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"It isn't that hard." Charcoal said. "It isn't like I was burned or cut. Blunt objects only leave wounds on the skin that don't stay for long and aren't very noticeable. If she had used knives or other sharp tools I would be in bad shape. All I really needed a shower for was to wash of the beer that was spilled on me and to make it easier to find more glass shards."

"Still. A beer bottle bottle to the head. And it was full. That's known for giving many ponies concussions. The only ponies who can take it is when they really train their body by..." Jack paused Masochist Jack let out a big long "Oh" upon remembering what Charcoal does in her time of free. 


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"Still. A beer bottle bottle to the head. And it was full. That's known for giving many ponies concussions. The only ponies who can take it is when they really train their body by..." Jack paused Masochist Jack let out a big long "Oh" upon remembering what Charcoal does in her time of free.

"Now you see." Charcoal said, nodding. "You don't need to worry about me getting hurt, I've become quite the wall over the years. I can take a hit Jack, I'm not just some damsel in distress." Charcoal said with a smile then patted Jack on the head. "Don't worry, I don't look at you any less because a mare can take more than you can. Physically anyway."

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"Now you see." Charcoal said, nodding. "You don't need to worry about me getting hurt, I've become quite the wall over the years. I can take a hit Jack, I'm not just some damsel in distress." Charcoal said with a smile then patted Jack on the head. "Don't worry, I don't look at you any less because a mare can take more than you can. Physically anyway."

"Yeah, maybe. Wait what? What do you mean "a mare can take more of a hit then you." huh?" Jack felt challenged "What makes you think I'm a fanny? You have no proof. If you want to prove it then here." Jack put out his arm "Hit it." Jack was serious "C'mon then, hit it. Or are you a fanny?"


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"Yeah, maybe. Wait what? What do you mean "a mare can take more of a hit then you." huh?" Jack felt challenged "What makes you think I'm a fanny? You have no proof. If you want to prove it then here." Jack put out his arm "Hit it." Jack was serious "C'mon then, hit it. Or are you a fanny?"

"Are you sure about this, you are asking a mare that carries around a few hundred pounds of supplies for building everyday." Charcoal asked, arching a brow. "If you really want me to that's alright but I thought I might want to warn you about that before I do."

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"Are you sure about this, you are asking a mare that carries around a few hundred pounds of supplies for building everyday." Charcoal asked, arching a brow. "If you really want me to that's alright but I thought I might want to warn you about that before I do."

"Oh look the fanny is now a pansy!" Jack mocked C'mon "Prove to me that I can take more at least as much as you can." Jack stood his ground, bracing his whole body. "Just because you hurt yourself like a goth on his birthday doesn't mean you are strong enough to take down Jack Spades." Jack said forgetting what Charcoal previously said.


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Crystal was stumped. She had no idea what she would do. "I think I should... I will... Hmp. I do not know. I think the main priority is getting our accommodation in place. And then I think a stroll would be nice. Perhaps see a few sights. Though you really should focus on getting out of the airport."

Quill laughed. "Yeah, that's true." He continued walking out of the airport. He smiled, looking at the environment around him. There was plenty nature and glamorous buildings. He searched his memories for the map of Paris he had looked up before heading for the hotel mentioned in the letter.


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"Oh look the fanny is now a pansy!" Jack mocked C'mon "Prove to me that I can take more at least as much as you can." Jack stood his ground, bracing his whole body. "Just because you hurt yourself like a goth on his birthday doesn't mean you are strong enough to take down Jack Spades." Jack said forgetting what Charcoal previously said.

Charcoal rolls her eyes at Jacks not very good insult. "Alright, whatever you asked for it." Charcoal said with a shrug. Taking half a step away from Jack so that she had some room she begins to wind up a punch. With Charcoal it is either go big or go home so Charcoal wasn't going to hold back. In one quick swing she hits Jack as hard as she can right in his arm.

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Charcoal rolls her eyes at Jacks not very good insult. "Alright, whatever you asked for it." Charcoal said with a shrug. Taking half a step away from Jack so that she had some room she begins to wind up a punch. With Charcoal it is either go big or go home so Charcoal wasn't going to hold back. In one quick swing she hits Jack as hard as she can right in his arm.

Charcoals hoof came into contact with Jack. It almost blew him away. But for some reason, it didn't hurt. "Ha! See, I..." suddenly he felt the most terrible pain in his arm. Jack screamed in pain while falling on the ground "Oh holy Celestia!" Jack yelled while rolling around on the ground "Sheriff was right! Tartaurus has nothing compared mare's rage!" Jack winced. His teeth were clenched.


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Charcoals hoof came into contact with Jack. It almost blew him away. But for some reason, it didn't hurt. "Ha! See, I..." suddenly he felt the most terrible pain in his arm. Jack screamed in pain while falling on the ground "Oh holy Celestia!" Jack yelled while rolling around on the ground "Sheriff was right! Tartaurus has nothing compared mare's rage!" Jack winced. His teeth were clenched.

Charcoal watched as Jack fell down to the ground. She wasn't sure whether she should be worried, or whether she should be laughing. She started to chuckle a bit. "Ok I'm sorry about that Jack, but you did ask for this. Do you need me to call you an aberlamps?"

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Charcoal watched as Jack fell down to the ground. She wasn't sure whether she should be worried, or whether she should be laughing. She started to chuckle a bit. "Okay, I'm sorry about that Jack, but you did ask for this. Do you need me to call you an aberlamps?"

Jack tried to hold his yelling and tried to get up. He was shaking a bit "Oh firetruck. That hurt. I'm not even going to ask." Jack looked at his right arm and saw a big bruise. It was a little hard to see, but it was there. A tear was starting to roll down his cheek. He tried to hide it with his left hoof. "Well. Let's keep going shall we?" Jack said putting a fake smile to reassure Charcoal. 


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Jack tried to hold his yelling and tried to get up. He was shaking a bit "Oh firetruck. That hurt. I'm not even going to ask." Jack looked at his right arm and saw a big bruise. It was a little hard to see, but it was there. A tear was starting to roll down his cheek. He tried to hide it with his left hoof. "Well. Let's keep going shall we?" Jack said putting a fake smile to reassure Charcoal.

"You are not going to walk around with your leg hurt like that." Charcoal said. "It was funny before but I'm not going to let you walk around on a leg I punched. If you still want to continue I can carry you but first I need to get you to a doctor." Charcoal said, with a serious face and tone.

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"You are not going to walk around with your leg hurt like that." Charcoal said. "It was funny before but I'm not going to let you walk around on a leg I punched. If you still want to continue I can carry you but first I need to get you to a doctor." Charcoal said, with a serious face and tone.

"W-what? Doctor? Did you really get me that hard? Did you break my bones? All I got was a bruise. It will get better." Jack took a step foreword. He put his weight on his left arm and instantly fell on his face. "I wanna take a nap. Can we go back to the hotel?" Jack said with his face still in the ground. 


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"W-what? Doctor? Did you really get me that hard? Did you break my bones? All I got was a bruise. It will get better." Jack took a step foreword. He put his weight on his left arm and instantly fell on his face. "I wanna take a nap. Can we go back to the hotel?" Jack said with his face still in the ground.

"I don't know how badly you are hurt but that is why I want to get you checked out." Charcoal explained. "I don't know how much force I can punch with but I don't want to take any chances with my friends. So either you come willingly or I will drag you there myself."

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"I don't know how badly you are hurt but that is why I want to get you checked out." Charcoal explained. "I don't know how much force I can punch with but I don't want to take any chances with my friends. So either you come willingly or I will drag you there myself."

"B-but I don't want to go to the d-doctor." Jack said with some fear in his voice while slowly standing back up "Let's just go back to the hotel." Jack took a few steps in the direction of the hotel without using his right arm making him limp "See? I can walk. It's just a bruise." Jack put his right arm down and put slight weight on it. It began to shake. Jack looked back to Charcoal with a worried face "Please don't take me to the doctor."


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"B-but I don't want to go to the d-doctor." Jack said with some fear in his voice while slowly standing back up "Let's just go back to the hotel." Jack took a few steps in the direction of the hotel without using his right arm making him limp "See? I can walk. It's just a bruise." Jack put his right arm down and put slight weight on it. It began to shake. Jack looked back to Charcoal with a worried face "Please don't take me to the doctor."

Charcoal wanted to bring Jack to make sure his arm was ok but... "Jack... I want to make sure you are ok. What are you so worried about, are you scared of a pony helping make sure that help with injuries and make sure that they don't get worse? You need to tell me."

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Charcoal wanted to bring Jack to make sure his arm was ok but... "Jack... I want to make sure you are ok. What are you so worried about, are you scared of a pony helping make sure that help with injuries and make sure that they don't get worse? You need to tell me."

"Yeah, making sure that I'm healthy." Jack said sarcastically "I'm not sure that you know this, but a doctor ruined my life. When the doctor told my parents that I had thought disorder, they ran away. Then when everyone else found out, I was an outcast. I'm afraid of the doctor and I'm not proud."


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"Yeah, making sure that I'm healthy." Jack said sarcastically "I'm not sure that you know this, but a doctor ruined my life. When the doctor told my parents that I had thought disorder, they ran away. Then when everyone else found out, I was an outcast. I'm afraid of the doctor and I'm not proud."

Charcoal rubber her nose between her glasses. "I have a few questions about that. 1, who is here to outcast you? 2, we aren't checking if there is anything wrong with your head we are checking your arm. 3, I don't want you walking around on that arm so... I'm sorry but I'm not going to give you much of a choice. I want to help you Jack."

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Charcoal rubber her nose between her glasses. "I have a few questions about that. 1, who is here to outcast you? 2, we aren't checking if there is anything wrong with your head we are checking your arm. 3, I don't want you walking around on that arm so... I'm sorry but I'm not going to give you much of a choice. I want to help you Jack."

"You want to help me?" Jack sighed "That's the third time I've heard that." Jack lowered his head "Alright. Let's go. But don't be surprised if I jump out the window due to pure fear." Jack said with a rare serious voice. Jack limped to Charcoal. "I know you want to help. But can you blame a scared foal?"


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"You want to help me?" Jack sighed "That's the third time I've heard that." Jack lowered his head "Alright. Let's go. But don't be surprised if I jump out the window due to pure fear." Jack said with a rare serious voice. Jack limped to Charcoal. "I know you want to help. But can you blame a scared foal?"

"Don't worry, I understand that you are scared. I'm the same way whenever my parents come to town." Charcoal said. "But this can be helped and I will be with you the entire time, I won't let them do anything weird to you. Ok?" Charcoal said, then smiled a little. "And since I'm the one who hurt you so I think I should to this." Charcoal said as she crawled under Jack and picked him up on her back. "Alrighty then, lets get there before all this physical contact gets to my head." Charcoal said as she begins walking towards where she thinks the hospital might be.

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"Don't worry, I understand that you are scared. I'm the same way whenever my parents come to town." Charcoal said. "But this can be helped and I will be with you the entire time, I won't let them do anything weird to you. Okay?" Charcoal said, then smiled a little. "And since I'm the one who hurt you so I think I should to this." Charcoal said as she crawled under Jack and picked him up on her back. "Alrighty then, lets get there before all this physical contact gets to my head." Charcoal said as she begins walking towards where she thinks the hospital might be.

Jack was surprised when Charcoal picked him up "Whoa!" Jack tried to hold on a bit "Mare, you crazy." Jack blushed a bit Isn't she nice? "Yeah." When was the last time someone has helped you out. "I can't remember." Do you think that she is noticing you talking to no one else? "I think so." Let's be quiet. "Yeah."


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Jack was surprised when Charcoal picked him up "Whoa!" Jack tried to hold on a bit "Mare, you crazy." Jack blushed a bit Isn't she nice? "Yeah." When was the last time someone has helped you out. "I can't remember." Do you think that she is noticing you talking to no one else? "I think so." Let's be quiet. "Yeah."

After walking for a while and asking a few locals Charcoal finally found the hospital. Walking in with Jack still on her back she walks up to the front desk panting. "Excuse me... I... need someone to... check my friends... arm." She said between breaths. After the mare walks off a nurse comes and puts Jack on a bed and brings him to a room where Charcoal follows.

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After walking for a while and asking a few locals Charcoal finally found the hospital. Walking in with Jack still on her back she walks up to the front desk panting. "Excuse me... I... need someone to... check my friends... arm." She said between breaths. After the mare walks off a nurse comes and puts Jack on a bed and brings him to a room where Charcoal follows.

On the hospital bed Jack was completely silent. He started to feel bugs all around him. He started to wipe his arms and his back at the sensation of bugs on his skin. "Charcoal." he whispered "I'm scared. I see other ponies. I wonder what they are here for. I don't wanna die."


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On the hospital bed Jack was completely silent. He started to feel bugs all around him. He started to wipe his arms and his back at the sensation of bugs on his skin. "Charcoal." he whispered "I'm scared. I see other ponies. I wonder what they are here for. I don't wanna die."

With the best motherly voice she can muster Charcoal response. "It's ok Jack, you aren't going to die. The worst possible thing that could happen is if your arm is broken, and I don't think I can punch that hard." Charcoal places her hoof on his. "You are going to be fine."

 

Just then the doctor walks through the door. "Well hello there, what seems to be-" he cuts himself off when he sees Charcoal holding Jacks hoof. "Oh I'm sorry, am I interrupting something?"

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With the best motherly voice she can muster Charcoal response. "It's ok Jack, you aren't going to die. The worst possible thing that could happen is if your arm is broken, and I don't think I can punch that hard." Charcoal places her hoof on his. "You are going to be fine."

 

Just then the doctor walks through the door. "Well hello there, what seems to be-" he cuts himself off when he sees Charcoal holding Jacks hoof. "Oh I'm sorry, am I interrupting something?"

Jack stared at the doctor as he came in. There he is. Bringer of bad news. "Uhm... I... d-don't... think... uh, so..." Jack answered slowly and shakily. Jack turned to Charcoal. "Please don't leave." Jack whispered "I see the evil in his eyes. He's looking into my soul. And look how many pens he has,"

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Jack stared at the doctor as he came in. There he is. Bringer of bad news. "Uhm... I... d-don't... think... uh, so..." Jack answered slowly and shakily. Jack turned to Charcoal. "Please don't leave." Jack whispered "I see the evil in his eyes. He's looking into my soul. And look how many pens he has,"

"It will be fine Jack." Charcoal whispers back. "And he doesn't have that many pens." Charcoal turns back to the doctor. "So, how is he doc?" Charcoal asked

 

"Well it seems your coltfriend here just seems to have an especially bad bruise." The doctor said. "He seems to have a borderline sprain so he should at least be careful when he goes out to walk. I would recommend a leg crutch to help with that."

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