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Jack heard her about the time coming. "What do you mea- Oh! The baby foal!" Jack was about to freak out. 'Calm down. There should be a button for a nurse to come on the bedside table.' Jack decided to take his voice's advice. He jumped to the bedside table where he saw multiple buttons. Some had arrows which Jack could only guess meant it was for the bed. Then he saw one that had a pony on it. Frantically, Jack pushed it again and again before sitting beside Charcoal "Remember. Hee hee, hoo hoo. Breath mare breath!'

 

After a minute a nurse burst through the doors "Whaddaya want?" she saw Jack and Charcoal on a bed while Charcoal was grabbing her stomach. The nurse grabbed a radio that was on the wall and called for immediate assistance. Almost instantly, three other nurses came with a gurney. They moved Charcoal onto the gurney and started wheeling her down the halls.

Charcoal was put on a gurney and wheeled down the hallways at what felt like eighty-eight miles per hour. She had her eyes closes and her breathing was heavy. She reached her hoof out to the side, expecting to find Jack, but all she found was empty air as she was rushed to another room somewhere.

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Charcoal was put on a gurney and wheeled down the hallways at what felt like eighty-eight miles per hour. She had her eyes closes and her breathing was heavy. She reached her hoof out to the side, expecting to find Jack, but all she found was empty air as she was rushed to another room somewhere.

Jack was being blocked by a nurse. "Hey c'mon! Let me in. She's giving birth and I want to see it."

 

"No! After you apologize for sicking your mare on me." She snapped back.

 

"Darn it! Not you." Jack looked at the doors that Charcoal was wheeled in "Fine. I'm sorry." the nurse let him pass. Jack entered the doors and saw Charcoal laying on a bed on her back. He ran to her side and sat next to her. "Sorry I wasn't here sooner."


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Jack was being blocked by a nurse. "Hey c'mon! Let me in. She's giving birth and I want to see it."

 

"No! After you apologize for sicking your mare on me." She snapped back.

 

"Darn it! Not you." Jack looked at the doors that Charcoal was wheeled in "Fine. I'm sorry." the nurse let him pass. Jack entered the doors and saw Charcoal laying on a bed on her back. He ran to her side and sat next to her. "Sorry I wasn't here sooner."

"It's... alright..." Charcoal said. She was panting hard now, and she had no idea what to do. She wished that someone would tell her what she needed to do. She reached over and gripped Jacks hoof as she felt the pain again. Where was a doctor when you needed one? Charcoal thought to herself.
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"It's... alright..." Charcoal said. She was panting hard now, and she had no idea what to do. She wished that someone would tell her what she needed to do. She reached over and gripped Jacks hoof as she felt the pain again. Where was a doctor when you needed one? Charcoal thought to herself.

Dr.Psych burst in the room "I'm a doctor!" he yelled before looking around.

"Oh geez. What are you doing here?" Jack yelled

"Well excuse me, young one. I thought I could be of some use."

Jack pointed to Charcoal "She's giving birth. Get a real doctor!"

Dr.Psych didn't take Jack's comment too well. "You look here, boy! I'm as much of a doctor as-"

"GO!" Jack yelled.

Dr.Psych ran out screaming "We need a doctor!"


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Dr.Psych burst in the room "I'm a doctor!" he yelled before looking around.

"Oh geez. What are you doing here?" Jack yelled

"Well excuse me, young one. I thought I could be of some use."

Jack pointed to Charcoal "She's giving birth. Get a real doctor!"

Dr.Psych didn't take Jack's comment too well. "You look here, boy! I'm as much of a doctor as-"

"GO!" Jack yelled.

Dr.Psych ran out screaming "We need a doctor!"

The doctor came running down the hallway. He didn't expect a pregnancy so soon but he was pretty sure he knew who was giving birth. He was coming up on the room he was supposed to go to. He tried to stop but he slid across the waxed floor right past the door. After getting his bearings he got to the room and ran in.

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The doctor came running down the hallway. He didn't expect a pregnancy so soon but he was pretty sure he knew who was giving birth. He was coming up on the room he was supposed to go to. He tried to stop but he slid across the waxed floor right past the door. After getting his bearings he got to the room and ran in.

Once the doctor came in Jack said to him "Finally you came. I thought you'd never come. What took you so long?" Jack slightly shook his head "Never mind that. She's giving birth! The... the... BABY'S COMING!" Jack yelled as all the nurses stopped and looked at him "Sorry."


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Once the doctor came in Jack said to him "Finally you came. I thought you'd never come. What took you so long?" Jack slightly shook his head "Never mind that. She's giving birth! The... the... BABY'S COMING!" Jack yelled as all the nurses stopped and looked at him "Sorry."

"Quite alright my boy." He walked over to where Charcoal was laying on the bed, possibly crushing Jacks hoof. "Now Miss Embers, I need you to stay calm, begin taking deep breaths and push."

 

Charcoal did as she was told, glad to finally have an idea of what she was doing. She began pushing and it hurt so much every time. She began gripping Jacks hoof even harder as she continued to push.

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"Quite alright my boy." He walked over to where Charcoal was laying on the bed, possibly crushing Jacks hoof. "Now Miss Embers, I need you to stay calm, begin taking deep breaths and push."

 

Charcoal did as she was told, glad to finally have an idea of what she was doing. She began pushing and it hurt so much every time. She began gripping Jacks hoof even harder as she continued to push.

Jack was really feeling the pain of Charcoal's hoof. She must have been so scared. She was almost pulverizing Jack's hand, but he decided to suck it up for his mare. He gently stroked her hair. "It's okay. Just do as the doctor says." he cooed. 'Jack, I'm actually a little scared.' So am I. 'If this doesn't work out. I'll still be with you.' Celestia forbid.


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Jack was really feeling the pain of Charcoal's hoof. She must have been so scared. She was almost pulverizing Jack's hand, but he decided to suck it up for his mare. He gently stroked her hair. "It's okay. Just do as the doctor says." he cooed. 'Jack, I'm actually a little scared.' So am I. 'If this doesn't work out. I'll still be with you.' Celestia forbid.

Charcoal was in agony right now and every push seemed to make it worse, yet she could feel something.

 

"That's it keep going I am starting to see a head coming out." As Charcoal continued to push the foal finally came out. The doctor immediately grabbed the foal in his magic and wrapped it in a blanket. "Congratulation, here is your little filly." He levitated the foal over to Charcoal who took the foal in her arms.

 

Charcoal just stared at the foal for the longest time. It was red like her mane and had a blue mane to match Jacks coat and black eyes like her coat.

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Charcoal was in agony right now and every push seemed to make it worse, yet she could feel something.

 

"That's it keep going I am starting to see a head coming out." As Charcoal continued to push the foal finally came out. The doctor immediately grabbed the foal in his magic and wrapped it in a blanket. "Congratulation, here is your little filly." He levitated the foal over to Charcoal who took the foal in her arms.

 

Charcoal just stared at the foal for the longest time. It was red like her mane and had a blue mane to match Jacks coat and black eyes like her coat.

Jack got close to Charcoal. He was staring at the foal. "We've... We've done it." a tear started to form in his eyes. "We made a Pony being. We made life." Jack wiped his eyes and then his nose for the nosebleed. "We're parents. I feel like I'm going to cry." he rested his head on the side of Charcoal as tears of joy ran down his muzzle. 


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Jack got close to Charcoal. He was staring at the foal. "We've... We've done it." a tear started to form in his eyes. "We made a Pony being. We made life." Jack wiped his eyes and then his nose for the nosebleed. "We're parents. I feel like I'm going to cry." he rested his head on the side of Charcoal as tears of joy ran down his muzzle.

Charcoal held the foal close to here, she was so happy. She was really tired, giving birth can take a lot out of you. But there was still one thing left to do. "Now we need a name." She though... and thought... and thought. She might have had an idea. "What do you think of Lucky Flare?"

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Charcoal held the foal close to here, she was so happy. She was really tired, giving birth can take a lot out of you. But there was still one thing left to do. "Now we need a name." She though... and thought... and thought. She might have had an idea. "What do you think of Lucky Flare?"

"Lucky Flare." Jack repeated. "That is a wonderful name." Jack nodded. "Lucky might bring us good luck." Jack smiled. He stood back up and walked to the doctor. He held out his hoof. "Thank you good sir. How can I repay you for this wondrous deed you've done for us?" Jack asked. 


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"Lucky Flare." Jack repeated. "That is a wonderful name." Jack nodded. "Lucky might bring us good luck." Jack smiled. He stood back up and walked to the doctor. He held out his hoof. "Thank you good sir. How can I repay you for this wondrous deed you've done for us?" Jack asked.

"Please, I'm just doing my job, there is no need to thank me. Though I think your wife might want you around." The doctor said.

 

Charcoal was exhausted. She needed sleep, so that is what she did. With the foal still in her arms she fell asleep in the bed she was in.

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"Please, I'm just doing my job, there is no need to thank me. Though I think your wife might want you around." The doctor said.

 

Charcoal was exhausted. She needed sleep, so that is what she did. With the foal still in her arms she fell asleep in the bed she was in.

Jack went over to Charcoal and sat next to her. "I love you." he whispered "I'm so proud of you and I bet your parents are proud." Jack continued. He then stared at them two. He didn't want to grab the foal in case he might drop her. He figured just letting the mother keep her for now while he sat next to her would be the best idea.


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Jack went over to Charcoal and sat next to her. "I love you." he whispered "I'm so proud of you and I bet your parents are proud." Jack continued. He then stared at them two. He didn't want to grab the foal in case he might drop her. He figured just letting the mother keep her for now while he sat next to her would be the best idea.

Charcoal woke up however long she had been asleep. She saw that the foal had decided to do the dame thing as Charcoal. She smiled and gave the foal a tiny nuzzle. She saw Jack sitting beside the bed and smiled. "Hey you." Charcoal said in a low whisper so as to not wake the foal.

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Charcoal woke up however long she had been asleep. She saw that the foal had decided to do the dame thing as Charcoal. She smiled and gave the foal a tiny nuzzle. She saw Jack sitting beside the bed and smiled. "Hey you." Charcoal said in a low whisper so as to not wake the foal.

"Good afternoon." Jack greeted in a whispered voice. "I assume you have slept well. It seems as though Lucky has done the same." Jack looked to the filly. "Isn't she cute? I can't wait to raise her as our own. I bet she'll be a fine young lady." suddenly a realization came to Jack "She's French. I never thought I'd have a daughter that was born in Paris." Jack's ears flopped back as an unamused look came over his face "Or any daughter at that. But it's always nice to prove past me wrong."


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"Good afternoon." Jack greeted in a whispered voice. "I assume you have slept well. It seems as though Lucky has done the same." Jack looked to the filly. "Isn't she cute? I can't wait to raise her as our own. I bet she'll be a fine young lady." suddenly a realization came to Jack "She's French. I never thought I'd have a daughter that was born in Paris." Jack's ears flopped back as an unamused look came over his face "Or any daughter at that. But it's always nice to prove past me wrong."

Charcoal smiled and looked at the sleeping form of her daughter Lucky. "Yeah, she is cute. And as long as we don't do anything stupid I'm sure she will grow up to be a fine young lady, unlike me." Charcoal said with a low giggle. "When do you suppose we can hey out of here?"

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Charcoal smiled and looked at the sleeping form of her daughter Lucky. "Yeah, she is cute. And as long as we don't do anything stupid I'm sure she will grow up to be a fine young lady, unlike me." Charcoal said with a low giggle. "When do you suppose we can hey out of here?"

Jack looked surprised "Out of the hospital? Don't you want to stay here and rest up? Because we can love, I mean leave. Well we can all love while we leave, but when I said love it was a slip of the tongue and..." Jack sighed "Sorry. I had a slip of the tongue and all went downhill from there."


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Jack looked surprised "Out of the hospital? Don't you want to stay here and rest up? Because we can love, I mean leave. Well we can all love while we leave, but when I said love it was a slip of the tongue and..." Jack sighed "Sorry. I had a slip of the tongue and all went downhill from there."

"I just rested, I'll be alright if we would leave." Charcoal said. "And even if it was just a slip of your tongue I still didn't understands any of it. I don't even see what you were trying to say to me." Charcoal was about to raise her voice a little but then she remembered Lucky was still sleeping.

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"I just rested, I'll be alright if we would leave." Charcoal said. "And even if it was just a slip of your tongue I still didn't understands any of it. I don't even see what you were trying to say to me." Charcoal was about to raise her voice a little but then she remembered Lucky was still sleeping.

"Me neither." Jack chuckled "Let's get out of here." Jack slowly moved his head to grab Lucky. He gripped the blanket that wrapped up the foal with his mouth. He tugged on the blanket a bit to see if the blanket was tightly wrapped around the filly. It seemed tight enough. So he gently pulled back the foal to let Charcoal stand up. Jack's never had been so careful with anything in his life.


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"Me neither." Jack chuckled "Let's get out of here." Jack slowly moved his head to grab Lucky. He gripped the blanket that wrapped up the foal with his mouth. He tugged on the blanket a bit to see if the blanket was tightly wrapped around the filly. It seemed tight enough. So he gently pulled back the foal to let Charcoal stand up. Jack's never had been so careful with anything in his life.

Charcoal slowly got out of bed. She was a little wobbly but after a second she steadied herself. She saw how Jack was holding the foal and just had to correct him. She took the foal from him and held it in one of her arms so she still had three legs to walk with. "Here, this is how you carry the foal." Charcoal said. She began walking and hot to the door and when she got there she saw a foalcarrier on the floor. She got a closer look at it and saw her name on it. She smiled and picked it up and placed it on her back, though she still held the foal on her arm.

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Charcoal slowly got out of bed. She was a little wobbly but after a second she steadied herself. She saw how Jack was holding the foal and just had to correct him. She took the foal from him and held it in one of her arms so she still had three legs to walk with. "Here, this is how you carry the foal." Charcoal said. She began walking and hot to the door and when she got there she saw a foalcarrier on the floor. She got a closer look at it and saw her name on it. She smiled and picked it up and placed it on her back, though she still held the foal on her arm.

"Oh that's kind. I wonder who left us that. This place just gets better and better." Jack said as he remembered the gang that had earlier beat up Charcoal. "Okay, so this city has ups and downs, but at least we're surviving. Hopefully I didn't jinx that." Jack walked next to Charcoal. "This is great. And I can't stop saying it. I'm stating to find it annoying." 


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"Oh that's kind. I wonder who left us that. This place just gets better and better." Jack said as he remembered the gang that had earlier beat up Charcoal. "Okay, so this city has ups and downs, but at least we're surviving. Hopefully I didn't jinx that." Jack walked next to Charcoal. "This is great. And I can't stop saying it. I'm stating to find it annoying."

Charcoal was walking along, she had only just entered the hospital when she saw a pony run towards her. She remembered that the buck was the one she punched that she punched because he was making fun of Jack. He only had a piece of wood, she has had enough of this. When the buck was close enough she turned around and bucked him as hard as she possibly could right in the face. It knocked him back a few feet and knocked him out in the process. Charcoal got back on her hooves and began walking again.

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Charcoal was walking along, she had only just entered the hospital when she saw a pony run towards her. She remembered that the buck was the one she punched that she punched because he was making fun of Jack. He only had a piece of wood, she has had enough of this. When the buck was close enough she turned around and bucked him as hard as she possibly could right in the face. It knocked him back a few feet and knocked him out in the process. Charcoal got back on her hooves and began walking again.

Jack was surprised to see the random act of violence Charcoal just committed. "Ooh. That's gotta hurt." Jack stuck close to Charcoal. He didn't want to say anything about what just happened. "So who do you think sent you that package?" Jack asked obviously trying to get anger off Charcoal's mind.


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Jack was surprised to see the random act of violence Charcoal just committed. "Ooh. That's gotta hurt." Jack stuck close to Charcoal. He didn't want to say anything about what just happened. "So who do you think sent you that package?" Jack asked obviously trying to get anger off Charcoal's mind.

"No idea." Charcoal said with an even voice. She continued to walk along, she noticed that her vision occasionally got blurry every once and a while. She didn't give it much thought but she saw it when she got to the hotel and ran into the door frame. She would have just walked through but she saw three or four doors.

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