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Jack looked up "I'm down here. And stuck how?" Jack stood up so he was in front of Charcoal. He looked at her stomach. He no longer knew how to think, act or feel. This was so new to him. "You know. We've been together for five days... five. And due to our little adventures. I will never be surprised again." Jack joked but with no joking voice.

"Well... ok. I'm not sure what to think about that but," Charcoal flailed her legs around in an attempt to flip herself over. "I still need help getting up. And since there are no other nice handsome stallions around to help me..." She trailed off, hinting for Jack to help her.

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"Well... ok. I'm not sure what to think about that but," Charcoal flailed her legs around in an attempt to flip herself over. "I still need help getting up. And since there are no other nice handsome stallions around to help me..." She trailed off, hinting for Jack to help her.

"Hm. Yeah. Sorry." Jack grabbed her hoof and gently pulled her up. "This is just all so fast. Literally. And I don't know exactly how to feel about this. Or what to do. Won't you miss the times when I carried you? Or when you held me in your wings? This fantasy of affection will be gone. I know it's not over, but I will really miss that part."


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"Hm. Yeah. Sorry." Jack grabbed her hoof and gently pulled her up. "This is just all so fast. Literally. And I don't know exactly how to feel about this. Or what to do. Won't you miss the times when I carried you? Or when you held me in your wings? This fantasy of affection will be gone. I know it's not over, but I will really miss that part."

Charcoal places her hoof on the side of Jack's face. "Hey, no need to worry. This was going to happen eventually anyway, it is just happening a bit faster than anticipated." Charcoal hugs Jack. "The only thing that has changed is that we are going to find out how good we are as parents a little faster. And now there is even more of me for you to love."

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Charcoal places her hoof on the side of Jack's face. "Hey, no need to worry. This was going to happen eventually anyway, it is just happening a bit faster than anticipated." Charcoal hugs Jack. "The only thing that has changed is that we are going to find out how good we are as parents a little faster. And now there is even more of me for you to love."

Jack blushed as he smiled "Aw. That's real sweet of you." Jack nuzzled Charcoal in return of her hug. "I'm actually very scared at the thought of me as a parent." Jack's mind flashed him a picture of him in a sea of baby foals. He shivered. "Not a reassuring thought."


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Jack blushed as he smiled "Aw. That's real sweet of you." Jack nuzzled Charcoal in return of her hug. "I'm actually very scared at the thought of me as a parent." Jack's mind flashed him a picture of him in a sea of baby foals. He shivered. "Not a reassuring thought."

"Yeah, I'm scared as well. I never thought of myself as a mother, but I'm still going to go through with it." Charcoal said as she nuzzled Jack back. "I'm also kind of excited it he having a foal, and I'm glad that I'm going to be having it with you Jack." Charcoal said.

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"Yeah, I'm scared as well. I never thought of myself as a mother, but I'm still going to go through with it." Charcoal said as she nuzzled Jack back. "I'm also kind of excited it he having a foal, and I'm glad that I'm going to be having it with you Jack." Charcoal said.

"It's nice to know that you care about having this foal with me. And I too feel the same way." Jack nuzzled Charcoal harder "We're going to need to think of a name of the foal. But I don't have any ideas. What do you think is a nice name? And what gender do you think? And what species?"


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"It's nice to know that you care about having this foal with me. And I too feel the same way." Jack nuzzled Charcoal harder "We're going to need to think of a name of the foal. But I don't have any ideas. What do you think is a nice name? And what gender do you think? And what species?"

"I think names should wait until after birth. But if we want to know what species or gender we could probably go to the doctor... again." Charcoal said. "Though honestly, I would prefer if it was an earth pony, I don't want to have to live with knowing that I could never teach him or her how to fly."

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"I think names should wait until after birth. But if we want to know what species or gender we could probably go to the doctor... again." Charcoal said. "Though honestly, I would prefer if it was an earth pony, I don't want to have to live with knowing that I could never teach him or her how to fly."

"An earth pony would be nice. I could teach him or her how to... I don't think anything I could teach would be very appropriate." Jack's ears flopped back. "Plus, I'm going to need to never drink again or I might turn into the greatest enemy of the Alcoholics Anonymous." Jack giggled as he went back to nuzzling Charcoal. He oh so longed another round of cuddly affection, but he knew that it wasn't likely going to happen.


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"An earth pony would be nice. I could teach him or her how to... I don't think anything I could teach would be very appropriate." Jack's ears flopped back. "Plus, I'm going to need to never drink again or I might turn into the greatest enemy of the Alcoholics Anonymous." Jack giggled as he went back to nuzzling Charcoal. He oh so longed another round of cuddly affection, but he knew that it wasn't likely going to happen.

Charcoal smiled and began to get comfortable in Jacks embrace. She tried to wrap her wings around him but they wouldn't quite go all the way around him with the extra space between them. "If you want to know what gender it is then we could go get another echo."

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Charcoal smiled and began to get comfortable in Jacks embrace. She tried to wrap her wings around him but they wouldn't quite go all the way around him with the extra space between them. "If you want to know what gender it is then we could go get another echo."

Jack looked into Charcoal's eyes. "I think that that would be perfect." Jack nuzzled her once more before letting her go. "Let's go to the hospital. Maybe we can see Dr.Dysfunctional." Jack joked about the strange mental doctor: Dr.Psych. "We always end up seeing him."


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Jack looked into Charcoal's eyes. "I think that that would be perfect." Jack nuzzled her once more before letting her go. "Let's go to the hospital. Maybe we can see Dr.Dysfunctional." Jack joked about the strange mental doctor: Dr.Psych. "We always end up seeing him."

"Oh yes, I'm sure he would be overjoyed to see us. Maybe we could set up an appointment to see if the foal has any brain problems like us." With a grunt Charcoal stood up. Getting up was much harder with almost a whole foal inside you. She walks over and grabs her bags before starting to walk toward the door. "Well lets get going."

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"Oh yes, I'm sure he would be overjoyed to see us. Maybe we could set up an appointment to see if the foal has any brain problems like us." With a grunt Charcoal stood up. Getting up was much harder with almost a whole foal inside you. She walks over and grabs her bags before starting to walk toward the door. "Well lets get going."

"Sure thing." Jack said. "I can't wait to find out. But you look like you could break water any day so I think it'd also be best if you stay at the hospital and make sure that when the time comes, we'll be prepared for it." Jack opened the door "Mares and foals first." "Hey buddy.' What's up? "How long have you two been in Paris?' 5 days. Why? 'Because you both only won a week in Paris.' Good, we can move to Ponyville when the foal is born. 'Good. I just wanted to make sure you had a plan that both you and Charcoal agreed on.' Oh no.


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"Sure thing." Jack said. "I can't wait to find out. But you look like you could break water any day so I think it'd also be best if you stay at the hospital and make sure that when the time comes, we'll be prepared for it." Jack opened the door "Mares and foals first." "Hey buddy.' What's up? "How long have you two been in Paris?' 5 days. Why? 'Because you both only won a week in Paris.' Good, we can move to Ponyville when the foal is born. 'Good. I just wanted to make sure you had a plan that both you and Charcoal agreed on.' Oh no.

"Yeah, that might be a good idea." Charcoal said as she walked out of the room. "I even feel like I could give birth any second now, though that might be because I was much smaller a second ago." Charcoal waited for Jack to come so she could see what had decided to live inside her.

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"Yeah, that might be a good idea." Charcoal said as she walked out of the room. "I even feel like I could give birth any second now, though that might be because I was much smaller a second ago." Charcoal waited for Jack to come so she could see what had decided to live inside her.

Oh my Celestia... You're right. 'Hey! Your mare is waiting for you!' Oh! Thanks. "Coming!" Jack left the room and closed the door behind him. He then walked with Charcoal to the entrance to the hospital. "Here we are." Jack opened the door for Charcoal again. "I'm so excited!" Jack said enthusiastically.


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Oh my Celestia... You're right. 'Hey! Your mare is waiting for you!' Oh! Thanks. "Coming!" Jack left the room and closed the door behind him. He then walked with Charcoal to the entrance to the hospital. "Here we are." Jack opened the door for Charcoal again. "I'm so excited!" Jack said enthusiastically.

Charcoal was panting, that trip had not been that difficult before, she had lagged behind a bit during te walk to the hospital. While Jack was already there she still had a bit to go, though I guess he didn't notice ber falling behind since he was holding the door open. "Yeah, hang on... give... me... a... minute." Charcoal called between breaths as she leaned against the wall for support.

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"Oh! I'm sorry." Storm did actually mean it, she knew how hard it was to mend broken hearts. And the colt seemed pretty depressed about it. "I'm sure you'll find the right one soon!"

 

The waiter came over to their table. "I'd like an Espresso. And you?" she asked motioning towards Blazing.

"Eh, anything is fine I guess." Blazing said simply. He never really had any preference when it came to things like that. Although it wasn't just that, it was also the fact that he had a lot on his mind. Yeah... I'm totally gonna find the right one... How does she know that it would be soon anyway? He thought. I suppose she doesn't really know that much about my past yet... Just a small part of it. He thought.


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Charcoal was panting, that trip had not been that difficult before, she had lagged behind a bit during te walk to the hospital. While Jack was already there she still had a bit to go, though I guess he didn't notice ber falling behind since he was holding the door open. "Yeah, hang on... give... me... a... minute." Charcoal called between breaths as she leaned against the wall for support.

Jack saw Charcoal all tired out. 'You are a real gentleman, you know that?' Quiet, I wasn't paying attention! 'I can just hear a baby foal falling off a cliff under your eye.' Jack wanted to help Charcoal but he didn't see how he could. Then he got an idea. Jack trotted his way to Charcoal. "Here. Rest your two hooves on my back and I can walk you through the hospital."


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Jack saw Charcoal all tired out. 'You are a real gentleman, you know that?' Quiet, I wasn't paying attention! 'I can just hear a baby foal falling off a cliff under your eye.' Jack wanted to help Charcoal but he didn't see how he could. Then he got an idea. Jack trotted his way to Charcoal. "Here. Rest your two hooves on my back and I can walk you through the hospital."

Charcoal smiled at Jack. She put her forehooves on Jack just as he said. "Thank... you." She said between breaths. She began walking along side Jack, why ponies found the two of them so interesting she had no idea. It wasn't likely they were the first couple to come in this way.

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Charcoal smiled at Jack. She put her forehooves on Jack just as he said. "Thank... you." She said between breaths. She began walking along side Jack, why ponies found the two of them so interesting she had no idea. It wasn't likely they were the first couple to come in this way.

Jack found Charcoal a bit heavy. He was sure glad that he didn't offer to carry all of her. She might have pancaked him. Jack saw some ponies look at them funny, even a nurse. "Hey. If you're going to look. Why not look while you bring a wheelchair?" the nurse turned and ran to a closet where she got a wheelchair and approached Jack and Charcoal.

 

"Good morning Mrs. Can you please sit here?" 


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Jack found Charcoal a bit heavy. He was sure glad that he didn't offer to carry all of her. She might have pancaked him. Jack saw some ponies look at them funny, even a nurse. "Hey. If you're going to look. Why not look while you bring a wheelchair?" the nurse turned and ran to a closet where she got a wheelchair and approached Jack and Charcoal.

 

"Good morning Mrs. Can you please sit here?"

Charcoal couldn't have been paid to stay out of that chair, she was exhausted. She sat down with a huff and a sigh, then remembered why they were here. "Oh yeah... we came here to... get an echo for... me." She said, she was still panting but it wasn't nearly as bad as before.
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Charcoal couldn't have been paid to stay out of that chair, she was exhausted. She sat down with a huff and a sigh, then remembered why they were here. "Oh yeah... we came here to... get an echo for... me." She said, she was still panting but it wasn't nearly as bad as before.

The nurse glanced at Charcoal's enlarged stomach. "Of course Mrs. I'll get you to a doctor right away. The nurse grabbed the chair from behind and pushed the wheelchair. Jack kept up beside Charcoal.

 

"This is going to be a breeze."

 

The nurse took Charcoal and Jack to an office where the doctor from last time was doing his paperwork at his desk. "Doctor. We have a patient for you." The nurse called while wheeling Charcoal in.


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The nurse glanced at Charcoal's enlarged stomach. "Of course Mrs. I'll get you to a doctor right away. The nurse grabbed the chair from behind and pushed the wheelchair. Jack kept up beside Charcoal.

 

"This is going to be a breeze."

 

The nurse took Charcoal and Jack to an office where the doctor from last time was doing his paperwork at his desk. "Doctor. We have a patient for you." The nurse called while wheeling Charcoal in.

Charcoal had been rested up by the time they got to the office. "Hello there doc."

 

The doctor was finishing his paperwork as they came in. The nurse said that he had another patient and normally he wouldn't have looked up right away. That is until he heard the familiar voice of Miss Embers. He looked up at his paperwork and saw... "Whoa... um, hello again." Miss Embers was a lot more pregnant than she was yesterday. "So, care to explain why Miss Embers, who was barely pregnant yesterday, now looks like she is almost ready to give birth?"

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Charcoal had been rested up by the time they got to the office. "Hello there doc."

 

The doctor was finishing his paperwork as they came in. The nurse said that he had another patient and normally he wouldn't have looked up right away. That is until he heard the familiar voice of Miss Embers. He looked up at his paperwork and saw... "Whoa... um, hello again." Miss Embers was a lot more pregnant than she was yesterday. "So, care to explain why Miss Embers, who was barely pregnant yesterday, now looks like she is almost ready to give birth?"

"Well. This is hard to explain. But, we got a package with Charcoal's name on it. She opened it up and a flash of light blinded us. I was busy running into a wall while her tummy grew and grew until it... Look at it now. She's huge!" Jack looked at Charcoal "I mean pretty." he smiled awkwardly.

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"Well. This is hard to explain. But, we got a package with Charcoal's name on it. She opened it up and a flash of light blinded us. I was busy running into a wall while her tummy grew and grew until it... Look at it now. She's huge!" Jack looked at Charcoal "I mean pretty." he smiled awkwardly.

"Hmmm, interesting." The doctor said. "And now I assume you have come to get a generalization of how long you have until the foal is born?" The doctor asked.

 

Charcoal nodded her head. "Yes, and we were also wanting to know what it's gender and race is."

 

"Understandable, follow me to the echo room and I'll give you a look." The doctor said as he began walking out of his office.

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"Hmmm, interesting." The doctor said. "And now I assume you have come to get a generalization of how long you have until the foal is born?" The doctor asked.

 

Charcoal nodded her head. "Yes, and we were also wanting to know what it's gender and race is."

 

"Understandable, follow me to the echo room and I'll give you a look." The doctor said as he began walking out of his office.

The nurse wheeled Charcoal behind the doctor. "Just stay calm sweetie. i know a baby is a really big thing to look forward to. Are you nervous at all?" She asked "I mean. You have somepony in your body. Doesn't that sound magical? Like it's... unreal? I bet your stallion must be as nervous as you are." She chatted.


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