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Jack saw the paper Charcoal wrote on. He read it. It gave him motivation. No way was he stopping know. Jack jumped back on all four hooves and went to Charcoal and gave her a giant kiss. "Thank you for the motivation." Jack grabbed onto Charcoal's hoof and ran down the halls until they were back in the main lobby. Jack looked around until he saw a nurse. He ran up to her and asked where a doctor was available. The nurse answered and told Jack the directions. Jack led Charcoal deeper into the hospital until he stopped in front of another office. This time Jack didn't even stop to read the name. He bucked the door open and barged in. Jack told the doctor that Charcoal couldn't talk. The doctor took a quick look at Charcoal's throat. He got a little hard candy, handed it to her, and told her to suck it. It should help.

Charcoal looked at the candy for a second before putting it in her mouth. It had a sweet, yet slightly spicy taste. She was a little disappointed at that but continued to suck on the candy. She felt something in her throat but decided to just suck on the candy for a while before trying to speak again.

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Charcoal looked at the candy for a second before putting it in her mouth. It had a sweet, yet slightly spicy taste. She was a little disappointed at that but continued to suck on the candy. She felt something in her throat but decided to just suck on the candy for a while before trying to speak again.

Everything was so quiet. The tension could just kill Jack. Would she be able to speak again? Will this problem be overcome? Is Psych a quack of a doctor? All these questions where swimming in Jack's mind. The doctor took a breath to speak, but Jack interrupted him with a loud "SHH!"


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Everything was so quiet. The tension could just kill Jack. Would she be able to speak again? Will this problem be overcome? Is Psych a quack of a doctor? All these questions where swimming in Jack's mind. The doctor took a breath to speak, but Jack interrupted him with a loud "SHH!"

The silence was starting to make Charcoal a bit nervous. Was Jack waiting on her. From the way he quieted the doctor, who had just tried to say something, he must want to see if she could speak. With how much time had passes she had completely gone trough the candy and was about to try and say something. When she tried she got a strange rasping kind of sound but no words, maybe another candy would help.

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The silence was starting to make Charcoal a bit nervous. Was Jack waiting on her. From the way he quieted the doctor, who had just tried to say something, he must want to see if she could speak. With how much time had passes she had completely gone trough the candy and was about to try and say something. When she tried she got a strange rasping kind of sound but no words, maybe another candy would help.

The worst sound came from Charcoal's mouth. "Progress." Jack whispered. He asked for another candy from the doctor. He complied. Jack took the candy and handed it to Charcoal. "You can do it. Just this one. You almost have it." Jack cheered in a very quiet voice.


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The worst sound came from Charcoal's mouth. "Progress." Jack whispered. He asked for another candy from the doctor. He complied. Jack took the candy and handed it to Charcoal. "You can do it. Just this one. You almost have it." Jack cheered in a very quiet voice.

Charcoal thought it was strange that something so simple was starting to fix her speaking problem. Regardless she took the candy and began sucking on it. After a few minutes she had gone through that one as well. She prepared to say something, only this time she did. But it came out small and raspy, but she did speak.

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Charcoal thought it was strange that something so simple was starting to fix her speaking problem. Regardless she took the candy and began sucking on it. After a few minutes she had gone through that one as well. She prepared to say something, only this time she did. But it came out small and raspy, but she did speak.

"Can you... Can you..." Jack was almost shattered. The doctor snuck up on Jack "Maybe she should rest up." Jack turned to the doctor and grabbed his neck. Jack pushed him against the wall. "I'm getting tired of the doctors here saying maybe." Jack tightened his grip on the doctors neck "I can maybe lose my schizophrenia. She could probably do this... or that. Are all doctors in France uneducated swine?" Jack tightened his grip even harder, making the doctor gag a bit. "Well. Maybe I should pop your little head off, eh?"


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"Can you... Can you..." Jack was almost shattered. The doctor snuck up on Jack "Maybe she should rest up." Jack turned to the doctor and grabbed his neck. Jack pushed him against the wall. "I'm getting tired of the doctors here saying maybe." Jack tightened his grip on the doctors neck "I can maybe lose my schizophrenia. She could probably do this... or that. Are all doctors in France uneducated swine?" Jack tightened his grip even harder, making the doctor gag a bit. "Well. Maybe I should pop your little head off, eh?"

Charcoal was shocked. She ran io to Jack and pulled his arm off of the doctors neck. Then she checked to make sure the doctor was ok, and gave Jack a hard look. He shouldn't do something like this. She was getting better and the doctor was just trying to help.

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Charcoal was shocked. She ran io to Jack and pulled his arm off of the doctors neck. Then she checked to make sure the doctor was ok, and gave Jack a hard look. He shouldn't do something like this. She was getting better and the doctor was just trying to help.

The look Charcoal gave him had no affect. "Fine then. Doctor, I will listen to your advice." Jack walked out of the office. "Charcoal. We are leaving." Jack waited for Charcoal to come. Maybe...Maybe... I guess all of France just has a horrible medical system. Jack needed Charcoal to get better so they could fix what's happening. Oh Celestia, please help us.


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The look Charcoal gave him had no affect. "Fine then. Doctor, I will listen to your advice." Jack walked out of the office. "Charcoal. We are leaving." Jack waited for Charcoal to come. Maybe...Maybe... I guess all of France just has a horrible medical system. Jack needed Charcoal to get better so they could fix what's happening. Oh Celestia, please help us.

Charcoal watched Jack storm off. She turned and gave the doctor an 'I'm sorry' look and went to go follow Jack, but not before grabbing another piece of candy first. As she walked up to Jack she popped the candy in her mouth. She still wasn't happy at what Jack did so she looked at him with an expressions to match Jacks.

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Charcoal watched Jack storm off. She turned and gave the doctor an 'I'm sorry' look and went to go follow Jack, but not before grabbing another piece of candy first. As she walked up to Jack she popped the candy in her mouth. She still wasn't happy at what Jack did so she looked at him with an expressions to match Jacks.

Jack didn't say anything "I know what I did. You don't need to tell me. Or even hint at it." Jack started to walk towards the door. "I didn't know what came over me." Jack looked down at the ground. "I wish I could feel bad for what I did. But I guess I have you for that, right?"

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Jack didn't say anything "I know what I did. You don't need to tell me. Or even hint at it." Jack started to walk towards the door. "I didn't know what came over me." Jack looked down at the ground. "I wish I could feel bad for what I did. But I guess I have you for that, right?"

Charcoal nodded. She wasn't going to try and speak for right now, and even if she could she wasn't sure she would. He was right about what he did though, but he was wrong about not feeling bad. Lifting a hoof she gives him a bump on the shoulder. Not like the punch she did before but enough to cause him pain.

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Charcoal nodded. She wasn't going to try and speak for right now, and even if she could she wasn't sure she would. He was right about what he did though, but he was wrong about not feeling bad. Lifting a hoof she gives him a bump on the shoulder. Not like the punch she did before but enough to cause him pain.

"Ah! Hey! Why did you do that?" Jack rubbed his shoulder to try to dumb down the pain. Then suddenly, a revelation came to him. "Is that what feeling bad is like?" Jack was intrigued about how he could still experience emotions without actually feeling them fully. 


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"Ah! Hey! Why did you do that?" Jack rubbed his shoulder to try to dumb down the pain. Then suddenly, a revelation came to him. "Is that what feeling bad is like?" Jack was intrigued about how he could still experience emotions without actually feeling them fully.

Charcoal nods at him and smiles, glad that he understood. While it wasn't exactly the feeling it was the best Jack could have at the time. So now he will hopefully remember not to do something like that again, at least in front of her. She gave Jack a little pat on the head.

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Charcoal nods at him and smiles, glad that he understood. While it wasn't exactly the feeling it was the best Jack could have at the time. So now he will hopefully remember not to do something like that again, at least in front of her. She gave Jack a little pat on the head.

Jack understood more what emotion was. Emotion were guides to tell everypony their current behaviors. "Thank you very much, Charcoal." Jack thanked. He wondered what other emotions felt like. "Charcoal. What does happiness feel like? What is the opposite of pain?" 


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Jack understood more what emotion was. Emotion were guides to tell everypony their current behaviors. "Thank you very much, Charcoal." Jack thanked. He wondered what other emotions felt like. "Charcoal. What does happiness feel like? What is the opposite of pain?"

Charcoals smile went away, she didn't know how to explain this. She wasn't even sure if she could speak full sentences rights now. She could try and speak but she would at least like to get through the candy first. She decided to just shrug for now and hopefully remember to answer him later.

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Charcoals smile went away, she didn't know how to explain this. She wasn't even sure if she could speak full sentences rights now. She could try and speak but she would at least like to get through the candy first. She decided to just shrug for now and hopefully remember to answer him later.

"Too bad." Jack said "Oh well. I can find out later. But let us go home. I am tired and we went through a lot today." Jack walked to the hotel almost in a trance. If pain equals bad. What equals happy? Or sad for that matter? Or even anger? Jack looked around the streets and saw ponies smiling. He knew he was missing out. But he had to take what he was given.


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"Too bad." Jack said "Oh well. I can find out later. But let us go home. I am tired and we went through a lot today." Jack walked to the hotel almost in a trance. If pain equals bad. What equals happy? Or sad for that matter? Or even anger? Jack looked around the streets and saw ponies smiling. He knew he was missing out. But he had to take what he was given.

Charcoal had gone through the candy as they were walking. She attempted to say her favorite quote but only got a few whole words in there. She sighed and continued along side Jack in silence. She was such a trouble magnet and she always made anypony close to her have to go through it as well.

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Charcoal had gone through the candy as they were walking. She attempted to say her favorite quote but only got a few whole words in there. She sighed and continued along side Jack in silence. She was such a trouble magnet and she always made anypony close to her have to go through it as well.

Jack and Charcoal was in front of their hotel. "We're here." Jack guided Charcoal to her room he sat down, still pondering what he could do to fix this conundrum. He was fresh out of ideas. He and Charcoal could possibly take Dr.Psych's advice, but Charcoal just didn't seem to enjoy that idea.


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Jack and Charcoal was in front of their hotel. "We're here." Jack guided Charcoal to her room he sat down, still pondering what he could do to fix this conundrum. He was fresh out of ideas. He and Charcoal could possibly take Dr.Psych's advice, but Charcoal just didn't seem to enjoy that idea.

Charcoal didn't really think much as she used her key to open up the door to her room and go in. She just placed her bags on the ground with her key inside. 'Hey there, did you really think you could get rid of me?' Not now Embers, I'm trying to think here. 'Oh, well if you are having such trouble then why don't you met me take over. I promise I won't overuse Jack... too much.' That is just it, for how long do you want to use Jack? 'Not sure exactly. All I know it that I loved the first time and I want more.' Well I went to a doctor today, a brain doctor, and he said if Jack pleases you, you will go away. Do you want that? 'Well if it means going another round I don't think I would mind.' Charcoal thought about that. If she did go away then maybe she should do it with Jack and get it over with.

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Charcoal didn't really think much as she used her key to open up the door to her room and go in. She just placed her bags on the ground with her key inside. 'Hey there, did you really think you could get rid of me?' Not now Embers, I'm trying to think here. 'Oh, well if you are having such trouble then why don't you met me take over. I promise I won't overuse Jack... too much.' That is just it, for how long do you want to use Jack? 'Not sure exactly. All I know it that I loved the first time and I want more.' Well I went to a doctor today, a brain doctor, and he said if Jack pleases you, you will go away. Do you want that? 'Well if it means going another round I don't think I would mind.' Charcoal thought about that. If she did go away then maybe she should do it with Jack and get it over with.

Jack entered the hotel room. He plopped himself on the bed he wasn't tired. He was motivated not too long ago. So he was still awake. "So, Charcoal. What is the plan? What are we going to do about this? Are we just going to keep Embers in your head to torture you whenever she wants?"


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Jack entered the hotel room. He plopped himself on the bed he wasn't tired. He was motivated not too long ago. So he was still awake. "So, Charcoal. What is the plan? What are we going to do about this? Are we just going to keep Embers in your head to torture you whenever she wants?"

Charcoal thought about it for a but. Jack didn't have the ability to be angry so if she did do it and Jack didn't want to he wouldn't be able to complain all that much. But that didn't make her feel any better. She decided to try and keep Embers under control for as long as she could. She gave Jack a nod.

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Charcoal thought about it for a but. Jack didn't have the ability to be angry so if she did do it and Jack didn't want to he wouldn't be able to complain all that much. But that didn't make her feel any better. She decided to try and keep Embers under control for as long as she could. She gave Jack a nod.

"Is that..." Jack was finished asking questions. "Never mind. Charcoal. I want to tell you that to me.You are worth fighting for. Worth dying for. Worth every fiber of my being. If you need me for anything. I'll be here for you." Jack tried to smile but ended up looking derpy.


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"Is that..." Jack was finished asking questions. "Never mind. Charcoal. I want to tell you that to me.You are worth fighting for. Worth dying for. Worth every fiber of my being. If you need me for anything. I'll be here for you." Jack tried to smile but ended up looking derpy.

Charcoal actually began crying a little, she was so happy that Jack cared for her so much. She just hated that he would say that, she was not worth another ponies life. If anything she should put herself in harmsway for others. She is a tough pony, she could take the pain.

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Charcoal actually began crying a little, she was so happy that Jack cared for her so much. She just hated that he would say that, she was not worth another ponies life. If anything she should put herself in harmsway for others. She is a tough pony, she could take the pain.

"I can tell that you are going through a hard time right now. And I want you to know that I'm always here to help you. And I bet if I felt emotions, I'd give them to you." Jack saw a tear run down Charcoal's cheek, so he opened his arms "Now come give me a big hug. I can see that somepony needs one."


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"I can tell that you are going through a hard time right now. And I want you to know that I'm always here to help you. And I bet if I felt emotions, I'd give them to you." Jack saw a tear run down Charcoal's cheek, so he opened his arms "Now come give me a big hug. I can see that somepony needs one."

Charcoal went in for the hug and embraced him, she also wrapped her wings around him as well. She felt comforted by Jack and was glad he was here for her. 'Ugg, gag. Come on now, can you just cut the sappy stuff and get straight to the action?' Just shut up and let me enjoy myself.

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