dark Hell Fire's Uprising (Prelude to Alicorn's Creed)

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Hell Fire's Uprising 

 

Hell Fire was a young and hopeful mare until, something snapped, he started hurting people in the underworld but King Necrocorn didn't approve of his behavior, so Hell Fire was banished to the Overworld he swore revenge on the king he shouted "I will return with an army and claim the underworld as my own!".

The king disregarded this and continued to regular duties.

Little did he know that a dark and fiery storm was overhead, for Hell Fire had returned to find that the king had claimed a princess' heart.

The princess was named Lunar, blinded by love Hell Fire challenged Necrocorn to battle "I shall battle you" accepted the king "but when I win I'll have your wings pinned to the castle wall", Hell Fire hesitated, he thought for a second, but then he looked in the eyes of the king's fair princess "I accept". 

The two stood face to face, eyes piercing one another. 

until.... 

Necrocorn flew up and shot Hell Fire with his ebony horn, Hell Fire got up slowly to fly his side, the battle was ongoing until...... Hell Fire pierced Necrocorn's heart using his Dark Crimson horn. 

After the glorious victory he flew to the princess' side, she was in shock and horror and refused to marry the monster. 

Hell Fire vowed to return for her hoof in marriage once he had conquered all of Equestria. 

Edited August 11, 2013 by xXBr0ninat0rXx

[DjFame 0]

did'nt really understand the story is it not done or is this half of it? why did he start hurting people? i'm so lost but i think you can add on to the story BTW i have the same cutie mark lol