision. "Say, I have to ask you. How is it an earth pony like yourself is making three of himself?"

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"Hey." Charcoal takes her hoof out of Jacks grip. "I'm not a foal, I don't need you to hold my hoof along the way." Charcoal said, still a little disoriented from her collision. "Say, I have to ask you. How is it an earth pony like yourself is making three of himself?"

Jack laughed "You might as well be one if you keep running into stuff." Jack turned Charcoal's head towards the hotel "I think we've found our place. What do you think? Looks homely." Jack started to calmly walking towards the hotel. "I like it. Sort of cozy. Not to big, nor small." 


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Jack laughed "You might as well be one if you keep running into stuff." Jack turned Charcoal's head towards the hotel "I think we've found our place. What do you think? Looks homely." Jack started to calmly walking towards the hotel. "I like it. Sort of cozy. Not to big, nor small."

Charcoal tried to see the hotel Jack was talking about but three of them swam in her vision. "Hey Jack, which hotel are you talking about? I see three hotels there, not one. So is it the hotel on the left, the hotel on the right, or the hotel in the middle of them?"

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Charcoal tried to see the hotel Jack was talking about but three of them swam in her vision. "Hey Jack, which hotel are you talking about? I see three hotels there, not one. So is it the hotel on the left, the hotel on the right, or the hotel in the middle of them?"

"It's... middle?" Jack guessed. "Just be careful. Okay? I don't wan't you getting hurt for the third time." Jack put a hoof gently on Charcoal's back "Before you knock my hoof of. I want you to know that I'm guiding you for your health. Let's get you to your hotel room then I'll let you take care of yourself. Okay?"


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"It's... middle?" Jack guessed. "Just be careful. Okay? I don't wan't you getting hurt for the third time." Jack put a hoof gently on Charcoal's back "Before you knock my hoof of. I want you to know that I'm guiding you for your health. Let's get you to your hotel room then I'll let you take care of yourself. Okay?"

Physical contact, plus disorientation, plus being in heat equals not good. Charcoal backs out of his hoof again. "No, no it is ok. I'll be alright on my own." She begins walking in the general direction of the hotel. Thankfully there were not very many ponies around so she didn't run into anyone. "See I can walk on my own." She says as she blows a raspberry at Jack. Turning her head back around and almost runs into another wall. Looking around she find the hotel again. Walking to the front doors, which were open, she walks through the middle. Unfortunately there was a metal pole in the middle to stop the doors.

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Physical contact, plus disorientation, plus being in heat equals not good. Charcoal backs out of his hoof again. "No, no it is ok. I'll be alright on my own." She begins walking in the general direction of the hotel. Thankfully there were not very many ponies around so she didn't run into anyone. "See I can walk on my own." She says as she blows a raspberry at Jack. Turning her head back around and almost runs into another wall. Looking around she find the hotel again. Walking to the front doors, which were open, she walks through the middle. Unfortunately there was a metal pole in the middle to stop the doors.

Jack laughed extra hard. He walked past Charcoal "I don't even feel bad." Jack returned the raspberry. "Know you know how it feels." Jack went to the reception desk where a French mare was sitting. "Two rooms please. Both having twin size beds. and I think that's about it." Jack put down some money. He received two keys from the mare and threw one at Charcoal. "Careful." Jack mocked. He didn't like mocking other ponies, but there was a line. She crossed that line. He has forgiven her now.


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Jack laughed extra hard. He walked past Charcoal "I don't even feel bad." Jack returned the raspberry. "Know you know how it feels." Jack went to the reception desk where a French mare was sitting. "Two rooms please. Both having twin size beds. and I think that's about it." Jack put down some money. He received two keys from the mare and threw one at Charcoal. "Careful." Jack mocked. He didn't like mocking other ponies, but there was a line. She crossed that line. He has forgiven her now.

Three hits to the head isn't exactly good for a pony. She had heard what he had said but was surprised to find a key thrown at her. With shaky hooves she tries to pick it up but she isn't able to and stumbles. She tries to get back up but with how she was at the moment it wasn't happening. "Um, Jack. Would you mind helping me please?"

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Three hits to the head isn't exactly good for a pony. She had heard what he had said but was surprised to find a key thrown at her. With shaky hooves she tries to pick it up but she isn't able to and stumbles. She tries to get back up but with how she was at the moment it wasn't happening. "Um, Jack. Would you mind helping me please?"

Jack thought for a second. "You poor thing. I can't bear to see a mare being tortured." He grabbed Charcoal's hoof and pulled her up. He also snatched Charcoal's key that was on the ground. "Here, you might want this." Jack smiled. "Let's take you to your room shall we?" 


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Jack thought for a second. "You poor thing. I can't bear to see a mare being tortured." He grabbed Charcoal's hoof and pulled her up. He also snatched Charcoal's key that was on the ground. "Here, you might want this." Jack smiled. "Let's take you to your room shall we?"

"Thank you." Charcoal takes the key and puts it in her saddlebags. Taking slow steps Charcoal allows Jack to lead her to where she assumes her room is. "Sorry about acting a bit like a jerk back there and not letting you help me." Charcoal says, being honest.

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"Thank you." Charcoal takes the key and puts it in her saddlebags. Taking slow steps Charcoal allows Jack to lead her to where she assumes her room is. "Sorry about acting a bit like a jerk back there and not letting you help me." Charcoal says, being honest.

"I should be sorry for laughing at you." Jack stopped right in front of a door. "We all are dumb at times. Anyways, here's your room. Mine is right down the hall three doors down. I'm gonna go throw my bag in my room and then I'll wait for you out here for the bar!" Jack's mouth was watering. 


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"I should be sorry for laughing at you." Jack stopped right in front of a door. "We all are dumb at times. Anyways, here's your room. Mine is right down the hall three doors down. I'm gonna go throw my bag in my room and then I'll wait for you out here for the bar!" Jack's mouth was watering.

"Thanks, I'll see you in a minute then." Walking into her room Charcoal places her bags down on the floor by the door. After doing that she found the bathroom she turns on the sink and splashes herself with water. Afterwords though the decides to simply just take a shower. After finishing her shower she dries herself off she feels much better than she did when she came into the hotel. Doing up her mane like she usually does she grabs her bags and walk out to meet Jack.

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"Thanks, I'll see you in a minute then." Walking into her room Charcoal places her bags down on the floor by the door. After doing that she found the bathroom she turns on the sink and splashes herself with water. Afterwords though the decides to simply just take a shower. After finishing her shower she dries herself off she feels much better than she did when she came into the hotel. Doing up her mane like she usually does she grabs her bags and walk out to meet Jack.

Jack quickly runs to his room and throws his bag on the bed spreading cards everywhere. But there wasn't time for cleaning. It's bar and Charcoal time. He jumped out of the room, took his key and locked the door behind him. He ran to Charcoal's door and sat there waiting. Not long after, Charcoal comes out of the door. "Heya!"


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Jack quickly runs to his room and throws his bag on the bed spreading cards everywhere. But there wasn't time for cleaning. It's bar and Charcoal time. He jumped out of the room, took his key and locked the door behind him. He ran to Charcoal's door and sat there waiting. Not long after, Charcoal comes out of the door. "Heya!"

"Hello to you to." Charcoal said with a smile as she locks her door and puts her key back in her bag. "So let's go then." She starts walking down the hallway to get back to the lobby. Despite being very disorienting Charcoal remembered absolutely nothing about the layout of the hotel. She turns around to face Jack. "Say, you wouldn't happen to know where we need to go do you?"

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