private A vacation in Paris!

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Your first time? You were great. I guess being in heat has its perks." Jack returned the hug. Their sweat made the hug pretty slippery. "Oh my. I guess we should have a shower. We are pretty sweaty." Jack said pointing out the obvious. Jack looked into Charcoal's eyes. He never noticed how beautifully red. He couldn't help but kiss Charcoal on her forehead.

"Yeah, I guess we are." Charcoal get out of bed and stretches the kinks she had acquired. She walks over to Jacks side of the bed and gives him a kiss in return of his. "So would you like to shower first, or would you like me to do it first?" Charcoal asked. She felt like her brain was fried from earlier, yet she had no problem with having a little trouble thinking.

[Jack Spades 162]

"Yeah, I guess we are." Charcoal get out of bed and stretches the kinks she had acquired. She walks over to Jacks side of the bed and gives him a kiss in return of his. "So would you like to shower first, or would you like me to do it first?" Charcoal asked. She felt like her brain was fried from earlier, yet she had no problem with having a little trouble thinking.

"If you want. You can take the shower first. I don't mind." Jack didn't feel anything. It was starting to get to him. I want to feel. Why can't I feel?! Jack ran to the kitchen, opened the fridge, took out his unfinished beer and chugged it all. It tasted horrible. Know it just tastes bad. I have no stress to relieve. Jack held on to his head. His mind was going down the drain.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"If you want. You can take the shower first. I don't mind." Jack didn't feel anything. It was starting to get to him. I want to feel. Why can't I feel?! Jack ran to the kitchen, opened the fridge, took out his unfinished beer and chugged it all. It tasted horrible. Know it just tastes bad. I have no stress to relieve. Jack held on to his head. His mind was going down the drain.

"Alright, be back when I'm not a mess." Charcoal said as she walked into the bathroom. She started the shower on could to relax herself, and ber wings which she felt getting a bit stiff. She turned it to warm water after a few minutes and began to wash off the sweat. Once done she grabbed a towel, wrapped it around her and exited the bathroom to let Jack have his turn. "Alright, your turn Jack."

[Jack Spades 162]

"Alright, be back when I'm not a mess." Charcoal said as she walked into the bathroom. She started the shower on could to relax herself, and ber wings which she felt getting a bit stiff. She turned it to warm water after a few minutes and began to wash off the sweat. Once done she grabbed a towel, wrapped it around her and exited the bathroom to let Jack have his turn. "Alright, your turn Jack."

Jack hopped up on all fours as if nothing happened. "Thank you. I shall enter immediately." Jack walked into the bathroom, turned the cold water knob and stood there in the water for what felt like minutes. After he felt the sweat leave his body he turned the shower off, dried off with a towel and walked out of the bathroom. "Done." Jack announced.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack hopped up on all fours as if nothing happened. "Thank you. I shall enter immediately." Jack walked into the bathroom, turned the cold water knob and stood there in the water for what felt like minutes. After he felt the sweat leave his body he turned the shower off, dried off with a towel and walked out of the bathroom. "Done." Jack announced.

Charcoal was busy thinking and drying herself off that she didn't see or hear what Jack said. "How do I feel about earlier? I'm not sure how I feel about it. Jack trusted us, yet he practically rasped him. I hope he can forgive us for what happened." Charcoal said to herself.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal was busy thinking and drying herself off that she didn't see or hear what Jack said. "How do I feel about earlier? I'm not sure how I feel about it. Jack trusted us, yet he practically rasped him. I hope he can forgive us for what happened." Charcoal said to herself.

"Charcoal?" Jack asked "Who are you talking to? I do trust you. You didn't rape me. Forgive you for what?" Jack was confused "Am I hallucinating? Are you insane? Will I have to take you to Dr.Psych for a checkup?" Jack didn't know why he was asking so many questions.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Charcoal?" Jack asked "Who are you talking to? I do trust you. You didn't rape me. Forgive you for what?" Jack was confused "Am I hallucinating? Are you insane? Will I have to take you to Dr.Psych for a checkup?" Jack didn't know why he was asking so many questions.

Charcoal jumped at Jacks sudden appearance. "Oh, Jack you scared me." Charcoal said. "But anyways, I was talking to myself." Charcoal said causally as she walked to the bathroom to put the towel in the hamper. "I will do that a lot of the time when I'm alone." Charcoal walked up to Jack and gives him a quick kiss on the cheek. "That isn't bad is it?"

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal jumped at Jacks sudden appearance. "Oh, Jack you scared me." Charcoal said. "But anyways, I was talking to myself." Charcoal said causally as she walked to the bathroom to put the towel in the hamper. "I will do that a lot of the time when I'm alone." Charcoal walked up to Jack and gives him a quick kiss on the cheek. "That isn't bad is it?"

"Well, it might be." Jack was pacing back and forth in the room "Does it tell you to do things you don't want to do because you know it's morally wrong, not really you, or because you want it to know that you are the boss in your own head? Does call you insults and try to convince you to kill yourself?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Well, it might be." Jack was pacing back and forth in the room "Does it tell you to do things you don't want to do because you know it's morally wrong, not really you, or because you want it to know that you are the boss in your own head? Does call you insults and try to convince you to kill yourself?"

Charcoal thinks for a moment. She had never really paid that much attention when she talked to herself so she wasn't exactly sure. "I'm not really sure. Well I know it isn't telling me to kill myself or anything like that. But I just never really paid that much attention before."

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal thinks for a moment. She had never really paid that much attention when she talked to herself so she wasn't exactly sure. "I'm not really sure. Well I know it isn't telling me to kill myself or anything like that. But I just never really paid that much attention before."

"Do you tell it to come or does it come all by itself? How often do you talk to it and for how long?" so far everything was checking out. She had a voice that was so far the opposite as Jack's. Good sign. Would a pony get a voice by prolonged time of solitude? I think that is how I got mine.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Do you tell it to come or does it come all by itself? How often do you talk to it and for how long?" so far everything was checking out. She had a voice that was so far the opposite as Jack's. Good sign. Would a pony get a voice by prolonged time of solitude? I think that is how I got mine.

"It just comes... I guess. And I talked to it quite often before, and it would only be for a few minutes at a time." Charcoal said. She was starting to wonder why Jack was asking her all these questions. She never thought of it as that big of a deal before, so why was jack doing it now?

[Jack Spades 162]

"It just comes... I guess. And I talked to it quite often before, and it would only be for a few minutes at a time." Charcoal said. She was starting to wonder why Jack was asking her all these questions. She never thought of it as that big of a deal before, so why was jack doing it now?

Jack fell over. "Thank Celestia." Jack stood back up "Good news. The voice that occupies your head doesn't take up much of your time. Thus, you are not using it as a friend. Like I did. I began to like my voice and allowed it to talk to me whenever he wanted. So it would abuse my trust and talk to me many times a day for quite an impressive period of time. So you should be safe."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack fell over. "Thank Celestia." Jack stood back up "Good news. The voice that occupies your head doesn't take up much of your time. Thus, you are not using it as a friend. Like I did. I began to like my voice and allowed it to talk to me whenever he wanted. So it would abuse my trust and talk to me many times a day for quite an impressive period of time. So you should be safe."

"Really, it has never been that big of a deal. I just happen to find myself doing it a lot when I'm just sitting at home not doing anything. Though I will admit, I have gotten in a few arguments. I'm pretty sure I was being corrected on something to do with my work."

[Jack Spades 162]

"Really, it has never been that big of a deal. I just happen to find myself doing it a lot when I'm just sitting at home not doing anything. Though I will admit, I have gotten in a few arguments. I'm pretty sure I was being corrected on something to do with my work."

"Well at least it isn't talking to you constantly." Jack pressed himself up against Charcoal. "If I had emotions, I would be so relieved. Maybe a little happy. But definitely in love." Jack kissed Charcoal on the cheek "So. What is the plan? We sort of used up half of our day already." 

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Well at least it isn't talking to you constantly." Jack pressed himself up against Charcoal. "If I had emotions, I would be so relieved. Maybe a little happy. But definitely in love." Jack kissed Charcoal on the cheek "So. What is the plan? We sort of used up half of our day already."

Charcoal kissed Jacks cheek in return. "It doesn't really matter to me, just as long as I'm doing it with you." Charcoal sat on the ground and rested her head in Jack. "Maybe we could find a movie to watch somewhere, maybe in a quieter part of town, or city I guess."

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal kissed Jacks cheek in return. "It doesn't really matter to me, just as long as I'm doing it with you." Charcoal sat on the ground and rested her head in Jack. "Maybe we could find a movie to watch somewhere, maybe in a quieter part of town, or city I guess."

"I'm sure Paris has at least a few gazebos. Maybe we can check one out. See if Paris actually is the most romantic destination in Equestria. Even if we already proved it earlier." Jack could imagine himself and Charcoal walking beside each other on the streets. Making other ponies jealous. He even imagined making other couples jealous. "So?" Jack asked "What do you say?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"I'm sure Paris has at least a few gazebos. Maybe we can check one out. See if Paris actually is the most romantic destination in Equestria. Even if we already proved it earlier." Jack could imagine himself and Charcoal walking beside each other on the streets. Making other ponies jealous. He even imagined making other couples jealous. "So?" Jack asked "What do you say?"

 

"I'd say that sounds wonderful." Charcoal said. 'Maybe the two of you could really get at it there as well.' Who are you!? 'Why I'm you of course. But you wouldn't know it was me since I'm not being an actual voice.' Anyway, why would I do that with Jack in front of so many ponies? Charcoal felt herself blushing. 'Because you are still in heat and you would enjoy it anywhere so long as it was actually happening.' You do have a point there, but still... 'Look, I can't make you do it, literally, but just think about it at least.'

[Jack Spades 162]

"I'd say that sounds wonderful." Charcoal said. 'Maybe the two of you could really get at it there as well.' Who are you!? 'Why I'm you of course. But you wouldn't know it was me since I'm not being an actual voice.' Anyway, why would I do that with Jack in front of so many ponies? Charcoal felt herself blushing. 'Because you are still in heat and you would enjoy it anywhere so long as it was actually happening.' You do have a point there, but still... 'Look, I can't make you do it, literally, but just think about it at least.'

"Hello? Charcoal?" Jack waved his hoof in front of Charcoal's face. "Are you awake? Why are you in a daze?" Charcoal looked like she saw a ghost. Except she was frozen in place for some reason. Jack didn't know how to snap her out of a daze. Desperate times call for desperate measures. Jack leaned in and placed a kiss on Charcoal's lips. Hopefully waking her from her trance. 

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Hello? Charcoal?" Jack waved his hoof in front of Charcoal's face. "Are you awake? Why are you in a daze?" Charcoal looked like she saw a ghost. Except she was frozen in place for some reason. Jack didn't know how to snap her out of a daze. Desperate times call for desperate measures. Jack leaned in and placed a kiss on Charcoal's lips. Hopefully waking her from her trance.

Charcoal suddenly felt a set of lips locked on hers. Jumping back a little she sees that it is just Jack. "Oh, hey Jack. Did you need something?" 'I'd say he wants you, but the only way to tell is to look between his legs.' Oh shut up. Charcoal thought to herself. She wasn't going to be distracted this time.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal suddenly felt a set of lips locked on hers. Jumping back a little she sees that it is just Jack. "Oh, hey Jack. Did you need something?" 'I'd say he wants you, but the only way to tell is to look between his legs.' Oh shut up. Charcoal thought to herself. She wasn't going to be distracted this time.

"You were in a trance or something. So decided to wake you up." Jack walked to the door "So do you want to go and have a good time in a big city of people who think that they are better than others? Because I can wait if you need to get ready or anything. You know. Like fix your hair or anything."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"You were in a trance or something. So decided to wake you up." Jack walked to the door "So do you want to go and have a good time in a big city of people who think that they are better than others? Because I can wait if you need to get ready or anything. You know. Like fix your hair or anything."

"Oh, that wasn't a trance. That was me talking to myself again." Charcoal said with a smile. "But if you don't think wet mane is a good style I could go and change it." Charcoal said sarcastically. "But sure, I would atleast like to make my mane and tail presentable."

[Jack Spades 162]

"Oh, that wasn't a trance. That was me talking to myself again." Charcoal said with a smile. "But if you don't think wet mane is a good style I could go and change it." Charcoal said sarcastically. "But sure, I would at least like to make my mane and tail presentable."

"Yeah, sure. Take your time. Presentable is... presentable." Jack smiled awkwardly. She was in quite the trance. Could she be developing a permanent voice? A voice that will never leave her alone? "Hey Charcoal." Jack called "What was your voice saying? Was it talking about... important...stuff?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Yeah, sure. Take your time. Presentable is... presentable." Jack smiled awkwardly. She was in quite the trance. Could she be developing a permanent voice? A voice that will never leave her alone? "Hey Charcoal." Jack called "What was your voice saying? Was it talking about... important...stuff?"

"I... um..." Charcoal couldn't say what it had actually said, it's too embarrassing. "No no, nothing important." She finally said while blushing. "It was just about.... how my.... mane, needed to be worker on. Yeah that's it." Charcoal said. "Well id better get on that." She says as she enters the bathroom. Whew, I think he bought it. 'Are you kidding me? He never believed you for a second.' Yeah, but it is what I said you said that he doesn't believe. Can't you just behave? 'Probably, but that doesn't mean I will.

[Jack Spades 162]

"I... um..." Charcoal couldn't say what it had actually said, it's too embarrassing. "No no, nothing important." She finally said while blushing. "It was just about.... how my.... mane, needed to be worker on. Yeah that's it." Charcoal said. "Well id better get on that." She says as she enters the bathroom. Whew, I think he bought it. 'Are you kidding me? He never believed you for a second.' Yeah, but it is what I said you said that he doesn't believe. Can't you just behave? 'Probably, but that doesn't mean I will.

A whole trance just for a voice to tell her about her own hair? "Seems legit." Jack sat down I don't know why I was getting frisky about this whole ordeal. "I can trust Charcoal. There would be no reason not to." Jack sat patiently "So how's that hair going? Looking... presentable?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

A whole trance just for a voice to tell her about her own hair? "Seems legit." Jack sat down I don't know why I was getting frisky about this whole ordeal. "I can trust Charcoal. There would be no reason not to." Jack sat patiently "So how's that hair going? Looking... presentable?"

"In a minute." Charcoal called. It wasn't easy to braid with hooves. And now she remembered why she usually leaves the mane styles to her unicorn friends. She stands up and begins to walk out. Promise to be good? 'Yeah yeah, whatever. Just so you know, Jack is pretty handsome' "Will you shut it with the sex stuff about Jack?!" Charcoal said outloud by accident. Wopsy daisy.