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Charcoal went in for the hug and embraced him, she also wrapped her wings around him as well. She felt comforted by Jack and was glad he was here for her. 'Ugg, gag. Come on now, can you just cut the sappy stuff and get straight to the action?' Just shut up and let me enjoy myself.

Charcoal's wings were always a big plus when hugging her. "I love your wings.They really help in that comfort factor of a good hug." Jack could feel himself slowly hug Charcoal tighter and tighter. Jack thought it'd be considerate if he asked this "If I am getting too tight. Just tell me." 


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Charcoal's wings were always a big plus when hugging her. "I love your wings.They really help in that comfort factor of a good hug." Jack could feel himself slowly hug Charcoal tighter and tighter. Jack thought it'd be considerate if he asked this "If I am getting too tight. Just tell me."

Charcoal shook her head, signaling that Jack was just fine. Charcoal was glad that Jack liked the feeling of her wings, it was a Pegasus custom for them to wrap their wings around the one they love. And Charcoal was glad that was what this ment, it just felt natural.

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Charcoal shook her head, signalinh that Jack was just fine. Charcoal was glad that Jack liked the feeling of her wings, it was a Pegasus custom for them to wrap their wings around the one they love. And Charcoal was glad that was what this ment, it just felt natural.

Jack nuzzled his face against hers "You smell so pretty." Jack looked into Charcoal's eyes. "Your eyes are as red as a beautifully cut ruby." Jack wanted more. The more he thought about her. The more he wanted her. He couldn't control himself, but he had to. In a act of accident Jack gently bit Charcoal's ear. Oh no!


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Jack nuzzled his face against hers "You smell so pretty." Jack looked into Charcoal's eyes. "Your eyes are as red as a beautifully cut ruby." Jack wanted more. The more he thought about her. The more he wanted her. He couldn't control himself, but he had to. In a act of accident Jack gently bit Charcoal's ear. Oh no!

'There, you see, he wants it. Give him what he wants. Charcoal smiled. Charcoal moves her head so that she could whisper in his ear. In a small voice she says: "It's ok Jack." That is all she is able to say. Her voice just wouldn't come out anymore, but if Jack continued she wouldn't need to speak.

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'There, you see, he wants it. Give him what he wants. Charcoal smiled. Charcoal moves her head so that she could whisper in his ear. In a small voice she says: "It's ok Jack." That is all she is able to say. Her voice just wouldn't come out anymore, but if Jack continued she wouldn't need to speak.

You got her permission. Jack stopped biting his hugger and gave her a small kiss on the cheek. "We all need to get rid of stress, do we not? Especially if one of us can not even feel stress." Jack blushed and went back to hugging Charcoal. "I hope that my change of attitude isn't scaring you."


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You got her permission. Jack stopped biting his hugger and gave her a small kiss on the cheek. "We all need to get rid of stress, do we not? Especially if one of us can not even feel stress." Jack blushed and went back to hugging Charcoal. "I hope that my change of attitude isn't scaring you."

Charcoal shook her head as to say he isn't scaring her. She leaned her head so she could stare straight into Jacks. For a few seconds, all she did was stare, then she kissed him. She kissed him as long and as passionately as she could, and hoped it was good enough.

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Charcoal shook her head as to say he isn't scaring her. She leaned her head so she could stare straight into Jacks. For a few seconds, all she did was stare, then she kissed him. She kissed him as long and as passionately as she could, and hoped it was good enough.

A tear came out of Jack's eye. "What?" Jack was surprised. "Am I crying? How can I cry? I do not feel sad." he said with a crack in his voice. He looked to Charcoal. She seemed happy. He didn't have anything to say. There was so much going on. His body felt heavy. He felt as if there was an empty space in his heart. Is this sadness?


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A tear came out of Jack's eye. "What?" Jack was surprised. "Am I crying? How can I cry? I do not feel sad." he said with a crack in his voice. He looked to Charcoal. She seemed happy. He didn't have anything to say. There was so much going on. His body felt heavy. He felt as if there was an empty space in his heart. Is this sadness?

Charcoal looked at Jack with worry. "Are... are you alright Jack?" 'Oh come on, we were just getting to the good part.' "Did I do something wrong Jack? Do you need help?" The questions just kept coming and coming yet Charcoal couldn't possible ask all of them at once.

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Charcoal looked at Jack with worry. "Are... are you alright Jack?" 'Oh come on, we were just getting to the good part.' "Did I do something wrong Jack? Do you need help?" The questions just kept coming and coming yet Charcoal couldn't possible ask all of them at once.

"I do not know." Jack replied "I am sure that you did nothing wrong." he shook his head to try and get the feelings away. He looked at Charcoal again and another tear came. "What is wrong with me? Am I feeling sad but failing to recognize it? Am I also angry?" Jack's heart started to beat at a fast tempo. It hurt Jack. He curled into a ball and winced. "Ah!" Jack yelled in pain. "Why is this happening?"


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"I do not know." Jack replied "I am sure that you did nothing wrong." he shook his head to try and get the feelings away. He looked at Charcoal again and another tear came. "What is wrong with me? Am I feeling sad but failing to recognize it? Am I also angry?" Jack's heart started to beat at a fast tempo. It hurt Jack. He curled into a ball and winced. "Ah!" Jack yelled in pain. "Why is this happening?"

"Well here comes another visit to the hospital." Charcoal picked up Jack on her back and grabbed her saddlebags in her mouth and ran out the door. Running through the door she came to a stop at the front desk. "Hello again... my friend is... in serious... pain and... we want to... know why." Charcoal said between breaths.

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"Well here comes another visit to the hospital." Charcoal picked up Jack on her back and grabbed her saddlebags in her mouth and ran out the door. Running through the door she came to a stop at the front desk. "Hello again... my friend is... in serious... pain and... we want to... know why." Charcoal said between breaths.

The nurse rolled her eyes. "Not you two again." she said with annoyance in her voice. She directed Charcoal to another doctors office where the doctor was at his desk filling out paperwork. The doctor looked up and saw a blue stallion in pain riding on the back of a black mare. "Enjoying the ride?" the doctor chuckled "Actually, it is quite nice." Jack responded.


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The nurse rolled her eyes. "Not you two again." she said with annoyance in her voice. She directed Charcoal to another doctors office where the doctor was at his desk filling out paperwork. The doctor looked up and saw a blue stallion in pain riding on the back of a black mare. "Enjoying the ride?" the doctor chuckled "Actually, it is quite nice." Jack responded.

"Yeah yeah, get you greetings overwith. Doctor, something is wrong with my friend here... or at least even more wrong than normal anyway." Charcoal said to the doctor as she walker closer to his desk. She wondered if he could help with Jacks problem. It kind of reminded her of the pains she felt when she didn't satisfy her heat.

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"Yeah yeah, get you greetings overwith. Doctor, something is wrong with my friend here... or at least even more wrong than normal anyway." Charcoal said to the doctor as she walker closer to his desk. She wondered if he could help with Jacks problem. It kind of reminded her of the pains she felt when she didn't satisfy her heat.

The doctor left his desk and looked at Jack. He looked inside of his ears, mouth, reflexes, eyes, he even took Jack for a blood test and x-ray. But no matter what he did, he couldn't find what was wrong with Jack. "I'm sorry to say this but I can't find anything wrong with your coltfriend."


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The doctor left his desk and looked at Jack. He looked inside of his ears, mouth, reflexes, eyes, he even took Jack for a blood test and x-ray. But no matter what he did, he couldn't find what was wrong with Jack. "I'm sorry to say this but I can't find anything wrong with your coltfriend."

"Well then why is he in pain like he is." Charcoal asked. Though she liked how the doctor called Jack her coltfriend she was trying to not go ballistic on the this doctor like she did with doctor Psych. "Is it... I don't know, mental pain maybe? Something wrong with his head?"

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"Well then why is he in pain like he is." Charcoal asked. Though she liked how the doctor called Jack her coltfriend she was trying to not go ballistic on the this doctor like she did with doctor Psych. "Is it... I don't know, mental pain maybe? Something wrong with his head?"

The doctor looked at Jack "If it's not physical then it must be mental. I think you should go to Dr.Psych. He's the only mental doctor in this hospital. Even if I think he's a quack." the doctor sat back to his desk to finish his paperwork. "Down the hall, take a right, third door on the left."


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The doctor looked at Jack "If it's not physical then it must be mental. I think you should go to Dr.Psych. He's the only mental doctor in this hospital. Even if I think he's a quack." the doctor sat back to his desk to finish his paperwork. "Down the hall, take a right, third door on the left."

"Um... don't worry, we know well and good where it is." Charcoal said with an embarrassed smile. She walked out the door and after a little walking got to Dr. Psych's office. She didn't even bother knocking and just entered. "Hello again doctor." Charcoal said as she came in.

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Dr.Psych was at his desk reading a book that had the title "Different Mental Disorders." He was looking at the book as if it made him angry. "You dare tell me how to do my job?" he ripped it in two and threw it in the trash. "That'll teach you to tell me that everything I know is wrong." Dr.Psych saw Charcoal standing in the office. He sighed "What is it now?"


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Dr.Psych was at his desk reading a book that had the title "Different Mental Disorders." He was looking at the book as if it made him angry. "You dare tell me how to do my job?" he ripped it in two and threw it in the trash. "That'll teach you to tell me that everything I know is wrong." Dr.Psych saw Charcoal standing in the office. He sighed "What is it now?"

Charcoal rolled her eyes. "Well hello to you to. You might as well give us a sticker card or something from how often we have come here." Charcoal said jokingly. "Anyway, it is Jack again. He is having some strange pain. We checker it out with another doctor but he said physically he was fine."

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Charcoal rolled her eyes. "Well hello to you to. You might as well give us a sticker card or something from how often we have come here." Charcoal said jokingly. "Anyway, it is Jack again. He is having some strange pain. We checker it out with another doctor but he said physically he was fine."

Dr.Psych got up from his desk. He went up to Jack face to face. "Begone demon!" the doctor yelled "Free this pony from his mental torture." he started to chant and run in circles. "Very funny, doctor." Dr.Psych was panting. Well I don't know what to do anymore. You both have made me work harder than I ever have in my entire career."


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Dr.Psych got up from his desk. He went up to Jack face to face. "Begone demon!" the doctor yelled "Free this pony from his mental torture." he started to chant and run in circles. "Very funny, doctor." Dr.Psych was panting. Well I don't know what to do anymore. You both have made me work harder than I ever have in my entire career."

"And I'm surprised you haven't even asked about if I had taken care of whatever brain thing I had that you were so scared of before." 'Maybe he forgot and just assumed you took care of it. Or maybe he just wants to take care of it himself.' "Gah, get out of my head, I'm sick of your lame sexual jokes." Charcoal said, forgetting again that she shouldn't speak outloud to something in her mind.

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"And I'm surprised you haven't even asked about if I had taken care of whatever brain thing I had that you were so scared of before." 'Maybe he forgot and just assumed you took care of it. Or maybe he just wants to take care of it himself.' "Gah, get out of my head, I'm sick of your lame sexual jokes." Charcoal said, forgetting again that she shouldn't speak outloud to something in her mind.

Dr,Psych was still arguing with Jack. "Well why don't you become a psychologist? Then you will see how "easy" it really is!" "How about you actually care about your clients and not see them as a nuisance?!" Jack and Dr.Psych were going at it back and forth. "Well when I run out of things to do. I can't do anything. And you two keep coming back! I might as well throw you two in a mental ward to be tested on by doctors!" Dr.Psych covered his mouth with his hooves. "You're not supposed to know that! It's confidential!" he ran out the office and down the halls yelling "YOU"LL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE!"


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Dr,Psych was still arguing with Jack. "Well why don't you become a psychologist? Then you will see how "easy" it really is!" "How about you actually care about your clients and not see them as a nuisance?!" Jack and Dr.Psych were going at it back and forth. "Well when I run out of things to do. I can't do anything. And you two keep coming back! I might as well throw you two in a mental ward to be tested on by doctors!" Dr.Psych covered his mouth with his hooves. "You're not supposed to know that! It's confidential!" he ran out the office and down the halls yelling "YOU"LL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE!"

Charcoal watched as the doctor ran out of the office screaming. "Well... that was weird." She turned to face Jack. "So what should we do now? She we go after him, or should we just wait until he comes back?" Charcoal asked. She wasn't sure if that doctor she be telling others what to do about their mental health.

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Charcoal watched as the doctor ran out of the office screaming. "Well... that was weird." She turned to face Jack. "So what should we do now? She we go after him, or should we just wait until he comes back?" Charcoal asked. She wasn't sure if that doctor she be telling others what to do about their mental health.

"I really think that he is a quack of a doctor. I do not even think that he is mentally stable." Jack lowered his head, the pain wasn't as bad now, but it was still there. "I do not know. Maybe I do belong in a mental ward. I would not be a bother to anybody. And since I can not feel emotions. I would not need company."


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"I really think that he is a quack of a doctor. I do not even think that he is mentally stable." Jack lowered his head, the pain wasn't as bad now, but it was still there. "I do not know. Maybe I do belong in a mental ward. I would not be a bother to anybody. And since I can not feel emotions. I would not need company."

Charcoal gave him a serious look. "Well if you went to a mental ward I would have to come with you. I seem to have the same problem you had before only my voice just wants to be satisfied." Charcoal smiled and gave Jack a kiss. "Well that, and I would miss you."

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Charcoal gave him a serious look. "Well if you went to a mental ward I would have to come with you. I seem to have the same problem you had before only my voice just wants to be satisfied." Charcoal smiled and gave Jack a kiss. "Well that, and I would miss you."

Jack didn't know what to do I'm done with not knowing what to do! I'm coming back! Jack felt I giant pain in his head. He rolled of Charcoal holding his head. "What's happening!" suddenly the pain stopped. Jack was on the ground. "W-what happened?" Jack looked at Charcoal. "Hey."


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