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"Yeah." Charcoal said. She reached down and rubbed her stomach. It still ached from the blow. She didn't understand why it had hurt so much, hits like that had never hurt before. Was it because she was pregnant? Mayby she will have to ask the doctors when this emergency whatever was over. This is either a very large hospital or the worlds largest hallway.

The nurses split up. Taking Jack to one room and Charcoal in another. Doctors wearing their uniforms crowded around Jack. They hooked him up to machines, injecting him with needles and stuff he actually didn't see. The light above him was so bright in his face that he couldn't do nothing but stare at it. He suddenly felt really sleepy. His eyes were weighing closed. Jack tried to fight it, but it was too strong for him to resist. He fell asleep cold. 


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The nurses split up. Taking Jack to one room and Charcoal in another. Doctors wearing their uniforms crowded around Jack. They hooked him up to machines, injecting him with needles and stuff he actually didn't see. The light above him was so bright in his face that he couldn't do nothing but stare at it. He suddenly felt really sleepy. His eyes were weighing closed. Jack tried to fight it, but it was too strong for him to resist. He fell asleep cold.

After the split up Charcoal seemed to be surrounded by nurses. Most of the actual doctors seemed to have gone with Jack. She didn't mind, as long as he was alright. They wheeled her into a large room filled with all sorts of machines. They started hooking Charcoal up and did a couple of different tests. When they asked if there was anything they should know about her medical wise she mentioned she was pregnant. After slightly more chaos they eventually got enough of the drug in Charcoal to knock her out for a good while.

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After the split up Charcoal seemed to be surrounded by nurses. Most of the actual doctors seemed to have gone with Jack. She didn't mind, as long as he was alright. They wheeled her into a large room filled with all sorts of machines. They started hooking Charcoal up and did a couple of different tests. When they asked if there was anything they should know about her medical wise she mentioned she was pregnant. After slightly more chaos they eventually got enough of the drug in Charcoal to knock her out for a good while.

Jack woke up in a hospital bed. He felt quite fresh. "Aw geez. That's two for two that I woke up in a hospital bed." Jack saw that there were machines hooked up to him. Not thinking, he pulled them out. Most of them hurt as he pulled out wires out of his arms. He jumped out of the hospital bed. "I have to find Charcoal." 'Woah there, lover boy. Are you sure you want to do that? How can you be more needy?' Charcoal said that as long as I'm me, she will love me. 'No she didn't.' She didn't say it exactly, but she meant it like that. 'Mm-hm. You keep telling yourself that. Catch ya later. Oh, and by the way. She's right in front of you.' Jack looked at the bed in front of him and saw Charcoal in the bed asleep. "Hey, sweetie. Wake up. It's me, Jack." Jack gave Charcoal a little gentle shake with his hoof.


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Jack woke up in a hospital bed. He felt quite fresh. "Aw geez. That's two for two that I woke up in a hospital bed." Jack saw that there were machines hooked up to him. Not thinking, he pulled them out. Most of them hurt as he pulled out wires out of his arms. He jumped out of the hospital bed. "I have to find Charcoal." 'Woah there, lover boy. Are you sure you want to do that? How can you be more needy?' Charcoal said that as long as I'm me, she will love me. 'No she didn't.' She didn't say it exactly, but she meant it like that. 'Mm-hm. You keep telling yourself that. Catch ya later. Oh, and by the way. She's right in front of you.' Jack looked at the bed in front of him and saw Charcoal in the bed asleep. "Hey, sweetie. Wake up. It's me, Jack." Jack gave Charcoal a little gentle shake with his hoof.

Charcoal woke up very slowly to the sound of Jacks voice. She looked around, she felt herself still hooked up to a few machines. She found Jack eventual. "Oh hey Jack... your face looks funny." She said in a sleepy voice as she giggles and started poking his face.

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Charcoal woke up very slowly to the sound of Jacks voice. She looked around, she felt herself still hooked up to a few machines. She found Jack eventual. "Oh hey Jack... your face looks funny." She said in a sleepy voice as she giggles and started poking his face.

The feeling of Charcoal's pokes tickled Jack. It induced him to giggle a bit too before clearing hi throat. He grabbed Charcoal's hoof. "Char, sweetie. Are you okay? What did the doctors tell you? How's our little foal? Did he get hurt?" Jack asked all these questions so fast that he didn't notice that he was resting on Charcoal's belly. With the side of his head against the actual tummy part.


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The feeling of Charcoal's pokes tickled Jack. It induced him to giggle a bit too before clearing hi throat. He grabbed Charcoal's hoof. "Char, sweetie. Are you okay? What did the doctors tell you? How's our little foal? Did he get hurt?" Jack asked all these questions so fast that he didn't notice that he was resting on Charcoal's belly. With the side of his head against the actual tummy part.

Before Charcoal could say anything one of the nurses walks in. "Hey, what are you doing? You aren't supposed to unhook yourself from the machines. Be lucky that you just happen to not need them anymore." Fbe nurse said in a stern voice. "And what exactly are you doing to Miss Embers?"

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Before Charcoal could say anything one of the nurses walks in. "Hey, what are you doing? You aren't supposed to unhook yourself from the machines. Be lucky that you just happen to not need them anymore." Fbe nurse said in a stern voice. "And what exactly are you doing to Miss Embers?"

Jack got off Charcoal. "I'm just making sure that she's okay. I did carry her on my back to this hospital. Now if you'd please excuse me, I need to talk to my... very good friend." Jack turned back to Charcoal "I was so worried about you. I was afraid that one of us wouldn't have made it."


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Jack got off Charcoal. "I'm just making sure that she's okay. I did carry her on my back to this hospital. Now if you'd please excuse me, I need to talk to my... very good friend." Jack turned back to Charcoal "I was so worried about you. I was afraid that one of us wouldn't have made it."

The nurse rolls her eyes. "Why do patients never listen?" She turns to leave but stops outside the door. "Oh and by the way, you probably won't get a very good conversation out of Miss Embers. We had to use much stronger drugs that we did for you to finally get her under. So she might be a little..." the nurse looks over at Charcoal to see that she is making 'whoo' sound into a mirror. "out of it until the drugs wear off in about an hour." She turns and leaves out the door.

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The nurse rolls her eyes. "Why do patients never listen?" She turns to leave but stops outside the door. "Oh and by the way, you probably won't get a very good conversation out of Miss Embers. We had to use much stronger drugs that we did for you to finally get her under. So she might be a little..." the nurse looks over at Charcoal to see that she is making 'whoo' sound into a mirror. "out of it until the drugs wear off in about an hour." She turns and leaves out the door.

"Thanks." Jack tried to thank the nurse before she left. "Oops. I guess I got her on a bad time. Oh well." he held on to Charcoal's hoof with two of his. "C'mon sweetie. Please tell me you're acting so the nurse just would've just left. I need to know that you are okay with your own words."


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"Thanks." Jack tried to thank the nurse before she left. "Oops. I guess I got her on a bad time. Oh well." he held on to Charcoal's hoof with two of his. "C'mon sweetie. Please tell me you're acting so the nurse just would've just left. I need to know that you are okay with your own words."

Charcoal wasn't paying attention to Jack. Her attention was on her wings as she was flexing them. "Whoa, what are these weird things on my back?" She asks in fascination. After she was done watching her wings she decided to see if they were edible and put one wing in her mouth.

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Charcoal wasn't paying attention to Jack. Her attention was on her wings as she was flexing them. "Whoa, what are these weird things on my back?" She asks in fascination. After she was done watching her wings she decided to see if they were edible and put one wing in her mouth.

Jack stared at Charcoal. This was a sight all right. "Damn it. I wish I had a camera." he slowly took Charcoal's wing out of her mouth. "Charcoal. Those are your wings. You can't eat them. They're you." Jack explained slowly, hopefully trying to catch her attention.


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Jack stared at Charcoal. This was a sight all right. "Damn it. I wish I had a camera." he slowly took Charcoal's wing out of her mouth. "Charcoal. Those are your wings. You can't eat them. They're you." Jack explained slowly, hopefully trying to catch her attention.

"Oooohh, that explains why it hurt when I bit down on it." She lifted her wings and looked at them again. "Weird." She looks back at Jack. "Hey you, I have to tell you a secret. Come here." Charcoal said as she waved her hoof to get Jack to come closer to her so she could tell him her secret.

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"Oooohh, that explains why it hurt when I bit down on it." She lifted her wings and looked at them again. "Weird." She looks back at Jack. "Hey you, I have to tell you a secret. Come here." Charcoal said as she waved her hoof to get Jack to come closer to her so she could tell him her secret.

Jack knew that this was a bad idea. He tried to say no. But, like the stallion he was, he got close to Charcoal. "What is it?" he whispered. The tension was about to kill Jack. A secret? He almost expected it to be a ruse because of the drugs, but he stayed faithful.


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Jack knew that this was a bad idea. He tried to say no. But, like the stallion he was, he got close to Charcoal. "What is it?" he whispered. The tension was about to kill Jack. A secret? He almost expected it to be a ruse because of the drugs, but he stayed faithful.

Charcoal put her mouth right up to Jack's ear and whispered: "Don't tell this to my friend Jack but... I love him." Then before Jack could pull away Charcoal gave his ear a nice long lick and pulled her head away. "Now I better not catch you telling that to anyone, especially Jack."

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Charcoal put her mouth right up to Jack's ear and whispered: "Don't tell this to my friend Jack but... I love him." Then before Jack could pull away Charcoal gave his ear a nice long lick and pulled her head away. "Now I better not catch you telling that to anyone, especially Jack."

At this point, nothing could surprise Jack except for when she licked his ear. He decided to play along. "Oh my. Well guess what." Jack leaned to Charcoal "I think he knows, and he loves you back."Jack smiled "He also said that he's lucky to have a great friend like you."

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At this point, nothing could surprise Jack except for when she licked his ear. He decided to play along. "Oh my. Well guess what." Jack leaned to Charcoal "I think he knows, and he loves you back."Jack smiled "He also said that he's lucky to have a great friend like you."

Charcoals eyes go wide with surprise and then she blushes deeply. "W-w-what?! How could he have known, I haven't told him yet. And I have never told anypony that I love him... except." She looks at Jack, a tear starting to form. "How could you have told him? How could you?!" Charcoal reacts by swinging her arms at Jack, though with the drug still in her system her hits probably won't hurt.

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Crystal Barely heard what Quill had said and was still off in her own world. "Hmm? Yes yes I am fine." She muttered to herself, just loud enough to make it seem as if she was responding. "Just admiring the building is all."

*But What if he hates you afterwards? What he phones the police? I doubt he would do that but it is a possibility after all.*

Quill decided to believe Crystal. He shrugged and kept walking. The building, he supposed, was pretty cool. It was tall and elegantly decorated, including the shops. He finally stopped in front of a store. At the top was 'Barber' in large blue lettering against a white background. Turning to Crystal, he said, "This is the barber."


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Dude, please call me Nurin instead of Nurin Insyirah.

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Charcoals eyes go wide with surprise and then she blushes deeply. "W-w-what?! How could he have known, I haven't told him yet. And I have never told anypony that I love him... except." She looks at Jack, a tear starting to form. "How could you have told him? How could you?!" Charcoal reacts by swinging her arms at Jack, though with the drug still in her system her hits probably won't hurt.

Jack took a step back just out of range of Charcoal's arms. It was difficult to handle a pony who was drugged. He almost felt bad for the nurses who have to deal with ponies like Charcoal everyday. "I didn't tell him." Jack said to Charcoal "You told him that." 


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Quill decided to believe Crystal. He shrugged and kept walking. The building, he supposed, was pretty cool. It was tall and elegantly decorated, including the shops. He finally stopped in front of a store. At the top was 'Barber' in large blue lettering against a white background. Turning to Crystal, he said, "This is the barber."

Crystal stopped in front of the building. "Yes. I noticed because of the large sign that said "Barber" on it." She said in a sarcastic manner.

*I will think over it later*

"This will not take long so do not worry." She walked into the building, sitting down and asking for her hair to be evenly cut. The Barber didn't bother to question why her hair was green after she took her hat off, and just got to work.


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Jack took a step back just out of range of Charcoal's arms. It was difficult to handle a pony who was drugged. He almost felt bad for the nurses who have to deal with ponies like Charcoal everyday. "I didn't tell him." Jack said to Charcoal "You told him that."

"Liar." Charcoal leaned forward to get Jack but ended up falling off the bed and hitting her head. "Owwie. That hurts." Charcoal said as she rubbed her head. She had detached herself from a few of the machines she had heed attached to but she didn't notice.

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"Liar." Charcoal leaned forward to get Jack but ended up falling off the bed and hitting her head. "Owwie. That hurts." Charcoal said as she rubbed her head. She had detached herself from a few of the machines she had heed attached to but she didn't notice.

"Oh, Charcoal, sweetie." Jack bent down to Charcoal to see if she was okay. "Did you hurt yourself too much?" Jack saw Charcoal detaching herself from some of the machines "Charcoal. I don't think you should do that. You could have something happen to you." Jack said with concern in his head.


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"Oh, Charcoal, sweetie." Jack bent down to Charcoal to see if she was okay. "Did you hurt yourself too much?" Jack saw Charcoal detaching herself from some of the machines "Charcoal. I don't think you should do that. You could have something happen to you." Jack said with concern in his head.

((OOC: Hypocrite.))

Charcoal looked up at Jack. "Oh hey Jack... when did you get here, and what happened to that other stallion I was talking with?" She asked completely forgetting about falling off the bed. That is when the doctor came I to the room looking at his clip board.

 

"Good morning you two, how are you this... WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?" He shouted. "Why are the two of you out of bed? We just got done fixing you up."

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((OOC: Hypocrite.))

Charcoal looked up at Jack. "Oh hey Jack... when did you get here, and what happened to that other stallion I was talking with?" She asked completely forgetting about falling off the bed. That is when the doctor came I to the room looking at his clip board.

 

"Good morning you two, how are you this... WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?" He shouted. "Why are the two of you out of bed? We just got done fixing you up!"

Jack was surprised at the entrance "I woke up, so I detached myself from the machines to try and find this mare. She was still drugged. She fell off the bed and now she's detaching herself from the machines." Jack hoped that would be enough for the doctor "I didn't do anything wrong in my mind."


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Jack was surprised at the entrance "I woke up, so I detached myself from the machines to try and find this mare. She was still drugged. She fell off the bed and now she's detaching herself from the machines." Jack hoped that would be enough for the doctor "I didn't do anything wrong in my mind."

The doctor gave a long annoyed sigh as he rubbed his temples. "We aren't completely sure if the two of you are completely recovered yet. That is what those machines did, they made sure you stayed alright." The doctor stopped rubbing his temples and looked at Jack. "And why is it you needed to find this mare so badly?"

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The doctor gave a long annoyed sigh as he rubbed his temples. "We aren't completely sure if the two of you are completely recovered yet. That is what those machines did, they made sure you stayed alright." The doctor stopped rubbing his temples and looked at Jack. "And why is it you needed to find this mare so badly?"

Jack looked long and hard at Charcoal before looking back at the doctor "I needed to now if she was okay. Have you ever loved someone who got injured and you did everything in your power to see them and ask them if they're okay? Can you understand that?"


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