adventure Day After War Nexus(prologue)

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                    He fought long and hard but, not hard enough. He was struck causing his wings to give up.

 

He crashed into the water below. Sinking deeper and deeper, he began to close his his eyes. He heard a

 

familiar voice saying,"It's not over. You still have a family to protect." He opened his eyes and used the

 

strength he had left spread his wings to break the surface of the still water. Even with blood running down

 

his body he regained his strength. He said to himself,"Thank you, my love."

 

                   End Of Prologue

 

                   To Be Continued(if you guys want to read the whole long entire story)

Edited August 23, 2013 by Rarity_Luna

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How the heck do you even do those vote things! Please PM Me how to.. I would love to see how many people even read my 8 long chapter book and my 2nd one.. *Clicks i would read the whole thing* I hope it'll be great!

Edited August 20, 2013 by Fredbermudez

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Thanks. Hopefully it gets known so my hard work on writing this won't be a waste. I want it to be at a point where people are at least telling others about this.

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Thanks. Hopefully it gets known so my hard work on writing this won't be a waste. I want it to be at a point where people are at least telling others about this.

I'm sure they well, i'm trying my best on mine to make it so people could love it and probs tell other random people about it   When this comes out i might *Looks at faces* OOh new faces!  :okiedokielokie:    :comeatus:  *Stops* Oh heh.. Anywho! If anyone asks me which fanfic to read i'll recommend yours

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@Fredbermudez well it's not yet finished but I thank you for your help. I may post the first two chapters later on maybe in a week or so if I feel confident enough in it:P

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I'm going to post a little excerpt from my fanfic instead because the first chapter is horribly written because I didn't think I would spend time on it.

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Lists of characters at Octavias hall in creative resources. Check it out. It's titled "List of characters in my fanfic. Which one sounds interesting?"

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The time set for the fanfic is WAY WAY WAY before Twilight and em'. Around 1,200 years assuming Luna was born that time because I put her and Celestia in my story plus, one of the characters is Star Swirls granddaughter. My fanfic so, I DO WHAT I WANT! Can't be after Twilight it would be pictured weird in my head.

It is also part gore in the fight scenes I wrote. Them dragons can do major killing if you ask me.

After this fanfic I'm going to make 2 more. Two prequels, one going over Fallen Star ,which is a island where the revenge story started, and another explaining the first organization of powerful dragons that united 8 different types of species of dragon: Gravity dragons, time dragons, fire, thunder, air, water, earth, and star dragons.

Edited September 10, 2013 by Rarity_Luna

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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/131201/day-after-war-nexus YEAH!!!! GO AND READ MY FANFIC I'M NOT EVEN CLOSE TO ACTUALLY FINISH WRITING IT BUT GO CHECK OUT THE PROLOGUE AND FIRST CHAPTER HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOY IT!!

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up to 7 chapters now i am currently working on 8 but, the chapters after won't come for a while since i'm caught up with what i wrote on paper. The fic moves fairly slow(not as slow as compared to the original  ) but, i will PROMISE you that you will enjoy reading the whole thing especially with the ending i have planned SHARE WITH YOUR FRIENDS 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/131201/day-after-war-nexus