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[Jack Spades 162]

"In a minute." Charcoal called. It wasn't easy to braid with hooves. And now she remembered why she usually leaves the mane styles to her unicorn friends. She stands up and begins to walk out. Promise to be good? 'Yeah yeah, whatever. Just so you know, Jack is pretty handsome' "Will you shut it with the sex stuff about Jack?!" Charcoal said outloud by accident. Wopsy daisy.

"Charcoal." Jack said slowly "I have a sneaking suspicion that you are not telling me the truth." Jack hoped he'd never had to get to this point. But a stallion has to do what a stallion has to do. Jack tackled Charcoal, pinning her to the ground "Tell me what it has been telling you! It's for your own good!" 

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Charcoal." Jack said slowly "I have a sneaking suspicion that you are not telling me the truth." Jack hoped he'd never had to get to this point. But a stallion has to do what a stallion has to do. Jack tackled Charcoal, pinning her to the ground "Tell me what it has been telling you! It's for your own good!"

Charcoal struggled wildly against Jack holding her down. She probably could have overpowered him and gotten herself free. "It is fine Jack, really it isn't anything important that you need to worry about Jack." At that, Charcoal pushed with all her might against jude.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal struggled wildly against Jack holding her down. She probably could have overpowered him and gotten herself free. "It is fine Jack, really it isn't anything important that you need to worry about Jack." At that, Charcoal pushed with all her might against jude.

Jack had to suppress Charcoal. She wasn't telling him the truth and he needed to know. "Tell... me...know!" Jack couldn't handle Charcoal's strength. He went flying back a few feet and fell straight on his back. Everything was black shortly. But after a few seconds Jack woke up. "That hurt like a buffalo kick."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack had to suppress Charcoal. She wasn't telling him the truth and he needed to know. "Tell... me...know!" Jack couldn't handle Charcoal's strength. He went flying back a few feet and fell straight on his back. Everything was black shortly. But after a few seconds Jack woke up. "That hurt like a buffalo kick."

Charcoal saw Jack go flying across the room and hit his back. He didn't move for a few seconds, but then he started to stur. She goes running towards him. "Oh my gosh Thunder, are you alright! Do you need me to take you to the doctor. 'You screwed up.' Shut up, this is all because of what you were saying about Jack before.

Edited September 13, 2013 by Charcoal Embers

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal saw Jack go flying across the room and hit his back. He didn't move for a few seconds, but then he started to stur. She goes running towards him. "Oh my gosh Thunder, are you alright! Do you need me to take you to the doctor. 'You screwed up.' Shut up, this is all because of what you were saying about Jack before.

Everything Jack saw was blurry. He saw a red and black figure in front of him "I can take on both of you." Jack said with a wobbly voice. Jack jumped up "I can take on both of..." Jack fell over. "I never meant to hurt anybody... I just wanted some friends." Jack mumbled on "The buffalo don't take kindly to pony folk. How was I supposed to know?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Everything Jack saw was blurry. He saw a red and black figure in front of him "I can take on both of you." Jack said with a wobbly voice. Jack jumped up "I can take on both of..." Jack fell over. "I never meant to hurt anybody... I just wanted some friends." Jack mumbled on "The buffalo don't take kindly to pony folk. How was I supposed to know?"

Shoot, this isn't turning out well. 'Bang him, I'm sure he would like it.' Shut up. Charcoal couldn't think of what to do in a situation like this. Then she thought od something. Running into the kitchen Charcoal grabs a cup of ice water. Coming back to Jack she stops in front of him. "Bottoms up." She says then she splashes the water in his face.

[Jack Spades 162]

Shoot, this isn't turning out well. 'Bang him, I'm sure he would like it.' Shut up. Charcoal couldn't think of what to do in a situation like this. Then she thought od something. Running into the kitchen Charcoal grabs a cup of ice water. Coming back to Jack she stops in front of him. "Bottoms up." She says then she splashes the water in his face.

"I mean. They looked nice enou-" Jack was interrupted by a splash of cold water in his face. Jack screamed "COLD!" Jack jumped up all soaked. He saw Charcoal with an empty glass. It didn't take long to put 1 and 3 together. "Why did you splash me with cold water?" Jack asked still in his emotionless self.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"I mean. They looked nice enou-" Jack was interrupted by a splash of cold water in his face. Jack screamed "COLD!" Jack jumped up all soaked. He saw Charcoal with an empty glass. It didn't take long to put 1 and 3 together. "Why did you splash me with cold water?" Jack asked still in his emotionless self.

"Well I.. um... you were holding me down so while I was trying to free myself you were thrown on your back hard enough to where you started speaking gibberish." Charcoal set the glass down and sat next to Jack. "But are you alright? That hit couldn't have felt very good."

[Jack Spades 162]

"Well I.. um... you were holding me down so while I was trying to free myself you were thrown on your back hard enough to where you started speaking gibberish." Charcoal set the glass down and sat next to Jack. "But are you alright? That hit couldn't have felt very good."

"Now why would I try to hold you down?" Jack asked "I would have to have needed something very important to become aggressive like that." Jack wiped his face with his arm. "I am fine thank you. I do not even remember being hit. Except I do have a tiny headache at the back of my head. It should go away." Jack walked to the door "You ready to go?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Now why would I try to hold you down?" Jack asked "I would have to have needed something very important to become aggressive like that." Jack wiped his face with his arm. "I am fine thank you. I do not even remember being hit. Except I do have a tiny headache at the back of my head. It should go away." Jack walked to the door "You ready to go?"

"Whenever you are." Charcoal said with a smile. 'That's right. Let's see what kind of lewd acts we will be doing now that we are outside.' Charcoal sort of snapped there. "Just shut it with the sexual jokes!" Once again Charcoal found herself in the same position she was in just a few seconds ago.

[Jack Spades 162]

"Whenever you are." Charcoal said with a smile. 'That's right. Let's see what kind of lewd acts we will be doing now that we are outside.' Charcoal sort of snapped there. "Just shut it with the sexual jokes!" Once again Charcoal found herself in the same position she was in just a few seconds ago.

Jack whipped around. "I apologize. I was not aware of my inappropriate sexual language. I will try to look out for it next time." Jack lowered his head like a dog would after doing something it wasn't supposed to. "After you, Charcoal." Jack waited patiently. 

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack whipped around. "I apologize. I was not aware of my inappropriate sexual language. I will try to look out for it next time." Jack lowered his head like a dog would after doing something it wasn't supposed to. "After you, Charcoal." Jack waited patiently.

"Oh, no no, it isn't you Jack. It is the voice in my head." Then she kicked herself, that is what she didn't want to tell Jack before. Now she had to explain it to him. With a sigh she gets ready for an explanation. "Sorry about that. But the voice is starting to get annoying."

[Jack Spades 162]

"Oh, no no, it isn't you Jack. It is the voice in my head." Then she kicked herself, that is what she didn't want to tell Jack before. Now she had to explain it to him. With a sigh she gets ready for an explanation. "Sorry about that. But the voice is starting to get annoying."

Jack was silent. He was trying to register what she just said. Her voice is getting worst? "Charcoal." Jack said calmly "I want you to sit down. Then I want you to take a deep breath and tell me exactly what it is telling you. I have experienced this kind of thing before. You can trust me."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack was silent. He was trying to register what she just said. Her voice is getting worst? "Charcoal." Jack said calmly "I want you to sit down. Then I want you to take a deep breath and tell me exactly what it is telling you. I have experienced this kind of thing before. You can trust me."

"It's nothing it's just... *sigh* alright, I guess I owe you this much." Charcoal sat down on the ground a d prepared to explain. "It hasn't been saying much. Basically all it has been saying is that it wants me to get laid with you again. But it doesn't care where, right now,in the streets, under the gazebos."

[Jack Spades 162]

"It's nothing it's just... *sigh* alright, I guess I owe you this much." Charcoal sat down on the ground a d prepared to explain. "It hasn't been saying much. Basically all it has been saying is that it wants me to get laid with you again. But it doesn't care where, right now,in the streets, under the gazebos."

"But we just... Why would it... This voice is a strange one. It just got what it wanted a little while ago, but it wants even more." all this talk was starting to make Jack sound like an exorcist. "My voice wanted me to do the same thing. Except it did it to annoy me because it didn't want to live in my mind anymore. Does your voice want something?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"But we just... Why would it... This voice is a strange one. It just got what it wanted a little while ago, but it wants even more." all this talk was starting to make Jack sound like an exorcist. "My voice wanted me to do the same thing. Except it did it to annoy me because it didn't want to live in my mind anymore. Does your voice want something?"

'Just end this and mount him.' Charcoal blushed at hearing that. "Nothing other than what it has already said." Charcoal said. 'You know it, now lets get started.' I'm not going to do it... at least not now when we are out in the middle of the day. Charcoal thought, even though Charcoal was annoyed with her voice, it was causing Charcoal to want Jack even more.

[Jack Spades 162]

'Just end this and mount him.' Charcoal blushed at hearing that. "Nothing other than what it has already said." Charcoal said. 'You know it, now lets get started.' I'm not going to do it... at least not now when we are out in the middle of the day. Charcoal thought, even though Charcoal was annoyed with her voice, it was causing Charcoal to want Jack even more.

"Well..." Jack didn't know what to say to Charcoal about this. I guess she can do whatever she wants. "Well. I do not know Charcoal. Maybe your brain wants more stimulation. All that I can tell you is that you can do whatever you want." Jack sat down "So Charcoal, what are you going to pick?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Well..." Jack didn't know what to say to Charcoal about this. I guess she can do whatever she wants. "Well. I do not know Charcoal. Maybe your brain wants more stimulation. All that I can tell you is that you can do whatever you want." Jack sat down "So Charcoal, what are you going to pick?"

"I... I don't know Jack. This is something new to me, I'm not used to a little voice in my head telling me what it wants me to do. And deep down, I want it just as much. I... I just..." Charcoal began shaking. "Take me again Jack, I know we just did it not long ago but I need this."

[Jack Spades 162]

"I... I don't know Jack. This is something new to me, I'm not used to a little voice in my head telling me what it wants me to do. And deep down, I want it just as much. I... I just..." Charcoal began shaking. "Take me again Jack, I know we just did it not long ago but I need this."

Jack stood up slowly. He casually stretched his legs one by one. "As you wish." Jack responded "Even if you really need this and just want is, I will respect your choices." Jack hopped onto the bed once again "It's a shame. You braided your hair, but, I'm ready whenever you are."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack stood up slowly. He casually stretched his legs one by one. "As you wish." Jack responded "Even if you really need this and just want is, I will respect your choices." Jack hopped onto the bed once again "It's a shame. You braided your hair, but, I'm ready whenever you are."

Charcoal let her brain switch to auto-pilot and she jumped on the bed after Jack. "Ah, finally. I get to do as I please without that stupid mare getting in the way." Charcoal said, yet it wasn't exactly Charcoal speaking. Something was off but as soon as they started everything became a blur.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal let her brain switch to auto-pilot and she jumped on the bed after Jack. "Ah, finally. I get to do as I please without that stupid mare getting in the way." Charcoal said, yet it wasn't exactly Charcoal speaking. Something was off but as soon as they started everything became a blur.

Jack sensed a weird line in Charcoal's words. "I get to do as I please without that stupid mare..." Oh my gosh she has DID. "You are not Charcoal!" Jack realized his mistake and attempted to crawl away from Charcoal. "Who are you and what have you done with Charcoal!" Jack yelled, trying to sound intimidating.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack sensed a weird line in Charcoal's words. "I get to do as I please without that stupid mare..." Oh my gosh she has DID. "You are not Charcoal!" Jack realized his mistake and attempted to crawl away from Charcoal. "Who are you and what have you done with Charcoal!" Jack yelled, trying to sound intimidating.

Charcoal felt Jack try and get away, using her strength Charcoal pulled him back and resumed. "Come now, I am Charcoal. I'm just the part that seems to have been bugging her for the past little while. But as soon as you let her lose control, I took over and this is what I've been waiting for."

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal felt Jack try and get away, using her strength Charcoal pulled him back and resumed. "Come now, I am Charcoal. I'm just the part that seems to have been bugging her for the past little while. But as soon as you let her lose control, I took over and this is what I've been waiting for."

"Why are you dong this? Why have you been torturing Charcoal? Is this because I made you pass out? I'm really sorry," Jack tried to pull himself away from this strange version of Charcoal. "Do you want to be loved? Is that it? Have you been lonely and wanted somepony to love?"

[Nurin Insyirah 12]

 

 

"That sound adequate... And by that I mean good." Crystal managed to stutter. For whatever reason, she didn't want to make him feel bad or do something she would regret. "Yess uhh, we will do that." She felt really nervous. In all honesty her mind was off trailing, thinking about other things.

Quill didn't know why Crystal was so nervous, but he decided to ignore it. Whatever it was, she'd probably get over it soon. As far as he knew, nothing too dramatic had happened lately. "Okay then, let's go." He walked to the shopping mall and opened the door. "After you, m'lady," he said in a joke British accent, smiling.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Why are you dong this? Why have you been torturing Charcoal? Is this because I made you pass out? I'm really sorry," Jack tried to pull himself away from this strange version of Charcoal. "Do you want to be loved? Is that it? Have you been lonely and wanted somepony to love?"

"Are you kidding me? Do you know how boring Kt is to be inside such a boring mare like her. I just wanted to do something fun, but every time I get a chance she always locks herself away. I've just been waiting for this moment, and boy does it feel good." Charcoal said. She leaned forward, without stooping what she was already doing, and began to kiss Jack.