private A vacation in Paris!

[Jack Spades 162]

"Are you kidding me? Do you know how boring Kt is to be inside such a boring mare like her. I just wanted to do something fun, but every time I get a chance she always locks herself away. I've just been waiting for this moment, and boy does it feel good." Charcoal said. She leaned forward, without stooping what she was already doing, and began to kiss Jack.

Jack pushed Charcoal away so they weren't kissing "I want to strike a deal with you. This will be in the best interest of all of us. I will let you have your way with me if you don't talk to Charcoal and annoy her anymore." Jack held out his hoof "Do we have a deal?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack pushed Charcoal away so they weren't kissing "I want to strike a deal with you. This will be in the best interest of all of us. I will let you have your way with me if you don't talk to Charcoal and annoy her anymore." Jack held out his hoof "Do we have a deal?"

"Hmmm." Charcoal thought for a moment. "Lets weigh my options. I can either have my way with you once without you resisting. Or I can just stay like this and have my way with you while you struggle. I think I'll pass on that, it's not like you can stop me from doing what I want with you. Charcoal might be boring, but she is definitely strong."

[Jack Spades 162]

"Hmmm." Charcoal thought for a moment. "Lets weigh my options. I can either have my way with you once without you resisting. Or I can just stay like this and have my way with you while you struggle. I think I'll pass on that, it's not like you can stop me from doing what I want with you. Charcoal might be boring, but she is definitely strong."

"Oh yeah. What would happen if I were to tell the authorities that you have Dissociative Personality Disorder? They would lock you up, forever." Jack paused to let it sink in "Forever." Jack said louder "No boys, no fun, only boring conversations with boring Charcoal." Jack stopped struggling "That would be too bad wouldn't it?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Oh yeah. What would happen if I were to tell the authorities that you have Dissociative Personality Disorder? They would lock you up, forever." Jack paused to let it sink in "Forever." Jack said louder "No boys, no fun, only boring conversations with boring Charcoal." Jack stopped struggling "That would be too bad wouldn't it?"

"Ha, I would just like to see you try. You can't even get up right now because I'm stronger than you, so how do you expect to call the cops." Charcoal leans her head closer to Jacks face. Just face it, Charcoal is gone. So just stop wasting your energy. And just give up." Charcoal leans in for another kiss.

[Jack Spades 162]

"Ha, I would just like to see you try. You can't even get up right now because I'm stronger than you, so how do you expect to call the cops." Charcoal leans her head closer to Jacks face. Just face it, Charcoal is gone. So just stop wasting your energy. And just give up." Charcoal leans in for another kiss.

"Fine. You win. I submit. You can do anything you want to me. I can't wait to tell the real Charcoal what happened when she comes back." Jack took the kiss. It was weird kissing someone who wasn't and was the same person Jack kissed before. This Charcoal was same in body, but different in mind.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

"Fine. You win. I submit. You can do anything you want to me. I can't wait to tell the real Charcoal what happened when she comes back." Jack took the kiss. It was weird kissing someone who wasn't and was the same person Jack kissed before. This Charcoal was same in body, but different in mind.

Charcoal was happy he finally stopped resisting. She kissed him even harder than before, hopefully not depriving him of oxygen. This all felt so amazingly awesome, she didn't care about anything else right now. And now she could savor the amazing feeling of his lips on hers.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal was happy he finally stopped resisting. She kissed him even harder than before, hopefully not depriving him of oxygen. This all felt so amazingly awesome, she didn't care about anything else right now. And now she could savor the amazing feeling of his lips on hers.

Jack decided to lay there. Whatever she was doing to him. He'd just follow along. She was a bit more aggressive than the original Charcoal. He missed her. But for now he could only lay down and hope. Hope that this Charcoal would give him a break. I only have so much energy!

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack decided to lay there. Whatever she was doing to him. He'd just follow along. She was a bit more aggressive than the original Charcoal. He missed her. But for now he could only lay down and hope. Hope that this Charcoal would give him a break. I only have so much energy!

Charcoal decided now was the time to get things rolling. Once she started she couldn't stop until she was too tired to even move. "I hope you are ready, because I'm about to kick things up a notch!" She shouted. She continued to work him until she really did pass out from exhaustion.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal decided now was the time to get things rolling. Once she started she couldn't stop until she was too tired to even move. "I hope you are ready, because I'm about to kick things up a notch!" She shouted. She continued to work him until she really did pass out from exhaustion.

Jack was breathing heavily. Boy she can go. Jack propped himself over Charcoal, trying his best to pin her on the ground while being tuckered out. "Charcoal." Jack whispered into her ear. "This better be you." Jack was almost blacking out due to exhaustion, but he knew he had to tell Charcoal about what happened. "Charcoal." Jack said a little louder.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack was breathing heavily. Boy she can go. Jack propped himself over Charcoal, trying his best to pin her on the ground while being tuckered out. "Charcoal." Jack whispered into her ear. "This better be you." Jack was almost blacking out due to exhaustion, but he knew he had to tell Charcoal about what happened. "Charcoal." Jack said a little louder.

Charcoal her name being called. She wanted to respond but she couldn't for some reason. She still tried calling but she couldn't. Why couldn't she respond to Jack. Because I'm in control now." Came a voice from beside ber. "I had fun, so I think I'll keep this body for a while. Adios." She said as she began to walk towards a door. Charcoal knew she couldn't let her get to the door so she ran and tackled the others her down.

 

Outside of Charcoals body, her actual body was squirming around.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal her name being called. She wanted to respond but she couldn't for some reason. She still tried calling but she couldn't. Why couldn't she respond to Jack. Because I'm in control now." Came a voice from beside ber. "I had fun, so I think I'll keep this body for a while. Adios." She said as she began to walk towards a door. Charcoal knew she couldn't let her get to the door so she ran and tackled the others her down.

 

Outside of Charcoals body, her actual body was squirming around.

Jack saw that Charcoal was squirming. "I am going to be labelled as the meanest pony in the world." Jack went to the kitchen grabbed a glass of cold water and instantly splashed it against himself. Jack felt energized. "It feels better when you are expecting it." Jack trotted over to Charcoal and pulled her off the bed. Wake up my love.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack saw that Charcoal was squirming. "I am going to be labelled as the meanest pony in the world." Jack went to the kitchen grabbed a glass of cold water and instantly splashed it against himself. Jack felt energized. "It feels better when you are expecting it." Jack trotted over to Charcoal and pulled her off the bed. Wake up my love.

The two Charcoals inside Charcoals head continued to fight. It was pretty evenly matched, like a fight between fire and fire. Neither of them might win, but they cause mass destruction anyway. They both stumble through the door from before, both of them covered in bruises and panting. Then they say a strange light in the middle of the room. Not thinking about it they both make a mad dash for it. They make it there at the exact same time and find out this is how they control the body.

 

With both Charcoals fighting over control of the body, the actual body is being given lots of commands. Stand, run, punch, kick, cook, clean, jump. They just kept coming and the body just kept doing them.

[Jack Spades 162]

The two Charcoals inside Charcoals head continued to fight. It was pretty evenly matched, like a fight between fire and fire. Neither of them might win, but they cause mass destruction anyway. They both stumble through the door from before, both of them covered in bruises and panting. Then they say a strange light in the middle of the room. Not thinking about it they both make a mad dash for it. They make it there at the exact same time and find out this is how they control the body.

 

With both Charcoals fighting over control of the body, the actual body is being given lots of commands. Stand, run, punch, kick, cook, clean, jump. They just kept coming and the body just kept doing them.

Jack saw Charcoal freaking out. She was acting as if a pony was having a seizure while trying to fist fight. "Charcoal." Jack said calmly "What are you doing? Do you require medical assistance?" Jack didn't know what to do, so he sat down and waited for this whole thing to blow over.

[Sunbro 4 Lyfe 939]

Quill didn't know why Crystal was so nervous, but he decided to ignore it. Whatever it was, she'd probably get over it soon. As far as he knew, nothing too dramatic had happened lately. "Okay then, let's go." He walked to the shopping mall and opened the door. "After you, m'lady," he said in a joke British accent, smiling.

Crystal thanked Quill for holding the door open. *Should I tell him what I am? Not now obviously buf at some point? He really should know.* Crystal was still off in her own world, only barely able to notice any ponies that she nearly bumped into occasionally.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack saw Charcoal freaking out. She was acting as if a pony was having a seizure while trying to fist fight. "Charcoal." Jack said calmly "What are you doing? Do you require medical assistance?" Jack didn't know what to do, so he sat down and waited for this whole thing to blow over.

Charcoal was struggling to control the other her and keep her from using her body. She heard Jack ask if she needed help and truthfully she did. She concentrated on making her body do what she wanted, but it wasn't easy when fighting somepony else. Finally on the inside and on the outside Charcoal screams: "Get this bucking thing out of my head!" But was immediately silenced afterword by a punch to her neck.

Edited September 13, 2013 by Charcoal Embers

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal was struggling to control the other her and keep her from using her body. She heard Jack ask if she needed help and truthfully she did. She concentrated on making her body do what she wanted, but it wasn't easy when fighting somepony else. Finally on the inside and on the outside Charcoal screams: "Get this firetrucking thing out of my head!" But was immediately silenced afterword by a punch to her neck.

Charcoal hit herself and was silent. "Jack stood up quickly "Charcoal?" Jack walked to Charcoal until he was inches away from this multiple personality mare. "Which one of you are you right now?" Jack nudged her with his hoof. "Wakey wakey psycho pony." jack beckoned.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Charcoal hit herself and was silent. "Jack stood up quickly "Charcoal?" Jack walked to Charcoal until he was inches away from this multiple personality mare. "Which one of you are you right now?" Jack nudged her with his hoof. "Wakey wakey psycho pony." jack beckoned.

The real Charcoal had taken control for now. But it wouldn't be long before the other her, lets call her Embers, would be back. Stepping into the light she finds herself being back in her body. She opens up her eyes and sees Jack. Relief floods her. She tries to speak but for some reason she couldn't do it.

[Jack Spades 162]

The real Charcoal had taken control for now. But it wouldn't be long before the other her, lets call her Embers, would be back. Stepping into the light she finds herself being back in her body. She opens up her eyes and sees Jack. Relief floods her. She tries to speak but for some reason she couldn't do it.

Charcoal opened her eyes. "Hey. You are awake." Jack picked her up and plopped her on the bed. "You will not believe what happened." Jack sat beside Charcoal and took a deep breath. "Okay, so your other you took over your body and had it's way with me. I tried to stop... you? Her? It. But it was your body was too strong."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Charcoal opened her eyes. "Hey. You are awake." Jack picked her up and plopped her on the bed. "You will not believe what happened." Jack sat beside Charcoal and took a deep breath. "Okay, so your other you took over your body and had it's way with me. I tried to stop... you? Her? It. But it was your body was too strong."

Charcoal tried to respond but her voice was not working for some reason. Was Embers somehow doing this. Either way Charcoal needed help, and fast. She looked around for her saddlebag. Finding it across the room Charcoal points to it, hoping Jack would see she wanted it.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal tried to respond but her voice was not working for some reason. Was Embers somehow doing this. Either way Charcoal needed help, and fast. She looked around for her saddlebag. Finding it across the room Charcoal points to it, hoping Jack would see she wanted it.

Charcoal pointed to her saddle bag. Jack looked over at it. "Yes Charcoal, that is a saddlebag." Jack spoke slowly. "Actually, I think my hotel room key is in there. I think I should get it." Jack went over to the bag and started to dig in it. "Where is that daft key?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Charcoal pointed to her saddle bag. Jack looked over at it. "Yes Charcoal, that is a saddlebag." Jack spoke slowly. "Actually, I think my hotel room key is in there. I think I should get it." Jack went over to the bag and started to dig in it. "Where is that daft key?"

Charcoal shook her head and pointed at her bags again then made a motion as if to say "come hither". All she needed was her bags and this would become much easier. Though without the ability to speak or move very well it will become much harder to do so.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal shook her head and pointed at her bags again then made a motion as if to say "come hither". All she needed was her bags and this would become much easier. Though without the ability to speak or move very well it will become much harder to do so.

Jack looked back to Charcoal. "I can not find it." Charcoal was now utilizing a hand movement. It was as if she was saying "Come here." Jack looked back to the bags. "Oh. You can find my key? That is very nice of you." Jack grabbed the bag with his mouth and brought it too Charcoal. "Here you go."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack looked back to Charcoal. "I can not find it." Charcoal was now utilizing a hand movement. It was as if she was saying "Come here." Jack looked back to the bags. "Oh. You can find my key? That is very nice of you." Jack grabbed the bag with his mouth and brought it too Charcoal. "Here you go."

Charcoal wasn't sure if she could find a key, but she sure looked for a pencil she knew she always carried around. After finding one she took out one of her blank blueprint papers. And began to write on it. She wrote: I am unable to speak for some reason and I need help. I don't know how long I can keep The other me from taking over my body again. We can call her Embers from now on.

[Jack Spades 162]

Charcoal wasn't sure if she could find a key, but she sure looked for a pencil she knew she always carried around. After finding one she took out one of her blank blueprint papers. And began to write on it. She wrote: I am unable to speak for some reason and I need help. I don't know how long I can keep The other me from taking over my body again. We can call her Embers from now on.

Jack was reading what Charcoal was writing on the paper. "Unable to speak... other mare... taking over... Embers." Jack read back. This whole thing was starting to make sense to Jack. "I see. But did you know what I'm not proud of out of this ordeal?" Jack waited a few seconds for a response. "Sorry. I forgot, you can not speak." Jack cleared his throat "That I can not defend myself from a mare."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

Jack was reading what Charcoal was writing on the paper. "Unable to speak... other mare... taking over... Embers." Jack read back. This whole thing was starting to make sense to Jack. "I see. But did you know what I'm not proud of out of this ordeal?" Jack waited a few seconds for a response. "Sorry. I forgot, you can not speak." Jack cleared his throat "That I can not defend myself from a mare."

Charcoal felt herself chuckling, yet no sound came. Well, I at least hope this is only temporary. 'Hello again.' Charcoal fell of the bed in surprise. Embers was back. She scrambled back up to her paper and wrote down: Quickly I'm going to need help. Do you think Dr. Psych is still in?