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"And you thought the best way to protect something I don't particularly care about was to lie about it?" Charcoal asked with a stern look. "I simply can't stand Kt when ponies do something like that. I'm sure he would have understood if you explained the whole situation about me being in heat."

"I know you don't want to lie, but I was forced into bed twice. I'd be laughed at by him. He'd go to his friends and I'd be laughed at by them. I do not want to have that happen." Jack tried his best to defend himself, but he didn't want to argue anymore. "Charcoal, I'm sorry. I'll never do it again I promise. I can make it up to you if you want to."

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"I know you don't want to lie, but I was forced into bed twice. I'd be laughed at by him. He'd go to his friends and I'd be laughed at by them. I do not want to have that happen." Jack tried his best to defend himself, but he didn't want to argue anymore. "Charcoal, I'm sorry. I'll never do it again I promise. I can make it up to you if you want to."

Charcoal keeps her stern look on Jack for a few seconds then relents with a sigh. "Alright, I will keep you on that promise though. And I would also like to know how you would make it up to me." Charcoal said as her curiosity starting to come out. She wanted to know.

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Charcoal keeps her stern look on Jack for a few seconds then relents with a sigh. "Alright, I will keep you on that promise though. And I would also like to know how you would make it up to me." Charcoal said as her curiosity starting to come out. She wanted to know.

"Your choice." Jack said. He decided that he'd give her the choice on how to bring him down. "It was my fault and I should be punished." Jack sat down. He was expecting a slap on his face. "Do whatever you want to. You know my weak points. Well, you do know pretty much everything about me."

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"Your choice." Jack said. He decided that he'd give her the choice on how to bring him down. "It was my fault and I should be punished." Jack sat down. He was expecting a slap on his face. "Do whatever you want to. You know my weak points. Well, you do know pretty much everything about me."

"Making it up to somepony and getting punished aren't the same thing Jack." Charcoal said. She was surprised that Jack would do something like this. She walks up to him and lays down, getting right in his face. "I'm not going to hurt you in anyway. So you don't need to worry." Charcoal gave him a kiss on the cheek before standing back up.

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"Making it up to somepony and getting punished aren't the same thing Jack." Charcoal said. She was surprised that Jack would do something like this. She walks up to him and lays down, getting right in his face. "I'm not going to hurt you in anyway. So you don't need to worry." Charcoal gave him a kiss on the cheek before standing back up.

Jack was surprised. "Really? You aren't going to punish me?" Jack stood back up "I mean... It would be easier." Jack facehoofed himself. Never take he easy way in a relationship. He has to work for Charcoal. For her love. "I'll make it up to you. However you want. But I'll let you choose."
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Jack was surprised. "Really? You aren't going to punish me?" Jack stood back up "I mean... It would be easier." Jack facehoofed himself. Never take he easy way in a relationship. He has to work for Charcoal. For her love. "I'll make it up to you. However you want. But I'll let you choose."

"Alright." Charcoal thought for a moment, then she got an idea. "How about I let you think of something. That would be harder than if I thought of it for you." Charcoal said with a smile that may or may not have been devious. Then she yawns. "Well, while you think on that I'm going to take a little nap." She walks over to the bed and lays down. After a minute she falls asleep.

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"Alright." Charcoal thought for a moment, then she got an idea. "How about I let you think of something. That would be harder than if I thought of it for you." Charcoal said with a smile that may or may not have been devious. Then she yawns. "Well, while you think on that I'm going to take a little nap." She walks over to the bed and lays down. After a minute she falls asleep.

'Jack.' What? 'You are boned.' Why is that? 'You know you more than anyone else.' I don't know what to do though. 'You could tell her the buffalo story.' Why the buffalo story? 'Because it's funny. And it makes you look like a complete idiot.' But telling a past experience doesn't count as making something up for somebody. 'Okay. How about. You... I don't know. You really don't have much shame.' Oh wait. I do! Jack took a piece of paper and wrote down a note saying "Go to the bar." Jack left it in front of Charcoal's face and left the hotel room.


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'Jack.' What? 'You are boned.' Why is that? 'You know you more than anyone else.' I don't know what to do though. 'You could tell her the buffalo story.' Why the buffalo story? 'Because it's funny. And it makes you look like a complete idiot.' But telling a past experience doesn't count as making something up for somebody. 'Okay. How about. You... I don't know. You really don't have much shame.' Oh wait. I do! Jack took a piece of paper and wrote down a note saying "Go to the bar." Jack left it in front of Charcoal's face and left the hotel room.

Charcoal woke up not being able to see anything. She panics for a second uniform she sees that it is only paper. She picks it up and looks at it. On it is written "Go to the bar." "Well alright then." She assumed it was from Jack and set it on the table. She then grabbed her saddlebags and left her room, locking it behind her. She walks out of the hotel and into the bar.

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Charcoal woke up not being able to see anything. She panics for a second uniform she sees that it is only paper. She picks it up and looks at it. On it is written "Go to the bar." "Well alright then." She assumed it was from Jack and set it on the table. She then grabbed her saddlebags and left her room, locking it behind her. She walks out of the hotel and into the bar.

Jack was surrounded by 5 stallions. They were all laughing. Except they weren't laughing with him, but at him. "A mare. What am I? A sissy? Yes, I: Jack Spades, was forced to bed by a mare." all the stallions were laughing and teasing. Jack didn't look like he was enjoying the experience. "Yeah guys... I get it... I have to get going..." the stallions were blocking him by leaving by teasing him. 


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Jack was surrounded by 5 stallions. They were all laughing. Except they weren't laughing with him, but at him. "A mare. What am I? A sissy? Yes, I: Jack Spades, was forced to bed by a mare." all the stallions were laughing and teasing. Jack didn't look like he was enjoying the experience. "Yeah guys... I get it... I have to get going..." the stallions were blocking him by leaving by teasing him.

As Charcoal walked in she saw that Jack was with some other ponies. They all seemed to be stallions. She walked up to them and started hearing what they were saying. They were making fun of Jack. This did not bode well with Charcoal. She walked up behind one of the stallions and tapped him on the shoulder. "Excuse me, but would you kindly stop making fun of my coltfriend?"

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The stallion looked to Charcoal "Hmm? Oh are you his coltfriend? You must be the man in the relationship. The stallion laughed. "Why don't you leave this big boy bar and go arrange flowers?" the stallion put his face in front of Charcoal and continued a mocking laugh.

Charcoal stares into the stallions mocking face with a blank expression. "There are some lines that don't need to be crossed. You just did one of them." In one swift motion Charcoal hits the stallion right in his stupid little face. "I think flower arranging might be nice, lets see how many I can arrange into your face."

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The group of stallions went silent. The hit stallion struggled to get up "You're crazy mare." he slowly walked away. The group of stallions dispersed.

 

Jack ran to Charcoal and hugged her "Thank you so much." he thanked "I don't know how long I would have lasted."

Charcoal hugged him back. "Well as long as you are ok. So was that the reason why you needed me to come down to the bar, to find you getting picked on and teased by a group of stallions?" Charcoal asked. She was half joking about what she said. "And how did they even find out about that anyway?"

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Charcoal hugged him back. "Well as long as you are ok. So was that the reason why you needed me to come down to the bar, to find you getting picked on and teased by a group of stallions?" Charcoal asked. She was half joking about what she said. "And how did they even find out about that anyway?"

"I thought that this would have been a good way to make up my mistake to you. I told them that I was forced to bed my two mares in one day. And they laughed. So I was laughed at, just like the other guy would have laughed at me. I thought it was fair." Jack blushed "I'm sorta still embarrassed about it."


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"I thought that this would have been a good way to make up my mistake to you. I told them that I was forced to bed my two mares in one day. And they laughed. So I was laughed at, just like the other guy would have laughed at me. I thought it was fair." Jack blushed "I'm sorta still embarrassed about it."

Charcoal gave a little chuckle. "Well I appreciate the effort, but how many of them did you tell that I was in heat at the time?" Charcoal leans forward and gives Jack a kiss. "Now, how about we enjoy ourselves here for a while. Unless of course you want to go and embarrass yourself more." Charcoal said to him

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Charcoal gave a little chuckle. "Well I appreciate the effort, but how many of them did you tell that I was in heat at the time?" Charcoal leans forward and gives Jack a kiss. "Now, how about we enjoy ourselves here for a while. Unless of course you want to go and embarrass yourself more." Charcoal said to him

"I need a beer. After what just happened. I'm gonna need my favorite therapist: Alcohol." Jack sat at a table. He waited until a waiter to pass by so Jack could call him over to order. one past by. "Sir. Beer. Now please." Jack ordered with stress in his voice. He rested his head on the table. "I need to let this all blow over."


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"I need a beer. After what just happened. I'm gonna need my favorite therapist: Alcohol." Jack sat at a table. He waited until a waiter to pass by so Jack could call him over to order. one past by. "Sir. Beer. Now please." Jack ordered with stress in his voice. He rested his head on the table. "I need to let this all blow over."

Charcoal stopped the waiter before he could go and asked for a bottle of wild Pegasus. She walked over and sat beside Jack, then started rubbing his back. It was obvious that those five stallions weren't the only ones to have heard about what Jack said since they kept giving him funny looks. A few tried to come over but Charcoal gave them one mean look and they went another way.

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Charcoal stopped the waiter before he could go and asked for a bottle of wild Pegasus. She walked over and sat beside Jack, then started rubbing his back. It was obvious that those five stallions weren't the only ones to have heard about what Jack said since they kept giving him funny looks. A few tried to come over but Charcoal gave them one mean look and they went another way.

Jack saw some stallions passing by and giving Charcoal the stink eye. "I wonder why they are doing that to you? I didn't tell them it was you. I said it was a mystery mare. They must be assuming it's you. I hope they don't do nothing horri-" Jack was interrupted by the great feeling of Charcoal's back rub.


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Jack saw some stallions passing by and giving Charcoal the stink eye. "I wonder why they are doing that to you? I didn't tell them it was you. I said it was a mystery mare. They must be assuming it's you. I hope they don't do nothing horri-" Jack was interrupted by the great feeling of Charcoal's back rub.

Charcoal smiled at how she had interrupted his thought process by giving him a back rub. "What horrible thing could they do to me? It's not like they can-" She was cut off by the stallion from before smashing a beer bottle over her head and running off. Charcoal gave her head a little rub. "Would you mind if I went off to go hurt that guy?"

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Jack flicked off a shard of glass that was on his head. He saw a stallion smash a bottle on his marefriend. Not only is she his marefriend, but his pregnant marefriend.  "Buck him up." Jack said in a deep and gravely voice. "I don't want him to see the light of day when you're done with him.


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Jack flicked off a shard of glass that was on his head. He saw a stallion smash a bottle on his marefriend. Not only is she his marefriend, but his pregnant marefriend. "Buck him up." Jack said in a deep and gravely voice. "I don't want him to see the light of day when you're done with him.

"Oh, with pleasure." Charcoal sprints in the direction to catch the stallion. Now Charcoal has never been the best when it comes to stamina, but now she is already getting winded. She pushes through and tackles the stallion to the ground and drags him back to the bar. Once there she forces him on the ground and holds him there. She turns to look at Jack. "So what do you want me to do first?"

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"Oh, with pleasure." Charcoal sprints in the direction to catch the stallion. Now Charcoal has never been the best when it comes to stamina, but now she is already getting winded. She pushes through and tackles the stallion to the ground and drags him back to the bar. Once there she forces him on the ground and holds him there. She turns to look at Jack. "So what do you want me to do first?"

Jack caught up with Charcoal "Do to him? Oh baby. What I want to do to him is so graphic, moderators won't allow it." Jack said with the same deep and gravely voice. "I say you kick him in the jewels not once, not twice, but three times. This little tard won't be having foals anytime soon, or... ever!" Jack was angrier than he has ever in his life. 


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Jack caught up with Charcoal "Do to him? Oh baby. What I want to do to him is so graphic, moderators won't allow it." Jack said with the same deep and gravely voice. "I say you kick him in the jewels not once, not twice, but three times. This little tard won't be having foals anytime soon, or... ever!" Jack was angrier than he has ever in his life.

Charcoal didn't exactly like how Jack was talking. She did agree that she wanted to hurt this stallion, but now that she had a chance to calm down a bit she wasn't sure she wanted to. She kicked him once, getting a squeal from him. Then she used a special trick she learned from a Pegasus stallion she used to know. She pinched special muscles on the back of his neck, triggering the nerve and causing his muscles to collapse, keeping him from moving. Then she turned to Jack. "Are you alright?"

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Charcoal didn't exactly like how Jack was talking. She did agree that she wanted to hurt this stallion, but now that she had a chance to calm down a bit she wasn't sure she wanted to. She kicked him once, getting a squeal from him. Then she used a special trick she learned from a Pegasus stallion she used to know. She pinched special muscles on the back of his neck, triggering the nerve and causing his muscles to collapse, keeping him from moving. Then she turned to Jack. "Are you alright?"

Jack's voice turned back to normal "Am I alright? What are you asking? Are you alri- actually. I think I know the answer to that." Jack walked right beside the stallion "You got what you deserved. I hope you learned  lesson." Jack returned to Charcoal. "Let's go. I smell something bad."


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