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Charcoal blushed a bit at Jacks unexpected comment. "Well I'm sorry about that, I was drunk if you didn't know." Charcoal said in an sarcastic with a bit of an annoyed tone. "And I can swear, I just chose not to most of the time. I just don't see much use for swears."

"Don't be sorry. I sometimes wish you'd get drunk more often. You're a lot more fun when you are." Jack smiled. Jack heard Spades speak. Jack was even more shocked. "Charcoal. You, me, bathroom, now!" Jack went to Charcoal's ear "It's about Spades. I won't try anything funny."


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Spades sits there frozen. This was different for her to do, she then felt like she needed a drink of liqueur but she knew it wouldn't do her any good. She just sat there blank. then after a while Char is taken into the bathroom. Spades by her self gets lost in thought *I was so confused, when I was thrown out...I don't know if you know how it's like...but it's awful. I thought they'd come back, but I was just lying to myself...what the Hell?*Spades sniffles as she trails off. She hold back her sadness still.

Spades pulls off her beret and puts it on her lap.

She try's not to speak but she still did *i just don't know how to get this out of my head, other than drinking* she was just in a conversation with her thoughts

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Jack never likes to see mares sad. So he trotted away from Charcoal and to Spades. "Listen. You and I are really close. I don't mean like where we live, but. Your parents left you as a child. So did mine. Your last name is Spades. So is mine. You love to gamble. So do I. If you need someone to understand you, I'm here as a friend."

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Jack never likes to see mares sad. So he trotted away from Charcoal and to Spades. "Listen. You and I are really close. I don't mean like where we live, but. Your parents left you as a child. So did mine. Your last name is Spades. So is mine. You love to gamble. So do I. If you need someone to understand you, I'm here as a friend."

Suddenly spades comes back to reality "Well, thanks Jack." She says not making eye contact or moving "it's odd how similar we actually are." Spades was really surprised *i never seen ANYPONY so similar unless they where twins, this is pretty crazy, small world!* she thought.

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"Don't be sorry. I sometimes wish you'd get drunk more often. You're a lot more fun when you are." Jack smiled. Jack heard Spades speak. Jack was even more shocked. "Charcoal. You, me, bathroom, now!" Jack went to Charcoal's ear "It's about Spades. I won't try anything funny."

Charcoal wasn't sure if she should blush st that or not. When she was told to go to the bathroom she got serious. She followed Jack to the bathroom. "Alright, what is it you want to talk to me about exactly." Charcoal asked. Then she watched as Jack went to tell Spades something.

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Crystal was in awe at the scenery. She remembered very little since the last time she was here so everything was amazing. She was feeling a little warm and she couldn't exactly put on a a hat with her poofy hair so she undid her hair and allowed it to fall to both sides. "Do not mind me. I am just making things easier for myself." She folded her hair into a ponytail. A very long ponytail but a ponytail all the same. She then opened another bag and let her snake out. It climbed out and wrapped itself around her neck loosely, like a very scaly scarf, before laying down.

Quill stared at Crystal - rather the snake - for a little before turning his attention back to what he was doing. He walked up to a huge building and went in. Where's my room? he thought, trying to remember whether they had stated which it was in the letter or something.


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Charcoal wasn't sure if she should blush st that or not. When she was told to go to the bathroom she got serious. She followed Jack to the bathroom. "Alright, what is it you want to talk to me about exactly." Charcoal asked. Then she watched as Jack went to tell Spades something.

Jack went into the bathroom, where Charcoal already was. He closed the door behind himself. "So, What do you think about Spades? She's nice right. You guys really came off on the wrong hoof." Jack asked as he went to turn on the shower on full blast, then got out before getting soaked "It's just that... I've noticed something... how old was she when her parents ran away? 13. What is her last name? Spades. Her cutie mark is like a carbon copy of mine. Or mine is of hers... depends on who was born first." Jack explained, trying his best not to confuse his friend. "Oh wait." Jack went over to the door and hit it. "In case she's listening. Yeah... That's pretty much it." 


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Quill stared at Crystal - rather the snake - for a little before turning his attention back to what he was doing. He walked up to a huge building and went in. Where's my room? he thought, trying to remember whether they had stated which it was in the letter or something.

Crystal got the number for her room and looked at quill oddly. "Is something making you uneasy Quill?" Crystal was concerned, for no other reason than she had a snake around her neck and if it got nervous it wouldn't end well. And she didn't want to start her holiday with her friend explaining why her pet snake choked her to death.


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Jack went into the bathroom, where Charcoal already was. He closed the door behind himself. "So, What do you think about Spades? She's nice right. You guys really came off on the wrong hoof." Jack asked as he went to turn on the shower on full blast, then got out before getting soaked "It's just that... I've noticed something... how old was she when her parents ran away? 13. What is her last name? Spades. Her cutie mark is like a carbon copy of mine. Or mine is of hers... depends on who was born first." Jack explained, trying his best not to confuse his friend. "Oh wait." Jack went over to the door and hit it. "In case she's listening. Yeah... That's pretty much it."

"Well, you are right. We definitely did get off on the wrong hoof when we first meet. And me being in heat didn't help matters much either. But she does seem nice, and she has a sad story just like us. If you are getting at the two of you being related than the only sure fire way to tell is with a DNA tea but those are expensive. I say we just slowly learn more and more about her as we go on." Charcoal said giving her full analysis of the situation. "Oh and by the way. Can I talk to you later? I have a question that is kind of personal."

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"Well, you are right. We definitely did get off on the wrong hoof when we first meet. And me being in heat didn't help matters much either. But she does seem nice, and she has a sad story just like us. If you are getting at the two of you being related than the only sure fire way to tell is with a DNA tea but those are expensive. I say we just slowly learn more and more about her as we go on." Charcoal said giving her full analysis of the situation. "Oh and by the way. Can I talk to you later? I have a question that is kind of personal."

"Talk to me later?" Jack asked a bit more shocked that he should. Personal? "Yeah, sure. If you want to." Jack went to turn of the shower, but accidentally got his arm wet. "Okay." @ Jack opened the door. "Hey. Sorry to keep you waiting. I just had to... talk to Charcoal... about... laundry."


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"Talk to me later?" Jack asked a bit more shocked that he should. Personal? "Yeah, sure. If you want to." Jack went to turn of the shower, but accidentally got his arm wet. "Okay." @ Jack opened the door. "Hey. Sorry to keep you waiting. I just had to... talk to Charcoal... about... laundry."

Charcoal mentally facehoofed. Really jack, that is the best he could come up with. *sigh* Well it is all I have to work with, so lets see if I can help convince her a little better. "Yeah, I'm running an experiment at the moment testing to see if it is better to use a washbourd to do laundry or if we should use up more water using a washer."

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Charcoal mentally facehoofed. Really jack, that is the best he could come up with. *sigh* Well it is all I have to work with, so lets see if I can help convince her a little better. "Yeah, I'm running an experiment at the moment testing to see if it is better to use a washbourd to do laundry or if we should use up more water using a washer."

"Y-yeah... That." Jack walked to Charcoal's door. "Hey. I have to go. See ya later and don't get in trouble." Jack winked and left before giving anyone time time to stop him. Jack sighed "Time to find out if I'm right." Jack ran out of the hotel and through Paris until he found the hospital which Charcoal took him yesterday. Jack entered in and the first place he saw was the lobby. There were chairs which were taken by ponies. Some looked healthy while others coughed and some even had a barf bucket. Jack saw a nurse and asked if there was a psychiatrist. The nurse pointed Jack in the direction to one who wasn't busy. Jack thanked the nurse and went on his way until he found a door that had a placard that read "Dr.Psych" This must be him. "Why are you helping me now?" As I said. I don't want to be in your crazy mind.


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"Y-yeah... That." Jack walked to Charcoal's door. "Hey. I have to go. See ya later and don't get in trouble." Jack winked and left before giving anyone time time to stop him. Jack sighed "Time to find out if I'm right." Jack ran out of the hotel and through Paris until he found the hospital which Charcoal took him yesterday. Jack entered in and the first place he saw was the lobby. There were chairs which were taken by ponies. Some looked healthy while others coughed and some even had a barf bucket. Jack saw a nurse and asked if there was a psychiatrist. The nurse pointed Jack in the direction to one who wasn't busy. Jack thanked the nurse and went on his way until he found a door that had a placard that read "Dr.Psych" This must be him. "Why are you helping me now?" As I said. I don't want to be in your crazy mind.

Charcoal watches as Jack goes off to who knows where. Alright, let's see what I can learn about this mare. Turning to face Spades Charcoal puts a smile on her face. "Well now that we're alone, why don't we have some mare time? You know with just us mares." Charcoal said, trying to sound genuine.

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Spades was kind of confused at the spontaneous departure of Jack. Then Charcoal offers the opportunity to get into a conversation.

"Ok, what might you want to talk about?" She asks in an elegant voice. Spades hoped she wouldn't receive questions about anything depressing. Mainly because she was expecting a nice and simple conversation.

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Spades was kind of confused at the spontaneous departure of Jack. Then Charcoal offers the opportunity to get into a conversation.

"Ok, what might you want to talk about?" She asks in an elegant voice. Spades hoped she wouldn't receive questions about anything depressing. Mainly because she was expecting a nice and simple conversation.

Charcoal thought for a moment. We don't know eachother too well, so I don't think she will answer my blunt questions about her. I'm going to have to do a lot of beating aground the bush if I'm going to get her to talk. "How about where you are from? That isn't a bad place to start."

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Jack knocked on the door. There was no answer so Jack knocked again. This time a voice came from the room "Coming!" the door opened showing a stallion with a lab coat. He had crazy grey hair that looked like it belonged to a German physicist. His coat was a light grey. He was wearing thick rimmed glasses. "Hello?" he greeted "Who are you? What do you want?" he interrogated. Jack tried to remain calm "My name is Jack Spades. I wanted a checkup." Dr.Psych scanned Jack "I'm not a medicinal doctor. I'm a psychiatrist." Jack answered "That's what I'm here for." Dr.Psych looked at Jack "Alright then, come on in." Dr.Psych led Jack inside his office which was all white. There was a small desk in the corner.  On the walls where some degrees and a few motivational posters. Dr.Psych was in a bid leather chair. "Come my boy. Lie down on the couch." he pointed his hoof over to a small couch. Jack did as he said and lied down. "Now my boy." the doctor started "What's your problem?"


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"Um...I'm from Manehatten, the downtown area of Manehatten, it wasn't so fun really. It felt like I was always in danger. And it just was hard to do anything fun there. Mainly because my parents threw me out and I was alone, which made me even more helpless... "I think my parents moved away from Manehatten or something..." She was confused she actually didn't know what her parents did when they left and were they are or where.

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"Um...I'm from Manehatten, the downtown area of Manehatten, it wasn't so fun really. It felt like I was always in danger. And it just was hard to do anything fun there. Mainly because my parents threw me out and I was alone, which made me even more helpless... "I think my parents moved away from Manehatten or something..." She was confused she actually didn't know what her parents did when they left and were they are or where.

 

"Well at least your parents were quick about what they did to you." Charcoal found herself blurting before she had thought about it. "Oh, um. Nevermind what I just said. Anyways, next question. Do you have any friends or anypony you know there?" Charcoal asked.

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"... and ever since I found a mare and become good friends with her. My thought disorder just seemed to disappear." Jack finished his story. "Well my boy." Dr.Psych uncrossed his legs and threw his clipboard behind him without hesitation "You don't have thought disorder." Jack quickly sat up "I don't?" "No." the doctor answered "But you might have something else. Tell me more about what's happening. Like that voice in your head?"


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"Well at least your parents were quick about what they did to you." Charcoal found herself blurting before she had thought about it. "Oh, um. Nevermind what I just said. Anyways, next question. Do you have any friends or anypony you know there?" Charcoal asked.

"Not really...It's kind of a blur. After getting drink so much I can barely remember their faces...in fact I can barely remember my parents faces either..." Spades thought harder "uhm, I don't know, I can't remember anypony from Manehatten" then it hit her, a face firmed in her mind, a young colt, it looked like. but it was blurry, she couldnt remember "maybe one, but I can't remember the face or the name..."
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"Not really...It's kind of a blur. After getting drink so much I can barely remember their faces...in fact I can barely remember my parents faces either..." Spades thought harder "uhm, I don't know, I can't remember anypony from Manehatten" then it hit her, a face firmed in her mind, a young colt, it looked like. but it was blurry, she couldnt remember "maybe one, but I can't remember the face or the name..."

"Wait, you got drunk back when you were 13?" Charcoal was surprised. She didn't know that there was a place that let young fillies drink alcohol. "How exactly did you acquire the alcohol to start drinking? I can't imagine you had money living on your own and I don't think that bars would sell a young filly alcohol."

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"Wait, you got drunk back when you were 13?" Charcoal was surprised. She didn't know that there was a place that let young fillies drink alcohol. "How exactly did you acquire the alcohol to start drinking? I can't imagine you had money living on your own and I don't think that bars would sell a young filly alcohol."

"Oh my god" spades suddenly remembered "when my parents where bankrupt, and I drank with my friend after school, it was my first time and I drank too much. My parents came to pick me up and on the way home they argued as I laid in the back seat unable to hear well. I heard them say I was too expensive and this crossed the line. And they stopped or something. And next thing I knew I was out on the sidewalk."
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"Oh my god" spades suddenly remembered "when my parents where bankrupt, and I drank with my friend after school, it was my first time and I drank too much. My parents came to pick me up and on the way home they argued as I laid in the back seat unable to hear well. I heard them say I was too expensive and this crossed the line. And they stopped or something. And next thing I knew I was out on the sidewalk."

"Ok, new information is good when getting to know somepony and trying to piece them together to try and figure them out." Charcoal said as she started going on a small rant. After a few seconds she relised she was ranting in front of another pony. "Oh, sorry. I have a habit of going on rants. My mind just sees new information and it just gets going."

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"Well that's all I have to say... I don't know anything more, I don't know what more there possibly could be..." Spades sat there with no thoughts anymore, it was all she knew about her past at all. "Well, I hope this was worth it to you..." Spades was tired but she thought Charcoal needed more so she stays.

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"Well that's all I have to say... I don't know anything more, I don't know what more there possibly could be..." Spades sat there with no thoughts anymore, it was all she knew about her past at all. "Well, I hope this was worth it to you..." Spades was tired but she thought Charcoal needed more so she stays.

"Well obviously it was worth it. I want to get to know you Spades. I want to be your friend, and of course there is still more to it." Charcoal said. "I might need some time to think but there is more to your story, I just need to find the missing pages. But that can wait, why don't you tell me some things you like besides gambling."

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