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Jamesblorg39welsh

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post-18293-0-14136600-1377397998_thumb.jpg Hi guys this is my fourth eve pony drawing I made a fifth but it was rushed so the muzzle and legs got ruined anyways could someone please tell me what's wrong and whats right

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You certainly have the basics on the right track and this is quite good for this being only your forth attempt.  Now you just have to refine it.

 

For the body, try to make it more of a bean shape as the chest seems a bit square in shape with what you have now.  Proportions of the limbs seems to be good; now you just have to work on the shape of the hind legs a bit more.

 

All in all, you have a very solid start right here and you should be quite proud of that.  All you need is some more practice.  Do not hesitate to look toward the show for references as that is a great way to learn the proper body structure.  And never forget to have fun with it!  

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