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"No idea." Charcoal said with an even voice. She continued to walk along, she noticed that her vision occasionally got blurry every once and a while. She didn't give it much thought but she saw it when she got to the hotel and ran into the door frame. She would have just walked through but she saw three or four doors.

Jack walked through the doors but could see that Charcoal wasn't keeping up her momentum. Jack walked back to Charcoal and rested a hoof on her back. "Here. I'll guide you." Jack offered. "I don't want anything bad happening to you or our little filly. Don't you agree?"


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Jack walked through the doors but could see that Charcoal wasn't keeping up her momentum. Jack walked back to Charcoal and rested a hoof on her back. "Here. I'll guide you." Jack offered. "I don't want anything bad happening to you or our little filly. Don't you agree?"

"Thank you." Charcoal said as she let Jack guide her through the doors to the hotel. She finally got to her room, she had never been so happy to see the room before. She reached into her bag and took out her key. She was having trouble seeing where to put the key though with the locks spinning around like they were.

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"Thank you." Charcoal said as she let Jack guide her through the doors to the hotel. She finally got to her room, she had never been so happy to see the room before. She reached into her bag and took out her key. She was having trouble seeing where to put the key though with the locks spinning around like they were.

Jack waited for Charcoal to put her key in but she was just looking at the lock. "Here let me do it for you. You've done quite enough today." Jack grabbed the key and put it in the lock. He then opened the door. "Here you go. One beautiful room for a beautiful mare and her filly." Jack said as he waited for Charcoal to walk in so he could.


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Jack waited for Charcoal to put her key in but she was just looking at the lock. "Here let me do it for you. You've done quite enough today." Jack grabbed the key and put it in the lock. He then opened the door. "Here you go. One beautiful room for a beautiful mare and her filly." Jack said as he waited for Charcoal to walk in so he could.

Charcoal walked into the room. Her vision was beginning to shift and darken, she began stumbling with most steps and she was almost ready to fall over. She was just that tired, she was about to collapse other spot with how tired she was. Now she just had to get the foal over to Jack, but instead found herself falling to the side.

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Charcoal walked into the room. Her vision was beginning to shift and darken, she began stumbling with most steps and she was almost ready to fall over. She was just that tired, she was about to collapse other spot with how tired she was. Now she just had to get the foal over to Jack, but instead found herself falling to the side.

Jack walked in and saw her stumbling around. He found that odd. She then just fell over. "Charcoal?!" He ran over to her. He put his ear to her chest. Heartbeat is good. He then put his hoof under her nose. Breathing is good. I guess she's just sleepy. She did endure the most pain in the Equiestria. Jack took the foal and gently set her on a pillow. He then plopped Charcoal on the bed. I guess all I have to do is wait. 'Was Lucky Flare a good name? How about another play on words with cards? Like Queen Hearts? Queen Diamonds?' I'm fine with what the mother chose. 


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Jack walked in and saw her stumbling around. He found that odd. She then just fell over. "Charcoal?!" He ran over to her. He put his ear to her chest. Heartbeat is good. He then put his hoof under her nose. Breathing is good. I guess she's just sleepy. She did endure the most pain in the Equiestria. Jack took the foal and gently set her on a pillow. He then plopped Charcoal on the bed. I guess all I have to do is wait. 'Was Lucky Flare a good name? How about another play on words with cards? Like Queen Hearts? Queen Diamonds?' I'm fine with what the mother chose.

Charcoal felt herself being put on a pillow. Wait, no. I will not just Sid down and do nothing. 'Come on, give yourself a break. You did just go through one of the most painful things ever.' But I have to make sure the foal is going to get everything she will need. '*sigh* Mothers.' Charcoal began to sit up. "Thanks for the help Jack, but I'm alright, really."

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Charcoal felt herself being put on a pillow. Wait, no. I will not just Sid down and do nothing. 'Come on, give yourself a break. You did just go through one of the most painful things ever.' But I have to make sure the foal is going to get everything she will need. '*sigh* Mothers.' Charcoal began to sit up. "Thanks for the help Jack, but I'm alright, really."

Jack saw Charcoal get up and thank him. "Oh no problem. It's just my duty to care for you as my... partner." Jack trotted to Lucky and gave her a little nuzzle. Then walked to Charcoal and did the same "I'm just glad that you're okay. I'm just wondering when Lucky will want to eat."


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Jack saw Charcoal get up and thank him. "Oh no problem. It's just my duty to care for you as my... partner." Jack trotted to Lucky and gave her a little nuzzle. Then walked to Charcoal and did the same "I'm just glad that you're okay. I'm just wondering when Lucky will want to eat."

"When, not exactly sure. But whenever it is I will take care of it, I will kind of have to." Charcoal got out of bed and began "walking" towards the door. "Now I have to go out and get some supplies for something I'm going to build later." Charcoal says. She turns to leave but forgets to open the door. She didn't take her face off as she slowly slid down the door, unable to move.

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"When, not exactly sure. But whenever it is I will take care of it, I will kind of have to." Charcoal got out of bed and began "walking" towards the door. "Now I have to go out and get some supplies for something I'm going to build later." Charcoal says. She turns to leave but forgets to open the door. She didn't take her face off as she slowly slid down the door, unable to move.

Jack watched as she slid down the door. It was like watching a cartoon. He walked over to her. "Um. I think it'd be best if you lay in bed and watch tv or something. I don't want to see you get in trouble or get hurt. I can't feed the foal. Or can I? No. No, that's ludicrous!"


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Jack watched as she slid down the door. It was like watching a cartoon. He walked over to her. "Um. I think it'd be best if you lay in bed and watch tv or something. I don't want to see you get in trouble or get hurt. I can't feed the foal. Or can I? No. No, that's ludicrous!"

Charcoal wasn't able to get up on her own. She tried but she couldn't lift ber limbs to be able to move her. "Hey Jack, do you suppose you could put me in bed again? I can't seem to move my body in any way shape or form." Charcoal said as she just layed there.

((OOC: Sorry, last post for today.))

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Charcoal wasn't able to get up on her own. She tried but she couldn't lift ber limbs to be able to move her. "Hey Jack, do you suppose you could put me in bed again? I can't seem to move my body in any way shape or form." Charcoal said as she just layed there.

((OOC: Sorry, last post for today.))

Jack chuckled. "Sure thing. Anything you want." Jack gently and slowly picked her up and waked to the bed where he set her down. "It's time, I think for a nap for a couple hours. Especially for Lucky." Jack layed down on the bed leaving space for Lucky, which he set in between them. "Good nap. See you in the morning."


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"hmm." Crystak stared off again as she thought. "I do remember one. It is not far. I believe they serve foreign foods, cook then in front of you as well. Pretty interesting. Of course you were asking for resturants so do not complaing if it costs too much to me."

 

"Okay." Fifteen thousand bits would certainly be enough. He hadn't brought all of them, instead just fifty, but prices were low in Equestria. One could buy a bushel of apples for four bits. Besides, that was all he could carry at once. "Where is it?" he asked, letting Crystal lead the way.


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Jack chuckled. "Sure thing. Anything you want." Jack gently and slowly picked her up and waked to the bed where he set her down. "It's time, I think for a nap for a couple hours. Especially for Lucky." Jack layed down on the bed leaving space for Lucky, which he set in between them. "Good nap. See you in the morning."

Charcoal smiled. Jack was so kind, she wouldn't believe he would ever do anything bad to her. Now that she was in bed she physically felt how tired she was. She Turner her head and closed her eyes. She didn't have a dream this time, but she didn't need it to be happy.

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Charcoal smiled. Jack was so kind, she wouldn't believe he would ever do anything bad to her. Now that she was in bed she physically felt how tired she was. She Turner her head and closed her eyes. She didn't have a dream this time, but she didn't need it to be happy.

Jack yawned. For some reason he was also feeling pretty tired. He closed his eyes and fell asleep shortly after. 'Hey buddy.' What the? Aren't I asleep? 'Yes you are. I was just checking your memories and this Paris vacation is actually two weeks long.' Oh. Thanks for telling me. I don't even know if I'll be able to survive another week. 'Love survives through all. Now go back to sleep.'


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Jack yawned. For some reason he was also feeling pretty tired. He closed his eyes and fell asleep shortly after. 'Hey buddy.' What the? Aren't I asleep? 'Yes you are. I was just checking your memories and this Paris vacation is actually two weeks long.' Oh. Thanks for telling me. I don't even know if I'll be able to survive another week. 'Love survives through all. Now go back to sleep.'

Charcoal woke up. She looked around and saw how bright it was. She looked out the closest window and it seemed the sun was in the middle of the sky, signaling that it was roughly around noon. Which was strange, she swore that it was roughly 10:00 when she got back, how long had she been asleep?

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Charcoal woke up. She looked around and saw how bright it was. She looked out the closest window and it seemed the sun was in the middle of the sky, signaling that it was roughly around noon. Which was strange, she swore that it was roughly 10:00 when she got back, how long had she been asleep?

Okay that was a good one. Tell me another. 'Alright. What did the laundry say to the deck of cards?' What? 'I'll fold!' Not that funny. 'Hey. You're mare's awake. Do you want me to wake to up?' Yeah, sure. Thanks. Jack woke up calmly. He stretched his legs and yawned before rubbing his eyes. "Good morning." Jack said as he opened his eyes to see Charcoal "How'd you sleep?"


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Okay that was a good one. Tell me another. 'Alright. What did the laundry say to the deck of cards?' What? 'I'll fold!' Not that funny. 'Hey. You're mare's awake. Do you want me to wake to up?' Yeah, sure. Thanks. Jack woke up calmly. He stretched his legs and yawned before rubbing his eyes. "Good morning." Jack said as he opened his eyes to see Charcoal "How'd you sleep?"

Charcoal smiled and gave Jack a kiss. "Just fine." She sees Lucky on the bed, she was awake. With careful arms she picked her up and held her close. This moment was just perfect, what could possib- 'NO, you are not going to jinx it!' Alright alright. Then Lucky started crying. She didn't have clue what she needed but she could guess. "Hey Jack, would you mind going to another room so I could feed Lucky? It isn't exactly something I'm comfortable doing while someone else is watching."

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Charcoal smiled and gave Jack a kiss. "Just fine." She sees Lucky on the bed, she was awake. With careful arms she picked her up and held her close. This moment was just perfect, what could possib- 'NO, you are not going to jinx it!' Alright alright. Then Lucky started crying. She didn't have clue what she needed but she could guess. "Hey Jack, would you mind going to another room so I could feed Lucky? It isn't exactly something I'm comfortable doing while someone else is watching."

Jack covered one of his ears at the baby's crying. He never enjoyed the sound of a baby foal crying. He was still able to hear Charcoal ask him to go to another room to feed her. "Of course I can. I'll just have a shower." Jack rolled off the bed and made his way to the bathroom. He made his way in the shower and turned the faucet on. The water was cold, but Jack didn't mind it.


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Jack covered one of his ears at the baby's crying. He never enjoyed the sound of a baby foal crying. He was still able to hear Charcoal ask him to go to another room to feed her. "Of course I can. I'll just have a shower." Jack rolled off the bed and made his way to the bathroom. He made his way in the shower and turned the faucet on. The water was cold, but Jack didn't mind it.

Charcoal waited until Jack had started up the shower before she began feeding Lucky. She wasn't really sure about this but when Lucky got started she just smiled and waited. It actually kind of tickled a bit. Once Lucky was done she did what she heard she was supposed to do and burp her. She had done it, she had fed her daughter for the very first time.

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Charcoal waited until Jack had started up the shower before she began feeding Lucky. She wasn't really sure about this but when Lucky got started she just smiled and waited. It actually kind of tickled a bit. Once Lucky was done she did what she heard she was supposed to do and burp her. She had done it, she had fed her daughter for the very first time.

Jack waited on the shower for a few good minutes. He then turned off the shower and dried up with a hanging towel. Jack walked out of the bathroom and saw Charcoal still with Lucky. Jack remembered what they were doing so he turned his head. He tripped over himself and fell over. Still not looking, Jack asked "Are you done yet?"


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Jack waited on the shower for a few good minutes. He then turned off the shower and dried up with a hanging towel. Jack walked out of the bathroom and saw Charcoal still with Lucky. Jack remembered what they were doing so he turned his head. He tripped over himself and fell over. Still not looking, Jack asked "Are you done yet?"

"Yes, I am done feeding out daughter." Charcoal said, trying not to laugh at Jacks mishap. "So you can peal yourself off the floor and come over here if you want." Charcoal said. "I'm sure your daughter would like to at least spend some time with you." Charcoal said.

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"Yes, I am done feeding out daughter." Charcoal said, trying not to laugh at Jacks mishap. "So you can peal yourself off the floor and come over here if you want." Charcoal said. "I'm sure your daughter would like to at least spend some time with you." Charcoal said.

Jack got his legs untangled then picked himself up. He then walked over and hopped on the bed. He sat in front of Lucky. "I would also like to spend time with her." Jack didn't know what to do. He had his baby in front of him. He guessed it was time to make a first impression. Jack bent down to Lucky and stopped. He didn't know what to do. "Um. Charcoal. I don't know what to do." 


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Jack got his legs untangled then picked himself up. He then walked over and hopped on the bed. He sat in front of Lucky. "I would also like to spend time with her." Jack didn't know what to do. He had his baby in front of him. He guessed it was time to make a first impression. Jack bent down to Lucky and stopped. He didn't know what to do. "Um. Charcoal. I don't know what to do."

"Well, you already had a conversation with her before she was born, how about you tell her what you told her then and move on from there." Charcoal said. Then she held Lucky out for Jack. "Here, take her. She is your daughter, you should get to know her better."

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"Well, you already had a conversation with her before she was born, how about you tell her what you told her then and move on from there." Charcoal said. Then she held Lucky out for Jack. "Here, take her. She is your daughter, you should get to know her better."

Jack took Lucky in an arm. "A-alright." Jack cleared his throat. "My name is Jack Spades, playing the role of your father, but you can just call me daddy." Jack said to Lucky. "I was born in Appleloosa under the loving care of two ponies. They loved me much. Until they left me that is, but I won't bore you with that." Jack started "Do you want to hear more?" he asked Lucky as if she was actually going to say something.


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Jack took Lucky in an arm. "A-alright." Jack cleared his throat. "My name is Jack Spades, playing the role of your father, but you can just call me daddy." Jack said to Lucky. "I was born in Appleloosa under the loving care of two ponies. They loved me much. Until they left me that is, but I won't bore you with that." Jack started "Do you want to hear more?" he asked Lucky as if she was actually going to say something.

Charcoal smiled at Jacks awkwardness. She gave him a nuzzle before speaking. "I think you should keep going, she looks like she is very interested." Charcoal said. She didn't really think that but if it got Jack to spend some time with Lucky then it was alright.

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