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Jack's voice turned back to normal "Am I alright? What are you asking? Are you alri- actually. I think I know the answer to that." Jack walked right beside the stallion "You got what you deserved. I hope you learned lesson." Jack returned to Charcoal. "Let's go. I smell something bad."

Charcoal nodded to Jack and got a head start on getting out. If they were going and try and get revenge they would go after the tough one first. When she exited she got a pretty good idea on what Jack smelled. "Hey Jack, I think I see what smelled bad before. And it smells like somepony wants revenge for hitting him." She called back.

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Charcoal nodded to Jack and got a head start on getting out. If they were going and try and get revenge they would go after the tough one first. When she exited she got a pretty good idea on what Jack smelled. "Hey Jack, I think I see what smelled bad before. And it smells like somepony wants revenge for hitting him." She called back.

Jack heard what Charcoal said, but it just didn't make sense to him "You really think so? I meant that the guy smelt bad, but I guess you do have a point. Whatever you mean. I'm sort of confused." Jack sat down to try to collect his thoughts. "So somepony wants revenge for hitting him?"


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Jack heard what Charcoal said, but it just didn't make sense to him "You really think so? I meant that the guy smelt bad, but I guess you do have a point. Whatever you mean. I'm sort of confused." Jack sat down to try to collect his thoughts. "So somepony wants revenge for hitting him?"

"Just come here." Charcoal said. She was currently surrounded by the stallions that were picking on Jack before. And by the looks on their faces and the weapons they were holding they weren't here to say hello. "Look, why don't we act like civilized ponies and put down the weapons."

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"Just come here." Charcoal said. She was currently surrounded by the stallions that were picking on Jack before. And by the looks on their faces and the weapons they were holding they weren't here to say hello. "Look, why don't we act like civilized ponies and put down the weapons."

Jack froze.He didn't know what to do. M-my- 'Let me stop you there. There are a group of stallions who appear to be mad at Charcoal. They all have weapons. You both could get hurt if you don't play your cards right.' Aw man. I don't want to go to the hospital again. 'Jack. What's your cutie mark?' A spade. 'What does a spade mean? 'Death. 'Go get 'em.' Jack unfroze. He almost screamed, but he held it. Jack swallowed his fear. "Hey guys. What's the problem?"


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Jack froze.He didn't know what to do. M-my- 'Let me stop you there. There are a group of stallions who appear to be mad at Charcoal. They all have weapons. You both could get hurt if you don't play your cards right.' Aw man. I don't want to go to the hospital again. 'Jack. What's your cutie mark?' A spade. 'What does a spade mean? 'Death. 'Go get 'em.' Jack unfroze. He almost screamed, but he held it. Jack swallowed his fear. "Hey guys. What's the problem?"

"Aw, look, it is little Sissy boy again." One of the stallions say then they all start laughing while still holding onto their bats, bottles, and pipes. "Why don't you just run along, this doesn't concern you, we just want to pay back crazy mare here for humiliating the boss."

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"Aw, look, it is little Sissy boy again." One of the stallions say then they all start laughing while still holding onto their bats, bottles, and pipes. "Why don't you just run along, this doesn't concern you, we just want to pay back crazy mare here for humiliating the boss."

"Wait. That was your boss? That little tard that took nothing to take down? I think you should have given leadership to someone who can. Oh I don't know. Take care of himself." Jack walked up to them "He attacked that mare first. She was just defending herself. Isn't that right?!" Jack yelled his question to Charcoal.


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"Wait. That was your boss? That little tard that took nothing to take down? I think you should have given leadership to someone who can. Oh I don't know. Take care of himself." Jack walked up to them "He attacked that mare first. She was just defending herself. Isn't that right?!" Jack yelled his question to Charcoal.

Charcoal would have answered if she wasn't busy getting her but kicked by a unicorn with a bat. She was trying her best not to get hit, and she was doing pretty well. When she heard Jack call her she only turned for a second to answer when the bat was slammed into the side of her head, breaking the bat in half.

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Jack stood there. He couldn't believe what he just saw. He didn't have a big line, but these stallions passed it. "I remember in Appleloosa, there was a robbery in the bar I worked. The culprits had guns. I took them down each and every month. If I can handle with bandits with guns. Then I can handle an inexperienced mob with bats." Jack spit into the closest stallion's eyes and hopped on top of him. He grabbed the pipe from the stallion under him. "Who's next?!" he said with a deranged look on his face.

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Jack stood there. He couldn't believe what he just saw. He didn't have a big line, but these stallions passed it. "I remember in Appleloosa, there was a robbery in the bar I worked. The culprits had guns. I took them down each and every month. If I can handle with bandits with guns. Then I can handle an inexperienced mob with bats." Jack spit into the closest stallion's eyes and hopped on top of him. He tore grabbed the pipe. "Who's next?!" he said with a deranged look on his face.

While she was distracted she felt someone heavy force her down on the ground. When she opened her eyes she saw it was her ultimate weakness when it came to strength, an earth pony. "You acted so calm and cool before, well lets see how you act when you are screaming." He said with a smile. Charcoal could feel him down by her legs, if she couldn't get away she might be the one getting raped.

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While she was distracted she felt someone heavy force her down on the ground. When she opened her eyes she saw it was her ultimate weakness when it came to strength, an earth pony. "You acted so calm and cool before, well lets see how you act when you are screaming." He said with a smile. Charcoal could feel him down by her legs, if she couldn't get away she might be the one getting raped.

Jack was swinging like crazy. He would hit a pony, a pony would hit him. It was a pattern. But his rage made him swing even harder. He took down three ponies but there were two left. And there was another one by Charcoal about to... No. Was Jack seeing correctly? He was. Jack ran through the two ponies and was going full speed for the one with Charcoal. "Oh you are dead!"


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Jack was swinging like crazy. He would hit a pony, a pony would hit him. It was a pattern. But his rage made him swing even harder. He took down three ponies but there were two left. And there was another one by Charcoal about to... No. Was Jack seeing correctly? He was. Jack ran through the two ponies and was going full speed for the one with Charcoal. "Oh you are dead!"

The pony was about to do very bad things to Charcoal when he felt another pony run into him full force into his side. Charcoal was relieved she stood up but was jerked back by another pony, this one had an actual knife. "Stay back you, I'll do it." The stallion yelled at Jack. Charcoal could feel the blade up against her neck and felt something else as another stallion came from behind and smashed a pipe into her stomach.

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The pony was about to do very bad things to Charcoal when he felt another pony run into him full force into his side. Charcoal was relieved she stood up but was jerked back by another pony, this one had an actual knife. "Stay back you, I'll do it." The stallion yelled at Jack. Charcoal could feel the blade up against her neck and felt something else as another stallion came from behind and smashed a pipe into her stomach.

Jack was consumed by rage. "Do you know who you're dealing with? Do you bucking know who the buck you're dealing with?!" Jack's face was one of a psychopath serial killer. "Oh too bad... You don't." Jack hurled his pipe at the stallion with the knife. It hit him against the head while Jack punched the other one in the jaw. "How do you bucking like that?"


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Jack was consumed by rage. "Do you know who you're dealing with? Do you bucking know who the buck you're dealing with?!" Jack's face was one of a psychopath serial killer. "Oh too bad... You don't." Jack hurled his pipe at the stallion with the knife. It hit him against the head while Jack punched the other one in the jaw. "How do you bucking like that?"

With the buck holding the knife against her neck distracted she leans forward and knocks him in the face with the back of her head. She then elbows him the stomach causing him to flinch back. Unfortunately with the knife still in his possession he accidentally jabs her in the side with it. She punches him straight in the face to finish him off. Now that all of them had been beaten and the adrenalin wore off she noticed her stomach really hurt. So much so she curled up in a ball clenching her stomach.

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'Good job buddy. You didn't only defend yourself. but her.' Jack turned from normal pony to psycho back to pony. He was panting. He felt the pain of his wounds from the other stallions. Jack limped over to Charcoal. "Charcoal... sweetie..." Jack said between breaths "Are... ah... you... okay?...ow." 


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'Good job buddy. You didn't only defend yourself. but her.' Jack turned from normal pony to psycho back to pony. He was panting. He felt the pain of his wounds from the other stallions. Jack limped over to Charcoal. "Charcoal... sweetie..." Jack said between breaths "Are... ah... you... okay?...ow."

"Agg... I don't actually know... *grunt*... that hit to the stomach must have really... gah... done more than a number on me. Question is, are you... ow... alright, you kind of went... ah... a little psycho back there." Charcoal said, her stomach still hurting her like crazy for some reason.

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"Agg... I don't actually know... *grunt*... that hit to the stomach must have really... gah... done more than a number on me. Question is, are you... ow... alright, you kind of went... ah... a little psycho back there." Charcoal said, her stomach still hurting her like crazy for some reason.

Jack was starting to get his breath back "Yeah, I know... I've never felt so alive. Sorry if I... scared you. It's just that... those bucks... went over the line." Jack picked up Charcoal and put her on his back. "Let's get out... of here before anything... else goes wrong." Jack started to walk step by step down the street. Charcoal's weight made it hard. But it'd be all worth it if she's safe.


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Jack was starting to get his breath back "Yeah, I know... I've never felt so alive. Sorry if I... scared you. It's just that... those bucks... went over the line." Jack picked up Charcoal and put her on his back. "Let's get out... of here before anything... else goes wrong." Jack started to walk step by step down the street. Charcoal's weight made it hard. But it'd be all worth it if she's safe.

"You are in no... gah... condition to be... agg... carrying me." Charcoal said. "I'm able to walk on my own." Charcoal slid herself off of Jack with all four hooves on the ground. Unfortunately one of those hooves didn't like being on the ground and dropped out from under her. Taking a look at the leg she sees that there is a stab wound in her leg. "Well now, looks like I can't walk." She looks at Jack. "Should we pay the hospital another visit?" She asks with a smile.

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"You are in no... gah... condition to be... agg... carrying me." Charcoal said. "I'm able to walk on my own." Charcoal slid herself off of Jack with all four hooves on the ground. Unfortunately one of those hooves didn't like being on the ground and dropped out from under her. Taking a look at the leg she sees that there is a stab wound in her leg. "Well now, looks like I can't walk." She looks at Jack. "Should we pay the hospital another visit?" She asks with a smile.

"I bet all the doctors already... remember our names." Jack laughed. He picked up Charcoal again. "I'm so sorry Charcoal." Jack apologized as he started walking to the hospital. "If I didn't tell you to hurt that stallion, we'd never be in this mess." Jack arrived at the hospital.


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"I bet all the doctors already... remember our names." Jack laughed. He picked up Charcoal again. "I'm so sorry Charcoal." Jack apologized as he started walking to the hospital. "If I didn't tell you to hurt that stallion, we'd never be in this mess." Jack arrived at the hospital.

"Hey, you don't need to... apologies. You didn't know... we would be attacked." Charcoal said. She tried to pat Jacks head but she couldn't reach it with one hoof and the other was her injured one. Once inside the hospital Charcoal saw a few familiar faces as Jack walked them up to the front desk.

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"Hey, you don't need to... apologies. You didn't know... we would be attacked." Charcoal said. She tried to pat Jacks head but she couldn't reach it with one hoof and the other was her injured one. Once inside the hospital Charcoal saw a few familiar faces as Jack walked them ho to the front desk.

At the front desk there was a nurse. Who was occupied by reading a book "Excuse me miss. We both need emergency care."

 

The nurse didn't even look up. "Oh. It's you two again. What is it now?" she asked as she started to look up "We have important doctors who can spend their time on more important pati-" she was cut off by the look of these two ponies. She picked up the hospital phone and yelled "We have two ponies for the emergency room. ASAP!"

 

In a few moments, two other nurses came to the lobby with two gurneys. Both nurses helped Jack and Charcoal onto their own and rolled them down the halls.


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At the front desk there was a nurse. Who was occupied by reading a book "Excuse me miss. We both need emergency care."

 

The nurse didn't even look up. "Oh. It's you two again. What is it now?" she asked as she started to look up "We have important doctors who can spend their time on more important pati-" she was cut off by the look of these two ponies. She picked up the hospital phone and yelled "We have two ponies for the emergency room. ASAP!"

 

In a few moments, two other nurses came to the lobby with two gurneys. Both nurses helped Jack and Charcoal onto their own and rolled them down the halls.

Charcoal chucked a bit as they were taken down the hall. "You know Jack, it is actually... kind of funny. They are actually... worried about our heath and... safety, instead of... being annoyed because we came... down here so often." Charcoal said to Jack as they were taken down the hall.

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Charcoal chucked a bit as they were taken down the hall. "You know Jack, it is actually... kind of funny. They are actually... worried about our heath and... safety, instead of... being annoyed because we came... down here so often." Charcoal said to Jack as they were taken down the hall.

"Yeah Charcoal. Really funny." Jack looked beside him to Charcoal "I have a confession. It's about something I said." Jack ran his hoof across his face to wipe the sweat off. "I didn't actually fight off gun toting bandits every month. Truth is, until today I only fought in drunk bar fights. I'm not a fighter. Except I proved that I am since I took down part of a mob."


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"Yeah Charcoal. Really funny." Jack looked beside him to Charcoal "I have a confession. It's about something I said." Jack ran his hoof across his face to wipe the sweat off. "I didn't actually fight off gun toting bandits every month. Truth is, until today I only fought in drunk bar fights. I'm not a fighter. Except I proved that I am since I took down part of a mob."

Charcoal just smiled and reached her good hoof across the gap between the two gourdes. "It doesn't matter to me whether or not you lied about that. I actually forgot about it until you mentioned it again. But as long as you are you that is all that matters." Charcoal was pretty sure she heard a doctor barf in the background.

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Charcoal just smiled and reached her good hoof across the gap between the two gourdes. "It doesn't matter to me whether or not you lied about that. I actually forgot about it until you mentioned it again. But as long as you are you that is all that matters." Charcoal was pretty sure she heard a doctor barf in the background.

Jack slowly reached his hoof across to hold on to Charcoal's "I hope that after this. We can just relax together. Everyday is a brand new adventure that hurt more and more everyday." Jack remembered the pregnancy scare last night and how he and Charcoal still made up and decided to stick together.


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Jack slowly reached his hoof across to hold on to Charcoal's "I hope that after this. We can just relax together. Everyday is a brand new adventure that hurt more and more everyday." Jack remembered the pregnancy scare last night and how he and Charcoal still made up and decided to stick together.

"Yeah." Charcoal said. She reached down and rubbed her stomach. It still ached from the blow. She didn't understand why it had hurt so much, hits like that had never hurt before. Was it because she was pregnant? Mayby she will have to ask the doctors when this emergency whatever was over. This is either a very large hospital or the worlds largest hallway.

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