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"It will be fine Jack." Charcoal whispers back. "And he doesn't have that many pens." Charcoal turns back to the doctor. "So, how is he doc?" Charcoal asked

 

"Well it seems your coltfriend here just seems to have an especially bad bruise." The doctor said. "He seems to have a borderline sprain so he should at least be careful when he goes out to walk. I would recommend a leg crutch to help with that."

Jack laughed "Ooh. Coltfriend, eh?" Jack's fear looked like it was just wiped away "I don't know why, but I like this guy now. Hey doc!" Jack yelled "I have a question. For years I've had a mental problem called Thought Disorder. So I want to know how that's doing. The reason why I ask is because I'm not really showing any symptoms lately."


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Jack laughed "Ooh. Coltfriend, eh?" Jack's fear looked like it was just wiped away "I don't know why, but I like this guy now. Hey doc!" Jack yelled "I have a question. For years I've had a mental problem called Thought Disorder. So I want to know how that's doing. The reason why I ask is because I'm not really showing any symptoms lately."

Charcoal just blushed profusely and curls up in the chair trying to hide her face.

 

The doctor just gives Jack a blank expression. "I'm a medical doctor, I work with medicine. You want to find out if you still have your thought disorder talk to a psychiatrist." The doctor said walking out the door. "And since you are all done you can pick up your crutch when you leave." Then he walks away.

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Charcoal just blushed profusely and curls up in the chair trying to hide her face.

 

The doctor just gives Jack a blank expression. "I'm a medical doctor, I work with medicine. You want to find out if you still have your thought disorder talk to a psychiatrist." The doctor said walking out the door. "And since you are all done you can pick up your crutch when you leave." Then he walks away.

When the doctor walked away Jack said "I take it back. I don't like him." He saw Charcoal still embarrassed "Hey, what's wrong? You don't like that idea?" Jack laughed and got out of the bed "Remember, I'm responsible for you. Stop worrying. This is a vacation. Relax."


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When the doctor walked away Jack said "I take it back. I don't like him." He saw Charcoal still embarrassed "Hey, what's wrong? You don't like that idea?" Jack laughed and got out of the bed "Remember, I'm responsible for you. Stop worrying. This is a vacation. Relax."

"Relax? Easier said than done in my state." Charcoal said with a small grumble. "And I'm sorry if I seem like a bit of a stick in the mud, it has been quite a while since I have taken a vacation to anywhere." Charcoal said. "So, how about we get you those crutches Jack."

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"Relax? Easier said than done in my state." Charcoal said with a small grumble. "And I'm sorry if I seem like a bit of a stick in the mud, it has been quite a while since I have taken a vacation to anywhere." Charcoal said. "So, how about we get you those crutches Jack."

"Why not? I'm not going anywhere without them. I have a feeling you won't let me." Jack scanned the room he was in "Where are we going to get the crutches? I sorta wasn't paying attention when he was talking about it. Is it on the way out? Or do we have to see him?" And where's a mental doctor?


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"Why not? I'm not going anywhere without them. I have a feeling you won't let me." Jack scanned the room he was in "Where are we going to get the crutches? I sorta wasn't paying attention when he was talking about it. Is it on the way out? Or do we have to see him?" And where's a mental doctor?

"We can get crutches on the way out." Charcoal said. "Though I think a leg brace would be better. All you jag to do is put it on once and you can walk on your own and it doesn't take away from your movement much." Charcoal explained. "Hang on a sec while I go get them." Walking out Charcoal goes to the front and gets a leg brace for Jack. Walking back to his room Charcoal was actually stiled by a random stallion. Being in heat it was very hard not to accept his offer to go out for a bite to eat, but she declines remembering that she has to get back to Jack. Though it didn't help her blush either, and she still had it when she walked into Jacks room.

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"We can get crutches on the way out." Charcoal said. "Though I think a leg brace would be better. All you jag to do is put it on once and you can walk on your own and it doesn't take away from your movement much." Charcoal explained. "Hang on a sec while I go get them." Walking out Charcoal goes to the front and gets a leg brace for Jack. Walking back to his room Charcoal was actually stilled by a random stallion. Being in heat it was very hard not to accept his offer to go out for a bite to eat, but she declines remembering that she has to get back to Jack. Though it didn't help her blush either, and she still had it when she walked into Jacks room.

Jack saw Charcoal enter the room "Hey! I better brace myself!" Jack snickered "Sorry. I always love a good pun." Jack said. He saw Charcoal blushing "Still thinking about what the doctor said, eh? Marefriend?" Jack laughed "But no seriously, are you thinking that?"


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Jack saw Charcoal enter the room "Hey! I better brace myself!" Jack snickered "Sorry. I always love a good pun." Jack said. He saw Charcoal blushing "Still thinking about what the doctor said, eh? Marefriend?" Jack laughed "But no seriously, are you thinking that?"

Charcoal gave a small chuckle at Jacks rather lame pun. "It's nothing Jack, just some stallion asking if I would like to go out to eat with him. I almost accepted but then I remembered that I needed to get back to you and help you with you leg brace." Charcoal said, her blush still holding.

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Charcoal gave a small chuckle at Jacks rather lame pun. "It's nothing Jack, just some stallion asking if I would like to go out to eat with him. I almost accepted but then I remembered that I needed to get back to you and help you with you leg brace." Charcoal said, her blush still holding.

Jack rolled his eyes "Geez. He must have been crazy. Who asks mares out in a hospital? That's just messed up. Anyways. Can you get that brace on for me? I don't really know how to do it." On the outside, Jack seemed like his usual self. But in his mind, it was torture. Questions swam all over his head Would she really leave me in a hospital for a confident little french stallion? Did that doctor look at me funny? Where's a mental doctor? I want to apologize for that french mare for what happened earlier. Do I have a crazy uncle? "I don't know." Jack whispered.


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Jack rolled his eyes "Geez. He must have been crazy. Who asks mares out in a hospital? That's just messed up. Anyways. Can you get that brace on for me? I don't really know how to do it." On the outside, Jack seemed like his usual self. But in his mind, it was torture. Questions swam all over his head Would she really leave me in a hospital for a confident little french stallion? Did that doctor look at me funny? Where's a mental doctor? I want to apologize for that french mare for what happened earlier. Do I have a crazy uncle? "I don't know." Jack whispered.

"Yeah, that is a little weird. Though normally I wouldn't have even considered his offer." Charcoal said as she bent over to put the brace on Jack. "Though because of this stupid heat cycle I had actually almost left, I'm sorry for that." Charcoal said as she finished putting on Jacks brace.

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"Yeah, that is a little weird. Though normally I wouldn't have even considered his offer." Charcoal said as she bent over to put the brace on Jack. "Though because of this stupid heat cycle I had actually almost left, I'm sorry for that." Charcoal said as she finished putting on Jacks brace.

Jack's mind instantly calmed down "Don't worry. I forgive you. As I've said many, many, many, times, It's instinct. I understand that." Jack began to walk around the room to get used to the brace "Hey. Not bad. I hope it won't mess up my card playing. Or eat. Or do other things in general."


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Jack's mind instantly calmed down "Don't worry. I forgive you. As I've said many, many, many, times, It's instinct. I understand that." Jack began to walk around the room to get used to the brace "Hey. Not bad. I hope it won't mess up my card playing. Or eat. Or do other things in general."

Charcoal still sat there, mopeing. "Yeah, well I wish that instinct would just screw itself. I hate this stupid heat cycle and I wish that I didn't have to go through it!" Charcoal started screaming. Then doing a complete one-eighty she starts crying. "Oh and I just feel awful for even considering leaving you after I'm the one who hurt you."

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Charcoal still sat there, mopeing. "Yeah, well I wish that instinct would just screw itself. I hate this stupid heat cycle and I wish that I didn't have to go through it!" Charcoal started screaming. Then doing a complete one-eighty she starts crying. "Oh and I just feel awful for even considering leaving you after I'm the one who hurt you."

"Oh, oh. It's okay." Jack went over and gently held Charcoal in his arms "listen. It was my fault I got hurt and you, the true you wouldn't leave me. I know you wouldn't do that." Jack stopped holding her. "You know what, I think you should go and eat." Jack paused a second "We should eat. Together."


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"Oh, oh. It's okay." Jack went over and gently held Charcoal in his arms "listen. It was my fault I got hurt and you, the true you wouldn't leave me. I know you wouldn't do that." Jack stopped holding her. "You know what, I think you should go and eat." Jack paused a second "We should eat. Together."

At Jacks calming words reached her Charcoal began to stop crying. *sniff* "Thank you, I would like that." *grumble* At her stomach grumbling Charcoal blushed a little. "Ok I would really like that." Charcoal stands up and helps Jack get up as well. "Thank you for helping me Jack, I guess I'm more emotional when in heat."

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At Jacks calming words reached her Charcoal began to stop crying. *sniff* "Thank you, I would like that." *grumble* At her stomach grumbling Charcoal blushed a little. "Ok I would really like that." Charcoal stands up and helps Jack get up as well. "Thank you for helping me Jack, I guess I'm more emotional when in heat."

"See? Being in heat isn't all bad. Is it? There is always a time to let out all your emotions. It's not good to hold them in all the time." Jack started walking to the hospital's exit. "Let's go get some grub. I'm hungry." Jack was determined to eat something. Jack looked to his left, then right. He saw only two ponies "YAAAY!" Jack yelled shortly.


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"See? Being in heat isn't all bad. Is it? There is always a time to let out all your emotions. It's not good to hold them in all the time." Jack started walking to the hospital's exit. "Let's go get some grub. I'm hungry." Jack was determined to eat something. Jack looked to his left, then right. He saw only two ponies "YAAAY!" Jack yelled shortly.

"Yeah, well being emotional isn't exactly my thing." Charcoal said as she followed alongside Jack. "So where would you like to eat? If we are in Paris then I would like to woo where I can get some good fedachini Alfredo. My favorite kind of pasts ever." Charcoal said with a smile.

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"Yeah, well being emotional isn't exactly my thing." Charcoal said as she followed alongside Jack. "So where would you like to eat? If we are in Paris then I would like to woo where I can get some good fedachini Alfredo. My favorite kind of pasts ever." Charcoal said with a smile.

"That does sounds good." Jack said "Pasta is good. Have you ever heard of a croissant sandwich? Of course you do if you know fedachini. But I've always wanted to try a local one. It has always sounded good." Jack found the hospital's exit "i can't believe I found the exit."


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"That does sounds good." Jack said "Pasta is good. Have you ever heard of a croissant sandwich? Of course you do if you know fedachini. But I've always wanted to try a local one. It has always sounded good." Jack found the hospital's exit "i can't believe I found the exit."

"Well I hope you enjoy it. Honestly pasta isn't on top of my favorite food list." Charcoal explained. Not really thinking about it Charcoal finds herself walking a bit closer to Jack and she also is rubbing her tail up against him. Thinking about everything around him Charcoal is oblivious to what she is doing to him.

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"Well I hope you enjoy it. Honestly pasta isn't on top of my favorite food list." Charcoal explained. Not really thinking about it Charcoal finds herself walking a bit closer to Jack and she also is rubbing her tail up against him. Thinking about everything around him Charcoal is oblivious to what she is doing to him.

Jack began to feel a tail on him. Jack casually looked behind himself as if he was looking for no reason. He saw Charcoal's tail rubbing against him. Jack blushed as he looked back. It's not that bad. She doesn't need to know about this. She's been stressed out about it. If it goes too crazy, then I'll tell her. "So Charcoal, have you seen a restaurant that's badflank?"


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Jack began to feel a tail on him. Jack casually looked behind himself as if he was looking for no reason. He saw Charcoal's tail rubbing against him. Jack blushed as he looked back. It's not that bad. She doesn't need to know about this. She's been stressed out about it. If it goes too crazy, then I'll tell her. "So Charcoal, have you seen a restaurant that's badflank?"

Charcoal had been so deep in thought that Jacks question hadn't registered for a few seconds. "Oh, um sorry I guess I was distracted. But anyway no, I haven't really seen any restaurants that have stuck out to me. Just as long as their food isn't spicy I don't really care where we eat at." Charcoal said. Her tail continues to rub against Jack and Charcoal is still not noticing it.

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Charcoal had been so deep in thought that Jacks question hadn't registered for a few seconds. "Oh, um sorry I guess I was distracted. But anyway no, I haven't really seen any restaurants that have stuck out to me. Just as long as their food isn't spicy I don't really care where we eat at." Charcoal said. Her tail continues to rub against Jack and Charcoal is still not noticing it.

Jack almost took offence to that comment. Spicy food is good. Especially at Mexicolt. "I'll also keep an eye open." Except for the fact that there was hardly any good looking restaurants. Charcoal's tail started to tickle Jack's back. He tried to hold laughter, but he accidentally let out a burst of giggling.


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Jack almost took offence to that comment. Spicy food is good. Especially at Mexicolt. "I'll also keep an eye open." Except for the fact that there was hardly any good looking restaurants. Charcoal's tail started to tickle Jack's back. He tried to hold laughter, but he accidentally let out a burst of giggling.

Charcoal jumped a little when she didn't expect the giggle ((unintentional rhyme)). Then she gave Jack a weird look. "What's so funny Jack, was it something that I said? Did we pass something when I wasn't paying attention and miss it? Come on tell me." Charcoal said.

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Charcoal jumped a little when she didn't expect the giggle ((unintentional rhyme)). Then she gave Jack a weird look. "What's so funny Jack, was it something that I said? Did we pass something when I wasn't paying attention and miss it? Come on tell me." Charcoal said.

"Oh...uh... uhm... well..." Jack's mind was searching for an excuse "It's part of my thought disorder!" Jack blurted out. "Yeah... It's that." Nice one. "Yeah..." Jack saw a restaurant in the corner of his eye. "Oh thank Celestia! Look! A restaurant. It looks good. And not that expensive."


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"Oh...uh... uhm... well..." Jack's mind was searching for an excuse "It's part of my thought disorder!" Jack blurted out. "Yeah... It's that." Nice one. "Yeah..." Jack saw a restaurant in the corner of his eye. "Oh thank Celestia! Look! A restaurant. It looks good. And not that expensive."

Too much of a pause, I don't think he is telling the truth. But maybe if he isn't telling the truth I can squeeze it out of him. "So this "thought disorder", which you asked the doctor to check because you haven't been seeing the symptoms, makes you laugh at me. Well I have to say I'm offended." Charcoal says in an offended tone while sticking her nose up in the air and away from Jack to seem mad at him.

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Too much of a pause, I don't think he is telling the truth. But maybe if he isn't telling the truth I can squeeze it out of him. "So this "thought disorder", which you asked the doctor to check because you haven't been seeing the symptoms, makes you laugh at me. Well I have to say I'm offended." Charcoal says in an offended tone while sticking her nose up in the air and away from Jack to seem mad at him.

"It doesn't mean it can't come back, right? The brain is a strange part of the body. And plus, I didn't laugh at you. I just laughed for no reason." Jack's left leg was shaking. Oh darn. "Okay fine!" Jack said "Your tail was tickling me. Alright? That's it. I didn't want you to worry about your heat problem. So I said nothing."


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