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"That's what I'm here for." Charcoal yawned. She didn't realize it but now that all the excitement was gone she was really tired. "I think I'm going to get some more sleep now Jack... I'll see you in the morning." Charcoal rested her head on Jacks chest and fell asleep listening to Jacks heartbeat.

Jack looked down as he stroked Charcoal's head. "Heh. I guess resting the head on the other's chest is your thing." he whispered. he then looked down at her stomach. He could have swore it was smaller before. Jack grinned. "Keep on growing little buddy. Keep on growing." Jack fell asleep. This time he wasn't going to talk to his foal. He'd just fall asleep in his lover's wings.


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Jack looked down as he stroked Charcoal's head. "Heh. I guess resting the head on the other's chest is your thing." he whispered. he then looked down at her stomach. He could have swore it was smaller before. Jack grinned. "Keep on growing little buddy. Keep on growing." Jack fell asleep. This time he wasn't going to talk to his foal. He'd just fall asleep in his lover's wings.

Charcoal woke up and not to a kick this time. She rolled out of bed, because now her nervousness was beginning to happen with the foal, and fell to the floor. Thankfully she landed on her side so the foal should be safe. She walked to the kitchen to grab a bite to eat.

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Charcoal woke up and not to a kick this time. She rolled out of bed, because now her nervousness was beginning to happen with the foal, and fell to the floor. Thankfully she landed on her side so the foal should be safe. She walked to the kitchen to grab a bite to eat.

Last night was a big night so his body went "I'm still tired." and let Jack sleep a bit longer, but giving him some entertainment while he was asleep. He was in a nicely sized house. He was in the kitchen sitting at the table with a cup of tea, and a newspaper. Charcoal walked in with a baby foal on her wings. As she passed him she kissed him on the cheek. She sat down, grabbed the baby foal and rocked it in her arms. It was still too young to find out what gender or species it was just by observation. Suddenly the kitchen wall exploded and entered two large ponies. "Hello, disappointments." the mare said in a cold hearted voice. Jack could tell what voice that belonged too. Charcoal's mother. The stallion beside her ran up and grabbed Charcoal's baby foal and left with the mare. "NO!" Jack woke up with a loud "NO!"


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Last night was a big night so his body went "I'm still tired." and let Jack sleep a bit longer, but giving him some entertainment while he was asleep. He was in a nicely sized house. He was in the kitchen sitting at the table with a cup of tea, and a newspaper. Charcoal walked in with a baby foal on her wings. As she passed him she kissed him on the cheek. She sat down, grabbed the baby foal and rocked it in her arms. It was still too young to find out what gender or species it was just by observation. Suddenly the kitchen wall exploded and entered two large ponies. "Hello, disappointments." the mare said in a cold hearted voice. Jack could tell what voice that belonged too. Charcoal's mother. The stallion beside her ran up and grabbed Charcoal's baby foal and left with the mare. "NO!" Jack woke up with a loud "NO!"

Charcoal spun around and ran to Jacks side. "What is it? Do we have a fire, earthquake, an interdimentional army of angel statues?" Charcoal asked. The last one being a joke but that is what she did in situations like this, joke around. She saw Jack in bed, he was sweating buckets.

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Charcoal spun around and ran to Jacks side. "What is it? Do we have a fire, earthquake, an interdimentional army of angel statues?" Charcoal asked. The last one being a joke but that is what she did in situations like this, joke around. She saw Jack in bed, he was sweating buckets.

"No. None of those things." Jack started to calm down "But don't blink, Are you my mummy? The whisper men are here, I have two hearts, my new regeneration will suck, exterminate! You will be deleted, and I'm full of wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey... stuff." Jack then nudged her shoulder "Eh? Eh? Anyways. It was nothing. Just a bad dream. That's all." Jack got up and went to the bathroom. "You should have seen your face."


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"No. None of those things." Jack started to calm down "But don't blink, Are you my mummy? The whisper men are here, I have two hearts, my new regeneration will suck, exterminate! You will be deleted, and I'm full of wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey... stuff." Jack then nudged her shoulder "Eh? Eh? Anyways. It was nothing. Just a bad dream. That's all." Jack got up and went to the bathroom. "You should have seen your face."

Her face would have probably been of confusion. She didn't always understand but that wasn't always a bad thing. She followed him to the bathroom, she didn't want to be rude, or a creeper, so she knocked on the door. "Jack, you can talk to me,what happened in your bad dream?"

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Her face would have probably been of confusion. She didn't always understand but that wasn't always a bad thing. She followed him to the bathroom, she didn't want to be rude, or a creeper, so she knocked on the door. "Jack, you can talk to me,what happened in your bad dream?"

Jack was splashing cold water on his face. "Wah? Oh. The dream. Yeah. It was just that you and me were in a nice house. I was drinking tea. You were rocking our baby foal. And then all of a sudden..." Jack opened the door. "Your parents busted into our house! dun dun DUHN! Then they took our baby foal and left. Right after they greeted us by calling us "disappointments."." Jack looked at Charcoal. "I have had worst." as he shrugged.


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Jack was splashing cold water on his face. "Wah? Oh. The dream. Yeah. It was just that you and me were in a nice house. I was drinking tea. You were rocking our baby foal. And then all of a sudden..." Jack opened the door. "Your parents busted into our house! dun dun DUHN! Then they took our baby foal and left. Right after they greeted us by calling us "disappointments."." Jack looked at Charcoal. "I have had worst." as he shrugged.

Charcoal wasn't sure what to do. Jack had a bad dream yet he seemed perfectly fine with it. So she turned around and began looking for something to eat again. She found stuff to make a sandwich so she decided to make one herself. She tlgot the bread then stacked cheese, mustard, peppers, lemon slices, and a little something she found in the back of the fridge.

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Charcoal wasn't sure what to do. Jack had a bad dream yet he seemed perfectly fine with it. So she turned around and began looking for something to eat again. She found stuff to make a sandwich so she decided to make one herself. She tlgot the bread then stacked cheese, mustard, peppers, lemon slices, and a little something she found in the back of the fridge.

Charcoal left him to make something. "Back to the bathroom. There's sure to be bleach." Jack searched under the sink. "No mind bleach here." Jack walked out and sat at the table. He saw the sandwich she was making. "I see your tastebuds are improving every time you eat." 


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Charcoal left him to make something. "Back to the bathroom. There's sure to be bleach." Jack searched under the sink. "No mind bleach here." Jack walked out and sat at the table. He saw the sandwich she was making. "I see your tastebuds are improving every time you eat."

Charcoal smiles and blushes in embarrassment. "Well sorry, I just go with what feels right. Like right now, even though I know it probably isn't the smartest thing to do, I feel like adding this mysterious whatever onto my sandwich." She added the rest of, whatever it was, and took a bite of her sandwich. It wasn't as good as the sandwich from the cafe, but it was still good.

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Charcoal smiles and blushes in embarrassment. "Well sorry, I just go with what feels right. Like right now, even though I know it probably isn't the smartest thing to do, I feel like adding this mysterious whatever onto my sandwich." She added the rest of, whatever it was, and took a bite of her sandwich. It wasn't as good as the sandwich from the cafe, but it was still good.

Jack was tempted to take a bite out of the sandwich, but then he remembered what happened last night. He'd much rather take his chances. "Looks... interesting." Jack was just a bit troubled about Charcoal not even reacting to his nightmare. "So... What do you think about my dream? You didn't really give much of a reaction."


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Jack was tempted to take a bite out of the sandwich, but then he remembered what happened last night. He'd much rather take his chances. "Looks... interesting." Jack was just a bit troubled about Charcoal not even reacting to his nightmare. "So... What do you think about my dream? You didn't really give much of a reaction."

Charcoal took a bite of her sandwich before answering. "There isn't anything I need to react to. It was a dream, ergo not real. My parents don't know where either of us live either. And even if I was on my death bed there is no was possible I would let them take my foal."

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Charcoal took a bite of her sandwich before answering. "There isn't anything I need to react to. It was a dream, ergo not real. My parents don't know where either of us live either. And even if I was on my death bed there is no was possible I would let them take my foal."

Jack smiled "There's my beautiful marefriend." Jack heard himself and was instantly troubled. "Hey Charcoal. Now that I think about it. We've never actually made our relationship official. Doesn't that make you feel weird? Or at least just enough to make you stop and think? We've also never gone to a real date."


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Jack smiled "There's my beautiful marefriend." Jack heard himself and was instantly troubled. "Hey Charcoal. Now that I think about it. We've never actually made our relationship official. Doesn't that make you feel weird? Or at least just enough to make you stop and think? We've also never gone to a real date."

Charcoal thought about it and found Jacks words to be true. "It doesn't really make me feel weird, mostly because I have thought of you as my coltfriend since a little after we bedded together. Though I do notice now that we haven't gone on a real date together."

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Charcoal thought about it and found Jacks words to be true. "It doesn't really make me feel weird, mostly because I have thought of you as my coltfriend since a little after we bedded together. Though I do notice now that we haven't gone on a real date together."

"Ah. Okay. So then we're officially together." Jack smiled "That makes me feel better, but I think that we should go on a date. Like a move." 'Ooh! Pick a scary one so she'll cuddle with you when she's scared.' No. I'm afraid of scary movies. I'll look like a wuss. "Definitely not a scary movie." 'Maybe a sappy chick flick. She'll get in the mood.' She might not like chick flicks. "How about a chick flick?" Jack suggested. 


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"Ah. Okay. So then we're officially together." Jack smiled "That makes me feel better, but I think that we should go on a date. Like a move." 'Ooh! Pick a scary one so she'll cuddle with you when she's scared.' No. I'm afraid of scary movies. I'll look like a wuss. "Definitely not a scary movie." 'Maybe a sappy chick flick. She'll get in the mood.' She might not like chick flicks. "How about a chick flick?" Jack suggested.

"Ugh, barf, no thank you. I hate those sappy chick flicks, they make me want to feel more feminine than I already am." Charcoal thought for a minute. "Though I guess if you would really like to see one I could tolerate it, olny for you though." Charcoal said to Jack.

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"Ugh, barf, no thank you. I hate those sappy chick flicks, they make me want to feel more feminine than I already am." Charcoal thought for a minute. "Though I guess if you would really like to see one I could tolerate it, olny for you though." Charcoal said to Jack.

"If you don't want to see a chick flick. We won't. I want this to be a movie that you'll enjoy." Jack thought harder. 'Um. Mystery?' Nah, when the verdict is something obvious, it lowers my self esteem. 'Alien movie where there're bipedal ape men?' The bipedal ape men always made me uneasy. 'How about you ask her?' "Here's a good idea. How about you pick the genera?"


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"If you don't want to see a chick flick. We won't. I want this to be a movie that you'll enjoy." Jack thought harder. 'Um. Mystery?' Nah, when the verdict is something obvious, it lowers my self esteem. 'Alien movie where there're bipedal ape men?' The bipedal ape men always made me uneasy. 'How about you ask her?' "Here's a good idea. How about you pick the genera?"

Charcoal thought for a minute. She did have a few ideas but both of them made her feel very foalish. They were both movies based off of books she liked, yet both of those books were for ponies a few years younger than her. "Well... I do have a few ideas but they are both kind of foalish."

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Charcoal thought for a minute. She did have a few ideas but both of them made her feel very foalish. They were both movies based off of books she liked, yet both of those books were for ponies a few years younger than her. "Well... I do have a few ideas but they are both kind of foalish."

"I doubt that you'd be foalish. I was the one who asked you if you wanted to watch a chick-flick. So lay it on me." Jack leaned back against the chair to show that he was ready for anything Charcoal gave him. Of course, if he's not careful enough, he could fall over.


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"I doubt that you'd be foalish. I was the one who asked you if you wanted to watch a chick-flick. So lay it on me." Jack leaned back against the chair to show that he was ready for anything Charcoal gave him. Of course, if he's not careful enough, he could fall over.

"Well you see, there are these two book series I am really into and both of them are ment for ponies much younger than me to read. And both of those movies are based off of the book." Charcoal said as she began blushing from embarrassed at having to answer Jacks question.

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"Well you see, there are these two book series I am really into and both of them are ment for ponies much younger than me to read. And both of those movies are based off of the book." Charcoal said as she began blushing from embarrassed at having to answer Jacks question.

Jack's patience was starting to wear thin. "I don't really mind. When there are many stallions who like a little mare's show." the tension was thick around Jack. He was really desperate to know now. What does Charcoal like? What is she into? 'I think she's into you, Jack.' Hah. That was funny.

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Jack's patience was starting to wear thin. "I don't really mind. When there are many stallions who like a little mare's show." the tension was thick around Jack. He was really desperate to know now. What does Charcoal like? What is she into? 'I think she's into you, Jack.' Hah. That was funny.

"Well, one of the movies is called The Rise of Nine and the other is the Percy Jackson series. The Percy Jackson books were the first books I ever willingly read on my own time and was what caused me to get into reading in the first place. The Rise of Nine is a little more recent."

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"Well, one of the movies is called The Rise of Nine and the other is the Percy Jackson series. The Percy Jackson books were the first books I ever willingly read on my own time and was what caused me to get into reading in the first place. The Rise of Nine is a little more recent."

"I've never heard of The Rise of Nine. It sounds nice though. I was almost afraid that you would've liked Twilight, but you wouldn't like it anyways. I'd be crazy to think that." Jack got up and stretched his back. "I'm going to take a shower. You can finish your breakfast." Jack got up and trotted to the bathroom. He closed the door and jumped in the shower. He turned on the shower on cold. "I've never heard of The Rise of Nine. Does that make me lame?" 'They should totally make a movie for Maximum Ride.' Oh my Celestia. Totally!


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"I've never heard of The Rise of Nine. It sounds nice though. I was almost afraid that you would've liked Twilight, but you wouldn't like it anyways. I'd be crazy to think that." Jack got up and stretched his back. "I'm going to take a shower. You can finish your breakfast." Jack got up and trotted to the bathroom. He closed the door and jumped in the shower. He turned on the shower on cold. "I've never heard of The Rise of Nine. Does that make me lame?" 'They should totally make a movie for Maximum Ride.' Oh my Celestia. Totally!

Charcoal did finish her breakfast and when she did she made another sandwich with different kinds of stuff inside and another, and another, and another, until the bread was all gone. Charcoal let out a satisfied burp and was glad Jack was in the shower and didn't hear that.

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Charcoal did finish her breakfast and when she did she made another sandwich with different kinds of stuff inside and another, and another, and another, until the bread was all gone. Charcoal let out a satisfied burp and was glad Jack was in the shower and didn't hear that.

Jack walked out of the shower and dried himself with a towel. He stood in front of a mirror and looked at his hair. It was messy as always. He wiped it down to make it look at least decent. He looked at his new look for a second until it turned itself back to its messy self in a second. "Well that's not gonna happen." Jack left the bathroom and saw Charcoal and an empty plate. "Was the sandwich good?"


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