private A vacation in Paris!

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"Whatever you say." Charcoal took out her key. She struggled a bit with doing it but she eventually got her key in and turned it. Putting it back in her bag she begins to walk in, but then turns around and gives Jack a quick kiss before going into her room and shutting the door. Completely forgetting about her saddlebags she crawls into bed and falls asleep almost as soon as her head hit the pillow.

"Well. Good thing I had my key in here." Jack dug through the purse, trying to avoid anything that wasn't his until he found his room key. Jack walked into his room and put the saddlebags on the bed. He lied down beside them, looking into them as if it was Charcoal herself. Everything went black. Good night.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Well. Good thing I had my key in here." Jack dug through the purse, trying to avoid anything that wasn't his until he found his room key. Jack walked into his room and put the saddlebags on the bed. He lied down beside them, looking into them as if it was Charcoal herself. Everything went black. Good night.

Charcoal slowly woke, though she wished she hadn't. She had woken up to the worst possible headache she had ever gotten. And the sun wasn't helping matters any. "This is why Luna is better. At least her moon doesn't hurt anypony." She mumbled to herself. She decided to take a shower to see if that would help any.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal slowly woke, though she wished she hadn't. She had woken up to the worst possible headache she had ever gotten. And the sun wasn't helping matters any. "This is why Luna is better. At least her moon doesn't hurt anypony." She mumbled to herself. She decided to take a shower to see if that would help any.

Jack woke up to the sun on his eyes. Upon waking up he thought he was in a dream. Until he saw the saddlebags. We should return that. "I was. Geesh!" Jack was starting to get tired of his mind. Jack picked up the bags, went out of his room, locked up, and put the key in her bag. "I can't be bothered to take care of it." Jack walked to Charcoal's door and knocked.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack woke up to the sun on his eyes. Upon waking up he thought he was in a dream. Until he saw the saddlebags. We should return that. "I was. Geesh!" Jack was starting to get tired of his mind. Jack picked up the bags, went out of his room, locked up, and put the key in her bag. "I can't be bothered to take care of it." Jack walked to Charcoal's door and knocked.

Charcoal was in the middle of her shower when she heard a knock. The shower had help and she didn't really want to get out but she didn't want to be rude. Getting out and wrapping a towel around her mane and across her back she walks to the door and opens it to reveal Jack. "Oh hey Jack, what's up?"

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Charcoal was in the middle of her shower when she heard a knock. The shower had help and she didn't really want to get out but she didn't want to be rude. Getting out and wrapping a towel around her mane and across her back she walks to the door and opens it to reveal Jack. "Oh hey Jack, what's up?"

Jack returned the greeting that was given to him. "Just got up." Jack held out Charcoal's bags in his hoof. It was in good shape except for a few winkles. "You left this in my care last night. I'm here to give it back to you." Jack opened the bag and let Charcoal see inside. "I took nothing. But it may be a bit wrinkled now. It was sorta my hug buddy for last night."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack returned the greeting that was given to him. "Just got up." Jack held out Charcoal's bags in his hoof. It was in good shape except for a few winkles. "You left this in my care last night. I'm here to give it back to you." Jack opened the bag and let Charcoal see inside. "I took nothing. But it may be a bit wrinkled now. It was sorta my hug buddy for last night."

Charcoal slowly took her bag back. Why does he even have my bag in the first place. Charcoal thought to herself. She was truly confused at how Jack had gotten a hold of her bag. "Why is it you have my bag? Why did I leave it in your care, I almost never let this thing out of my sight." After thinking for a minute Charcoal relised she didn't remember anything from last night. "Wait, what did I do last night. I can't seem to remember anything."

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal slowly took her bag back. Why does he even have my bag in the first place. Charcoal thought to herself. She was truly confused at how Jack had gotten a hold of her bag. "Why is it you have my bag? Why did I leave it in your care, I almost never let this thing out of my sight." After thinking for a minute Charcoal relised she didn't remember anything from last night. "Wait, what did I do last night. I can't seem to remember anything."

Jack broke down laughing. "oh my gosh! Your face! It's priceless!" Jack rolled around on the ground for a sec then quickly got up. "I understand that you're scared. Last night we got separated. You went to a bar, got drunk as a Las Pegasus loser, kissed me, got hit by a stallion with your bottle of half full Wild Pegasus, I took you to your hotel room, you gave me another kiss, and accidentally left your bags with me. It's not that bad. Without your bag, I wouldn't have been able to get in my room. I left my keys in there."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack broke down laughing. "oh my gosh! Your face! It's priceless!" Jack rolled around on the ground for a sec then quickly got up. "I understand that you're scared. Last night we got separated. You went to a bar, got drunk as a Las Pegasus loser, kissed me, got hit by a stallion with your bottle of half full Wild Pegasus, I took you to your hotel room, you gave me another kiss, and accidentally left your bags with me. It's not that bad. Without your bag, I wouldn't have been able to get in my room. I left my keys in there."

"I what?!?!" Charcoal exclaimed. Getting drunk was a surprise, getting hit with a bottle was nothing, accidentally leaving her bags with Jack was meh, but kissing Jack not only once, but twice! "I-I-I." Charcoal couldn't seem to form any words. Charcoal first and second kiss had both been with her friend and while she was drunk. She wasn't exactly liking this.

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"I what?!?!" Charcoal exclaimed. Getting drunk was a surprise, getting hit with a bottle was nothing, accidentally leaving her bags with Jack was meh, but kissing Jack not only once, but twice! "I-I-I." Charcoal couldn't seem to form any words. Charcoal first and second kiss had both been with her friend and while she was drunk. She wasn't exactly liking this.

"Oh, yes. Right! I almost forgot!" Jack remembered. "There was nothing I could've done about you kissing me. The first kiss was good but interrupted. The other one was rushed. And you gave me a very seductive look that may... or may not have fully met it's purpose."

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"Oh, yes. Right! I almost forgot!" Jack remembered. "There was nothing I could've done about you kissing me. The first kiss was good but interrupted. The other one was rushed. And you gave me a very seductive look that may... or may not have fully met it's purpose."

The news Jack kept feeding her was going from bad to worse. She hated herself so much after hearing about this. She decided to go with her normal method of dealing with situations like this. "E-excuse me for a moment." Charcoal almost whispered as she went back into her room. Taking a deep breath and taking off the towel on her mane she find an empty bookshelf and proceeds to smash herself into it then makes it fall ontop of her.

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The news Jack kept feeding her was going from bad to worse. She hated herself so much after hearing about this. She decided to go with her normal method of dealing with situations like this. "E-excuse me for a moment." Charcoal almost whispered as she went back into her room. Taking a deep breath and taking off the towel on her mane she find an empty bookshelf and proceeds to smash herself into it then makes it fall ontop of her.

Jack's mouth was wide open in shock. "Ch-Charcoal?" Jack called out. He didn't know what to do. I don't even know, dude. "CHARCOAL!" Jack yelled. Without hesitation he ran to the bookshelf and lifted it up to the point he could see her. "Charcoal! Are you okay? Do you need medical resistance?!" Dumbmule. "I mean assistance?!"

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Jack's mouth was wide open in shock. "Ch-Charcoal?" Jack called out. He didn't know what to do. I don't even know, dude. "CHARCOAL!" Jack yelled. Without hesitation he ran to the bookshelf and lifted it up to the point he could see her. "Charcoal! Are you okay? Do you need medical resistance?!" Dumbmule. "I mean assistance?!"

Charcoal got to her hooves and shook herself off. She had a litte bit of wood shaving stuck in her wet coat, mane, and tail. "Great, now I need a second shower." She turns back to Jack. "Sorry about that, when I'm in situations like that or get frustrated this is the only way I know how to deal with it. And no, no medical assistance needed."

Edited September 3, 2013 by Charcoal Embers

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal got to her hooves and shook herself off. She had a outlet bit of wood shaving stuck in her wet coat, mane, and tail. "Great, now I need a second shower." She turns back to Jack. "Sorry about that, when I'm in situations like that or get frustrated this is the only way I know how to deal with it. And no, no medical assistance needed."

jack didn't know what to do. He just decided to sit on the floor and nod slowly. The only thing going through his mind was about how crazy Charcoal was. "A-are you alright? D-do you n-need any help?" Jack's mind was almost broken. "I know you are different. But I don't want to experience that again."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

jack didn't know what to do. He just decided to sit on the floor and nod slowly. The only thing going through his mind was about how crazy Charcoal was. "A-are you alright? D-do you n-need any help?" Jack's mind was almost broken. "I know you are different. But I don't want to experience that again."

"Hey," Charcoal sits down beside him. "it's alright, I'm fine Jack. This is just how I deal with frustration and anger, we all have our ways of doing it mine just isn't looked upon very well." Charcoal smiles at him. "And don't worry, if you didn't like it I won't do it while your around."

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"Hey," Charcoal sits down beside him. "it's alright, I'm fine Jack. This is just how I deal with frustration and anger, we all have our ways of doing it mine just isn't looked upon very well." Charcoal smiles at him. "And don't worry, if you didn't like it I won't do it while your around."

Jack smiled "thanks for considering that for me." Jack throwed his arms open "Lets hug it out, eh?" Jack kept holding out his arms. "Please don't hit me." Jack repeated to himself. "I mean you don't have to. I'm getting emotional. Not usuall. Guess it's because I've never had the chance to."

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Jack smiled "thanks for considering that for me." Jack throwed his arms open "Lets hug it out, eh?" Jack kept holding out his arms. "Please don't hit me." Jack repeated to himself. "I mean you don't have to. I'm getting emotional. Not usuall. Guess it's because I've never had the chance to."

Charcoal accepted his hug with open arms. "No problem Jack, I know that someponies don't find my methods very... good, but I can't help myself. And I don't mind if you are getting emotional, it's not like I wasn't doing it yesterday." Charcoal said as she wraped her tail around Jack without really thinking.

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Charcoal accepted his hug with open arms. "No problem Jack, I know that someponies don't find my methods very... good, but I can't help myself. And I don't mind if you are getting emotional, it's not like I wasn't doing it yesterday." Charcoal said as she wraped her tail around Jack without really thinking.

Jack felt the hug. It felt so good. Keep it up. She's so nice. Hey Jack, do you think it's time to put the moves on- "No!" Jack yelled trying to cut off his brain as if Charcoal could hear what he was thinking. He jumped out of Charcoal's arms. He looked horrified. "Sorry. It was my mind talking to me. And your tail was around me. Why are tails so..." Jack blushed "You know."

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Jack felt the hug. It felt so good. Keep it up. She's so nice. Hey Jack, do you think it's time to put the moves on- "No!" Jack yelled trying to cut off his brain as if Charcoal could hear what he was thinking. He jumped out of Charcoal's arms. He looked horrified. "Sorry. It was my mind talking to me. And your tail was around me. Why are tails so..." Jack blushed "You know."

At Jacks question Charcoal blushes as well. "I... I don't actually know why. And it seems I don't really control what my tail does a lot of the time." Charcoal said, her tail wrapping around her instead. "And you don't need to worry, so what if your mind talks to you. Maybe it can give you helpful advice?"

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At Jacks question Charcoal blushes as well. "I... I don't actually know why. And it seems I don't really control what my tail does a lot of the time." Charcoal said, her tail wrapping around her instead. "And you don't need to worry, so what if your mind talks to you. Maybe it can give you helpful advice?"

"I wish it would be a king. Instead it's being a joker." For your own good. "Shut up!" he yelled "Just shut up!" Jack shook his head back and forth as fast as he could. "Get out of my head! I don't want you anymore!" Too bad. I've been trying to help you for so long. "How? You are me! How can me help me?!" You will learn. Psycho. Jack fell over and broke down crying. "Please... get out of my head."

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"I wish it would be a king. Instead it's being a joker." For your own good. "Shut up!" he yelled "Just shut up!" Jack shook his head back and forth as fast as he could. "Get out of my head! I don't want you anymore!" Too bad. I've been trying to help you for so long. "How? You are me! How can me help me?!" You will learn. Psycho. Jack fell over and broke down crying. "Please... get out of my head."

Charcoal slowly walked up to where Jack was laying down. She used to have a friend who had voices in her head. Charcoal layer down next to him and hugged him once more. "Shh, calm down Jack. I don't want you to make the same mistake an old friend of mine did. You don't seem to like this voice in your head, but have you ever tried not fighting against it. You say you want it out of your head but if this voice is you than maybe you should listen. At least if it is you than it can't lead you down the wrong path."

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Charcoal slowly walked up to where Jack was laying down. She used to have a friend who had voices in her head. Charcoal layer down next to him and hugged him once more. "Shh, calm down Jack. I don't want you to make the same mistake an old friend of mine did. You don't seem to like this voice in your head, but have you ever tried not fighting against it. You say you want it out of your head but if this voice is you than maybe you should listen. At least if it is you than it can't lead you down the wrong path."

Jack started calming down "So what you're saying is. I should do what it is saying?" Jack stopped crying as he calculated the possibilities in his mind. "I never thought of that. Maybe it wants to have some fun, then move on." Umm... Yeah? "Cool! Thanks Charcoal!" Kiss her. Jack paused. "I don't know, Charcoal. Are you saying that?"

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Jack started calming down "So what you're saying is. I should do what it is saying?" Jack stopped crying as he calculated the possibilities in his mind. "I never thought of that. Maybe it wants to have some fun, then move on." Umm... Yeah? "Cool! Thanks Charcoal!" Kiss her. Jack paused. "I don't know, Charcoal. Are you saying that?"

"Hey, as long as it isn't saying do mass murder than by all means you should try and listen." Charcoal said, breaking away from the hug. "Though I'm not saying become its slave but if it is giving you advice then try and listen. You never know it could really help you."

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"Hey, as long as it isn't saying do mass murder than by all means you should try and listen." Charcoal said, breaking away from the hug. "Though I'm not saying become its slave but if it is giving you advice then try and listen. You never know it could really help you."

Kiss her. ​Kiss her. ​Kiss her. ​Jack's mind was spamming him. "You don't want to know what advice it's giving me." Jack is a fanny. Jack is a fanny. "I really want to kill it." Jack said trying to remain calm. What? Are you gay? "And it just crossed the line. It's getting out of control." Jack saw a book on the ground. He went over and grabbed it. "Here." Jack passed the book to Charcoal. "Give me a good whack on the head."

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Kiss her. Kiss her. Kiss her. Jack's mind was spamming him. "You don't want to know what advice it's giving me." Jack is a fanny. Jack is a fanny. "I really want to kill it." Jack said trying to remain calm. What? Are you gay? "And it just crossed the line. It's getting out of control." Jack saw a book on the ground. He went over and grabbed it. "Here." Jack passed the book to Charcoal. "Give me a good whack on the head."

"So you really want me to whack over the head with this book after what I did to your leg?" Charcoal questioned with a bit of sarcasm. "Yeah sorry, but that isn't going to happen. I hurt you once already Jack and I'm not going to do it again. How about I try this instead." Charcoal walks up and puts her face by Jacks head. "Hey, voice in Jacks head. If you can here me give Jack a break in there. And if you even think about saying anything bad about Jack, you are just badmouthing yourself as well." Charcoal said with a smile.

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(I was gone for a while, sorry...)Spades flops in her bed and lets out a long breath "what a day..." She thought of the time back at the bar. She looks at a wall mirror, her eyes were still blood red on the outside of her pupils. She looks away and closes her eyes she hears a voice in her head *you stole her friend from her, how unladylike of you...*"I'm next door to her, might as well apologize..." She says to herself out loud. She tried getting up and out of her bed, but she felt like there was an invisible wall blocking her, she never apologizes to the pony she brawled with, she usually hates them and treats them like garbage, but this one felt personal, she only caught when she was drunk, that last fight was violent instead of her usual brand of stupidity. *you can hit some pony with a bottle but you can't apologize you're pathetic.* she heard from the voice in her head. "Probably tomorrow, she's probably asleep by now..." Spades says to herself.